Date: 10 Aug 2016 2:00 PM Title: Walking into the fire
This is such a good story. I'm hooked.
Date: 10 Aug 2016 12:40 PM Title: Walk of shame
Love Mrs Cope.
Date: 06 Aug 2016 12:36 PM Title: Walking into the fire
Rip off the band aid
Author's Response:
That's what I'm thinking too so while I clean my house from top to bottom today in preparation for a visit from my parents im playing with my story in my head trying to map out where it's heading exactly. Hopefully tonight after the kiddos head to bed I can relax and write some more.
Date: 05 Aug 2016 4:19 AM Title: First names and date
Some backstory this is really getting good. But what is Bella's business? What does she do on that laptop and will Bella and Edward cross each other outside the diner? Is Edward " friend zoned". So many questions I can't wait.
Author's Response:
I swear there will be an HEA I despise the stories that don't get one. The piss me off and make me throw the book lol. Keep reading you'll get the answers I promise!
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2016 3:44 AM Title: Let there not be lightning
She is warming up to him good to see.
Author's Response:
Oh she has more than warmed up to him but he doesn't know all she does just yet. And she has issues that keep her from jumping in head first
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2016 1:24 PM Title: Mission for life
Love your story ,can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It feels good to finally try and get these guys out of my head.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2016 10:34 PM Title: Walk of shame
Your Mrs Cope is a great character what a spunky personality.
Author's Response:
I used to work in a nursing home and my Mrs. Cope has the personality of one of my favorite ladies. She had some serious spunk in her personality and I thought she deserved a chance to shine. Thank you!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 10:26 PM Title: infuriating goddess
Love the title of the chapter and foodgasm..hee hee I love those. Edward is smitten I hope she makes him chase.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2016 10:12 PM Title: Tasmanian B
I can't wait for their meeting. Edward appears very compassionate.
Date: 03 Aug 2016 6:59 AM Title: Life's detours
Well, the opening monolog up is goid, but can't really tell whet the story is yet...
Will keep reading . ..
Author's Response:
It's going to be a long story so it going to take a few chapters before it starts to come together. Right now I'm just trying to lay the groundwork. I have the ideas of where I want them to go and milestones I'd like them to hit but it's getting them there coherently that's my issue. Hopefully my brain will allow them to keep coming out to play so we can really see where this is going to go!
Date: 03 Aug 2016 3:41 AM Title: Life's detours
Ok I understand ..."hubs" comment my Mr. Asked if I made any money reading as much fanfic as I do .... Ha ha as if . I love CEOward stories and this seems to be starting as one. Post as you can, back to school starts in days here in Arizona I hope when your Cubs are back in school you find time to write.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm going to try my best I can't gaurentee I'll post as much as I did tonight too often but hopefully now that I've started writing it I can keep going