Date: 01 Nov 2016 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
I wouldn't put anything past Alice in this story. I'm still so disappointed in Jasper. He has just been such a wet noodle - not a friend at all.
Date: 01 Nov 2016 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
I think it was Alice and jasper who taped the rape
Date: 01 Nov 2016 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 22
Angela taped the rape :/
Date: 01 Nov 2016 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 22
I cant wait for the restraining orders to be served shit will happen. I love how open they are both being. I am glad everyone is getting well and congrats on the new job or should I say paid job lol.
Date: 01 Nov 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 22
Sorry to hear about you all having the flu, and about Nikki's daughter being hurt. I had my knee surgery today, and I've been in and out of all day. Took me all day to read an update on one of the other stories I'm reading and it was short. Now that is almost 1:30 in the morning I'm afraid I'm all slept out for now, and in pain. I hope you all get better quickly.
Some how I don't think Ulley video tape the rapes, I think he would want to take his turn at the victiams. Now I wouldn't put it passed Angela or Alice to have done it. Maybe it was Jasper that helped him. I really don't want it to be Jasper, but I can't help but think Alice has something on him to betray his best friend. As for Charlie, I would bet he help Alice steel the money from Bella's job. Isn't he a cop he would know how to get in and out without anyone finding out. I'm glad Edward got to take out some of his anger on Charlie tho, and glad he didn't get charged for it, and Bella not getting mad at him for it.
Date: 01 Nov 2016 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
that is pretty screwed up that someone taped it . . . was wondering how much angela knew about ben and what she participated in
Date: 01 Nov 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
I pray neither of them taped it. How could Angela knowingly date a rapist, and how could Alice knowingly let her best friend do so? While Alice has a few screws loose, the fact that ALL rapes committed by Ben were filmed (right?) then it couldn't have been them.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
Edward was correct in asking Jessica and Lauren to forgive his previous actions. He was also justified in asking Bella if she is alright with processing her father as an active participant in dismantling her dreams of attending university.
Alice and Angela know too many intimate details of Bella's life and how to interfere for it to all be happenstance.
The restraining orders are going to increase tension for Edward's family. But his grandfather seems to be on his side.
The house would be common ground for this young family to begin again. Unfortunately the trial and all other legal issues need to be worked out first.
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter. A lot of ground covered, but a lot more to go. My stomach is in knots; waiting for them to be able to finally be a family.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm guessing Alice taped the rapes or maybe angela. It's so disgusting! I love that Bella walked in on him in the bathroom & saw his tattoo! That made all the hatd & horrible things they discussed sooo much better!
Date: 01 Nov 2016 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am glad that Pops told Edward that he had a lot to make for. Glad Edward is on Bella's side now and not Alice's. I still think that Alice or Angela were the ones that were helping with tge video.
Date: 01 Nov 2016 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am so happy to see this progressing the way I want it to. They are taking it slowly, but I love that she saw his tattoo and that he was honest with her about what it means. I know she is skittish, she has every reason to be, but I have every hope that once all the bad guys get their due, they can find their way back to being a couple again. I am glad that Charlie will be included in the restraining order. All these people conspired to do despicable things to Bella, to manipulate and hurt her, and I hope they all suffer the maximum because of their actions!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2016 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 22
I thought it might have been Angela that taped Ben.
I'm intrigued with their theory about Charlie & Alice. That's not something I considered. Is her father that fucked up?
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2016 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
I want to know what Jasper did and why he did this to his supposed best friend??? ILso want to kick him in the nutz! Lastly, what is the motivation for all this?? Simply control issues or a deeper agenda?? Soooo anticipating next update! 💋
Date: 31 Oct 2016 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great as always. Love Pops!!
Date: 31 Oct 2016 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am very proud of the way Edward is stepping up and being a father to Ethan and a good friend to Bella. Hopefully they can work their problems out. I hope all of the people involved with making Bella's life a living Hell get what they deserve.
