[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella that had to have been hard but now she is safe with them
Date: 10 Aug 2016 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love this story completely !
Date: 10 Aug 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
So glad she reached out to Edward
Date: 09 Aug 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
Good chapter.. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2016 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
thank you so much for updating this AWESOME!!! story for us ;D
Date: 09 Aug 2016 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love this story. i hope Mr Johnson is just roughed up and not dead. I want the family to turn the tables using their talents on Volterra.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2016 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh I'm so glad Bella finally has them!
Date: 08 Aug 2016 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
How did Renee know about Bella's talent & Volterra?
Date: 08 Aug 2016 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
So addicting. I love this story and get giddy when I get a notification.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
I definitely hope Mr. Jackson is all right and maybe Bella can rest a little and eat something. Jasper is a trip...lol
Date: 07 Aug 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm nearly as glad as Bella must be for her to finally be somewhere safe! It kind of spooked her to meet so many people, but she may get over that now that she can relax a little. Her only worry now is what happened to Mr. Jackson. I hope those thugs didn't hurt him too badly!
Date: 07 Aug 2016 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
I get that Bella is scared about being seen by so many. Not that the Cullens would be her worry, but the people employed by where they live might. I hope not, but can see where she would be afraid. Love Jasper's reaction to his first jump. I wouldn't want to get stuck in a wall either! LOL! I hope they can find and free Mr. Jackson, but since he is a peripheral character, maybe not. I look forward so much to the new chapters on Sundays. I was going to ask about the length of this story, but decided not to. I'd rather be surprised. I hope they all kick the Volturi's butts in the end!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2016 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
I loved how Bella teleported Edward and Jasper. I'm still worried about Mr. Jackson though.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
really liking this story! Hope you will update soon!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2016 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMG!!!!!!! AMAZING!!!!! AWESOME!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! ;) i love how you gave rose and emmett powers as well ;) i thought bella was going to become invisible at first though ;) i liked how you gave edward 2 powers ;) i can't wait for the rest ;) thanks for sharing this with us ;D
Date: 01 Aug 2016 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Mr J. Hope he'll be alright.
Date: 01 Aug 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad Edward and Rose found her and at least planted the seed of trust. She did call in her time of need, so now they can protect her. This story calls to me to read it. I look forward to Sundays for each chapter, even though it is now Monday as I am finally getting to read it. I had the chance to get to see The Childhood of a Leader yesterday, so I took it! Thanks for all you lovely ladies give to us, your faithful readers.
Date: 01 Aug 2016 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Exciting start. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2016 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
Omg, thank god she decided to trust him. I hope Mr Jackson will be ok, how did they even know he knew her....?
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2016 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh no they know she talk to Mr J did someone tell them but will Bella go with Edward and his family now will they get to Mr J before it's too late
Date: 31 Jul 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm glad she finally called Edward. Now maybe she will be safe for a while.
Date: 31 Jul 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thank heaven she listened to Jackson and jumped from capture! Poor little Bella, she has had an awful time, and now I hope she lets the Cullen family help her! I really hope you plan on retribution, sometime, for Volterra and the thugs who work there!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
They will probably kill Mr. Jackson. Poor guy. Glad Bella called for help at least.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
a wonderful character building chapter. thanks
Date: 26 Jul 2016 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
please let me know when you update. sharrer43@hotmail.com
Date: 25 Jul 2016 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOVE.LOVE.LOVE. THANK YOU.
Date: 25 Jul 2016 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
It's great that Bella has at least one friend to worry about her! I sure hope this meeting with Mr. Jackson is the impetus to finding her!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved Mr. Jackson. Great chapter, but sad especially with the reality of the homeless situation that is in our nation, which seems to only be thought of during the holiday season. You also brought up another good point about what happens with some of these people getting targeted for human trafficking, prostitution, drugs & other awful situations.
Date: 25 Jul 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
I like Mr Jackson. a86;
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
Aww, what a sweet older gentleman :) can't wait for more interaction with him. So the energy Carlisle felt was Bella jumping. ..right?
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well this are a little closer to finding her and now they have a name but when will they find her and will she run if she sees them
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2016 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm still not sure if Bella will stay 'still' long enough for them to explain.
