Date: 08 Nov 2016 1:17 PM Title: Chapter-11: Epilogue
Loved reading this story. Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 08 Nov 2016 7:11 AM Title: Chapter-11: Epilogue
Thanks so much great little story I love happy endings
Date: 08 Nov 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter-11: Epilogue
Awesome job
Date: 07 Nov 2016 9:04 PM Title: Chapter-11: Epilogue
:) :)
Date: 07 Nov 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter-11: Epilogue
:) loved this
Date: 07 Nov 2016 9:01 AM Title: Chapter-10: Prodigal
That was so cool did make me want to cry all those wasted years all the worry so sad.
Date: 07 Nov 2016 8:54 AM Title: Chapter-9: Home
That was one heck of a welcome home.
Date: 07 Nov 2016 8:47 AM Title: Take A Stand Against Domestic Violence
These all sound great. I am so sorry some people just have to be such assholes and are not happy unless they are trying to make someone else feel bad. I say keep your head held high and tell them to go fly a kite. I think you all are amazing and you bring me much joy. Thanks so much.
Date: 07 Nov 2016 8:33 AM Title: Chapter-8: Mine
That just makes me melt to sweet.
Date: 06 Nov 2016 5:59 AM Title: Chapter-10: Prodigal
Love it
Date: 06 Nov 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter-10: Prodigal
Beautiful! gotta go find some kleenex.
Date: 05 Nov 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter-10: Prodigal
It was touching, but I didn't cry. LOL I am happy for Edward knowing he wasn't as unloved as he thought.
Date: 05 Nov 2016 7:20 PM Title: Chapter-10: Prodigal
The epilogue??????? No!!!!!! Not ready for it to end.
Date: 05 Nov 2016 7:11 PM Title: Chapter-10: Prodigal
Thanks!
Date: 03 Nov 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter-9: Home
I'm glad that Bella is trying to get Edward to talk to his father.
Date: 03 Nov 2016 12:08 AM Title: Chapter-9: Home
Edward really didn't have any faith in Bella's love for him at all, did he? That's sad. He doesn't have any faith in his parents' love either, it seems.
Date: 12 Oct 2016 1:09 AM Title: Chapter-8: Mine
Glad they talked a little. They still need to talk more.
Date: 11 Oct 2016 7:47 PM Title: Chapter-8: Mine
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Date: 11 Oct 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter-8: Mine
:O :O more please
Date: 30 Sep 2016 7:23 PM Title: Chapter-7: Crazy, Stupid Love
Hot hot hot
Date: 30 Sep 2016 6:39 PM Title: Chapter-6: War of The Worlds
OMGosh!!! So moving.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 5:45 PM Title: Chapter-5: Through The Looking Glass
Well, things are definitely heating up.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 4:40 PM Title: Chapter-4: Messy Business
So, they do have a past. Can't wait to find detailed out what happened between the 2 of them.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 4:29 PM Title: Chapter-3: Emergence
Do they know each other? Do they have a past together?
Date: 30 Sep 2016 2:45 PM Title: Chapter-2: Land of Ruins
Sounds like things are going to get interesting.
Date: 30 Sep 2016 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I she means so much why is he leaving
Date: 24 Sep 2016 12:26 AM Title: Chapter-6: War of The Worlds
Omg being a mother of a military Son and Daughter I have lived it almost my whole life and I just want to say you wrote this chapter perfect .Can not wait to read more of this amazing wonderful story you wrote .Thank You ! God Bless All who served us and to protect us with their lives! Be Safe !
Date: 17 Sep 2016 11:10 PM Title: Chapter-7: Crazy, Stupid Love
He cant resister.
Date: 17 Sep 2016 4:02 PM Title: Chapter-7: Crazy, Stupid Love
in stories like this, i do have some sympathy for bella, but she
is wrong. he could have found himself in Chicago whether in his dad's business or
elsewhere. or they could have found a new life together. she should have spoken
with him about it all instead of doing her own thing giving him the ultimatum to go
to Seattle. i have no problem with her chasing her dream, but she did it without
giving any consideration to edward. there longterm separation and ending of
their relationship, it's really all her fault. i have sympathy for her wanting to fly,
but i have no sympathy for the way she did it.
Date: 16 Sep 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter-7: Crazy, Stupid Love
:)
Date: 16 Sep 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter-7: Crazy, Stupid Love
stormy past ......stormy present.... stormy future??