Date: 26 Oct 2016 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
So much regret. But talking it out will help them move on and not dwell on the past. So many mistakes made because they didn't communicate. Ethan took meeting his daddy slow but well. This was new for him and he may not react the same way the next time he sees Edward. I wonder what Pops reaction will be when he finds out his grandson is that rat bastard. And now to find out Benjamin used his own DNA for the test, that's tampering. I really hope Bella agrees about that restraining order.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
A wonderful chapter. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm so glad they are working together. I hope Alice gets charged too. They all need to rot in hell for their part in making Bella's life hell and costing Ethan his father for so many years, as well as seperating Edward from his child and Bella.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2016 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
I really hope she lets him hug her. They need to feel the spark between them!!
Date: 22 Oct 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 21
Another amazing chapter as always.
bella truly is an Angel.
Date: 22 Oct 2016 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow they went along way in a short time Bella is so forgiving. Alice is going to have a shit storm on her cant wait.
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 21
I appreciate and value your time.
Date: 22 Oct 2016 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 21
Your fans know your intent and actions are true to your word. We just want your health and happiness to be placed above all else. We also appreciate how open you are to explaining why there are delays and Jeep up posted as to changes in posting patterns. That is way beyond the norm. Thank you for respecting up in return.
Alice needs to have every possible charge placed against her, including a judicial restraining order. Angela needs to be charged as an accessory in all areas. This should carry over into premeditated assault and aiding a rapist.
Mike is an amazing friend to Bella and Ethan. Let's hope he becomes just as good a friend to Edward.
How long before the trial?
Date: 21 Oct 2016 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 21
I like this Mike. I think it is the first time I have seen a mature good natured good guy Mike. Nice.
No, I don't think she will let him. I think she still has to many issues left over from the rape.
Good chapter. Nice he got to meet and spend some time with his boy.
Not sure if Pop's is goiong to give him a good reaming or figure he is and has been torturing himself enough. Pretty sure he will have something to say about his granddaughter and her best friend though.
Thank You
Date: 21 Oct 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, a lot in this chapter. I loved it all. I can't wait to see what Pops has to say. Bella and Edward both have a lot of quilt to deal with. Another great chapter. As always, you leaveever wanting more. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 21 Oct 2016 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you so much for this nice, long, and uplifting chapter! I am thrilled to see the beginnings of Edward getting to know his son. I agree that he should have known, or at least suspected, that Alice was doing Bella dirty. I guess it's hard to believe your own family would treat you like that. I really hope Alice get what she deserves, in the end, and that Jasper, Angela, and Ben do also. Thank you also for giving us this story despite many personal obstacles. I sincerely hope life gets better for you soon.
Date: 21 Oct 2016 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
I hope Alice gets thrown in jail...at least mail tampering is a federal offense
Date: 21 Oct 2016 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bella is being really reasonable about things with Ethan LOVE IT. Pops is gonna really be pissed when he finds out. A TRO is def a must. I think they should press charges too. I thinkit would be funny if Ben would flip on Angela and Alice too.
I understand health issues. Take the time you need even if you can't post as often as you like. I know you always finish your stories. I can wait. Your health and sanity comes firet.
Date: 21 Oct 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
Hey Health & family first
Great story (no matter how much we want it) second.
Terrific chapters...
Yeah I think she just may let him hug her only a short one though.
Keep up the great work.
And keep up your strength
Date: 21 Oct 2016 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
I hope they do bring charges against Alice and she goes to jail. I hope Edward has it out with Jasper. Angela should also have charges brought against her. I really hope these two get a HEA. Very good story. Thanks for writing.
Date: 21 Oct 2016 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I bet Jasper did the filming & Alice caught him & forced him to go along with her plans for Angela & Edward...
Date: 20 Oct 2016 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
Alice and Angela seem very involved in everything that's happened with Edward and Bella. And now to find that Edward's mom is worried about Siobahn, Alice's baby, enough to want to take her away from Alice or call social services on her. And why would Jasper go along with Alice and lie to Edward his best friend? What is going on with that couple? Did Alice manipulate Jasper into thinking something bad about Edward? I'm glad that Edward heard about all the events leading up to the night she was sexually assaulted along with that night. Now he understands more about Bella's state of mind over that period of time and just how involved Alice was. I'm also glad they both got to air their feelings about that period of time during their relationship, and again how Alice was involved in Bella's stress level. Can't wait to read how Alice finally gets what she's due for what she's caused. Then she'll finally see what it's like to be shunned by those she's wronged and possibly get her baby taken away. And maybe Jasper will feel ashamed for his part in this. I don't see how Edward will be able to ever forgive him. I think their frindship is forever ruined.
