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Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 65

Great ending. So happy that everything worked in the end. 

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 65

I always enjoy your stories.  

Would love to hear what happens with a Peter & Charlotte in the future.  

Thanks for sharing with u

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter. Good for Edward to address the issue head on.  It's good to see Bella finally feeling better about herself

Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 14

I like that Edward had previously noticed her & knew that they'd be together.  

Also, Jasper is giving him really good advice

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 65

Always a great story from you. This was such an original idea. Your alpha Edward was wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2017 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 65

Amazing story!  I loved every single syllable!  Taking Bella from being an outcast and outsider and carrying her forward to being an Alpha female and Mom was outrageously brilliant!  Thank you!  I look forward to a sequel about Jasper and Alice!  Truth be told, they are my favorite couple.  Again, thank you for all your hard work and labors, they made it so much fun!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2017 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 65

Amazing story!  I loved every single syllable!  Taking Bella from being an outcast and outsider and carrying her forward to being an Alpha female and Mom was outrageously brilliant!  Thank you!  I look forward to a sequel about Jasper and Alice!  Truth be told, they are my favorite couple.  Again, thank you for all your hard work and labors, they made it so much fun!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2017 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 65

Amazing story!  I loved every single syllable!  Taking Bella from being an outcast and outsider and carrying her forward to being an Alpha female and Mom was outrageously brilliant!  Thank you!  I look forward to a sequel about Jasper and Alice!  Truth be told, they are my favorite couple.  Again, thank you for all your hard work and labors, they made it so much fun!!

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 65

This was a great story. The cliff hanger is killing me as I hate having to wait. LOL. I can't wait for you to start Jasper/Alice's story.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2017 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 65

awww for baby.  TY for writing and sharing

ty

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2017 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 65

Loved it 

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 65

READ YOU SOON 🌺

Reviewer: Mireads Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 65

NOoooooooo, it can't end.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 65

I am glad that things went good with Bella's pregnancy and birth. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 65

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 65

Good story

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 65

I am glad she is ok and the baby is here.  There is more to the story

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 65

good

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 65

Great story.  I really like stories that are different in the supernatural sence.  Thanks and I look forwrd to others in this relm, like what happened to Peter and Charlotte?  A short outtake on how she adapted or added to the Jasper Alice story. Again Thanks

Reviewer: martshi3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

is this your story? I have bought a story from amazon kindle that is this story with different character names

Author's Response:

Yes this is my story. What is the name of the book and author on Amazon?

Reviewer: martshi3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

is this your story? I have bought a story from amazon kindle that is this story with different character names

Reviewer: Vampirelady13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 28

And this is where I say good by to your story. I don't mind the sex but if it is in front of an audience well to me that is just wrong. To me a mate pro t sects and he does not like others looking at his mate being naked and screwing her in front of a bunch of people. Good luck there seem to lots of people who don't mind having sex in front of an audience.

Reviewer: Vampirelady13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow that was quick. So much for her fighting it.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 64

Hmm the Jared thing makes me nervous 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2017 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 64

Why cant Edward smell the baby??  Where is Jard the danger is not over for Bella yet?

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2017 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 64

Sorry it wasn't Peter it was Jared. So glad that they are going to have a baby. 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 63

I still don't trust Peter. I'm glad Edward killed the doctor though. 

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 64

I love your story.  I am always excited when I see you have updated.  Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 64

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 64

:) Happy Easter to you 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 64

Yay 😊

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 64

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 64

Love love love this chapter.  As always I want more!!!!!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 64

Loved it

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 64

Loved it

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 63

Loved it can't wait for more’

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 63

Loved it can't wait for more’

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 63

Way to go Edward!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 63

That was quick.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 63

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 63

I am glad that he saved Sapphire bit he did not find out who was behind the good doctor. While was the doctor working for?  Maybe they will find some paperwork or evidence before they burn it down. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 63

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 63

Ugh  Psycho men.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 63

Woohoo. Very good

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 63

Oh my!! ;)

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 63

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 63

The doc is one crazy old man.  Who was he planing on ruling next to?

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2017 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 62

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 62

Where is she! Bella wont stop till she  find her if it's the l last thing she does

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 62

Loved it!  Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 62

Glad E listened to her reasoning on this.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 62

Much too short but a good chapter. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 62

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 62

Glad they saved the women. But where and what did they do with Sapphire? 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 62

OMG! WOW!! ;)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 62

Very very good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 62

:) 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 62

Glad they found the other women. 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 61

Thank goodness she has been rescued. 

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2017 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 61

Loving this story!!!! Please update more soon!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 61

Glad he's letting her help/

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 61

Loved it can't wait for more ’ 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 61

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 61

Loved it!  Can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 61

good

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 61

Well done

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 61

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 61

I was wondering why no one knew Bella was pregnant.  I knew they could smell the different changes in the body. Hope they get to the females in time. Hope Sapphire is ok. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 61

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 61

He is just freaked out poor guy

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 60

good

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 60

Oh poor Edward. He needs to really realize he had no control over being able to protect her.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 60

I'm still curious if she'll have a pup or a kid.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 60

Kinda saw that cheap shot by his opponent coming.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 60

Loved it can't wait for more ’ 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 60

Very good

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 60

Finally

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 60

Together again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 60

Poor Edward.  He feels so guilty. Glad he has her back in his arms. Can't wait to see what his reaction is going to be when he finds out she pregnant. He is going to be soooo over protective of her and the pup. He will drive Bella crazy. Lol. 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 60

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 60

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 60

OMG he is going to blame himself poor guy.  She is back he will not let her out of his sight.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 59

Can't wait for your next update.  This is really getting good. Jared deserved what he got. 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 59

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 58

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 57

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 56

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 55

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 54

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 53

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 52

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 51

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 50

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 49

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 48

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 47

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 46

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 45

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 44

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 43

Loved it! 

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