Date: 16 Sep 2016 5:36 PM Title: Chapter-7: Crazy, Stupid Love
Thanks!
Date: 16 Sep 2016 1:26 PM Title: Chapter-6: War of The Worlds
Thanks!
Date: 14 Sep 2016 4:22 AM Title: Chapter-6: War of The Worlds
Awwwww. That's my first thought at reading the last sentence.
Melissa
Date: 12 Sep 2016 4:23 PM Title: Chapter-6: War of The Worlds
Maybe Bella has a little goodness in her.
Date: 04 Sep 2016 12:20 PM Title: Chapter-6: War of The Worlds
This was a great chapter Edward got glimpses of the girl he knew and saw the women she's become
Date: 04 Sep 2016 7:20 AM Title: Chapter-6: War of The Worlds
So sad.....
Date: 04 Sep 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter-6: War of The Worlds
That just brakes my heart. War is useless
Date: 03 Sep 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter-6: War of The Worlds
Dam! That sucks.
Date: 30 Aug 2016 3:09 PM Title: Chapter-5: Through The Looking Glass
I'm not sure about this Bella.
Date: 29 Aug 2016 12:09 AM Title: Chapter-5: Through The Looking Glass
I think this is a great story so far and can't wait for an update.
Date: 27 Aug 2016 9:01 PM Title: Chapter-5: Through The Looking Glass
TNow That's the Edward we all know and love !!!!!! 😍 So if you haven't noticed I've decided to boost your reviews here as well as FFN cause this story has me wanting more! more!!! more!!!!! 😋 READ YOU SOON 💖
Date: 27 Aug 2016 8:53 PM Title: Chapter-4: Messy Business
Poor Edward but.....What did he do to make r react to him that way???
Date: 27 Aug 2016 8:48 PM Title: Chapter-3: Emergence
Now what did Bella do????
Date: 27 Aug 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter-2: Land of Ruins
Could Isa mean...ISABELLA????
Date: 27 Aug 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
It's good to read you... again. I like the start of this story it sounds like we have a lot of pain to look forward to and that's a little scary. READ YOU SOON 💖
Date: 27 Aug 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter-5: Through The Looking Glass
Awhhh just getting really good! Love it
Date: 27 Aug 2016 3:19 AM Title: Chapter-5: Through The Looking Glass
He did what she said and grew a pair lol
Date: 27 Aug 2016 2:16 AM Title: Chapter-5: Through The Looking Glass
Ok so we know what broke them up, but he spark is still very strong. What were they doing for the time apart? I look forward to that coming to light as the story unfolds.
Date: 27 Aug 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Loved it! Can't wait to see where this adventure lead them next!
Date: 26 Aug 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter-5: Through The Looking Glass
:)
Date: 26 Aug 2016 6:21 PM Title: Chapter-5: Through The Looking Glass
Love how hot tempered they both are I hope you keep that
Date: 23 Aug 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter-4: Messy Business
What did Bella do to Edward? She must have hurt him bad.
Date: 21 Aug 2016 8:51 PM Title: Chapter-4: Messy Business
What happen with them
Date: 20 Aug 2016 10:56 AM Title: Chapter-4: Messy Business
I look forward to their story coming to light.
Date: 20 Aug 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter-4: Messy Business
Wow! Edward is just being an ass to everone.
Date: 19 Aug 2016 11:27 PM Title: Chapter-4: Messy Business
:)
Date: 19 Aug 2016 10:08 PM Title: Chapter-4: Messy Business
What thats all your going to give us 😝😝😝😝
Date: 16 Aug 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter-3: Emergence
What has she done to Edward in the past?
Date: 12 Aug 2016 1:54 AM Title: Chapter-3: Emergence
So he knows her and is not happy to see her
Date: 12 Aug 2016 1:14 AM Title: Chapter-3: Emergence
Tease
Date: 11 Aug 2016 6:31 AM Title: Chapter-2: Land of Ruins
This should be interesting
Date: 09 Aug 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter-2: Land of Ruins
Looking forwad to reading this
Date: 08 Aug 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter-2: Land of Ruins
:)
Date: 04 Aug 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Sound interesting Thanks
Date: 04 Aug 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
:) looking forward to reading more
Date: 04 Aug 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
You have me excited for more!! ;)
Date: 04 Aug 2016 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
More pls!!!