Date: 19 Oct 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
So glad they are talking.
I don't understand why she was giving Alice money for the dorm. It's been 30 years since I've been in college, but I'm pretty sure the RA never collected dorm fees
Date: 19 Oct 2016 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
Ok, I guess I have to take back the jackass comment back!, a little!!!!!! Edward still has miles to go making it up to Bella and little Ethan! Serve him right, if the boy wants nothing to do with him at first! Let Edward feel how it feels to be rejected for a change. He needs for some of the treatment that he gave to the mother of his son to be brought back to him. Show him how it feels to be rejected! I hope everything works well out alright, just PLEASE do not make it a picnic for Edward to waltz back into Bella and Edward's life!
As for Alice, Angela, Jasper, Ben and Uley throw the book at them! Let them all go to prison for their crimes! I do not know if Alice and Jasper has done anything criminal but the rest sure have. I am thinking it must be Angela who helped filmed what Ben did or Uley. If she did not film it she sure did do some fancy work at the DNA place. And if she did that is tampering and people go to prison for that, so bye bye bitches, all of you! The only one I am truly ashamed of is Jadper, turned into a weak kneed wimp and not a good friend to Edward, that is for sure!
you go mama bear Cullen, get that sweet little girl away from Alice! I have never read an Alice who is more unequipped to be a mother than Alice. What a spoiled train wreck is that woman and I feel she should have her baby taken away from her and have all support taken from her, let the princess find out what it is like in the real world without mommy and daddy to fall back on, maybe she will finally grow up but I feel she will still be a bitch!
as for grandparent, hurrah for Edward's grandfather, Edward's parents (even though I wanted to slap them a time or two) they will make excellent grandparents (possibly parents to Alice's child the kindest thing they can do is get that baby away from Alice) and as for Bella's they need to take a long walk on a short pier and never to be seen of again! I do not know much about her mother but her father should be going to prison for abuse and if I have to follow their kind of religion, no thank you! I rather keep God in my heart and make the best decisions I can make than to go to their brand of church! To me they are lousy parents who do not deserve a daughter or a grandson or any other children Bella may have. Sometimes I wish someone would write aa fanfiction story on the abusive parents, husband or wife' that they give to others that love them and judgement day comes when they die and they have to stand in front of God almighty himself, and explain to him why they did what they did to the people that loved them ESP., their children! What excuse could they possible give, ESP to God that it was teaching the ways of God I and fear of God into them! And God saying to them I am not about fear but about love, what will be their answer to that be? Ops I am sorry, too late for that!
anyway loving your story and Bella's true friends! It will take a lot more from Edward before I would call him a friend to Bella.
please do some chapter's where we get to read what happens to Bella's tormentors! I ESP want to see Alice, Angela, Ben, Uley and Bella's father to know the truth, nothing but the truth and how his daughter was raped not once but twice and how him sending that bastard Uley to spie on her was one of the worst mistakes ever done, how he was in the wrong and what he did led his daughter down the path of almost , ALMOST being destroyed I would love to swee someone maybe hard hitting Rose give Mr, Swan that bit of news about his daughter.
Date: 19 Oct 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love it, I had a hard time with the story at first, but now I see where you were going with it. Please post soon
Date: 19 Oct 2016 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
This chapter broke my heart and made me so happy all at the same time lol. I love that so much came out I cant wait for more. Edwards grandfather is going to kick his ass when he finds out that he is the one that hurt his Angle. I cant wait for more this is such a great story
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2016 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo?
Date: 19 Oct 2016 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 20
I've said it before I'll bet that Alice's baby isn't Jaspers, and that she's Uley's. I wouldn't put it passed Alice or Angela to have been the one's filming the rapes. If they were I hope they throw the book at them.
