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Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 60

I'm still curious if she'll have a pup or a kid.

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 60

Kinda saw that cheap shot by his opponent coming.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 60

Loved it can't wait for more ’ 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 60

Very good

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 60

Finally

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 60

Together again!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 60

Poor Edward.  He feels so guilty. Glad he has her back in his arms. Can't wait to see what his reaction is going to be when he finds out she pregnant. He is going to be soooo over protective of her and the pup. He will drive Bella crazy. Lol. 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 60

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 60

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 60

OMG he is going to blame himself poor guy.  She is back he will not let her out of his sight.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 59

Can't wait for your next update.  This is really getting good. Jared deserved what he got. 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 59

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 58

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 57

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 56

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 55

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 54

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 53

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 52

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 51

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 50

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 49

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 48

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 47

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 46

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 45

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 44

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 43

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 42

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 41

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 40

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 39

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 38

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 37

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 36

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 35

Loved it!

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 34

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 33

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it!

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 31

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it! 

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it!

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Date: 18 Mar 2017 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it! 

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Date: 17 Mar 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it! 

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Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it! 

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Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it! 

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Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

I hate Irina! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it! 

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Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it! 

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Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it! 

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Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it! 

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Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 16

Fantastic chapter! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 15

Go Bella! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 12

Poor Bella! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

Awesome! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

Go Bella! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! 

Reviewer: Autumnbaby23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!  Poor girl! 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2017 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 59

So glad Jasper is on her side!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 59

Loved it 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 59

good

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 59

Very very good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 59

Glad Jasper found her.  Jared deserved what he got it seems. Traitor

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 59

Good chapters, don't wait so long to update please

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 59

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 59

Edward needs help but I am such he will be pissed if she helps or are they going for the wemon?

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 59

We have confirmation the Jared was working for the kidnappers. Now will someone help Edward?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 58

She is so smart Jard is or was a bad guy.  Thanks god she was found by Jasper.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 58

Loved it can't wait for more ’ 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 58

good

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 58

Yay!! finally friendly people!! Welcome back!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 58

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 58

OMGosh!!!!!! So excited that you are back. Missed you. Can't wait for another update.  

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 58

Thank goodness. Please don't let Jasper be in on it.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 58

Go Bad Ass Bella

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 58

ahh wish you would put POV on your pages. Helps. thanks

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 58

Jasper is always good.   : ) 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 58

Yay!!!! She will be safe now.
Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 58

Hopefully, Jasper is still a good guy. 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 58

YAY!!!!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 58

YAY!!!!

Reviewer: Roxie619 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 57

Please update when you can. I miss reading this story

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 57

Loved it can't wait for more ’ 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 57

Go E.  Go help your girl before Jared get her hurt

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 57

:) 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 57

Get him Edward! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 57

Get him, Edward.  Can't wait to see who is behind all of this. Also can't wait to see what Edward's reaction is to Bella being pregnant.  

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 57

Keep writing

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