Date: 19 Nov 2023 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm happy that E & B are sorting things out. They let so many people come between them, especially that beotch Alice and her cohort, Angela! How can those women be so mean!
Date: 19 Nov 2023 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm happy that E & B are sorting things out. They let so many people come between them, especially that beotch Alice and her cohort, Angela! How can those women be so mean!
Date: 19 Nov 2023 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm happy that E & B are sorting things out. They let so many people come between them, especially that beotch Alice and her cohort, Angela! How can those women be so mean!
Date: 19 Nov 2023 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm happy that E & B are sorting things out. They let so many people come between them, especially that beotch Alice and her cohort, Angela! How can those women be so mean!
Date: 19 Nov 2023 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm happy that E & B are sorting things out. They let so many people come between them, especially that beotch Alice and her cohort, Angela! How can those women be so mean!
Date: 19 Nov 2023 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm happy that E & B are sorting things out. They let so many people come between them, especially that bitch Alice and her cohort, Angela! How can those women be so mean!
Date: 19 Nov 2023 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm happy that E & B are sorting things out. They let so many people come between them, especially that bitch Alice and her cohort, Angela! How can those women be so mean!
Date: 19 Nov 2023 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm happy that E & B are sorting things out. They let so many people come between them, especially that bitch Alice and her cohort, Angela! How can those women be so mean!
Date: 02 Feb 2023 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
I haven't even finished reading this and I already know why the DNA tests failed. Freaking ANGELA. Well that's just my theory.
Date: 15 Oct 2022 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
I don't know if this will post because my reviews keep getting an error message.
Bella's parents, especially Charlie are nothing more than fucked up abusive people.
Date: 15 Oct 2022 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
That is some fucked up child abuse!
Date: 15 Oct 2022 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
That is some fucked up child abuse!
Date: 16 Jun 2021 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
Everyone of them are fucked up in the head. I'm not even sure if therapy would help any one of them.
Date: 16 Jun 2021 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
Everyone of them are fucked up in the head. I'm not even sure if therapy would help any one of them.
Date: 29 Mar 2019 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 35
I read this story in three days. I couldn't put it down and I love all your girls stories!
Date: 29 Mar 2019 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 35
I read this story in three days. I couldn't put it down and I love all your girls stories!
Date: 23 Jan 2018 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 35
This story was an amazing piece of literature. I loved, hated, laughed and cried my way through it.
What Angela, Alice and Ben did to Bella and the other rape victims through should have been punishable by death or life with no parole. Angela's parents were so out of touch with reality is was sad.
I was astounded Alice's parents didn't know she aw mentally ill from childhood. I'm glad Emmett and Edward visited her because they facilitated the removal of her incompetent therapist.
Bella was a most incredible character I've ever read. I don't know how it happened but I do know she was very brave, loving and unselfish.
When Edward got his head out of his bottom and became the man he should be was spectacular!!!
All of the other characters were awesome, too. I didn't like the way Jasper was written in this story though the need for this type of character portrayal was needed for the story.
Pops,Elizabeth and Granny Tia were show stoppers and I loved them all so much. I cried a river when I earned al three passed on to heaven.
This review should give you number 1000. Every story you've written has been a pleasure to read.
Thank You!!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward really was stupid yet he made the right decision when planned to go back to Bella before fate and Benjamin stepped in to separate them!!!!
Bella is simply amazing and as ever very kind!!!
I knew Benjamin messed with first DNA test!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward really was stupid yet he made the right decision when planned to go back to Bella before fate and Benjamin stepped in to separate them!!!!
Bella is simply amazing and as ever very kind!!!
I knew Benjamin messed with first DNA test!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward really was stupid yet he made the right decision when planned to go back to Bella before fate and Benjamin stepped in to separate them!!!!
Bella is simply amazing and as ever very kind!!!
I knew Benjamin messed with first DNA test!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 20
I feel happy they are talking and beginning to realize what happened during and after Bella's pregnancy!!!!
