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Reviewer: tr74dunn Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2016 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 18

Very good can what for more

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2016 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 18

Didn't Alice see them coming?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2016 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 18

wow  you really are amping up the drama

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 18

Shit just got real the VI will be sorry now how could they take Alice and not Jasper too.

Reviewer: noteimportamt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2016 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 18

Really!! REALLY!!!!???? HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME!!!! ???

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 18

So glad that Edward and Bella are getting to explore their relationship more.  I had a feeling when Jasper and Alice went outside of the area to take walks that something like this would happen.  Edward is going to beat himself up for this, just because he wasn't paying attention to his surrounds but paying more attention to Bella. I hope not.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2016 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh snap will this push them to go sooner and will it still go there way with out Alice seeking out the out come update fast I need to know

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh no, Alice!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 18

Poor Alice.  I hope they are able to get her back soon 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2016 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 18

I wondered when Carmen and Esme went grocery shopping and Jasper and Alice were on the beach, if maybe the shield wasn't covering them! This must ramp up the timeline for everyone going to Washington, especially to rescue Alice! You will no doubt catch a lot of flack from readers about the kidnapping, but hang in there and we'll see you next week!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 18

I know you guys are both evil cliffie women, despite Jen throwing Deb under the bus, so Alice's kidnapping was not really a surprise!  That makes this story all the more thrilling and exciting! I love looking at all the pictures of the animals Rose can and does transform into. Can't wait for more. But, of course, I will...thanks!!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 18

WOW!!! HOW COULD ALICE HAVE BEEN TAKEN!!! i thought edward would be able to hear them etc. i had a feeling that someone would be taken but not alice!!! i hope you post a bit earlier next sixday because i'm chomping at the bit 'hehe' ;D

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18

What?!!!!?? How did they find them??? Argh! Edward is about to lose his shit! Poor Jasper :(.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2016 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 17

Tanya is a piece of work and I hope she gets what Edward said.  Rose is amazing

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 17

Ugh Why do I have the feeling Tanya is going to do something really stupid and spiteful?

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

Again, WOW!  WOW!  WOW!  This would be such a great book and movie!!!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oh I loved it they were having a little fun but working too but now Bella has the start of the plan and Alice can see how to accomplish it now what will they do first

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2016 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 17

So thrilling!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 17

Maybe Aro has gotten too smart for his own good! Hopefully it will lead to his downfall, and sixxers being treated like humans and not lab rats! Sure is getting exciting!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 17

That Bella knows the Olympic forest so well seems to be a plus for the good guys. I'm wondering if the V.I. knows this and is planning a trap for our heroes. Maggie's little crush on Edward is cute. Tanya's messing with her sister Irina's feelings for Ben is a really low and dirty thing to do to her own sister.  So James enters as the powerful tracker. Somehow they have to find a way to defeat him and bring down this whole operation. I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve to accomplish that. This is a fun story. Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 17

:) 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 17

Very good

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 17

another AWESOME!!! sixday ;) i love them working together ;) they definatly need to get rid of james if his from the dark side ;) but how will they get the escaped sixxers? looking forward to next sixday ;D

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 16

Love that they said "I love you " Definitely need to work on that control.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh I love it and I think Benjamin will be a big help will they find more and how will they put a stop to Aro 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 16

I kinda guessed that about Benjamin.  Yea taking them down without outing everyone who might not want to be outed is a rough choice.  The human race, sadly, doesn't have a good history about accepting anyone/anything "different".

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2016 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 16

thank you for the update...well done..Edward & Bella making a declaration of how they feel about one another.... Tanya a HOT MESS!!! gotta love Alive..lol..let's hope theyn take Aro down..until you post again

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2016 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 16

Tanya is pissed she didnt get her way lol.  Edward is going to bring the house down if he gets to excited WOW.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2016 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 15

I loved it so happy they are all safe right now.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2016 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 14

That was exciting to bad Bella couldnt put them on the moon lol

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2016 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 16

Rose isn't going to go alone right, Bella , Edward and Emmett are going with her again? So getting a kick out of messing with Tanya...lol. Maggie is so sweet, I think she going to play a huge part in all this......

