Date: 13 Jun 2017 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
I was looking for a short, quick read to help me get to sleep last night when I found ATLBL&H. Boy did I pick the wrong story! I was consumed from the very beginning. Eyes wide open and wanted more when I finished the last chapter.
The electricity between Edward and Bella was quite tangible. I enjoyed watching them skirt around each other until they finally had to face reality. It was like kissing and falling in love. I felt like a voyeur watching these two tango and tangle.
Bella’s reveal was very shattering. Simply heartrending. And, jeez, when you revealed that Edward was a virgin, I simply sat straight up and said “I believe I need to read that again!” Awesome spin on his “tarnished douche canoe” character.
I enjoyed reading ATLBL&H sooo very much. Sorry I didn’t review until today. And yes, I did get to sleep with some really nice thoughts of an awesome Edward.
Thank you for writing for our fandom. You are a devoted author that continues to give of yourself to your fans and our fandom. I appreciate you very much.
Elaine – Sparkle Elaine Damnu Phillips on FB
Date: 27 Dec 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow so much happened in this chapter that I hardly know what to say. I'm not sure I could forgive Renee as easily as Bella did, but am glad she did. Phil/James got what he deserved! What about Jacob? Will he get what he deserves too? The Christmas scenes at Elizabeth's house were nice. I love the present Edward got Bella. I'm sure there's more I didn't comment on, but I loved it all. Thanks!