As for what's on the memory stick I'll bet pics and video's of Ethan growing during the time Edward was away from them.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2016 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 20
I can't belive i forgot about ben & angela! I think edward is going to cry when he watches the memory stick. I'm glad bella said they need therapy together. They really really do. My biggest question is why did jasper lie?
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
Edward is taking all the correct steps to ensure their little family has the best opportunity to survive.
Any chance Edward's grandfather already knows he has been spending time with his great grandson?
If Alice has been active in every aspect of tearing Edward's life apart, could she have arranged the rape and had an affair with Ulley to get him involved? Is Jasper even the father of Siobhan?
Finally Esme is fully supporting Edward.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow. A lot took place this chapter. I'm glad they seem to be piecing things together.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2016 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
This is such a powerful story. I have to read it in small increments because it really reaches my emotions.
I'm glad Bella seems to be open enough to give Edward a chance yet still able to protect herself if it doesn't work out. Edward will do anything for them. I love how he is constangly reassuring Bella that she and Ethan are his only concerns. His willingness to move to PA to be near them and not disrupt their lives is very telling on how much they mean to him.
I think Jasper is being blackmailed by Alice - I have my theories....I cannot wait to find out what and why Alice is so hell bent on Angela dating Edward....somthing doesn't make sense....
Great chapter as always - hope all is well with you all personally. Looking forward to the next update!!
Date: 18 Oct 2016 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
I can't believe that someone could be that evil. To line up a rape victim and then be there to watch and film it! And Alice, I don't understand AT ALL.
I think their discussion is going well so far. I think it is great he is willing to move and give up his dream job, and not ask Bella to come back to Seattle.
I think the memory stick is a digital baby book so to speak. I think it will hurt, but he will also treasure it because it will show him everything he has missed so far.
I am looking forward to Pop's reaction and his subsequent discussion with his grandson.
Hoping this week is finding everyone doing better health wise.
Thank You for sharing your talents.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
Yay!
I am questioning the paternity of Alice's baby. Can't wait to hear Angela and Alice's thoughts.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
so awesome how he FINALLY figured it out!
what a frustrating road it was...
since Angela was Ben's gf, she along with Alice definitely had
something to do with bella's rape...
angela and alice need to be humiliated somehow publically
and loudly...by edward and bella or edward alone...whoever,
but they are evil twins that need to be put in their place.
edward though "innocent" was too passive in allowing things
to happen to bella...he needs to atone somehow. bella cant just
forgive him immediately...of course, she will allow him to see his
son whenever he wants since she is that kind of girl, but hope she
doesn't forgive him right away. let edward grovel a bit, let him beg...
sorry, i have a bit of a vindictive streak....
i want bella to be vindicated somehow, someway and become stronger
woman and don't allow anyone to take advantage of her ever again.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more 💕.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
Hope that Angela and Alice get caught commiting perjury cause I have a feeling they are going to lie through their teeth. Jasper needs taken down too. What a dick.
Glad that they both realize they'll all need therapy separatly and together.
Date: 18 Oct 2016 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thank you for this chapter! This lays everything out and ties up all the loose ends. The trial will be very difficult for Bella, I think, what with Alice and Angela testifying for the defense! Ugh! I love that Edward is willing to do anything to be near his son and Bella. That shows me how much he cares. I look forward to more of this story. So much.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
Everything sounds so twisted. It has me questioning the paternity of Alice's daughter and even Angela's involvement with Ben. Was she the one manning the camera?
Date: 18 Oct 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm thinking uley was Bens film man. And I'm worried about Edward moving, him moving will most likely have Alice finding out and following therefore Seattle follows Bella to her new home
Date: 18 Oct 2016 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love love love this chapter!!!!!!! I am glad they are both starting to connect all the dots and are getting to the bottom of everything. I just want to know who was video taping Ben raping almost those girls. That is one sick person.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am so enthralled now! OMG Lock all those crazy psychos up.... what the devil were they all thinking!?!? I have a suspicion that Siobahan is NOT Jasper's too.... just sayin.... I can't wait til i hear why these nut-jobs did this! There has to be some major gameplan or something; i mean nobody does all this without some underlying reason. Or maybe they do... lol. Oh yeah i am am 99.9 percent sure Angelas taped that crap and I hope they all BURN!!!!
