Date: 17 Jun 2017 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow! The plot thinkens. So it was Anthony they were referring to ND not another woman. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 17 Jun 2017 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
I enjoyed this chapter very much. Glad to see Anthony is back.
Date: 17 Jun 2017 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more π’
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2017 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah, I'd pass out too.
Sherry
Date: 17 Jun 2017 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
If Edward has Janina as a mistress -? He supposed to her he is no better the Anthony ...and he killed that guy and she seen him with Janina....What the hell had she done to be live like this . nothing ...Edward and bella has to have HeA because there edward and bella ...and at time is did see him being love tord her .... its a good story but plz let edward and bella has HEA plz i kick edwaed ass and kill janina and make him beg for forgivness
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Date: 17 Jun 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 19
Edward why why would u keep this from Bella that's not cool another lie she caught u on
Date: 17 Jun 2017 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Bella she wishes she was dead. Edward is going to lose his mind.
Date: 17 Jun 2017 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
The plot thickens....
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2017 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
That awful feeling tha tI had...hate being right.
Date: 15 Jun 2017 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Anthony? What the hell is going on? lol. Looking forward to the next update. Maybe it's Micheal? Or the Zombie Apocolypse? Would explain the dead coming back to life.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2017 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm thinking Carmen is untrustworthy. Holy Hell what a way to end a chapter.
Sherry
Date: 14 Jun 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 18
Anthony???????? Bella is going to get in so much trouble when Edward finds her.
Date: 14 Jun 2017 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Surprise !!! Anthony ?
Date: 14 Jun 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
Did Anthony not die and just faked his death? Or is bella dreaming?
Date: 14 Jun 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
hmm . . . is it anthony? trying to remember his death
Date: 14 Jun 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 14 Jun 2017 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
Now I think Anthony and Michael are somehow connected. Can't wait for the update.
Date: 14 Jun 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
WHAT!?!?!
Awesome!
Date: 14 Jun 2017 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
What????He can't be alive.
Date: 13 Jun 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 12 Jun 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
Not good if the Cullen family can't stick together. Great chapter, thank you.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Isabella is going to figure it out and save Edward's ass isn't she? That would be an epic turn of events. And Michael needs to disappear, no me gusta.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2017 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
I have this horrible feeling...
Date: 12 Jun 2017 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
Shit is hitting the fan. Carlisle is not taking retirement very well. I think Michel is the one behind this. Edward has not found out about the note yet?
Date: 12 Jun 2017 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow! Good chapter. This is getting very involved. Love it!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
Awesome chapter.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2017 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
I can't wait to find out Edward's reaction.
Sherry
Date: 04 Jun 2017 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
This story is great! Thank you!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 03 Jun 2017 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Excellent chapter, thank you.
Date: 02 Jun 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 01 Jun 2017 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
she is being really stupid
edward is a total fuckup but she is going to end up getting hurt
Date: 01 Jun 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh no!! Is Bella that stupid?? Please tell me she gets wise soon!! I hate a stupid Bella!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
thank you for the update...what is Bella Playing at?
Date: 01 Jun 2017 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 16
She is in trouble and she is trusting the wrong person Mike is not who she thinks he is. Edward is going to freak out
Date: 01 Jun 2017 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great update. He did call her Isabella.
Date: 31 May 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am greedy; I want more!! Hopefully with the summer finally here we can get more chapters sooner. I know real life takes presidence, but since you have such a good story that draws you in, please update sooner. Did I say that I LOVE this story!! Thank you.
Date: 31 May 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am greedy; I want more!! Hopefully with the summer finally here we can get more chapters sooner. I know real life takes presidence, but since you have such a good story that draws you in, please update sooner. Did I say that I LOVE this story!! Thank you.
Date: 31 May 2017 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 30 May 2017 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
He is in so much shit she is so hurt.
Date: 30 May 2017 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
It is really difficult for me to see a HEA for these two. He has done so much to her. Her life hasn't been her own for so long. I am sure she doesn't want any intimacy with him and who could blame her. He has forced into just about everything. For gods sake he is responsible for her fathers death. I am curious how you are going to have this play out.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2017 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
I have no doubt Janina was the one in Edward's office at the underground. He really needs to talk to Bella about that mess. He's not very smart when it comes to matters involving his wife. This fic OWNS me. lol Loving every word of every chapter.
Sherry
Date: 30 May 2017 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
Good for Bella, standing up for herself!