Date: 24 Jul 2016 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Like the build up you are doing,;not just together easily. . Awww for the war vet. Ridiculous we have homeless war vets and keep sending $$ to other countries
Date: 24 Jul 2016 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella reminds me of the movie Jumper, which is funny b/c KStew was in it! Was that intentional?
Author's Response:
No, not at all. lol I've never seen or heard of it. heh Cool. :)
Date: 24 Jul 2016 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow!! I loved Mr Jackson. I hope Bella will let them help her before it's to late!!
Date: 24 Jul 2016 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm glad they're getting closer to finding her. This is a harrowing time in the story, what with everything so up in the air and new. I do like Mr. Jackson also. LOVE that Rosalie is a shapeshifter! Thanks for this. It's different and exciting.
Date: 23 Jul 2016 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Holy Hell I LOVE THIS!
Date: 21 Jul 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Really like this story so far ! Great job , and keep up the fantastic work !
Date: 20 Jul 2016 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is amazing!!!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
I cant wait to see how they meet up again. Renee is a piece of work, sell your daughter out for drugs??!!! Lower than low! Bella's goint to immediately teleport as soon as she sees them, how will they get her to stay stil
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter. Renee & Phil are really winners. You can figure that they most likely were paid by Volterra for Bella.
I like the family dynamic of the Cullen household.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2016 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well I'm still hooked on this story and I've only read two chapters! Can't wait to see where this story goes it's going to be so good especially with a plot as unique as this!
Date: 17 Jul 2016 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
I feel so sorry for what Bella has been through. I can't wait for Edward and company to find her and help her. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 17 Jul 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am so loving this story! I didn't tell you guys after the last chapter, but meant to. When I read chapter one, I found myself remembering my now 44 y/o son when he was a boy. He was home sick from school, lying on the couch, and I was home with him. He was young, between 5 and 10 years old. I saw him "throw" something off the coffee table with his mind. I saw it! I looked at him and he had this slyest of smiles on his lilttle face. This was the only time I ever saw him do that and we really haven't talked about it since. I think we all, or most of us, have abilities that are latent, crushed out of us by elders who don't "believe" in such things. I haven't thought about this for many years, but reading the first chapter made me think of this again. You guys are wonderful when you write separately, but when you write together, something really special happens. I'm so very eager to see where you take this story! Much love....
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait for more!
Date: 17 Jul 2016 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Alice's visions of Bella and Edward are the clue to why he feels so drawn to this girl! You can't help but sympathize with what she has obviously gone through. I just hope they can find her and keep her safe!
Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow renee is a real piece of work
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow poor Bella and her mom turned on her for more eyes that is beyond low but how soon can Edward and family find Bella
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2016 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
Gotta love a parent who basically sells her child for drug money. NOT!!!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2016 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it! I am glad Carlisle and Esme came when they did. I can't wait to find out about Bella. Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2016 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start. Def something I've not read before.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2016 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great start, can't wait to read about Bella. her power is pretty cool.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2016 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm hooked. Great concept and great beginning.
Date: 11 Jul 2016 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am already hooked. I love your stories ladies. I was actually just thinking about going back to read Coming Home. I am so excited to read the rest of this story.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2016 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh I am so loving this! Can't wait till the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to reading more
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh I love it this is going to awesome I can't wait for more
Date: 10 Jul 2016 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting!!!!!Need more background on Bella Please!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Jul 2016 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm thrilled to the max with what you guys are doing in this story! I'm also a sci-fi geek from WAY back and this mixture just satisfies my soul! I'll read it here because I know it won't disappear...thanks ladies. It has been way too long since I read one of yours. LOVE LOVE LOVE it!
Date: 10 Jul 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I like this very much ! Keep up the great work !
Date: 10 Jul 2016 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start to the story! Loved that Carlise is a sixxer, as well as Edward and Alice. Interesting ability that Bella has, too! I think you two have a winner, here!
Date: 10 Jul 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome!!can't wait for more:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2016 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds great.. Keep it coming...( glad your back!!!!!)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it so far, I hope they catch up to her
Date: 10 Jul 2016 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving it already
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2016 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad Bella got away. I'm also glad Carlisle saved the others. Hopefully he can find Bella soon