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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, thanks.  Totally different look too.



Author's Response:

I'm glad it worked! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2017 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can not read your while response. There is a picture/ad that covers most of it. It happens on all responses.



Author's Response:

I have the same problem. If you look to the upper left, click on 'fruity' and use the drop down to choose 'vision dark'.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well that sucks!!! Kisses and hearts then!!!



Author's Response:

That's good to know! I've tried hearts and they never show, so disappointing.

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

yeah.......she was kind of rude. hopefully she does not stay that way.....

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

yeah.......she was kind of rude. hopefully she does not stay that way.....



Author's Response:

Yeah, she was. She takes some time to get better. 

Reviewer: catwalk1945 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2016 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good beginning, hot sex. I'm liking this...



Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like that you had both POVs in onew chapter.  Can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2016 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Holy cow!  This is AMAAAZING!



Author's Response: :) I'm really glad you like it!

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2016 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really want him to at least have some fun and remember go ahead Bella show him that he's good all the way

Author's Response: He'll definitely remember this one!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2016 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well Dayum...that was a hawt end to the  chapter

dl

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2016 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG that was hot.  His now ex is a piece of shit.



Author's Response: I think you win best review! Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

So where is her piercing?  Is it on her back or what cause I'm not entirely understanding where it's located. But great first chapter! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: If I could post a pic for you, I would! It's at the base of the tailbone, a subdermal piercing. Normally studs, but I've seen them dangle just like a navel piercing. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2016 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

LOVED IT :)



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: phenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2016 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

WOW! Can't wait until Monday! 

 



Author's Response: Thank you, me either!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2016 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to read more! 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2016 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2016 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bella's a slut huh!  Nasty girl (he he he) that's just sad when a girls fuck and doesn't  bother to at the very least get a name. hmmmmm.... well at least the sex was hot.  but not liking the fact that she's been had before Edward.....but that's just me.  Looking forward to more. READ YOU SOON 💖



Author's Response: Yeah, she's very open to encounters. Don't worry, Edward's going to be her last.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2016 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hot hope there's a lot of dirty talk 



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2016 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh Luna likey.... Hot first chapter !!! Can't wait to travel the adventure!



Author's Response: Lol! Thank you!

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2016 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it



Author's Response: Why, thank you!

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