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Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2017 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 22

Don't let her die! Why hadn't she called on charlie?



Author's Response:

She couldn't. And she also wasnt thinnking straight.

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2017 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 22

Noooooo.....  l love this story. I can't believe we are at the end.



Author's Response:

Thank you I know Im sad to see it end

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2017 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

She should have followed her instinct when she knew something was wrong! I'm thinking she'll be okay, though.



Author's Response:

Yes she should have but eventually I think she wil do ok. 

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2017 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love the story. Can't say I'm a fan of cliff hangers (I'm too impatient and just want more of the story). Lol.

XoxoxoxoX
Alia

Author's Response:

Thank You!! I know I am not a cliff hanger person either but it just fit so perfectly lol. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2017 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 21

Where is Mia during this love fest?  



Author's Response:

With grandma

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2017 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 21

Ah, that was so sad and good!



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 21

Bella is going to become a freak in the sheets!! 



Author's Response:

Yes she has lol

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

I'm so happy they moved in together! Bella deserves happiness! And I love EPOV.



Author's Response:

Thank you i love edwards pov too

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2017 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter!

XoxoxoxoX
Alia

Author's Response:

Thank You!!!

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2017 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 20

I'm so excited for them to move in together! I don't know if she's ready for intimacy yet, but she's ready for them to be together I think. 



Author's Response:

I agree!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 19

Edward is so good for Bella.  She will get through this with Edward's love and support.  It is time for Bella to heal.



Author's Response:

It is time for her to heal. Thank you for reading!!

Reviewer: CaptCron76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

I freaking love this story!!! The ONLY thing I don't like is that soon I will have to wait for updates haha! I'm so glad I found this story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank You!!! I am so happy your enjoying the story so far. 

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2017 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter. Really like the characters.

XoxoxoxoX
Alia

Author's Response:

Thank You !!!!

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2017 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

It's good that she opened up. They're getting closer to lemony time!



Author's Response:

Yes they are!!!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

Omg love your story can't wait to read more 



Author's Response:

Thank You!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 18

Charlie should bomb felix's car.  I'm sure he's capable. 



Author's Response:

He is capable πŸ˜‰

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 18

They totally need to get together! 



Author's Response:

😁 thank you!!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2017 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 18

I love that little girl.



Author's Response:

I know shes too cute

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2017 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 18

Amazing  as always 



Author's Response:

Thank You!!

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2017 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 18

Very sweet! I hope she takes care of this Felix character and gets rid of James quickly.

 



Author's Response:

Thank You!!

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2017 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

I love this! Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2017 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 17

Normally i would say jasper is right but bella has never felt these jolts before and she needs to experiance this fully with edward.



Author's Response:

She does need to start feeling again. Thank you for reading!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2017 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 16

I always love hearing from edward!!

Reviewer: annacaroll Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2017 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 17

Perfect! 



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Thank You!!

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2017 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hell yeah!

 

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2017 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 17

He should have stayed out...but I know that he really couldn't as he cares too much for both of them.



Author's Response:

He really does care very much :)

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 17

He should but out. Bella and Edward were meant to be together.



Author's Response:

They are defiently ment to be together!

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2017 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 17

Jasper should have kept his nose out of it! I love Miah.



Author's Response:

I love Miah too!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2017 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

This shout be getting better now that Tanya is out of the picture. Edward will break down Bella's walls.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 16

Such a perfect twist!  How in the heck has edward been controlling himself? 



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Thank You!! He barely is ;)

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2017 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 16

I thought they only  found out when esme told them?

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

Love this story and can't wait to see what you write next....



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 16

awww! I can't wait for the next update.

 



Author's Response:

Thank You!!

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2017 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 16

I loved Edward's point of view! 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

I'm getting whiplash looking for the rest of this chapter!!! No no no i don't want to wait to see their responses! :(



Author's Response:

Hehe Good things come to those who wait. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2017 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 15

Love it can't wait to read more 



Author's Response:

Thank You!!

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 15

Tanya is the worst! It's a good thing he broke up with her. Miah is really sweet. 



