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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 26

THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 26

How completely agonizing. My heart breaks for them.



Author's Response:

Yes. They're going to work on it. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 26

Super angry at Jacob,, he should have been fired. Charlie is not helping anything, I am really pissed at Emmett. I am in love with Edward so amazing. Being there for Bella like that. I feel like he is the only one that is. Where the heck is everyone? Hoping for answers in next chapter lol. 



Author's Response:

She shut them all out. The rest scurried, while Edward stood his ground. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2017 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 26

They all stink.... NOT Edward ... but the rest of them suck completely. Booooooooo man-children!!! LOL Love this story!! 



Author's Response:

I thought it was funny that Charlie went on a rampage. Lol

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 25

Well put yourself in Emmett shoes. He sees him one way and Bella knows him on a personal level. The other thing is NEWTON is to blame and anyone who saw the signs and did not act. Great story

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 25

Well put yourself in Emmett shoes. He sees him one way and Bella knows him on a personal level. The other thing is NEWTON is to blame and anyone who saw the signs and did not act. Great story



Author's Response:

That's really the truth. Emmett has to figure out his anger and who to place it on. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 25

Emmett needs a kick up the ass!!!! 



Author's Response:

He sure as hell does! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 25

Oh, Edward is so loving. I love him lol. Poor Bella, he brother the dick. I hope it’s a good amazing thing he does or it’s not worthy of any redemption lol. Amazing chapter as always. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2017 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 25

Oh, Edward is so loving. I love him lol. Poor Bella, he brother the dick. I hope it’s a good amazing thing he does or it’s not worthy of any redemption lol. Amazing chapter as always. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. He needs his come to Jesus talk. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2017 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 24

Poor bella.  Emmett needs to chill bella has enough stress in her life.  Edward comes up with the sweetest things to say to her.



Author's Response:

I did think Edward was incredibly sweet. <3 Emmett needs some time. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2017 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 23

I love that she was snappy with him. 



Author's Response:

I'm always trying to make it realistic. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2017 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

I am highly disappointed in Emmett but Edward is amazing. Excited for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Yeah, Emmett is going to be that way for a few chapters. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2017 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 23

Keep writing



Author's Response:

Always 😊

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh poor Bella and Edward. The journey is going to be long but worth it. Amazing job



Author's Response:

Exactly, it's going to be hard work for them both. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2017 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 22

Poor guy vomitting.  Emmett is going to tease him i bet!



Author's Response:

Emmett is going to be interesting, that's for sure. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2017 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 22

:) 



Author's Response:

That's funny, you already reviewed this chapter? 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 22

Emmett needs to give him a break! Who wouldn't throw up at the thought, at the sight, of what he must have done to her, or could have done to her. I'm almost sorry they shot him. I wish he woud have had to suffer like he made her, and his other victims, suffer. I am glad she's safe. I also think she will recover with the help of Edward and her father. Thank god her ordeal wasn't longer. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I really appreciate your thoughts. They line up with mine, lol!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2017 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 22

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you, dear! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 22

I am very much speachless. I am so sad I have to wait a week lol 



Author's Response:

It'll go fast! I hope it will, at least. 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2017 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 22

Oh thank you for getting her out of this.  Hoping they all can cope with the potential PTSD.  Our poor Bella and Edward.



Author's Response:

It's going to be bumpy, that's for sure. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2017 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 21

I'm so worried about how bad this is going to get for bella.



Author's Response:

I can't blame you for that. I've got her, though. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 21

They had better find her quickly. I don't think Mike plans on letting her go, alive! What good is a guard detail that is so quickly overcome? I hope Jacob isn't in on it. Maybe now Carlisle will that this seriously, ya think? Thanks for all your wonderfully entertaining stories!



Author's Response:

And wait until you hear why Jacob was overtaken so easily. Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 21

Oh Bella, where the hell did your common sense go?  