Right now they seem to each be really broken yet I'm hopeful they'll start talking more often and it will help to heal both of them!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
I never imagined Edward would find out about Bella's rape the way he did!!!!! I'm glad Mike was thereto help Bela and I'm glad he understood Bella's being overwhelmed on earning who her rapist was!!!!
Awesome chapter!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
I was wrong and seems Edward has two sets of DNA. So maybe Angela and Benjamin didn't mess with the DNA tests!!!
I love how Edward Senior and Bella met and became friends. It was so sweet!!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Benjamin and Angela work in different labs and I bet she did the first test and switched up the DNA samples then when the second test came through she had Benjamin do the same thing!!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
II believe what Alice and Angela did was beyond cruel!!!! I am beginning Esme is stupid or she's in on the plot to destroy Bella!!!! Bella was right Jessica and Laure weren't invited and it was a compete setup to hurt or kill her one.
II also think Edward is blind and stupid!!!!
I cried through most of this chapter because of how painful it was for Bella!!! I don't know if Bella will ever be able to trust Edward!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward's being fed a bunch of lies by his sister whose mission in life is to destroy Bella. Angela is just a nasty as Alice!!!
Regarding C & E, the jury's still out on them. I think they won't give Bella a kind word will fake caring because their high society and snobbish!!!!
Also, My gut is telling me what happened on 10/11 was planned and executed by Alice and Angela. I believe the drink contain the rape drug and she may have been raped by more than one man and I think Alice and Angela were present when it happened!!!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward's being fed a bunch of lies by his sister whose mission in life is to destroy Bella. Angela is just a nasty as Alice!!!
Regarding C & E, the jury's still out on them. I think they won't give Bella a kind word will fake caring because their high society and snobbish!!!!
Also, My gut is telling me what happened on 10/11 was planned and executed by Alice and Angela. I believe the drink contain the rape drug and she may have been raped by more than one man and I think Alice and Angela were present when it happened!!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2017 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 35
Beautiful story, just loved it.
Date: 22 Sep 2017 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 35
This is such a sweet story!! This is my second time reading it!! TTFN!!! JXB 😀
Date: 15 Sep 2017 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
Poor Jasper.... I feel so bad for him. He has been through hell and back. And now he looses his daughter. Damn Alice.
Date: 19 Aug 2017 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 35
This was great! I loved it so much even if you had me in tears cause pops died.
Date: 21 Jul 2017 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 35
You guys always have amazing stories and this one is no different. I felt like I was on an emotional roller coaster. My heart wss constantly breaking for everything Bella was being put through. But I knew a HEA wss coming. Great characters and the story was so complex and again, amazing.
Date: 18 Jul 2017 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 35
You guys always have amazing stories and this one is no different. I felt like I was on an emotional roller coaster. My heart wss constantly breaking for everything Bella was being put through. But I knew a HEA wss coming. Great characters and the story was so complex and again, amazing.
Date: 15 Jun 2017 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love your stories, but this one touch home with me. Great job
Date: 13 Jun 2017 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 35
This story was amazing! At first I wasn't so sure if I could continue because they all made me so angry. But from reading your other stories I knew it would get to a good place. I also enjoyed that you didn't use the same cast of characters as the bad guys/gals. It is refresing to read that Jacob/Mike/James/Victoria/Jessica and Tanya were the good ones. After reading so many stories through the years it is so nice to stumble upon ones that are different. Thank you so much for sharing this story with all of us.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 33
I thought in a earlier chapter that Charlie was giving Ethan to a couple called Sally and Gordon?
Had he promised Sam and Emily as well?
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm a little confused, I thought that Edward knew legal papers where served on Bella to stop her putting his name on the birth certificate. I couldn't understand his surprise.
It doesn't surprise me that jasper is a battered husband, Alice is off her rocker.
The description of siobhan doesn't sound anything like either Alice or jasper, has she snatched someone else baby?
Date: 22 May 2017 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 35
I loved this story and these characters so much, even if they did keep making me cry. Thank you for this amazing story.
