Date: 26 Jan 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
They really needed the warmth of Mrs.Crowe.
Author's Response:
I know I am glad they got to experience that. :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2017 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
Man i wish jasper hit in the head or nuts.
Author's Response:
Yes, it would have been awesome. But he was in more protective mode trying to get him from him coming closer. Thank you for your review. :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2017 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
Crap! I thought last chapter was the worst of it! Double crap! I hope she kills john!
Author's Response:
Sorry, I try too keep you guus on your toes.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Every chapter you shock me a little bit more!
Author's Response:
My plan is working then lol
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my goodness & she went to foster care!
Author's Response:
Yes, it was a difficult chapter for me to write.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jan 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! I don't see any love for edward in the near future. :(
Author's Response:
;)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
Have they found a temporary peace or another Hell?
Author's Response:
😉
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2017 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
It's upsetting when a good Charlie dies.
Author's Response:
I know 😢
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2017 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
That was intense.
Author's Response:
It was intense writing it. But next chapter will be a little less intense.
Date: 20 Jan 2017 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loving it. Glad they were able to put Jasper and Bella together.
Author's Response:
Yes, Jasper is pretty much Bella's constant. Thank you !!!!
Date: 20 Jan 2017 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh no. Poor Bella.
Author's Response:
:( I know.
Date: 20 Jan 2017 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it. So sad.
Author's Response:
Thank You!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
Very evocative writing.
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Author's Response:
I can't take all the credit. My Beta is amazing. Thank you!
Date: 19 Jan 2017 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
So glad Jasper was there to stop him in time, but technically he still assaulted her. :(
Author's Response:
I know its horrible. But we can always count on Jasper ;)
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2017 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
OH, MY GOD!!!!!!!NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Can't wait for next update. I am shaking in my boots.
Author's Response:
Thank You :)
Date: 13 Jan 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love it
Author's Response:
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2017 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Hoping either Jasper saves her, or she has a knife under her pillow to cut off his dick!!!!! Please do not let this 14 year old girl get sexually assaulted by this fucking dirtbag.
Author's Response:
I am going to thank you for your review becaue I love that you did. :)
Date: 12 Jan 2017 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
I love Jasper. But John's got me worried!
Author's Response:
I love Jasper he only gets better in my opinion. And John is a scary dude :(
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
omg, I can't wait for what is going to happen. John seems like a real creep. Hopefully,she does not have to stay there long.
Date: 06 Jan 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
You wonder how people like John can be foster parents. I can only think it's for the money. I like the voice recognition computer program she has. And I like that she used her father's name to talk to.
Date: 06 Jan 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, her mom was using drugs. I'm not surprised Child Services pulled her out. Her mom off of her meds was no parent to her. I wonder what history she has with Jasper. Alice must not be worried.
Date: 06 Jan 2017 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, this is the beginning of a very hard life for Bella. She and her mom didn't get along but she always had her dad as support. Now she's going to have to battle her mom to live a normal life and to take care of her. Her mom is a mess.
Date: 06 Jan 2017 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hmmmm this looks interesting. I wonder who she inherited her smarts from. If her mom had her way she'd never step foot outside that house. Maybe this group of kids will accept her and not just use her.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved the chapter.
Date: 05 Jan 2017 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm excited to see where this is going!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2017 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, there are so many laws that really just do not make living easy. Bella should have been permitted to receive early emancipation. Shame.
Author's Response:
There is, I looked it up 16 and has to be able to financially support yourself with any state assistance. Crazy
Date: 04 Jan 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
do you have a beta reader???
Author's Response:
Yes
Date: 04 Jan 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you, so far, so good.
Date: 03 Jan 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
How often are you planning on posting??? Don't leave us!!
Author's Response:
My plan is to post new chapters every Thursday. No worried I won't leave you guys hanging to long. :)
Date: 01 Jan 2017 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
It shows. There is a definite difference between chapters 1 and 2 in comparison to 3. Whoever is helping you edit the chapter is working well.
Date: 01 Jan 2017 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
It shows. There is a definite difference between chapters 1 and 2 in comparison to 3. Whoever is helping you edit the chapter is working well.
Date: 01 Jan 2017 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think I'm going to like Alice.
Date: 01 Jan 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 2
Shorter, but with good information.
Date: 01 Jan 2017 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
:) I'm happy to see where this is going.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think you found a Beta for the first two chapters. You have a wonderful plot, just need to have someone help make it structurally sound. Really liking it so far. Has great potential.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I am trying. :)
Date: 01 Jan 2017 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, it was a very emotional chapter. I can see that this is just the beginning of Bella's problems.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start to what appears to be a entertaining story. How she went from genius to a four time con-artist divorcee, should be interesting.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2016 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving it so far. If you want a beta post on Facebook, especially in groups like "pay it forward" or "The no rules Twilight fanfiction club".
XoxoxoxoX
Alia West
Author's Response:
Thank you I will defiently look into those.
Date: 29 Dec 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
i want to know the history of Bella and jasper ☺
Author's Response:
All in good time. :)
Date: 28 Dec 2016 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella seems to have nobody who is there for her emotionally, poor girl.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2016 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hugs! Great start. Can't wait to see where you go from here.
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Date: 27 Dec 2016 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'd like to find out more about how sweet 14-year-old Bella turned into a calculating soon-to-be 4 times divorced woman and hopefully see her find something of that girl inside her again.
Author's Response:
:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2016 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
She is a super genius! I love the story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope that you like the next chapter just as much.
Date: 27 Dec 2016 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
this is going to be ‘
Author's Response:
I hope that is a good thing. I am working deligently on the next chapter. I am wanting to keep it at weekly updates.