Date: 12 Jan 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hoping either Jasper saves her, or she has a knife under her pillow to cut off his dick!!!!! Please do not let this 14 year old girl get sexually assaulted by this fucking dirtbag.
I am going to thank you for your review becaue I love that you did. :)
Date: 06 Jan 2017 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, this is the beginning of a very hard life for Bella. She and her mom didn't get along but she always had her dad as support. Now she's going to have to battle her mom to live a normal life and to take care of her. Her mom is a mess.
Date: 05 Jan 2017 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, there are so many laws that really just do not make living easy. Bella should have been permitted to receive early emancipation. Shame.
There is, I looked it up 16 and has to be able to financially support yourself with any state assistance. Crazy
Date: 01 Jan 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think you found a Beta for the first two chapters. You have a wonderful plot, just need to have someone help make it structurally sound. Really liking it so far. Has great potential.
Thank you, I am trying. :)
Date: 29 Dec 2016 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving it so far. If you want a beta post on Facebook, especially in groups like "pay it forward" or "The no rules Twilight fanfiction club".
Thank you I will defiently look into those.