Date: 18 Oct 2016 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
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[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2016 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
I love this story. It is really getting good now. Can't wait till Friday.
Date: 17 Oct 2016 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
The new update isn't showing up. Could you please try reposting?
Date: 17 Oct 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
This is the same update from last week. Nothing new is showing.
Date: 17 Oct 2016 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
I wonder if Alice had something to do with Edward/s accident. She certainly had a dceath wish for him. Maybe she's jealous of her parents affection for him. Emmett isn't around so she doesn't have to worry abou him. Or maybe it's financial. She is one greedy bitch. Edward almost met Bella before now if he had accepted Ed's invitation to eat at the diner. Now along with the DNA and he can finally see that Ethan is his son. He has a lot to make up for. I'm glad he finally broke it off with Angela. I just know Alice is tangled up somehow in this whole sexual assault case.
Date: 14 Oct 2016 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
Our Edward isn't the brightest bulb in the chandelier. Did he not know that Bella is short for Isabella? It's not that common a name that there would be more than one waitress called that at a diner.
I wonder if Ed really knows Ethan is his great grandson. He looks so much like Edward & Elizabeth did say Edward would be separated from his girl for a time if he didn't give her what she needs. Can't wait to find out the identity of the camera operator.
I think I'd also like to see a Jasper POV in this
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2016 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 19
Holy HELL!!!! I'm hoping Bella gives Edward a chance to redeem himself. I'm so glad he has made it clear to Alice she is out of his life for her involvement. I still want him to go off on Angela for her involvement. I'm thinking Jasper was the one filming the rapes. If he was filming the rapes, then he needs to pay as much as Ben does.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2016 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
Kasi, my heart felt wishes for your son's speedy recovery accompanies my prayers for you.
Edward is fighting what seems to be a loosing battle. Every step in the right direction reveals a glaring roadblock. Bella's heart still belongs to Edward but her primary concern is Ethan.
Will Esme and Carlisle every hold Alice accountable for her interference in Edward's life?
Did Ben Cheney lash out at brunettes because Angela kept playing games with his mind?
Date: 12 Oct 2016 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Firstly good luck with Kasi's son & your test results.
Fingers crossed on both.
Secondly I like the way your've written this just because Bella has seen Edward doesn't mean she is instantly taking him back. I think she is a much better place to stand on her own two legs & take it slow with Edward.
Edward needs to talk to Jasper now cause I think something is going on there with him.....something just doesn't feel right.
You thru me with it being Ben ...... hmmmmm ....... didn't see that one coming.
Someone was taping it ......mmmmm ..... I'm thinking Alice & maybe/maybe not Angela....
Definitely the bitch AKA Alice......
There's more to this......
Please make her get her come upeance pleaaasssseeee .....
Ps: Again good luck
Date: 12 Oct 2016 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
So happy to know that Edward was seeing things for the way they where. I cant wait for chapter 20. Alice is such a bitch
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2016 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ok I feel so dumb like duh it was Ben he was always just randomly poppin in the story. I have so much to say about this chapter I don't even know where to start. Lol I'll just say I can't wait for the next update!
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it & make Edward gravel for a while. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 12 Oct 2016 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
I hope your son's surgery comes out okay. I know what happen to the letter Bella sent, Alice got it and destored it, but he already knew about it. I wish you could redeam Jasper, I just don't see how he can keep going along with Alice. I kind of had a feeling Bella's rape case was some how going to end up on Edward's desk. After last chapter, I thought his grandfather was going to get them together, not that he didn't try to. How pissed is he going to be when he finds out" Edward is the dead-beat father" I don't think I want to be in his shoes, before he finds out what Alice did to her. Can't wait until next Tuesday.
Date: 12 Oct 2016 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
OMGosh, I can't believe it was the guy fromy Starbucks. Wow. So Edward found Bella through his job. I just knew that Ed was the one that invited Edward to the diner. Boy Alice is a real bitch. I am glad that Edward's parents are on his side and not Alice's. Can not wait for more.
