Date: 13 Jun 2017 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
You have never failed me so give yourselves a break life happens I am just so excited to see a post. Thanks so much. I like the new goverment they need it to make sure that they are not discovered but still able to do good.
Date: 05 Jun 2017 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 27
thanks so much for posting yet another great chapter on here for us ;) and the promise for completing it as you and Deb have always done before ;) i love how you have edwards mind available for bella to read ;) looking for ward to more soon ;D
Date: 04 Jun 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks for the chapter! You ladies are always so dilligent about giving your readers good quality chapters in a timely manner. When life throws you for a loop, the least readers like me can do is to wait patiently for more. I love reading the stories you write, both together and separately. Thanks for the promise of finishing. I trust you will. Thanks for the many hours of great entertainment you have given me!
Date: 27 Mar 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 26
I hope your thumb/wrist heals quickly and painlessly, I know it has to be aggravating since you're right-handed.
Loved this chapter so much, I knew Alice's vision had to be about someone taking Bella for Edward to explode the way he did. Good riddance to Aro.
Date: 26 Mar 2017 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well I'm super pumped that Aro is dead. He had went over the deep end. I would be thrilled if Felix and Demetri are dead as well. Here's to hoping.
I'm happy that young teenager James is getting better. Does he stutter because he is nervous or because he is still healing? hmmm.....
I was suprised at Riley turning out to be a good guy. That was a shocker.
Little Maggie sure is important to a lot of people. I hope Alice considers letting herself be healed.
Date: 26 Mar 2017 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
What a satisfying chapter! So worth the wait! It was so good to see Aro get his due. I'm also glad Riley switched sides! Will Alice now let Maggie heal her? Kudos to both of you for weathering RL and still giving these wonderful stories to us. Thanks so much!
Date: 12 Feb 2017 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm so glad you caught up posting this here. I'd rather read a story here than on FFn because they are so capricious with their story standards and purges. Anyway, at least Bella and Edward got a little time to themselves before the next round of fighting. Can we trust Jane? I'm not sure, but will take this at face value for now. If you decide to redeem Jane, I'm sure you have a good reason. Thanks for continuing to post something even through all the RL struggles.
Date: 14 Nov 2016 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved it wow it was a powerful chapter in more than one way now what will be next and how many will join them and did something change in Edward and Bella's power did it link update ASAP please I understand about retail I was there too
Happy Thanksgiving I am thankful for your words
Date: 14 Nov 2016 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
I worked retail for years Black Friday almost killed me lol.
Alice knows what she was doing but that dont make it any easier for the rest of them to understand. When Bella and Edward say that there love making is explosive they mean it lol.
Date: 13 Nov 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
I sure hope Benjamin can help as much s I think he can, because VI is going to lose legally as well as when the sixxers kick their miserable asses! I sincerely hope Alice meant her abduction was the only way to keep any of our bunch from dying. Edward and Bella's coming together was at just the right time, for them. Have a goos holiday and we'll see you when you can!
Date: 13 Nov 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
The best fics, and certainly all of yours that I've read, always manage to throw in some subtle nod to canon. Breaking the headboard was it for this chapter. Not subtle, but used ever so gently to remind us readers where these wonderful stories come from. That Alice would be so selfless doesn't surprise me. Nevertheless, I am mildly irritated at her for putting herself in imminent danger. I know you'll get her out of this. I will enjoy taking the ride that this story brings to rescue her and bring down V.I. I may even relish the demise of a bad guy or ten. Thanks for some of the best entertainment around! Oh, and also for the lovely lemon...my favorite flavor.
Date: 13 Nov 2016 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
thank you so much for this AWESOME!!! chapter ;) after i rxr last weeks chapter i thought that maybe alice knew already and let it happen but i didn't realise until after to say anthing ;)i'm looking forward to how b x e develop their connection ;) see you next sixday ;D
Date: 07 Nov 2016 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 18
So glad that Edward and Bella are getting to explore their relationship more. I had a feeling when Jasper and Alice went outside of the area to take walks that something like this would happen. Edward is going to beat himself up for this, just because he wasn't paying attention to his surrounds but paying more attention to Bella. I hope not.
Date: 06 Nov 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
I wondered when Carmen and Esme went grocery shopping and Jasper and Alice were on the beach, if maybe the shield wasn't covering them! This must ramp up the timeline for everyone going to Washington, especially to rescue Alice! You will no doubt catch a lot of flack from readers about the kidnapping, but hang in there and we'll see you next week!
Date: 06 Nov 2016 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
I know you guys are both evil cliffie women, despite Jen throwing Deb under the bus, so Alice's kidnapping was not really a surprise! That makes this story all the more thrilling and exciting! I love looking at all the pictures of the animals Rose can and does transform into. Can't wait for more. But, of course, I will...thanks!!
Date: 06 Nov 2016 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
WOW!!! HOW COULD ALICE HAVE BEEN TAKEN!!! i thought edward would be able to hear them etc. i had a feeling that someone would be taken but not alice!!! i hope you post a bit earlier next sixday because i'm chomping at the bit 'hehe' ;D
Date: 30 Oct 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 17
That Bella knows the Olympic forest so well seems to be a plus for the good guys. I'm wondering if the V.I. knows this and is planning a trap for our heroes. Maggie's little crush on Edward is cute. Tanya's messing with her sister Irina's feelings for Ben is a really low and dirty thing to do to her own sister. So James enters as the powerful tracker. Somehow they have to find a way to defeat him and bring down this whole operation. I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve to accomplish that. This is a fun story. Thanks!
Date: 25 Oct 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
I kinda guessed that about Benjamin. Yea taking them down without outing everyone who might not want to be outed is a rough choice. The human race, sadly, doesn't have a good history about accepting anyone/anything "different".
Date: 24 Oct 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 16
Rose isn't going to go alone right, Bella , Edward and Emmett are going with her again? So getting a kick out of messing with Tanya...lol. Maggie is so sweet, I think she going to play a huge part in all this......