Date: 01 Aug 2017 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 29
I absolutely love this story!! I love the fact that Bella is starting to grow into her own strong independent self. The thought occurred to me though that as bad as Carlisle acted in the previous couple of chapters when he blatantly undermined Bella's pain from her past, shouldn't Carlisle be able to be forgiven too?? Yes he was an ass, but if the other angels can feel his contrition then shouldn't they help Bella and Charlie forgive him for his cras actions/words? Or has Carlisle been a higher ranking angel too long so he really doesn't have a handle on how deep pain can go within our human selves? Anyway, I look forward to to the next chapter to see where all this goes!! Thank you for such a lovely story and I look forward to seeing how your creative mind writes out what comes next. Thank you.
Date: 30 Jul 2017 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
So there is no evil presence at the new school where she will teach 3rd grade? I know you said their might be, but it seems not. Yet. What a mess the powers that be made when they let an innocent, Bella, suffer for her father's indiscretion. I'm amazed that was allowed to happen. They should be recycled!
Date: 29 Jul 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
Thank you, thank you for saving poor Alice!! I knew she would be ok since she asked God to help her that she would be ok although a little messed up. Esme, Charlie, and Edward were able to heal her!! Yah!!! Can't wait for the next update to come out. Thank you for sharing your talent of writing!! This story is one of my all time favorites. Thank you and I look forward to receiving your next chapter!!
Date: 25 Jul 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 28
Enjoying the ride as you figure out the plan for these characters.
The missing pieces of Bella's life finally falling into place are healing her heart.
It's unfortunate that offspring take the brunt of the anger intended towards the parents. Why is the child punished for the sins of the father? Or is it more like the domino effect on the offspring? They suffer the consequences even though they didn't make the original choices.
Date: 23 Jul 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm so glad her father is back in the picture, joining in the group who surround and protect her. Since she is half angel, might she have some powers of her own that might come out as she gets stronger? That would be great! Sorry, I usually don't give story ideas. That's your area of expertise....
Date: 20 Jul 2017 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
So happy that Bella has finally said she loves Edward even if it is just in her mind and she hasn't said it out loud. So glad Alice is gonna be with Bella. I do not like that Riley is still at the school. After he got in trouble and now he gets a promotion. Just does not make sense.
Date: 20 Jul 2017 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
I wondered what happened to this story. I have not gotten any updated notices for it. Strange. Glad I saw a post on FB. I am going to click to add to my favorites. I have enjoyed reading thus story. I'm excited to get caught up on it.
Date: 19 Jul 2017 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 27
I'm surprised Bella's current state of dispare was the catalyst for Charlie's return to his former state as part of the Dominian Lordship.
Will Charlie be able to protect and provide Bella with the information she needs to be Edward's soulmate?
Alice needs backup.
Date: 15 Jul 2017 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 24
i too am rather low on patience regarding bella's situation.
normally, it would take years and years of therapy to get to where
i believe you want her to be...
however, we are not dealing with a "normal" situation.
we have angels and devil and minions so why cant we get some sort
of supernatural solution??
perhaps bella somehow overcoming some of her past and helping to defeat the devil, rose, reilly, etc and winning this upcoming
war will empower her to "cleanse" herself of all negative energy?!
of course, this cleansing may also become complete during her transformation
into a full angel?....
certainly, this concept needs to be thought out more/better but something
supernatural would help....imho...
Date: 15 Jul 2017 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 26
as smart as bella is as well as all of the angels protecting her,
cant anyone tell her it's ridiculous to try for a new job when her life,
lives of others, lives of angels are all on the line?
isnt this upcoming war a bit more important at the moment?
she has food, a home, people who love her...what else does she need to survive
without a job at the moment? isnt she being selfish wanting to work at this time?
they need to focus on the war...winning the war rather than trying to get a job,
get to and fro work, check out all new people at this new school, need more protection
at said new school...just would cause more complication to an already complicated
and dangerous situation.
did we not read that carlisle once had a child? is bella a descendant of said child?
also anything involving Jane Hopkins(Volturi, lol) is suspect! lol, imho...
Date: 02 Jul 2017 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm sorry you're stuck on this one. I love reading it. I'm not a writer so cannot offer you any suggestions on how to proceed here. Perhaps if you stop trying and leave it for a short time, it will come to you. Not that I would want that, but I mean just to jump start the process. Maybe it will come to you in a dream...
Date: 02 Jul 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story of yours!! It is very intreging and I look forward to your updates!! It sounds like you are having trouble with writer's block but I hope that you are able to get through it cuz this story is one of my favorites!! I look forward to reading upcoming chapters!! Want to see if the devil overtakes Rose and Emmett or if their gardian angels are able to pull them back from the brink cuz I am sure Riley is a lost cause. Wow, can't wait to see where you take this and look forward to being immersed in this saga again soon! Thank you ๐
Date: 02 Jul 2017 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
Now that Bella's been released from her teaching obligation, maybe she could ask to spend time with Carlisle and Esme for special training. Something her human mind can rapidly process yet aid her in the event she finds herself alone with a Lucifer infested human.
It's inevitable that Bella will become injured, too the point of needing a transformation into an angel, but in the meantime she should be arming herself with tricks to hold off Lucifer catching her off guard.
Will Emmett wind up an evil minion of the devil?
Date: 25 Jun 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Hang in there and give us what you can, when you can. With so many stories going, it's a wonder this hasn't happened to you before.. I can wait. Give us your best work when you can. I'm glad Alice was astute in her watch and got Edward to get Bella out of danger. Can satan jump to another body if they can subdue Rosalie? Maybe they can get rid of her and trap satan inside. That would be great!