Date: 28 Mar 2018 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hi! I just discovered your story! I really like it!! I hope you upload soon ^^
this last chapter was more easy and nice to read because of the edition. The scenes that happened in the past are in cursive, the space between the sentence is small like the space between the paragraphs. You know what I mean? It looks more like a book. :)
Are you on ff so I can follow you?
Again, I'm really loving your fic!!
*Sorry my English*
Date: 26 Mar 2018 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
As destroyed as edward is going to be when it hits him how bad she was hurt i think he is going to want to spank her for not coming to him sooner and trying to hide this new info. I'm looking forward to the next update!!
Date: 26 Mar 2018 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for adding in the translations!! How in the heck is james getting a picture of bella in her bedroom? I think more than her number needs changing! I don't think you could write a more perfect edward. He is so possesive! I also love that he was informing of her that they were going on a date even after she told him to ask! I can say as of this chapter i never want this story to end!!
Thank you so much. Ive been trying to get Edward right. I didnt want him to seem unrealistic or too lovey. He's a dark character. And I want to show you guys that she's his light.
Date: 26 Mar 2018 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
Mix feelings she was trying to keep her problems away from them but that ass hole manage to get to her and now every one knows she was brutally rape by 12 man omg poor Bella I know she dint want to trouble them but now it’s time to come clean and face the music they will understand