Author's Response:

I bet she'll ask herself the same question. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 21

Omg poor Bella and Edward. I can't wait for next week. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I can't either, it's getting exciting! 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 21

Go get'em Edward! 



Author's Response:

Yaya! Team Edward! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 21

Ok so my input here... Mike is way to sloppy to have gotten away with everything he has done so far. So my real question is, does he simply have this GOD complex now or is he just so flustered he has forgetten to cover his tracks? 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 21

Ok so my input here... Mike is way to sloppy to have gotten away with everything he has done so far. So my real question is, does he simply have this GOD complex now or is he just so flustered he has forgetten to cover his tracks? 



Author's Response:

I would say it's a little bit of both. He simply thinks he can't be touched. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 20

Renee will deliver the best revenge!!



Author's Response:

She certainly wants to! 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2017 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 20

Omg ! Love all your stories can wait on the next chapter of this one ! Love it , I hope the boys kick ass or Edward kicks Some ass. Can't wait ,great stories again thank you for writing them for us.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that's very nice of you! 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2017 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 20

Oh no



Author's Response:

Hugs and deep breaths! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 20

I hope they find her soon.  Edward is going to blame himself 



Author's Response:

You bet he is! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 20

Poor Bella. This chapter was intense and I wish it was longer lol. Cant wait for next Wednesday to get here. 



Author's Response:

The intensity is going to stick around, too.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 20

OMFG!!!! I'm gonna cry...... Edward is gonna go BALLISTIC!



Author's Response:

Even I feel bad for him! 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2017 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 20

Our poor girl.  Edward is going to lose his mind when he finds out.



Author's Response:

We're going to get his POV, too.

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2017 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 19

I have to wait for updates now!!! Aaaaaaagghhh! I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 19

I have to wait for updates now!!! Aaaaaaagghhh! I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so sorry! Lol I'm glad you enjoy it! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 19

I hope edward doesn't get hurt. 



Author's Response:

I love him too much for that. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 19

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 19

*reaches for kevlar vest, glock, taser, and knife*  Okay, I'm ready, bring it.



Author's Response:

Lol, you might want all those things. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 19

It's disappointed that Jasper would dismiss Edward. I hope that what is coming next wont completely tear my heart in two. Can't wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

He's got Alice to knock some sense into him. The next chapter is going to be tough. 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 19

Keep on writing



Author's Response:

Always! Thank you! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2017 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 18

Congrats on the win!! U really deserved it but we did not deserve a cockblock!! :(



Author's Response:

Lol! Thank you, and I'm sorry? 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

You should be riding high from your win.  You earned it!!!!!  Excellent update.  :)



Author's Response:

Eeek! I really am. 

Reviewer: cherylchuy2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2017 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18

This sounds great, can't wait till it's complete

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2017 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

Amazing as usual. I will take the apology as long as next week there is no cock block lol. Congrats again. You definitely deserved it. 😊



Author's Response:

No, next week is a full lemon. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2017 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 18

Agh. Is that dinner burning in the oven...

don't keep us hanging for too long.

These two are gonna be smoking together.



Author's Response:

Lol, oven is off. Only keeping it from getting too cold, but let's face it, they're having cold chicken for dinner. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2017 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 17

Cant wait to see justice served for Carmen and Edward. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes, me too. Thank you. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 17

Big time = hanky panky? 



Author's Response:

Yes, it does! 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

Hit him Bella.  Knock him the fuck out.  Send his ass to the Twilight Zone.  :)



Author's Response:

Lol, she should! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 17

Poor Carmen 



Author's Response:

It is sad. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2017 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

I have goosebumps. This was an amazing chapter so amazing that I really didnt miss Edward lol. I can't wait for next weeks chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 16

I don't like Jake, eew very inappropriate to hit on your charge. And WTH is the dude that dense he's being watch, need to catch his ass. 



Author's Response:

He's been getting away with it for so long he thinks he's immune. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2017 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 16

I have a feeling edward is going to want to punch jake out!



