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Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2016 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

You posted this weeks ago, but I resisted reading, thinking it was just another of those seasonal stories, most of which I don't like. I hate the holiday season for various reasons. Imagine my delightful surprise today, when I finally decide to read this! I am in tears at the beauty of this story! I should have known you wouldn't write just an ordinary Halloween story! Their love through dreams and time spoke to my very soul. I have longed for this for longer than even I know, and here you have given it to me in this beautiful story! Thanks so much.



Author's Response:

Awwww thank you Judy!  I'm so happy that you loved the story as much as I did writing.  To be honest I cried the whole time I was writing it.  I may try another one similiar someday.

I have published this story on Amazon.com, but I think they might have put it into the wrong catogory.  Oh well.  I only published it because it makes my daughter very proud everytime I do publish.  *grin*

Hope to hear from you later.

Hard Hugs

Carol/Dinia

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2016 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow what a great story.  So happy they found each other in the end. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I just added it to my Amazon.com account, but since you've read it already you may not be interested, but if you'd please leave a review there I would appreciate it very much!  Thank you again.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2016 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this story so much.  Thank you for sharing it with all of us. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for your wonderful ideas that helped flesh out the story line!  Couldn't have done ti without you.  Did you see my "Acknowledgments"?

Talk to you soon.

Loves you!

Hard Hugs

Carol

Reviewer: jkratochvil Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi Dinia,

Halloween is my favorite time of year. So happy that you wrote a special story. I loved it!! It was very original. Bella & Edward forever!!

 

Jane 😊 



Author's Response:

Mine too.  When I was young(er) I use to dress up and go to parties or clubs, now as an old woman (74 last birthday) I watch scary and or weird movies.  We live in an "old" neighborhood where there are not children coming to the door for treats.  I used to buy candy just for them, but when no one showed up, I would eat the candy myself-not good!

I am please that you enjoyed this short story.  The additon of Edward's pov was kinda a last minute thing.  If you've read much of my later work, you'll know I'm not fond of canon personalities with the characters so I give them tweeks make them or human (like Edward in this one) or less human like Edward in "Edward's Addiction", and Bella really messed up as in my trilogy "Carrying the Torch".

One rule I try to adhere to is the HEA.  Someday I may break that.  Don't know if I can. LOL.

Now that I'm a little more established in the Twilight Fandom, I'm taking more liberties with the story lines and the characters.  I hope you'll read my FBI Guy series (#1 "Edward Cullen, FBI Special Agent & Psychic,  #2 "Edward Cullen & Friends - Down on the Bayou" - #3 "The Down On The Bayou Detective Agency - Case files")

Hope to hear from you soon.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2016 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you. 



Author's Response:

You are welcome, and thank you for reading and reviewing!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: faith2905able Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2016 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful.  Reminds me the Ghost and Mrs

 Muir 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Yeah, I kinda thought that too, except both of the characters were alive, until the end that is.  *smils*

Hope you'll read some of my other stories.  The later ones tend to be a little less canon (but always B+E with HEAs) and that you'll let me know what you think.

See you soon, I hope!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you so much for this, I needed a smile and a tear right now!



Author's Response:

Very happy I could give you what you needed!  thanks for reading and for taking the time to review.

See you soon - I hope!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2016 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love it. I am just curious on why they dreamed of each other at different ages,, when they truly were the same ages the whole time. If they had just ran into each other they could of been together :(. I still love that they get together, I wish they could of had those children.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!  To be honest it didn't soak into me about the time thingie until I'd sent it off to my Beta and she called me on it.  So far you are the only one to think about that!  Congrats.  Yes they were the same age or really close.  Edward was off to law school by the time Bella moved to Forks, and then when he came back he was always working so their paths never crossed, and anyway, Bella was such a private person she never say anything to anyone about Edward.  It's very easy to be totally alone in a crowd, I was that way when I was younger 20 - 30's then when I hit 40, all the barriers came down.  LOL.

Thank you again for reading.  Have you read anything of mine before?

See you soon!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2016 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)  loved this 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  :D

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