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 15

Excellent chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: ColouredWilde Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 16

So, why doesn't Edward just project images of places others have been to Bella? That would help solve the problem of teleporting around. Of course Vella needs to be able to do it froma picture, but if they're in a pinch and need to jump quick and safely then why not? Like Rose in the form of that doctor probably saw a bunch of dark corners she could jump to in her mouse or other small animal form that Bella wouldn't have seen. 

 

I love the creativity in this story, can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 16

yes, you gave us a lot of information in this chapter. yes, it was all good! I agree that Edward needs to learn a bit more control of his telekinesis before his passions shake everything to death!  I'm wondering if there is a mole for V.I. somewhere in their group. I hope not. 

I have RMF on preorder and look forward to receiving it!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 16

That was a great chapter.   I love Ben and am disgusted with Tanya.   She is so gross.   Ugh...   Maggie wanting to help is adorable.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

cool little chapter ;) so benjamin and renata have their canon 'gifts' but benji has bella's mental sheild from his mum as well? what happend to his dad? looking forward to next weeks episode ;D



Author's Response:

No...Benjamin doesn't have a shield. Just his fairly canon gifts. :) His dad never comes up in the story. We'll just say Rae had a one-night stand or something. LOL

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

Very good

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

So jake  was bella's ex..(sigh...) Tanya was Edward's ex...a bit turn off..for my fave couple..wish they are the " first" with each other..instead of being " second"...

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 6

Poor Mr.j

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 5

If Edward also can heard Bella mind...not So interesting though..theirs love story would so much too easy...

Reviewer: Dangz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 2

So far so good..but one thing why in most of twilight fanfics always Edward involved with Tanya? Ex girlfriend? So sick of it..being a mind reading..but still being played by Tanya?... what more ridiculous than that?...anyway  the story is good...still got me curious..and I will keep on reading..

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2016 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad they got to Rae's ok.  Still worried that Tanya is going to betray Bella to the VI.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Cheshire15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2016 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 15

It won't let me add the story to my favorite list 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow she did it and now they are safe but who is there and what does this mean for them

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 15

I have crossed my fingers that they are truly safe from VI at Rae's place. Now that Maggie is awake and another sixxer is here to tell about they left behind in Seattle, plans may be forming.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

Bella and Edward are perfect for each other. They ground each other when the other needs it.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 15

Thanks for another chapter in this unique and wonderful story! I'm glad you're taking it slowly for E and B, and that there was a relative lack of drama in this chapter. They're all safe under Rae's shield now, so only venturing out, as I know they will inevitable do, will put them in danger again. I look forward to more!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 15

So proud of Bella, but she has to keep practicing cause I'm sure she's going to have to open windows for all new places. Bet it was Tanya that wanted to interrupt their bubble...... jealous sore loser!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 15

Very good

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 15

AWESOME!!! chapter as usual guys ;) i look forward to sundays all week i wish you could post more than that but with rl i know it can be hard so i really appreciate that you DO manage EVERY week so again thank you ;D

Reviewer: Cheshire15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2016 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

I love this story. Cannot wait until the next installment. You rock! 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2016 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 14

This was a great exciting chapter.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2016 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 14

ROFL for the grand canyon.  I was worried that Tanya would do something to get B caught.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2016 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 14

That was exciting, I was afraid Bella would be caught

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2016 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 14

Holy snap that was awesome but will they be able to stop Aro before he comes escape for them

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2016 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

Omg! I would love to drop some people in the Grand Canyon like that....lmao! Thank goodness no one was hurt or left behind

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 14

wow that was some ride. I was so agitated that I had to read it in sections, moving away for a while to decompress. I wonder how the folks at V.I. knew they were there. They must have someone with a talent watching the Cullens. A mole, of sorts, maybe? Anyway, I'm glad they all got back OK, but you're right, the hornets nest has been stirred up, big time. I hope all those sixxers whose IV lines they cut can come to and get out of there, or maybe help scramble the works a bit also. Thanks for a superb story, you guys!

 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

It must have hurt to not be able to rescue all the sixxers, but thank heaven they gor Maggie back! They worked like a well trained militayr team, I thought and got the job done with a minimum of trouble. See you next week in Florida!

