Date: 31 Jan 2017 3:04 PM Title: Isa, II
I find it interesting how she wants something but also doesn't want it at the same time. I'm going to assume that these are dirty of like the canon vampires but also a little different. So what exactly is an acolyte? Is it just like a vampires helper or what? Obviously Bella is connected to Edward but she's also been connected to many other vampIres as well. I feel bad that she's so jaded that she won't see what type of connection her and Edward have. I don't think I like Lilith much she seems worse than the Voltori ever were. Can't wait for the next update.
Thank you for your thoughtful review :) Lilith is definitely much, much worse than the Volturi. I used the name 'Lilith' because she's a notorious demon in many mythologies, and some say that she's Adam's first wife (before Eve). And you're right, Isabella definitely has trust issues. Her relationship with Edward will continue to evolve as the story progresses. Hope you'll continue to like it!