Date: 17 Feb 2017 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
Is the next chapter about Bella's past?
Will this all be in Bella's POV?
The next chapter is in the past. I will do a a couple chapters later on in another point of view but for the majority of this story it will in Bella's view.
Date: 16 Feb 2017 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter. I hope she and Miah get a chance to bond it's lonely being other. So having someone who understands or can relate to you is a blessing.
Thank you. I am looking forward to the relationship between Miah and Bella. :)
Date: 16 Feb 2017 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thank you for the love! I liked this chapter, because Edward was in it and because we got some insight into her mind present day.
I had to give love to you. I was so happy to finally have Edward come in present day.
Date: 16 Feb 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ah group homes. They don't seem to have a good reputation. I hope Jasper and Bella are safe there.
They don't have good reputations but I feel the group home would be a better place then some of the other places they could be. Thank you for reading
Date: 16 Feb 2017 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
Samantha knew what was going on. She didn't seem worried about the kids at all. I'm glad Jasper was there for Bella. I still wonder why Irina didn't lock the door when she came in to go to bed. Hopefully their knew temp home is better.
Yes she didn't care about them. Always about her husband.
Date: 16 Feb 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
John really is creepy. Maybe it's all so fake because Isabella doesn't know what a real family is any more. Where is Irina, and why didn't she lock the door when she came in? Maybe she's glad to have the attention away from her and on to Bella.
Bella really doesnt know what a family dynamic should be other than what her dad showed her.
Date: 26 Jan 2017 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter! Love that she had one good placement. I also enjoyed seeing how she's dealing with the divorce.
Thank you, I am so happy she got placed there as well. Bella is a strong hearted girl :)
Date: 12 Jan 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hoping either Jasper saves her, or she has a knife under her pillow to cut off his dick!!!!! Please do not let this 14 year old girl get sexually assaulted by this fucking dirtbag.
I am going to thank you for your review becaue I love that you did. :)
Date: 06 Jan 2017 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, this is the beginning of a very hard life for Bella. She and her mom didn't get along but she always had her dad as support. Now she's going to have to battle her mom to live a normal life and to take care of her. Her mom is a mess.
Date: 05 Jan 2017 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, there are so many laws that really just do not make living easy. Bella should have been permitted to receive early emancipation. Shame.
There is, I looked it up 16 and has to be able to financially support yourself with any state assistance. Crazy
Date: 01 Jan 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think you found a Beta for the first two chapters. You have a wonderful plot, just need to have someone help make it structurally sound. Really liking it so far. Has great potential.
Thank you, I am trying. :)
Date: 29 Dec 2016 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving it so far. If you want a beta post on Facebook, especially in groups like "pay it forward" or "The no rules Twilight fanfiction club".
Thank you I will defiently look into those.