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Reviewer: Vampirelady13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2017 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 28

And this is where I say good by to your story. I don't mind the sex but if it is in front of an audience well to me that is just wrong. To me a mate pro t sects and he does not like others looking at his mate being naked and screwing her in front of a bunch of people. Good luck there seem to lots of people who don't mind having sex in front of an audience.

Reviewer: Vampirelady13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow that was quick. So much for her fighting it.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 64

Hmm the Jared thing makes me nervous 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2017 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 64

Why cant Edward smell the baby??  Where is Jard the danger is not over for Bella yet?

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2017 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 64

Sorry it wasn't Peter it was Jared. So glad that they are going to have a baby. 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 63

I still don't trust Peter. I'm glad Edward killed the doctor though. 

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 64

I love your story.  I am always excited when I see you have updated.  Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 64

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 64

:) Happy Easter to you 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 64

Yay 😊

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 64

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 64

Love love love this chapter.  As always I want more!!!!!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 64

Loved it

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 64

Loved it

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 63

Loved it can't wait for more’

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 63

Loved it can't wait for more’

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 63

Way to go Edward!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 63

That was quick.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 63

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 63

I am glad that he saved Sapphire bit he did not find out who was behind the good doctor. While was the doctor working for?  Maybe they will find some paperwork or evidence before they burn it down. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 63

:) 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 63

Ugh  Psycho men.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 63

Woohoo. Very good

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 63

Oh my!! ;)

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 63

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2017 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 63

The doc is one crazy old man.  Who was he planing on ruling next to?

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2017 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 62

Loved it can't wait for more 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 62

Where is she! Bella wont stop till she  find her if it's the l last thing she does

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 62

Loved it!  Can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 62

Glad E listened to her reasoning on this.

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 62

Much too short but a good chapter. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 62

good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 62

Glad they saved the women. But where and what did they do with Sapphire? 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 62

OMG! WOW!! ;)

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 62

Very very good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 62

:) 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 62

Glad they found the other women. 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 61

Thank goodness she has been rescued. 

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2017 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 61

Loving this story!!!! Please update more soon!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 61

Glad he's letting her help/

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 61

Loved it can't wait for more ’ 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 61

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 61

Loved it!  Can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 61

good

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 61

Well done

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 61

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 61

I was wondering why no one knew Bella was pregnant.  I knew they could smell the different changes in the body. Hope they get to the females in time. Hope Sapphire is ok. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 61

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 61

He is just freaked out poor guy

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 60

good

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 60

Oh poor Edward. He needs to really realize he had no control over being able to protect her.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 60

I'm still curious if she'll have a pup or a kid.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 60

Kinda saw that cheap shot by his opponent coming.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 60

Loved it can't wait for more ’ 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 60

Very good

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 60

Finally

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 60

Together again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 60

Poor Edward.  He feels so guilty. Glad he has her back in his arms. Can't wait to see what his reaction is going to be when he finds out she pregnant. He is going to be soooo over protective of her and the pup. He will drive Bella crazy. Lol. 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 60

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 60

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 60

OMG he is going to blame himself poor guy.  She is back he will not let her out of his sight.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 59

Can't wait for your next update.  This is really getting good. Jared deserved what he got. 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 59

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 58

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 57

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 56

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 55

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 54

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 53

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 52

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 51

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 50

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 49

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 48

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 47

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 46

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 45

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 44

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 43

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 42

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 40

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 39

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 37

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it!

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it!

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it!

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it! 

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Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

I hate Irina! 

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