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Reviewer: GinnyD Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2016 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 28

thanks for all the effort you make for us

 

God brings you health and happiness

 

thanks

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 28

Maybe after this they willing start working group together. That Bella will accept her place as Alpha female.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 27

Glad to get this update.  I have missed this story.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

Wow hot wolf sex lol loved it .  I hope all are feeling better soon

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 27

He is trying to make her feel part of the pack he is so sweet

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 28

Wow I love it.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 27

Can't blame her for being wary of the others considering how she'd been treated in the past

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 28

Finally. Great update

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 28

good.

it looks like you missed posting ch 27 here on twcs

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh yey  She's claimed him

Reviewer: burgess Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2016 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 26

the story was good but it would have been better if it was finished i for one hope that there will be an ending 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2016 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 26

This is such an exciting story!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 26

Mark him!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2016 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 26

GO BELLA! It is necessary to move to please Edward 

Thank you kisses

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2016 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 26

Edward will not take NO for an answer he know she is strong.

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 26

Awesome I love it.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 26

I am glad Edward is not letting her get away with hiding anymore

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 26

good

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 26

Well at least he isn't pushing her to mark him.  Can you blame her though.  The pack has made her feel like dirt all these years.  Why would she want to stay and be a part of them.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2016 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 26

Edward is being very patient which is what Bella needs.

 

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

Please update soon. Missing them.

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 25

Awesome I love it.

Reviewer: bobbysgirl1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 25

😷. Being sick during the summer is the worst. The only good thing ...sick or not the kids back at school will put a spring in your step and a smile on your face. (he he he)  ok now....as for this chapter... I'm glad Bella is starting to accept her place by Edward's side... where she belongs!!!!!  Hopefully Irina won't come back and cause trouble later on down the road.   READ YOU SOON 💖

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 25

Does kinda suck that she's the one expected to change everything for a pack that has never accepted her and only does now  because of E

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039; 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 25

Are they the true alpha pair in the eyes of the Pack? There wasn't the traditional ceremony.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 25

Very good

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 25

Wow, he banished Irina.  I knew she would be punished but I did not expect that. I hope she does not go out and tell people about the wolves.  I know Bella has new responsibilities but I kind of feel like all her choices are being taken away from her.  I hope she can be happy. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 25

Better she comes to terms with it now.  Mark him already! Lol! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 25

I love how he just let that hang giving her a chance to do it on her own.  I hope you feel better soon.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 25

good

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 23

Good for Bella.

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loving this story. Great imaginative story line.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2016 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 24

Edward est vraiment bon!

Bella est la chance d'être son partenaire.

Peter et Charlotte vont être bon dans le pack.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2016 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 24

What?  Nothing about the fight or the fact that Irina got her ass handed to her? ???,

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2016 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 24

That was freaking awesome

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2016 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 23

Wonderful

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2016 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

This should be an interesting confrontation.

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2016 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 21

Fantastic

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 24

He loves her so much I think she gets she feels the same way

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

I guess Peter didn't tell Edward everything.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 24

good

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

Can understand b's apprehension 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 24

This Edward makes me melt a little bit. Sweet and hot. ;)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039; 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

Bella will be there for Charlotte like Edward said. Charlotte will not be alone like Bella was. Can't wait to see what Edward has to say about the fight between Bella and Irina.  

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 24

Very very good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2016 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

YES!!! Bella kicked her Ass!!! lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 23

She proved herself

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 23

Go Bella!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

Kick some ass bella

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 23

good

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 23

Awesome! Thank you for the back-to-back chapters I needed it this morning

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 23

Excited to get another update.  Thanks.  I knew Bella would have the upper hand in the fight.  Can't wait to see what happens to Irina and to see what Edward has to say. 

Reviewer: robin5589 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 23

Glad she kicked her ass. Only wish she had done it in front of everyone and caused more damage. I hope Edward humiliates Irina for her disrespect of his mate.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 23

Go B.  Put that witch in her place.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 22

Yea kinda sucks taht Peter would do that to Charlotte.  Can't blame B for being pissed.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

Atta girl Bella! Kick ass and take names!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 23

Bella needed to let off steam and Irina was what the Dr. prescribed. 

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 22

Oh this is about to get juicy. I like the dynamic between Peter and Charlotte. Can't wait to hear about Irina and Bella. Get well soon.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 22

Hope you are feeling better.  You have been missed. Can't wait to see what is going on with Irina. Also can't wait to see what Edward says about Peter and Charlotte. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 22

Well damn....... Hopefully Edward will be able to get there in time to watch the altercation.

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 22

Uh Oh!!! lol Kick her but Bella!!!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 22

Fight! Fight! Fight!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 22

Bella will kick there ass

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 22

Hopefully she can handle it herself

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 22

Their claws are coming out now.

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

Get well soon! 😊 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 22

yikes.

hope you are feeling better

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2016 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 22

I hope she chews that bitch up and spits her out!

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 19

Missing your updates...😔

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 21

Bite her? Ouch!

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

I think his mind is made up already.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 21

Glad B is standing up to him about her friend. If what B says is true, then Peter sounds selfish to me

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

good

Reviewer: Mustang Sally Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 21

Oh here we go. I knew it was about to start....

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 21

Poor Peter

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 21

Bitten wolves???? Please explain 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2016 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 21

Peter likes her and Bella doesn't want her hurt she knows how cruel Charlotte would be treated 

Reviewer: Mmmoyer Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 20

Okay the single chapter updates have been like methadone to a heroine addict and not updating today has me twitching and constantly checking for new updates.... Seriously this is bad even for me lmao. Your story has started to become my drug and the plot hasn't even been revealed yet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2016 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 20

She is a peace keeper

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 20

I am really enjoying this story please keep it going.

Reviewer: LenStormcrow1988 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 19

Awesome I love it.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 20

Sounds like James needs a smack upside the head.....and the other guy a nutpunch.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 20

Maybe they could hire Peter to be the bodyguard or bouncer for the bar. Lol. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

Well damn.....

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 20

Bella sure is anti human/werewolf relationship, but I guess I can't blame her considering what she went through as being the result of one. Although I do feel she is being a bit of a hypocrite since she said that she used to stick to mainly human men for sex before she got with Edward. 

Can't wait for more! 😊 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 20

good

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2016 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039; 

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2016 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 19

I hope this doesn't turn into a mess.

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