Date: 30 May 2017 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for your update ... could thinks get any worse with edward and Bella are they going to have HEA ...??? Hope you update soon
Date: 30 May 2017 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
Harsh Bella. But Edward deserves it. I wonder if ExB will get a happily ever after.
Date: 03 May 2017 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more π’
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 14
Grrr! Bella calm down! She is going to get garrett killed!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Duh duh duh... Damn I have more questions now, lol. Though Bella is lucky Edward didn't kill Garrett for her actions.
Sherry
Date: 01 May 2017 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh my goodness. Please keep the updates coming. Although I honestly don't know how this can end as BxE with their past.
Date: 01 May 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
I know she is very upset but Edward is trying
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2017 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love Love it,can't wait to read more.
Date: 01 May 2017 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bella is feeling defeted so sad.
Date: 30 Apr 2017 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bella better start learning to be and act like the don's wife. She doesn't want to return to NY to be the scared little girl but she is just that anywhere and everywhere. She needs to grow the hell up...she had 3 years, living in a fantasy world instead of facing reality. Not sure how long I can take this bitter antagonistic immature girl. Yes, I empathize with her treatment 3years ago...now, it's time for her to rise above it and become a strong fierce wife of the don one who supports her husband; of course, after she gives him a good kick in the ass... he could have had her killed, instead he married her to protect her... Bella needs to start using her brain instead of having misplaced stubbornness.
Date: 30 Apr 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 29 Apr 2017 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 13
You hold strong bella. No matter what they do, hold your head up in public be cold and stoic. Be the most ruthless mafia wife there is. Be the female version of edward.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor bella. Edward doesn't truly know her, he only knows what she's like as a prisoner, as what act she puts on. That's who he loves, prisoner bella not the true bella. I still wish her free and him having to court her...and maybe her not accepting him.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more π’
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Bella, she's so broken. Will she ever get any kind of happiness. Carmen is throwing up red flags. lol
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
I hope they get on the same page soon. Carmen is the leak it seems.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
I think Carmine might be their inside person!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
Carmen is someone to be watched. Edward is making mistakes. Who will pay? Great chapter.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
So Carmen is a traitor? Love the story please continue the quick updates
Date: 29 Apr 2017 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
So Carmen is a traitor? Love the story please continue the quick updates
Date: 29 Apr 2017 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
Carmen is behind the bad stuff she is evil???? Poor Bella she is so afraid.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hope she remembers to tell edward about the phone call Carmen made.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Now you have me wondering if Carmen isn't involved in the attack somehow. You're evil woman, lol, I need answers, not more questions, lol. I kinda wanna shake Bella and make her tell Edward what she's witnessed, Micheal at the party and Carmen's strange phone conversation. If Bella would think about what Edward said about the funeral was already arranged, then Carmen's words about having to plan a funeral for her husband should send off warning bells that something isn't right.
Fantastic as always.
Sherry
Date: 28 Apr 2017 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 28 Apr 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
Excellent chapter, thx.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2017 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
I will say it again BEST story I have read here thank you can't wait to read more!
Date: 26 Apr 2017 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
i am not sure how i feel about all of this...
i am frustrated with bella for not understanding edward better...
i am frustrated with edward for not being able to keep his head straight
and explain himself already...
i am even more frustrated that bella is too fucking stubborn to try to
have any kind of understanding of everything thats going on...
i bet michael is trying to off both edward and bella...more edward than bella
yes, edward is bad but relatively was/is very good compared to anthony and
did save her under the circumstances...
wish bella would just give edward a chance and wish edward would
just tell janine off loud and clear in front of bella and everybody else...
i would love HEA but not sure how in the world you are going to achieve that...
finally, wish you would update this more...
Date: 26 Apr 2017 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 26 Apr 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
That was epic.
Date: 26 Apr 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
Im loving this bravo
Date: 26 Apr 2017 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
Yeah another chapter. Keep then coming
Date: 26 Apr 2017 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Hmmmm. So curious. Duh. People are shooting at you get out of there! Is it Michael?
Date: 26 Apr 2017 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow I hope Bella sees how he is trying to take care of her. She has to be scared to death.
Date: 26 Apr 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
Crazy, but I am certain the Michael has something to do with al of this!
Date: 26 Apr 2017 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
I feel her pain and emptiness.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2017 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
Holy hell!!! Bella was amazing. She drove like a bandit. Something tells me Michael was behind it. Bella needs to tell Edward she thought she saw him. Hmm... I'm wondering if Michael isn't working with Janina's father. Awesome thrills this chapter.
Sherry