Author's Response:

I am so happy also. I love Miah she is just the cutest. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm looking forward to her present day thoughts & meetings with edward!!



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 13

She is slowly getting just abit softer. 



Author's Response:

Yes she is. 

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2017 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 14

It makes so much sense now, why she did what she did with all the marriages. Thanks for the love, by the way. 



Author's Response:

I have to give love to you. You are to amazing not to. 

Reviewer: yana0808 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2017 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 13

loved it update soon 



Author's Response:

I update every thursday thank you

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

Noooo! Ican't wait for an update. this is getting really good! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you 😁😁

Reviewer: ttaylor9901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 13

I am loving this story. I just started reading it. I think that Bella has been closed off for so long that it is going to take her time to adjust. They all just have to be patient. 



Author's Response:

Yes they do. She is defiantly has a hard time opening up but she is getting there

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 13

This is one of those stories you just want to keep reading then you get to the end of a chapter and you are looking for more.  I like this story a lot.  Can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you 😁

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2017 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 13

It was hard to relive her father's death with Esme. And who could be googling her? 



Author's Response:

It was really hard but I feel its a step forward in healing for Bella. And it could be her past catching up to her. 

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

Bella learned how to kiss with Jasper but if the attraction isn't there it means nothing. I wonder why Eric made her feel odd.



Author's Response:

She doesnt feel anything no attraction. 

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 11

Wow, she really does know all the right people.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 10

And the system fails a child again.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

Lots of new people for her to get used to. I wonder how well the Cullens remember her.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2017 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 12

I want to know what edward thinks of her. 



Author's Response:

You just might get lucky πŸ˜‰

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2017 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm worried about Eric with her track record. I hope he's a good guy. 



Author's Response:

I know, things will eventually get better 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2017 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 11

She just wants to rub up on those tattooed arms.



Author's Response:

Yes she does lol

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2017 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 11

Love the way she dealt with Jane. 



Author's Response:

Yes one of my favorite moments. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2017 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 11

Omg love it ,can't wait to read more . Love Bella like this kickass 



Author's Response:

Thank you 😊

Reviewer: mf061978 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 10

Good story so far!  Different from anything else I have read :-)  Poor Bella .... interested to see where this goes ...



Author's Response:

Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying it. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 10

Did she pass out T the sink i wonder? Edward could catch her before she falls. ;)



Author's Response:

Mm it would seem like it wouldn't it lol I guess youll find out. 

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2017 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 10

I did not receive a staus a new chapter had post. So glad i was looking for something to read.



Author's Response:

I think I read that there was a glitch and people favorites were erased. Im glad you found the chapter. Thank you

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow, great chapter

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow, great chapter

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 10

Wow, great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 10

This was a really tough chapter. Hoping she finds her peace through all of this. 



Author's Response:

She will :)

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I wish I could read your responses but the ad banners get in the way.  Not even sure this response is ok because the ad banner is in the way.  Grrrrrr



Author's Response:

:(

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 9

So edward is with tanya. Blah!! 



Author's Response:

For now 😊 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow wonderful update. 



Author's Response:

Thank You

 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 9

Love it ! Can't wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2017 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

Is the next chapter about Bella's past?

Will this all be in Bella's POV?



Author's Response:

The next chapter is in the past. I will do a a couple chapters later on in another point of view but for the majority of this story it will in Bella's view. 

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2017 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter. I hope she and Miah get a chance to bond it's lonely being other. So having someone who understands or can relate to you is a blessing.

XoxoxoxoX
Alia

Author's Response:

Thank you. I am looking forward to the relationship between Miah and Bella. :) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2017 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2017 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thank you for the love! I liked this chapter, because Edward was in it and because we got some insight into her mind present day. 



Author's Response:

I had to give love to you. I was so happy to finally have Edward come in present day. 

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2017 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 8

Poor Bella. In such a short time she's had to adjust to so many different homes. I hope her home with the Denali's will be more pleasant. I also hope Paul keeps an eye on her.



Author's Response:

I know. :( 

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 7

Ah group homes. They don't seem to have a good reputation. I hope Jasper and Bella are safe there.



