[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2017 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
It's disappointed that Jasper would dismiss Edward. I hope that what is coming next wont completely tear my heart in two. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
He's got Alice to knock some sense into him. The next chapter is going to be tough.
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2017 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
Keep on writing
Author's Response:
Always! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2017 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
Congrats on the win!! U really deserved it but we did not deserve a cockblock!! :(
Author's Response:
Lol! Thank you, and I'm sorry?
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
You should be riding high from your win. You earned it!!!!! Excellent update. :)
Author's Response:
Eeek! I really am.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2017 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
This sounds great, can't wait till it's complete
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2017 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2017 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
Amazing as usual. I will take the apology as long as next week there is no cock block lol. Congrats again. You definitely deserved it. 😊
Author's Response:
No, next week is a full lemon.
Date: 25 Jan 2017 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
Agh. Is that dinner burning in the oven...
don't keep us hanging for too long.
These two are gonna be smoking together.
Author's Response:
Lol, oven is off. Only keeping it from getting too cold, but let's face it, they're having cold chicken for dinner.
Date: 25 Jan 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
Cant wait to see justice served for Carmen and Edward. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Yes, me too. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2017 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Big time = hanky panky?
Author's Response:
Yes, it does!
Date: 18 Jan 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hit him Bella. Knock him the fuck out. Send his ass to the Twilight Zone. :)
Author's Response:
Lol, she should!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2017 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Carmen
Author's Response:
It is sad.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jan 2017 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
I have goosebumps. This was an amazing chapter so amazing that I really didnt miss Edward lol. I can't wait for next weeks chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! Thank you!
Date: 13 Jan 2017 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
I don't like Jake, eew very inappropriate to hit on your charge. And WTH is the dude that dense he's being watch, need to catch his ass.
Author's Response:
He's been getting away with it for so long he thinks he's immune.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2017 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
I have a feeling edward is going to want to punch jake out!
Author's Response:
😅
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
I hope Bella can persuade the victim to name him
Author's Response:
If anyone can, it's Bella.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 16
Let's get him Bella.
Author's Response:
You know it!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2017 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
Edward has no idea how much she wants him!
Author's Response:
She'll make it clear pretty soon!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2017 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
Poor edward couldn't get a goodbye kiss.
Author's Response:
Trying to keep it respectable in public, lol.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
:)
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 04 Jan 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait to see Mike behind bars.
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 14
:)
Author's Response: :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
You tell her Charlie.
Author's Response: :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2016 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
I understand they needed to slow down but really did you have to in the chapter right there? I do love that she ran to his little apartment and at least he's getting a little bolder with her!!
Author's Response: Lol, nothing more serious than kissing just yet.
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
Yes let edward snugle & cuddle you!!
Author's Response: And he will!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2016 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ohhhhh they need to get that stupid prick Newton and his momma-uncle. Burn baby BURN!!!!!
Author's Response: Soon
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hope they find something they can use against Newton soon
Author's Response: Something like that, soon.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2016 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh Bella, i bet ALOT of you DID tingle at his touch! Wink wink That was a great line you wrote!
Author's Response: 😂 Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
:)
Author's Response: 😃
Date: 30 Nov 2016 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wahoo! Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: 😀 Thank you!
Date: 30 Nov 2016 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
I can only imagine how hard life is after being falsely accused and imprisoned.
Author's Response: I only hope I'm doing him justice, I don't know how it would really be either.
Date: 30 Nov 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story
Author's Response: I truly appreciate that. d84;
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2016 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
Maybe edward can be her full time live in body guard. ;)
Author's Response: That's a perfect idea!
Author's Response: That's a perfect idea!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2016 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
:)
Author's Response: 😁
Author's Response: 😁
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2016 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm so glad he is out! I loved what bella almost said to the warden about what he could do with the paperwork!
Author's Response: Lol, it's what we were all thinking.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thank goodness they don't kill him before monday!
Author's Response: No, nothing will happen to him.
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2016 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 18 Nov 2016 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Crying here, too!
Author's Response: Oh, wow! That means a lot. 😊
Date: 17 Nov 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm sure he will get involved too though .... can't imagine him just saying see ya later Bella after he gets out.
Author's Response: We haven't reached that part in posting yet, but I'm sure you're right. 😉
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
It's going to be a long weekend...
Author's Response: It is!
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2016 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
YAY!!!!!!! But now I am guessing she is going to be the one taking the heat for proving his innocence. Sigh... No offense but better her than our poor Edward... muuuhahahhaa!!
You made my day with this news of him getting released, btw... KISSES!!
Author's Response: I knew everybody would give a sigh of relief that it was now on her and not him. 😗
Date: 14 Nov 2016 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love this story! Thanks for something a little different!
Author's Response: That's great, thank you.
Date: 10 Nov 2016 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love Blue Bloods
I also love your story. :-)
Author's Response: Charlie is definitely patterned after Frank. :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2016 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
Get them bella! Edward needs a hug really bad!!
Author's Response: He does, doesn't he?
Date: 09 Nov 2016 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
This story gets better every update!😜
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 09 Nov 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
This situation is utterly heartbreaking and you convey the feeling of helplessness that Bella is experiencing so well.
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate the compliment.
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2016 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2016 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Crap is about to hit the fan!!
Author's Response: Lol, yes it is.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2016 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh no poor Edward! I'm loving your story! Awesome job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2016 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm hooked!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03 Nov 2016 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh boy.
Author's Response: I know.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2016 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Edward
Author's Response: Thank you! I feel bad for the guy.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2016 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh no, get him out of there
Author's Response: I know! She's working on it.
Date: 02 Nov 2016 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well, that ruined my breakfast. But good chapter.
Author's Response: Eek! Sorry! But thank you.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2016 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ooh this is gonna be such a good story! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Why, thank you!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2016 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
Solitary confinement here he comes. :(
Author's Response: :(
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2016 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
Keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Edward
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 26 Oct 2016 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2016 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting storyline, keep writing
Author's Response: I'm currently on chapter 20, so I definitely will!
Author's Response: I'm currently on chapter 20, so I definitely will!
Date: 20 Oct 2016 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hi. I'.m in love with this history.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2016 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
I have hope too!
Author's Response: Good!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2016 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 19 Oct 2016 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
To be without hope is to be lost . But I'm sure hope will find him once again
Author's Response: With the help of Bella, yes.
Date: 17 Oct 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think Edward is just so tired of being let down and his parents being so hurt.
Author's Response: That's what it is.
Date: 17 Oct 2016 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds great
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 13 Oct 2016 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
stp merci suite
Author's Response: Thank you
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2016 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
How could shenot take it. If screams set up! I can't wait to see edward soften & change. Bella is going to kick his butt!
Author's Response: That's really it; despite his attitude, she could tell he was innocent from the files. She can't let him down now.
Date: 12 Oct 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Looking forward to another one of your stories d84;a039;
Author's Response: Good, thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2016 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2016 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was a nice twist at the end. I was expecting him to eyeball her seductively and maybe oagle her. Not look angry at her. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Oh, he's an angry Edward. We just have to see if Bella can bring him around.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2016 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thank you, dear!:)