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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2016 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it! Can't wait to read more ! Thank you for writing a great story so far!

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2016 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks good chapters

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2016 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a way to meet... Hopefully he ddoesn't stay shy even with her in his home!?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

Did Bella see or hear anything regarding Edward's rescue and subsequent detaining of her attackers?
Fainting is a good response.

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2016 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

😍😍😍😍

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Edward is hooked.  Poor Bella she is going to be freaking out.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2016 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is going to be some good laughs!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2016 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great  start  ! 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2016 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm going to assume that this wasn't the 1st time she's been in trouble.

 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my thank goodness he was so in tune with her that he saved her now what will happen when she wakes up again 

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2016 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

oh, this is good

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2016 11:24 AM Title: Prologue

Not normally a supernatural fan, but , like Twilight, this has really grabbed my attention

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

good

Reviewer: rocker9113 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2016 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was certainly not the worst reaction Bella could have had on seeing Edward. At least, she didn't scream. 

Thanks!

Sally

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2016 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for the chapter. I'm wondering if doing good deeds, like the one he just did for Bella, will get him forgiven for the Hitler thing. That was a good one, actually, his bad deed aiding Hitler, whow was really Lucifer in disguise. I liked that. So he healed her body, but what about her mind? Will she remember that attack? I guess we will see next chapter or two...

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2016 3:31 PM Title: Prologue

Can't wait to read this as the story unfolds!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2016 9:30 PM Title: Prologue

Interesting start

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2016 12:47 PM Title: Prologue

I'm very excited about this story!!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2016 12:40 AM Title: Prologue

A vary cool start 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2016 5:23 AM Title: Prologue

Bad boy angel cool.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2016 5:05 AM Title: Prologue

good

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2016 4:42 AM Title: Prologue

I love the banner!

Reviewer: sweaterweathergirl26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2016 4:00 AM Title: Prologue

Can't wait for more! I love the new concept

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2016 3:00 AM Title: Prologue

This sounds intriguing, i have read most of your work and I must say you are a terrific writer and you draw me in with your stories

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2016 1:47 AM Title: Prologue

Sounds interesting. Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2016 1:40 AM Title: Prologue

Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: lilypad1588 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2016 1:20 AM Title: Prologue

Thus sounds amazing!   Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: Feminine Archetype Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2016 12:35 AM Title: Prologue

Well, this is an interesting little depature for you. Seems out of the box for you but maybe i am wrong about that. I would typically not read something like this (angel stories arent typically done well) but I trust you as an author and can imagine you will do a great job with this type of story. As always, thank you for sharing your talents with us/me.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2016 11:01 PM Title: Prologue

Oh my I and excited to read this one I am doing a happy dance see you next week

Reviewer: beadgirl61 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2016 9:58 PM Title: Prologue

Love fallen angel stories!   Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2016 9:09 PM Title: Prologue

Can't wait for more. I love your stories!

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2016 8:24 PM Title: Prologue

Yay! A new story. I love your writing

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2016 8:12 PM Title: Prologue

Here we go again! This sounds great. I'm looking forward to more. Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2016 7:54 PM Title: Prologue

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Alices White Rabbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2016 6:37 PM Title: Prologue

Sounds like this is going to be very interesting. Can't wait to hear more of Edward's story. 

Thanks!

Sally

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