Author's Response:

They don't have good reputations but I feel the group home would be a better place then some of the other places they could be. Thank you for reading 

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2017 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 6

Samantha knew what was going on. She didn't seem worried about the kids at all. I'm glad Jasper was there for Bella. I still wonder why Irina didn't lock the door when she came in to go to bed. Hopefully their knew temp home is better.



Author's Response:

Yes she didn't care about them. Always about her husband. 

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

John really is creepy. Maybe it's all so fake because Isabella doesn't know what a real family is any more. Where is Irina, and why didn't she lock the door when she came in? Maybe she's glad to have the attention away from her and on to Bella.



Author's Response:

Bella really doesnt know what a family dynamic should be other than what her dad showed her. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 8

These girls could be even worse than the group home!!



Author's Response:

Yes they could be. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2017 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 8

Not sure if this is a good thing or bad. 



Author's Response:

:) Thank you for reading

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2017 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 8

I wonder if she does okay in that house. I like how she's helping out Jasper and Alice. 



Author's Response:

:) Thank you for reading

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2017 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

Not sure if this is a good thing or bad. 



Author's Response:

:) I guess you will find out

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2017 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loving this 



Author's Response:

Thank You !!!! :)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2017 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

Love it ,can't wait to read more 



Author's Response:

Thank You

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2017 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 7

That's not good at all a group home!  Paul needs a swift kick in the nuts!!



Author's Response:

Yes he does and more in my opinion. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2017 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 7

Love your story so far very good ,can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you 😊

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2017 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

Poor kids. Gotta be rough. 



Author's Response:

I know. 😒

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2017 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter! Love that she had one good placement. I also enjoyed seeing how she's dealing with the divorce.

XoxoxoxoX
Alia

Author's Response:

Thank you, I am so happy she got placed there as well. Bella is a strong hearted girl :) 

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2017 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 7

They really needed the warmth of Mrs.Crowe. 



Author's Response:

I know I am glad they got to experience that. :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2017 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 6

Man i wish jasper hit in the head or nuts.



Author's Response:

Yes, it would have been awesome. But he was in more protective mode trying to get him from him coming closer. Thank you for your review. :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2017 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

Crap!  I thought last chapter was the worst of it!  Double crap!  I hope she kills john!



Author's Response:

Sorry, I try too keep you guus on your toes.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 4

Every chapter you shock me a little bit more!



Author's Response:

My plan is working then lol 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2017 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh my goodness & she went to foster care! 



Author's Response:

Yes, it was a difficult chapter for me to write. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2017 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow! I don't see any love for edward in the near future. :(



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

Have they found a temporary peace or another Hell?



Author's Response:

πŸ˜‰

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 2

It's upsetting when a good Charlie dies.



Author's Response:

I know 😒

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 6

That was intense.



Author's Response:

It was intense writing it. But next chapter will be a little less intense. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loving it. Glad they were able to put Jasper and Bella together. 



Author's Response:

Yes, Jasper is pretty much Bella's constant. Thank you !!!!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh no.  Poor Bella. 



Author's Response:

:( I know. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it.  So sad. 



Author's Response:

Thank You!!!

Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

Very evocative writing.

XoxoxoxoX
Alia

Author's Response:

I can't take all the credit. My Beta is amazing. Thank you!

Reviewer: meteoronamoonlessnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2017 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 6

So glad Jasper was there to stop him in time, but technically he still assaulted her. :(



Author's Response:

I know its horrible. But we can always count on Jasper ;) 

Reviewer: hazza20190 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2017 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 5

OH, MY GOD!!!!!!!NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Can't wait for next update. I am shaking in my boots.



Author's Response:

Thank You :)

Reviewer: nikroush Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2017 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it



Author's Response:

Thank you

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hoping either Jasper saves her, or she has a knife under her pillow to cut off his dick!!!!!  Please do not let this 14 year old girl get sexually assaulted by this fucking dirtbag.



Author's Response:

I am going to thank you for your review becaue I love that you did. :)

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