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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 22

That was a great welcome home.  Esme is very suddle lol



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Thanks! :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it can't wait for more πŸ’• 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 22

Glad they got thier yummy reunion.  Naughty dinner



Author's Response:

They did! Thank you! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2017 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thank u for not letting his leg be an issue and his 3rd leg working just fine!! Haha



Author's Response:

Hahaha! ;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2017 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love love love this chapter!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

:) Thanks so much! 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 22

OMG, it was really hot.  And the ending perfect.  :)  



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2017 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well that sucks!!! Kisses and hearts then!!!



Author's Response:

That's good to know! I've tried hearts and they never show, so disappointing.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2017 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 22

πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’–πŸ’–I think my symbols speak for themselves!!!! 



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Lol, they actually don't show up. I'll assume it's all good though. Thanks! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2017 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 22

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2017 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

Wow, these two have some serious chemistry!



Author's Response:

Since the first chapter! Lol

Reviewer: secretwritter010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2017 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 22

Omg I loved it.... :) 

Is he going to get deployed again? :(  Will it be more of a smooth sailing fromance here? :)

I love this story...



Author's Response:

It's almost the end. No more deployments. All sweet and romantic from here. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2017 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 22

OMG I love you and this is so awesome and I am so happy for an early update. I love the reunion so much. EEP!! great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Lol, thank you very much! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2017 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 21

OMG I am so excited for them to be back together cant wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2017 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it can't wait for more πŸ’• 



Author's Response:

:) Thank you! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 21

Glad they finally got to talk



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2017 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 21

Glad it is not too difficult.  



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2017 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 21

Excited are you kidding me???? Can barely sit still because i'm dying for them to lay in bed for days!  I really hope his leg injury won't be an issue for this reunion!!



Author's Response:

I've got it figured out! You know I won't leave them hanging.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2017 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 21

So glad that they are reuniting. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 21

Get to writing please



Author's Response:

Lol

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2017 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 21

Yes! Can't wait for next week! ;)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2017 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loves this chapter! I just plain adore this story. BIG HUGS AND KISSES!!!



Author's Response:

That means a lot to me, thank you so much! 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2017 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it can't wait for more πŸ’• 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2017 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

<3



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2017 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 21

Yes! Thrilled to have then reunited. Interested to see how their loves play out after this traumatic event.



Author's Response:

In a good way! 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 21

Hot damn, our boy is coming home.  

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 21

Hot damn, our boy is coming home.  



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He sure is! 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2017 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 



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:)

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 21

I am seriously on edge. I can not wait for them to reunite. Really love this chapter.



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I'll make it worth your while! 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

Cant not review on my Nook I can sign in and read. Oh well. Good story. Thanks



Author's Response:

Well, you left me a nice review, so thank you. 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 20

Cant not review on my Nook I can sign in and read. Oh well. Good story. Thanks

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

yeah.......she was kind of rude. hopefully she does not stay that way.....

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

yeah.......she was kind of rude. hopefully she does not stay that way.....



Author's Response:

Yeah, she was. She takes some time to get better. 

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 3

total a-hat!! does she really think that?



Author's Response:

Do you mean Renee? She's got a ways to go to prove herself. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 20

Write a chapter soon, need to know what happens next



Author's Response:

It's written! He'll tell us how he's doing. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 20

That was rough! Thanks for the warning!!



Author's Response:

Definitely! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 20

Poor Bella compleatly falling apart OMG so happy he is ok.



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 20

Oh boy. What a chapter. You wrote their bond and love connection so well. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2017 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2017 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 20

Excellent way to raise those blood pressures.  :D



Author's Response: Lol

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 20

So glad he isn't dead!



Author's Response: Never!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it can't wait for more πŸ’• 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 20

oh wow Not a good week of waiting for B



Author's Response: No, not so much.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2017 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 20

That was serisouly intense and I am so relieved lol. 



Author's Response: I'm relieved that one's over.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2017 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 20

I can't imagine what either of them went through....what families go through on a daily basis. I can't wait for Edward POV to see what happened. Great job..lthanks!!!

Author's Response: I think that's what scares me. To think men and women feel like that on a daily basis takes so much strength, and I wouldn't be able to cope.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2017 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 20

I was afraid that something like this was going to happen.  So glad Esme could help Bella.  



Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughts.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2016 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 19

Go Edward!!!



Author's Response: :)

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2016 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 18

aww for the ily's.  Glad her mom is being supportive



Author's Response: She's going to be a better mom from now on.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2016 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 17

Yea the saying goodbye is always hard



Author's Response: It is.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2016 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 19

So happy for edward & they got to skype!!



Author's Response: Made it a little easier to cope.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it can't wait for more πŸ’• 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2016 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 19

Bella is going to be sick by the time he gets back and he can never leave her again.



Author's Response: That's pretty much true.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 19

Awesome chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wow.



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

One for the right team!!!



Author's Response: That's right!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2016 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 19

So glad Edward has not gotten hurt but he has not come home yet.  My heart breaks for Bella.  



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2016 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2016 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

So heartbreakingly sad.  Glad they had their night. 



Author's Response: It seemed very important that they have that.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 18

What an emotional chapter.



Author's Response: It is. d84;

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 17

Please let them have sex before he leaves!! I'm begging!! 



Author's Response: Lol! You'll have to wait a week to find out.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 17

So sad.... 



Author's Response: <3

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG they are both so afraid my heart is braking for them



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2016 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG!!! ~~sniffle sniffle~~~~ 



Author's Response: d84;

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2016 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 17

Such an emotional chapter.  



Author's Response: d84;

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

Love your story! Can't wait to read more. This chapter was very close to home for me my son and daughter are both overseas in the Air Force. 😇 



Author's Response: I hope I do them justice!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

yea those last minute deployments really suck



Author's Response: They do.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: annacaroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 16

😶

 



Author's Response: 🙂

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 16

Ok did not see that coming 



Author's Response: 🙂

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2016 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 16

So sad..... 



Author's Response: 🙁

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2016 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 16

That is so sad and scary.  My heart is braking for both of them.



Author's Response: 😭

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2016 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 16

Bless their hearts.  But they will get through this.  



Author's Response: It'll make them realize how they feel about each other.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2016 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 16

Hopefully the mission is over in less than a week!!



Author's Response: Not quite. But we will get his POV from over there.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2016 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love how symbiotic they are. 



Author's Response: That's a wonderful way of putting it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2016 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved those moments with Jane. Awesomeness



Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2016 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 15

Doorknob!! OMG! That was awesome! LMFAO!



Author's Response: Lol, that was my beta's idea, BeLynda. She's funny.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 15

I love how bella took control while dealing with Jane!



Author's Response: She's awesome!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2016 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love that Bella put Jane in her place. 



Author's Response: 😁 Thank you

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2016 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 



Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2016 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2016 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 15

Jane never had a chance lol.  Felix is strange not a lot to say to protect the one he is in love with ?  Edward is quite the man yummy



Author's Response: I pictured him as silent and hulking, not caring unless it got physical.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2016 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad to see Lauren was handled so nicely! 😂



Author's Response: 😉

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2016 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

No no no!! I really thought she would say to hell with the promise!!! Grrrr! She will be kicking herself by the end of the week.



Author's Response: Kicking herself, yes. But still keeping their promise.

Author's Response: Kicking herself, yes. But still keeping their promise.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2016 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2016 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

awww for her letting E keep his promise.  Jake really needs to grow up.  What a wanker



Author's Response: Yeah, he needs to grow up.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2016 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 14

Thanks for the update!  



Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

Gah! Dayum! 



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2016 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

😋😋😋



Author's Response: 😁

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2016 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

He would not have been able to get out of the house.



Author's Response: I know! Lol

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2016 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

Yeah, dating is way overrated!



Author's Response: Lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2016 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2016 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 14

thank you for the update..I know I wouldn've let him leave...until we both had smiles on our faces...lol..well done 



Author's Response: Right? Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2016 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 14

Another great chapter 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2016 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 14

<3



Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2016 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more 💕 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 13

Hugs, honey. Great chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2016 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 7

Hey, you know you can include the pictures inside the chapters here on TWCS? :) 



Author's Response: I have never been able to make the picture uploader work. I always get an error message. 😕

Reviewer: Bliss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2016 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 13

Awesome chapter can't wait for the rest!



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2016 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

Glad they are sharing thier stories.



Author's Response: :)

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