Date: 18 May 2017 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 35
Well I can only say thank you! It was so difficult reading through Bella's struggle and all the horrible things in the beginning but being a fan of your stories I had faith even while yelling at my iPad in early Edward bashing chapters *blushes*. Tanks for having him get his shit together. This story spoke to me and moved me and I thank you. Finishing the Epi just now was great because it felt like real closure to the lives affected. I will always have you on alert and look forward to what's next. Carry on lovelies. ;-D
Date: 18 May 2017 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 33
I think a female prison is to nice for Angela. The small minded people of forks will likely be small minded and mean. Closure is important. Seeing how this all came together I think the Cullen's were to surrounded by crazy and so was Bella that it's a small miracle they survived it.
Date: 18 May 2017 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 32
So Angela's letter just, well...no words for the cray. JS
Date: 18 May 2017 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
Of course victims want answers like why me. The only problem is when dealing with sadistic monsters the answer often isn't enough. Book? Tacky and yes some place would publish it and sickos would read it in detail. Sue? I would organize a class action civil suit absolutely. Alice's therapist should bunk with her. Bella pregnancy mini breakdown had me remembering how much I hated Edward at the beginning. Redemption is good! Hard earned HEA rules! So that little family of 4 has some gene pool. It's like Chinatown. I had to create an org chart. Haha well done. ;-)
Date: 18 May 2017 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 30
First Edward & Garrett mentioned in the trial chapter that they wanted to know why Bella's rape was the most vicious? But they didn't take the stand. Are we going to know that motivation? Seeing Jasper like this is sad really. Nice twist. Carlisle and his little girl issues is...I don't know really. Alice is vile in this story. 25 years is a cake walk. Stories that have abuse and rape in them are never my go to stories. I don't do well with them but you have been good at emoting just enough of everything to make me happy, angry, sad, sick, a bloody mess and most importantly moving to the next chapter. Carry on lovelies.
Date: 18 May 2017 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 29
Wow Angela and Ben are cray! This chapter was full of answers and I hope in prison they experience much reciprocity. I am glad you didn't get to deep with the trial. I've gone through some tissue in this story ;-) I am also glad I didn't read it before bed like I planned. Thank you!
Date: 18 May 2017 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow these chapters are jammed packed with intense drama. We are working for that HEA ladies ;-)
Date: 18 May 2017 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
I am feeling good about Edwards road to forgiveness with Bella. Well done chicas!
Date: 17 May 2017 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
It's nice to be proud of Edward for a change. His understanding of his faults and wrongs to Bella is clear. He was smart to go to therapy. Not pushing her and acknowledging her pace is what I wanted. Well done ladies!
Date: 17 May 2017 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
No don't let him hug her it's too soon but contrition looks so much better on Edward than asshole thank the lord! So glad Bella's family is letting them sort through this but support her first. I don't trust Carlisle and Esme not to put their little girl the spawn first but I don't think they are bad people. Jesus was Angela the videographer during the rapes? I hope not. So much nuance that it warrants a second read at a later date. This was a really good chapter.
Date: 17 May 2017 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
And deep cleansing breath....phew!
Date: 17 May 2017 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
Going 15 months without your son is punishment but Bella is a different story. Being raped and Edward hurting her will make it difficult for him anyway. What a mess. See Benjermin was a creep! That's for keeping Emmett cool.
Date: 17 May 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
I almost feel like this was the exhale chapter. Thank you for giving her that family of support. She's right her and Edward never stood a chance. Are you going to bring Emmett back? I hope he's nicer than that lot. Again miscommunication? You betcha but Edward was a grown man in his twenties listening to lies and seeing the hate first hand and Bella a teenager under her parents care not the same right? You all wrecked me in this chapter I felt it all. Phew...
Date: 17 May 2017 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
That was a sad chappy. I feel for them all. Where are Lauren and Jessica??
Date: 17 May 2017 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
Way to go Bella! Take charge babes. Edward is still a clueless spineless idiot. I love my Edwards but this OCC Edward is giving my patience a work out. Ahh the angst of it all. I can't wait for the prologue to catch up when Bella is rid of these mean people and maybe has a chance at a real life. When is she going to realize she was raped? That's gonna wreck me. Carry on lovelies. Mooches!
