Date: 12 Jun 2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella's remorse is almost expected. She has been verbally beaten into believing she has no worth other than gratifying someone else's need. When she is granted her own momentary bliss, she perceives it as selfish. Reinforcing the notion she is nothing more than a pleasure toy.
Edward has his work cut out for him.
How to instill self worth.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
Edward is certainly going to have to work to reassure Bella! It's so sad what all she's had to endure that she can't enjoy Edward without going back to all the negative she's been told. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
It's sad that Jasper has been recycled. Let's hope he can learn to love again. Alice has to wait now. I guess her famous line will be of use in their future.....You kept me waiting......
Delightful first date. Edward really put some thought into the entire evening.
Date: 03 Jun 2017 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 21
Too bad about Jasper. Maybe next time will be better for him. Recycling. Interesting term for it. I love how Edward keeps Bella safe, but still wonder what Riley is up to. No good, I'm sure, but i'll wait and see what you give us next from him. I was just thinking I'd love to be enveloped in the wings of an angel, for any reason...hmmm...thanks!
Date: 20 May 2017 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love this story!! Can't wait to see what you have planned for Riley and Rose!! Also if Jasper is able to let go of his hatred for Edwards mistake before they have to recycle him. I hope you are able to update soon. Thank you
Date: 06 May 2017 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
Her first day back to work went pretty well. I'm glad Edward helped her with grading. My daughter tells me grading can be a real pain! and time consuming. I wonder what is urgent that Carlisle has to say to him. Thanks for the update!
Date: 01 May 2017 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
What may be slow progress to some is the normal comfort zone for others. Bella's reacting to Edward's physical response as though she is a virgin. And in some respects that is a true statement. She was never in a position to give consent. This new form of touching is similar to first time exploration. Bella has emotional duress to overcome though and that presents an additional hurdle.
Will Emmett be the guard that is sent to oversee Rose?
Date: 29 Apr 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm still seeking to read you here, despite still not getting any notifications from STARS. I hope they fix it soon.
This is a lovely chapter. Edward is a patient saint, er..angel, with her. I love that. Farewell to Jasper. I hope they can do something for Rosalie, but no matter, really. As long as Bella stays safe. Barbed penises?? OMG! See ya next time...
Date: 22 Apr 2017 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thanks for giving us Carlisle's take on everything. He's cute with trying to remember all the modern things, like Gaggle...LOL! Seriously, I think Bella is getting stronger in her belief in herself, thanks to everyone shoring her up. She is beginning to see the importance of being strong in her goodness. Too bad Jasper is so hung up on his hate. Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 16 Apr 2017 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love it when you ask us questions at the end of a chapter. I take it to mean that those are the issues you will address in the upcoming chapters. It's good to see Carlisle in this story. The jokes about Carlisle's Angels are cute and clever. Thanks for another chapter of this gripping story.