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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 51

uh oh. hopefully they find her soon

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 51

uh oh. hopefully they find her soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2017 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 51

I hope Edward finds her soon 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 51

OMG what are they going to do OMG

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 51

Oh my. So other wolves are helping humans take the alpha females. Oh they will pay for that. Can't wait for Edward and the others to find out. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 51

Wow

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 51

Sounds like something the gov't would do.  Hmmm i wonder if her half breed status will help her somehow

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 51

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 51

Very good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 50

OMG freaking out he was out for 8 hours

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 50

 This will be good for Bella because then she'll be able to find the other women.  Hopefully they don't hurt her.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 50

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 50

Can't blame E for wanting to do something rather than rest

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 50

Her family?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 50

Wow!  Edward is going crazy. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 49

Oh no

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 50

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 50

good

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 50

WOW!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 50

Edward is taking Bella being gone better than I thought.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 49

When Edward wakes up he is going to be so upset.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 49

When Edward wakes up he is going to be so upset.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 49

I knew her stubborn ass was going to cause problems.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 49

Poor edward, he's gonna blame himself. At least he knows how thE females got taken easily.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 49

Ack  you are killing me.  Are the wolf with no scent or magic hiding scent or humans.   Again ACK.  My head is spinning.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 49

Oh no!!!!!!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 49

OMG!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 49

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 49

Edward is not going to be happy 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 49

OH shit they will be sorry for taking her

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 49

good

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2017 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 48

Oh no you might disappear too! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2017 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 48

ooh they've got a new clue.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2017 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 48

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 48

And then Bella disappears.......

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 48

Edwards going to be pissed that she went after him...but maybe Bella will find out more about whats going on. Loved it and cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 48

Is he taking her some place? Is he wanting to show her something? 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 48

Oh for the love of crackers! Not a good idea Bella!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 48

Bella shouldn't be running into the forest alone 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 48

Shit Shit Shit she should not have run after him.  Edward is losing his shit right now.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 48

uh oh

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 48

Oh that is not good. Edward is going to be pissed. 

Reviewer: kneon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2017 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 48

Oh that is not good. Edward is going to be pissed. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 47

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 47

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 47

uh oh

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 47

Edward is going to lose his shit if something happens to her.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 47

Oh boy! Here comes more trouble!! ;)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 47

B has the right idea.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 47

B has the right idea.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 47

Another updated!!!!!!!!! So ,excited!!!!! I am worried about the last sentence in this chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2017 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 46

If it is a kid maybe a female needs to talk to them. You the motherly method. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 46

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 46

Maybe had a girl talk to the kid and not some big old wolf dudes?

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 46

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 46

When they find out WOW heads will roll

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 46

I'M betting on it being Jared and irina 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 46

Great update.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 46

:) 

Reviewer: RHIRHI03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2017 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 36

I love it so much the twist on the original plot is just amazing, a few incorrect things here and there but other than that it was truly amazing I was captivated by the intense love and protective behaviour from Edward towards Bella it truly brought me into the book. You are an amazing writer. Hope you write more soon.~R

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 45

Nice that she is being so supportive.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 45

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 45

good

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 45

Such a kind female alpha! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 45

So glad to see them pulling together. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 45

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2016 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 44

Wow she will tease him again because in the end it is all good ;)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 44

Naughty teasing E

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 44

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 44

I would love for Edward to tease me like that. Lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 44

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 44

good

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 43

Edward montre qui est le maître.

Je crois qu'ils vont avoir du plaisir.

Baisers.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2016 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 43

Naughty E not letting her play 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 43

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 43

They are having so much fun just being in love.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 43

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 43

:) 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 43

Torture indeed

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 43

Sounds like they are going to have some fun. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2016 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 42

Hello naughty bella!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 42

Love this Bella.  Can't wait till see what she has planned. 

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 42

Oh le gredin!

Edward va souffrir, Bella est difficile avec lui ...

Baisers

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 42

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 42

Get him B

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 42

Bad indeed

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 42

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 42

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 42

What a way to be punished lol

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2016 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 41

I like this chapter.

Bella is a big she-wolf Alpha !

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 41

Bella handled it better than I thought.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 41

Glad Bella is prioritizing what's important.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 41

I have missed the playfulness between them.  This was cute!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 41

good

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 41

Love this story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 41

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2016 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 41

Bella is fare

Reviewer: Roxie619 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2016 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 40

Please please update

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2016 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 40

OMG!!! I AM DYING FOR MORE!!!! :D

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