Date: 17 May 2017 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
Riddle me this...when Edward stalked Bella for 6 weeks did he see her dating, whoring, drinking? Because she only went to school, work then the dorms. Also, miscommunication? Sure shit tons of it but also Edward is a right bastard. The way things are going I see how grandma Lizzy's prediction is correct. He's not ready for Bella or that baby. The prologue makes perfect sense now. Sad but true.
Date: 17 May 2017 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
Okay so when this turns around for sweet Bella and I have faith ladies that it will; I want Edward to beg for forgiveness so hard my head spins. He is an asshole in this chapter but I am so loving Jess and Lauren they are honest and true friends. I have to say this angst is making me want to punch something. ;-)
Date: 17 May 2017 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 13
Outside of Pops, Lauren, Jessica and Tanya I hate them all (well done on the angst *winks*) Edward is an asshole and as of this chapter he dosent deserve an HEA with Bella. There I ve said the unthinkable in my book.
Date: 17 May 2017 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Definitive answer? She was raped and please don't describe it. What is is girl not going to go through? Is she going to get a break soon? Thank god for Jess and Lauren do don't ever say that. After the first chapter and the conception timing screw up I hope it's Edwards baby really. This is intense for sweet Bella.
Date: 17 May 2017 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
Definitive answer? She was raped and please don't describe it. What is is girl not going to go through? Is she going to get a break soon? Thank god for Jess and Lauren do don't ever say that. After the first chapter and the conception timing screw up I hope it's Edwards baby really. This is intense for sweet Bella.
Date: 17 May 2017 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
So Edward and his Pops are the only sensible Cullen's? What the hell is up wit catlisle and Esme's? Is there future hope for Emmett? Edward is pissing me off talk to fuckong Bella you know Alice is a liar and has it out for Bella why trust her at all. What is Uley's deal we KNOW Bella would never sleep win him shes afraid of him. Cleatly Charlie told him about the birthmark. Is Lauren still screwing him that's why he was there. Jesus!
Date: 17 May 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
What the ever loving...was Bella given the date rape drug. Was she raped? This chapter was too much. Alice, Angela, Uley, Benjermin. It seems like James is cool but shit what was all the Edward is a whore with men and women talk? What was this party? You are really making this poor girl go through it. I like Tanya to cool gay running mate. Nice switch all the canon goods are bad and all the canon bads are good. Jasper is a pussy! JS
Date: 17 May 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
So what lizzy said about Edward is reflected in his not trusting Bella with the baby at the beginning? So Bella has never had a break its a wonder she is so lovely. I mean Jake was a bastard to her. Alice an Angela are said girls and vendictive too. Hang on Bella, hang on. Hey what's Renee's deal? Is she abused too?
Date: 17 May 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
Okay Charlie string him up!! And Bella Jesus this poor girl.
Date: 17 May 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
And there's Alice ladies and gentlemen. And Angela is a hot mess!
Date: 17 May 2017 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
Okay it's hard to have an opinion on Alice since we've had two sentences from her but the idea is she is controling Alice right? That's never good! Jessica and Lauren are being good friends and the advice Jessica gave Bella was really good. I just have this feeling a shit storm is coming for Bella I mean, creepy Benjermin, creepy and cray parentals, jealous Angela and dominate sadistic professor Uley.
Date: 17 May 2017 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
Who the heck is watching Bella? Creepy. Angela is a little off too.
Date: 17 May 2017 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
If Benjamin is Angela's Ben then he gave me the creeps especially about the one drink comment. Charlie is a dick. Nuff said! This Bella needs a true and honest friend.
Date: 17 May 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
So Edward isn't a player but Emmett's whole take care of my bro speech was interesting...Alice will probably be controling and manipulative as per use but hopefully not bitchy about it. I'm on high alert for Bella haha
Date: 17 May 2017 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
This Bella is breaking me like Bella in Meeting Her Needs. It's nice not to hate Lauren and Jessica right off the bat but Charlie is a freak in this fic right? Edward? Is he a player? Why do I have a feeling Bella is gonna be the recipient of all the angst. It won't stop me from soaking it all in though. *winks*
Date: 17 May 2017 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bella one thing she isn't in your stories is a lying bitch so that means this Edward begins as a douche. You ladies are gonna make us work for this HEA right? :-) That was a sad beginning. Carry on...