Author's Response:

😅

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2017 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 16

I hope Bella can persuade the victim to name him



Author's Response:

If anyone can, it's Bella. 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 16

Let's get him Bella.



Author's Response:

You know it! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2017 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 15

Edward has no idea how much she wants him!



Author's Response:

She'll make it clear pretty soon! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2017 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 14

Poor edward couldn't get a goodbye kiss.



Author's Response:

Trying to keep it respectable in public, lol.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2017 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2017 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 15

Can't wait to see Mike behind bars.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2016 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

You tell her Charlie.  



Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 13

 I understand they needed to slow down but really did you have to in the chapter right there? I do love that she ran to his little apartment  and at least he's getting a little bolder with her!!



Author's Response: Lol, nothing more serious than kissing just yet.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2016 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 12

Yes let edward snugle & cuddle you!!



Author's Response: And he will!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2016 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

Ohhhhh they need to get that stupid prick Newton and his momma-uncle. Burn baby BURN!!!!!



Author's Response: Soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2016 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 12

I hope they find something they can use against Newton soon 



Author's Response: Something like that, soon.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2016 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh Bella,  i bet ALOT of you DID tingle at his touch! Wink wink That was a great line you wrote! 



Author's Response: 😂 Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2016 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

:) 



Author's Response: 😃

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2016 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wahoo! Awesome chapter!



Author's Response: 😀 Thank you!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2016 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

I can only imagine how hard life is after being falsely accused and imprisoned. 



Author's Response: I only hope I'm doing him justice, I don't know how it would really be either.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2016 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story



Author's Response: I truly appreciate that. d84;

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2016 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 9

Maybe edward can be her full time live in body guard. ;)



Author's Response: That's a perfect idea!

Author's Response: That's a perfect idea!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2016 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 



Author's Response: 😁

Author's Response: 😁

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2016 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

I'm so glad he is out!  I loved what bella almost said to the warden about what he could do with the paperwork! 



Author's Response: Lol, it's what we were all thinking.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2016 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

Thank goodness they don't kill him before monday!



Author's Response: No, nothing will happen to him.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2016 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2016 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

Crying here, too!



Author's Response: Oh, wow! That means a lot. 😊

Reviewer: IvyLane Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2016 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm sure he will get involved too though .... can't imagine him just saying see ya later Bella after he gets out. 



Author's Response: We haven't reached that part in posting yet, but I'm sure you're right. 😉

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

It's going to be a long weekend... 



Author's Response: It is!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 7

YAY!!!!!!! But now I am guessing she is going to be the one taking the heat for proving his innocence. Sigh... No offense but better her than our poor Edward... muuuhahahhaa!!

 

You made my day with this news of him getting released, btw... KISSES!!



Author's Response: I knew everybody would give a sigh of relief that it was now on her and not him. 😗

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2016 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love this story! Thanks for something a little different!



Author's Response: That's great, thank you.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2016 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love Blue Bloods

I also love your story.  :-)



Author's Response: Charlie is definitely patterned after Frank. :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2016 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 6

Get them bella!  Edward needs a hug really bad!!



Author's Response: He does, doesn't he?

Reviewer: Bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2016 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

This story gets better every update!😜



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

This situation is utterly heartbreaking and you convey the feeling of helplessness that Bella is experiencing so well.



Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate the compliment.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2016 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2016 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 5

Crap is about to hit the fan!!



Author's Response: Lol, yes it is.

Reviewer: Bliss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh no poor Edward! I'm loving your story! Awesome job!



Author's Response: Thank you very much.

Reviewer: Bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2016 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm hooked!! 



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh boy.



Author's Response: I know.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2016 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Edward 



Author's Response: Thank you! I feel bad for the guy.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2016 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh no, get him out of there



Author's Response: I know! She's working on it.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2016 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 5

Well, that ruined my breakfast. But good chapter.



Author's Response: Eek! Sorry! But thank you.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2016 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ooh this is gonna be such a good story! Can't wait for more! 



Author's Response: Why, thank you!

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