Date: 12 Oct 2016 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great job, but Malice and Angela still haven't paid near enough or Jasper for that fact.
Hope all your medical procedures favor you and your son. Your in my prayers. See you next week.
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2016 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for the extra long chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
OMG OMG OMG!!! The Best Chapter ever!!! I'm so glad Edward realized that he really is Ethan's father. How horrific for him to see Bella being raped. I bet it was Uley who did the videotaping (probably how he gets his jollies off) but Ben??? Isn't he Angela's ex?
Alice, Jasper and Angela - absolutely no remorse. I still think Alice is holding something over Jasper's head. Why else would he do a complete 180 degree turn regarding Bella? Alice needs to be disowned and fast! Glad to see Esme doesn't put up with her crap.
I'm probably in the minority but I'm glad Bella is going to make time to talk to Edward. I know Edward will be on his hands and knees begging for a chance but I'm glad we got to hear from his side of the story. Seems like fate was against them fromt he start - him finally realizing his heart belonged to Bella and breaking it off with Angela but then to be hit by a car and during the time in the coma, Bella disappears.
I'd love to know what the hell Alice's problem is - I swear she's psycho!
Hope all goes well on your personal lives - fingers crossed it'll all be good news!
Cannot wait for more - Best story out there!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2016 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
I know the Lord will be with you every step of the way during the procedure your son will have.
Date: 11 Oct 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
He does admit that he was wrong for not believing in Bella but my heart can't forgive all the wrong he did to Bella and how he allowed Alice and Angela treat her. He somewhat knew what her Father was li,e so why didn't he protect her? I have a horrible feeling that Alice isn't done with tormenting Bella.
I have your son in my prayers. I can't say I know what you are feeling but as a mother I understand the pain of seeing your child suffer. Be strong and believe he will get though this. Hugs my friend .
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2016 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
At least Edward is seeing sense now
Date: 11 Oct 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
Another fully loaded chapter glad to see that Alice and Angela have been pushed out of his life...
Date: 11 Oct 2016 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
This is the chapter I have been waiting for, been hoping for, and here it is! Thank god that Edward FINALLY reallized what Alice and Angela were doing, how they were setting up and sabotaging Bella all this time. For those who say Edward should be punished more, I say he has had enough. His son was missing from his life for almost 2 years and he has to live with all those choices he made based on what Alice wanted him to believe.
I am so sorry to hear of both your families difficulties and hope they pass quickly. I very much appreciate all you guys give to us and look forward to more!
Date: 11 Oct 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter!
Date: 11 Oct 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
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Date: 11 Oct 2016 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2016 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
I hope all goes well for everyone.
I'm concerned about Alice's daughter. Alice sounds like she has a screw loose.
It's nice to see Bella in a better place.
Date: 11 Oct 2016 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Positive thoughts and good vibes your way for everything you are going through. Thank you for taking the time to update while going through all of this stress that real life is causing. Love the story and chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 11 Oct 2016 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow Malice really has Jasper under her thumb huh. Is Angela Ben's girfriend.....or maybe sister??? Ack you are killing me.
Hope your results all come back negative. Its so hard to wait for the results. I went through it not too long ago when I had a basal cell carcinoma diagnosed on my head.
Date: 11 Oct 2016 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
seems like maybe ben may have switched the dna test. wobdering if alice and ang know what ben did to b and the others and if alice was somehow responsible
Date: 11 Oct 2016 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
I have to admit that I feel much better about Edward now. Actually I find myself feeling a little sorry for him.. it's one thing to learn she was raped but having to watch it must have been torture.
So was it Alice or Angela who helped Ben? Maybe both? Jasper?
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great stuff!!! I am a happy reader now!!
Date: 09 Oct 2016 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think Edward is still going think the child isn't his because so influence by those trolls around him but he feels deep inside that Ethan is his she should of went with that feeling .
Date: 08 Oct 2016 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story. I'm not a fan of Edward right now so I'm very much looking forward to chapter 19.