Date: 06 May 2017 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
This is getting intense. Still confused how Charlie is able to know everything she's doing, and I really am not liking Angela and Alice right now. Looking forward to more.
Date: 14 Apr 2017 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 35
I am in awe at the programs that are avilable to Siobahn and Beth. The tools they are taught to learn and achieve goals in life are awesome. Glad to hear the family is happy and Edward and Bella are doing well in their chosen careers. Bella's seminar had some very interesting information about consent and rape. Definitely learned some things to think about.
I'm not surprised Alice is still in the mental hospital. It's too bad her family didn't recognize how unstable she was, especially her father. Benjamin seemed so remorseful. Glad he realized he had a problem and worried he wouldn't be able to control it. He was where he needed to be.
Angela seemed to be the catalyst that cause all these events to happen. She was trouble. It's too bad that her parents didn't realize she had problems. They seemed content to sweep everything under the rug and were in complete denial.
Liked that all the rest of the couples had their HEA.
Date: 12 Apr 2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 35
Good story, I enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing
Date: 12 Apr 2017 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 35
Well ladies you did it again . Congratulations on a wonderful story full of drama and angst. This had to be the evilest Alice ever written. The dark subject matter was very upsetting but riveting. You are so talented. Thank you for your words.
Date: 02 Apr 2017 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 35
Awe I love it sad to see both girls have issues. Glad Angela died.
Date: 01 Apr 2017 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 35
It was nice to see that their shildren were getting a good education. Unfortunately, that isn't always the case.
Date: 01 Apr 2017 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 35
I am so sad and so happy at the same time. It shows life is not alway perfect but we do the best we can for the ones we love. I am sad it is over I have always looked forward to seeing it post now I will be looking for what is next cant wait. I just love you guys you are wonderful writers and great people. Thanks so much
Date: 31 Mar 2017 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 35
This was an incredible story.
The one thing I missed is the drawing/painting that pops gave to Bella with the future family for Edward. I don't recall where Bella shows this to Edward?
Date: 31 Mar 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 35
Very fitting ending. Nice in that not all of the kids are perfect. No fairy tales. ;)
Thank You!
Date: 31 Mar 2017 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 35
Awesome story. I have enjoyed reading and taking this journey with you. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
Date: 31 Mar 2017 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 35
Awesome! Thank you for another wonderful story ☺
Date: 31 Mar 2017 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 35
Great story. Thank you
Date: 31 Mar 2017 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 35
Thank you!
Xxx T
Date: 31 Mar 2017 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 35
Always great work Thank you ladies.
Date: 31 Mar 2017 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 35
I would love to see you guys write a story where Bella is strong, and has a happy life, to begin with. Love your stories, but I would like one like that.
Date: 31 Mar 2017 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 35
Great job bringing this complicated story to a close. I love what Bella does for a living, it is perfect!
Date: 31 Mar 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 35
Fabulous story. Sad to see it end,but I know you will bring out another fabulous story to read. As I have said before you should publish your stories. I would buy them all.
Date: 30 Mar 2017 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 35
Truly appreciate the addition of their family struggles in the formative years for the kids. I learned something about cognitive disadvantages. So many levels of learning tools.
Wouldn't it be a wonderful world if every person was able to find their perfect learning template.
Thanks to TAT for another very intriguing read.
Can't wait for the next adventure.
Date: 30 Mar 2017 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 35
:) loved this story. Going to miss it
Date: 30 Mar 2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 35
Beautiful story!
Date: 30 Mar 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 35
Awe beautiful story. I have enjoyed it very much.
Date: 30 Mar 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 35
Another wonderful Story....Thanks I love the stories it gives me something to look forward 2.......
Date: 30 Mar 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 35
Awesome end to the story ladies!!! Thank you for writing and sharing