Date: 12 Feb 2017 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good for Alice for giving Jasper shit about his attitude toward Edward! I'm glad she went and risked herself to Bella so that Bella would come and heal Edward. Now that they've declared themselves to each other, Bella can hear Edward's thoughts? Interesting. Thanks for this story and another entertaining chapter!
Date: 12 Feb 2017 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward is his human equivalent name. Old English meaning: fortunate guardian. His ethereal name could be just about anything.
I need you and I'm yours aren't really words of love filled with devotion. But more of a deep need for comfort. That was all Bella had to do to help Edward? Not how I thought a mate would have to respond in order to begin the healing process, let alone complete it.
Why is Carlisle needed?
Date: 06 Feb 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
Does Bella have the ability to sense Edward's need of her? Or is it one-sided, her need for him is stronger right now.
If Riley is so powerful, why is Edward, a single Angel, the only thing standing between him and Bella?
Date: 04 Feb 2017 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
All seems pretty bleak right now. How can Edward defeat Riley when Riley seem to be so much stronger. Can Bella really help without knowing what they really are? Angels and the Devil? Will she believe it? Will she help? Will it be enough? The drama and suspense here is good. It's killing me! Thanks!
Date: 21 Jan 2017 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella is confusing me. One minute she is saying she can't stay with Edward because she barely knows him and then she crawls into the chair with him and cuddles after he brushes her hair. Those are mixed signals to me.
Date: 21 Jan 2017 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
Skanks abound, everywhere! I've met my fair share...
Did Edward just move her healing along a bit there at the end of the chapter? It usually takes something out of him to heal someone else and I noticed his sweatiness that you described. I love how he treats her. I hope she can get on board more and trust him to take care of her. I think she will need him more and more, and soon! Thanks for all you give us!
Date: 09 Jan 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Is Riley being possessed by demons loyal to the devil a recent development; or has he been evil and powerful since she met him?
Will Alice make another appearance? Possibly stick around to assist Edward in this unearthly battle that will ensue over Bella?
Date: 08 Jan 2017 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well shyt!!!! That's just a bunch of fuckery haha... And my fi gets are crossed Riley didn't mess with Edward glorious wings. Will he have to tell B what he is, can she help heal his wings... Alice has some splaining to do lol
Date: 07 Jan 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh no! Riley is more powerful than Edward? yikes! And what is Rose's problem? Edward is the fallen angel in this story, but he seems to be one of the good guys compared to others. Thanks for updating so regularly and often!