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 14

Awesome awesome chapter so can't wait for more it's getting so good they are on the run now

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2016 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 14

AWESOME!!! chapter ;) AMAZING!!! part 2 of the plan ;) i really hope the other sixxers are able to get away somehow with what garrett and edward were able to do ;) see you next week for more excitement ;D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2016 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

When Edward and Bella get together they will bring down the house lol.  I love how protective Edward has always been even with the shity parents he had.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2016 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved the update!  Thanks! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2016 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 13

Glad she got some time away to visit her dad.  Like seeing E's backstory too.  Hope Rose will be ok with rest.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2016 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow intense chapter on so many different levels.  I can feel each chapter the intencity is growing.

I believe when Edward and Bella finally have sex it will be earth shattering.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2016 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

I loved it boy oh boy Bella and Edward together can do a be more with them and the family they should be able to put a stop to Aro and his sick mind

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: annacaroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2016 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

I want more. See you in sunday

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

Keep on writing

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2016 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 13

I just hope VI never suspected anything while Rose and Em were around. I don't want them walking into a trap!

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

Awesome we were so close to some nakedness but i understand keep us hanging on so they are draining sixxers they better hurry great chapter

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

Bless Rose and Emmett, they have the information needed to save Maggie!The trip to talk to Charlie was so sweet, I knew it would help calm Bella! The flashback to Edward's childhood was fairly harrowing, and I'm glad his crappy parents are in prison! I'll try not to chew my nails until next week!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 13

'squee'!!! i'm so glad edward is opening up his mind for bella to see ;) i think they really need to learn some meditation so they can further thier physical relationship or it will look like vampire's ran ruff shot 'haha' also glad that part one of the infiltration plan went well ;) looking forward to next weeks episode ;D

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 13

wow what a packed full of stuff chapter. that glimpse of how his awful parents used a precious 11y/o Edward left me hating them and wanting to just scoop him up and smother him with hugs! how he would hate that! LOL! that look at what V.I. is doing to the sixxers it has captured gave me murderous thoughts. i feel many emotions while reading your marvelous storu. thanks so much for your generousity!

Reviewer: Suzy Q Something Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2016 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm addicted to this story!!

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2016 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 12

Holy snap they are going in what will they find out and will they be able to save anyone update fast I need to know

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

I agree with Em.  Aro is getting too bold.  Aren't there camera catching them doing stuff?  or do they have a techie with them.  Hmmm

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

So glad Edward put Tanya in her place in a sense.  I hope Bella doesn't have a panic attack going back to VI. 

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2016 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 12

Awesomeness Love love the chapter Yes,sounds like they are taking the fight to the bad guys hell yeah

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 12

another AWESOME!!! chapter guys ;) thanks for the answer to the picture question and i can see it now ;) i like the idea of the 'open' comunication between bella and edward ;) looking forward to more next week ;D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

I love it take the fight to them way to go.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 11

Love it the powers are amazing.  Tanya is a spoiled brat that is use to getting her way I hope she is done messing with them.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Liam, losing his child in broad daylight like that! It sounds like they are about to put themselves in danger to gather information on the enemy. I will cross my fingers and hope for the best!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

I just keep looking at my son who is 11 and thinking I would lose my effing mind. I hope they can get Maggie quickly.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 12

an exciting chapter, this is! so only Rose, Tanya, Jasper, Bella and Edward can go to Volterra? I'm wondering why only them. I will wait and see. Hard though that might be. Tanya doesn't seem like she will be a problem for Edward and Bella, at least it doesn't seem so, so far.  I usually imagine canon actors in the roles of the various characters in a FF. I met the actress who played Maggie, so that's an easy one. So is Liam. When you finish this, I'm going to read it all over again, from start to finish. I love reading WIPs, but sometimes need the continuity a finished story can bring. You guys always come through for me so I don't doubt for a second this one will also.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2016 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 12

Poor liam!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2016 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 11

I loved it! Great group of talent!

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2016 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

As soon as I saw that y'all had out another story out (must have missed the others), I immediately started this. I love it, and I love how it is written. SO glad I have a few chappies to read before having to wait for an update!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2016 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2016 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 11

Spoiled is one word.  Entitled is another I think.  I love Garrett having a power.  Hope Tayna behaves now and doesn't put anyone in danger in a stupid attempt to ensnare E

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2016 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 11

Great chapter.  So glad they are admitting their feelings for each other.  If they have that kind of reaction just kissing the world may not be the same when they have sex for the first time.

 

I'm glad Edward set Tanya straight. 

 

Love this story so much.

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2016 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 11

Awesome chapter I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Melissa

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