Date: 15 Oct 2016 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
i dont get it. edward has been an ass since she first met him.
he showed no interest in her except to antagonize her.
of course, you could say he was fighting the pull to her, but
that's just too easy. he was/is this cocky good looking athelete
who kept running into her but not really looked to be interested but suddenly
he wants to have dinner with her. now, he wants to somehow be close to her.
idk, i just cannt buy it. suddenly he is a nice guy after learning she has a condition,
is he just being compassionate? of course with bella/edward stories, it's b/c he feels for her...
i guess im just questioning his motive and his feelings just b/c he didnt appear very genuine at all.
Edward is definitely cocky and arrogant, but that doesn't make him a jerk. He's attracted to her, hence why he basically forced dinner on her. So when she had th seizure, he was scared and needed to know why. Now that he does, he is trying to be a friend.
Date: 08 Oct 2016 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great start to the story, I haven't read one of your stories in a long time. I haven't looked to see what is new lately, just been reading the ones on my list and not adding anything new. Plus RL has been keeping really busy. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 28 Sep 2016 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
I enjoy reading this because I can envision my time spent on Maui some years ago. When I die, that's how I picture my after life.
I'm chomping at the bit to know what's wrong with Bella.
Thank you for the review. My life dream is to visit the islands.