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Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 57

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 57

Go E.  Go help your girl before Jared get her hurt

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 57

:) 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 57

Get him Edward! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 57

Get him, Edward.  Can't wait to see who is behind all of this. Also can't wait to see what Edward's reaction is to Bella being pregnant.  

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 57

Keep writing

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 57

Oh my!! So close!!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 57

Please let them find the females

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 57

Please let them find the females

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 57

OMG Edward rip his ass apart.

Reviewer: Lela Noah Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 57

Omg!!! I love love all you stories! Ur amazing at keeping me hooked!  

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 57

good

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 56

I really don't trust him!!!!
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 56

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’—

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 56

Uh oh!!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 56

Please don't let her get screwed over 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 56

nooooooo You know that isn't going to turn out well.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 56

Yikes!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 56

Damn it......

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 56

I would not trust Jared. I would definitely keep him in front of me and not behind me. I know he cannot be there with Edward. He would be much more  Urgent to get her out of there

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 56

I don't trust Jared 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 56

don't think she should trust jared

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 56

No dont go just hit the bastard in the head.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 56

Don't go!

I'm so happy and excited with these frequent updates. Thank you.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 55

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 55

Hope the sapphire thing wasn't a setup

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2017 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 55

I hope Bella runs into Edward and the others.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 55

yikes

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 55

Damn it, now what .

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 55

Damn it, now what .

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 55

:) 

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 55

Hot damn.....they may make it after all! Hopefully the packs are waiting for them on the outside!!!! More soon please!!!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 55

Those poor women. I hope that they're not in more danger for trying to escape. Hopefully they get away.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 55

Oh I hope she gets out and runs into Edward and their pack. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2017 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 55

Got to love Sapphire they better not hurt her

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 54

Longer chapters please

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 54

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’—

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 54

Sounds like Dr Crock has a painful death coming his way along with the guards.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 54

good

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 54

I hope her captors burn in Hell.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 54

OMGOSH!!!!!I hope Edward and the pack get there before they can do any more to Bella.  What about the drug they just injected her with, will it hurt the baby? I always get excited when I get your update notice. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 54

I hope Edward gets there soon 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 54

Them bastards better die

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 53

Oh shit....please tell me they get there in time!!!

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 53

not cool to just leave us hanging like that.... please update soon. I love this story. You know a mothers instincts are strong enough to break any restraints.... just saying. lol

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 53

hope it is the right place and they get to b before something really bad happens 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 53

Please save their pup or litter.

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 53

Go Edward!! Go!!! lol

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 53

Well at least they have something to go on

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 52

Wow  Sounds like a whole lot of people need to be added to the Kill list.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 53

:) 

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 53

I hope he gets to Bella in time.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 53

OMG!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 53

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 53

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 53

Damn....now what?

Great update

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 53

I hope that is where they have Bella so they can get her before they do anything to the baby

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 53

OMG Please don't let them hurt Bella's baby. I'm nearly in tears here... I love your work though. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 53

Oh I hope this is where they are keeping Bella and the other Alpha females. 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 52

How sad to find out you are pregnant that way. I hope she can get away before they can take the baby away from her.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 52

OH shit they cant hurt the baby NOOOOOOOOOO

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 52

They can't hurt the baby!!! I hope the guys figure it out soon.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 52

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’—

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 52

yikes

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 52

Oh no, I sure hope Edward and the rest of the pack are able to rescue Bella and the other females before any harm can happen to any of them especially Bella ,

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 52

OMGosh!!!!!! I don't blame Bella for being upset.  She will kill them all if she can. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 52

Well damn.... you have to have her kill them all and release the hostages OR Edward has to rescue them.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 52

I hope she can get away 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2017 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 52

NO!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 51

uh oh. hopefully they find her soon

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 51

uh oh. hopefully they find her soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2017 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 51

I hope Edward finds her soon 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 51

OMG what are they going to do OMG

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 51

Oh my. So other wolves are helping humans take the alpha females. Oh they will pay for that. Can't wait for Edward and the others to find out. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 51

Wow

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 51

Sounds like something the gov't would do.  Hmmm i wonder if her half breed status will help her somehow

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 51

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 51

Very good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 50

OMG freaking out he was out for 8 hours

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 50

 This will be good for Bella because then she'll be able to find the other women.  Hopefully they don't hurt her.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 50

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 50

Can't blame E for wanting to do something rather than rest

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 50

Her family?

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 50

Wow!  Edward is going crazy. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 49

Oh no

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 50

:) 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 50

good

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 50

WOW!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 50

Edward is taking Bella being gone better than I thought.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 49

When Edward wakes up he is going to be so upset.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 49

When Edward wakes up he is going to be so upset.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 49

I knew her stubborn ass was going to cause problems.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 49

Poor edward, he's gonna blame himself. At least he knows how thE females got taken easily.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 49

Ack  you are killing me.  Are the wolf with no scent or magic hiding scent or humans.   Again ACK.  My head is spinning.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 49

Oh no!!!!!!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 49

OMG!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 49

Loved it can't wait for more ๐Ÿ’• 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 49

Edward is not going to be happy 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 49

OH shit they will be sorry for taking her

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 49

good

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