Date: 21 Feb 2017 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
It just getting exciting now and you pull back.....Lol. looking forward to learning the truth behind this form of Royalty where Edward and Bella belong. As well as the active roles Emmett and Rosalie will play.
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
Goof Lord I am so impatient.... Can't wait to see what is next!
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
I have to tell you i really enjoy stories that are mostly EPOV, so this one really has me drawn in. Plus I love the way you write so it is win / win for me all around!! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMG get that money back for these two.... Another horrible Carlisle.... death to the dictator!!!!! Lol I waited to start reading this but now i am HOOKED !!! <3 ya girlie!!
Date: 20 Feb 2017 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMGosh, what is going on? Now I am caught up. I wish there were more chaptersfor me to read. Now I will have to wait. I am going to put this story on alert again and hopefully this time I will get update notices. Can't wait to find out what is going on with everyone in this story. Hope you update soon.
Date: 20 Feb 2017 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad he told Bella his story.
Date: 20 Feb 2017 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
I LOVE IT... OMG IM SO EXCITED
Date: 20 Feb 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
How long has Bella known about her powers. Heck, she should use her fireball and hit Jake with it. She seems very clam about what she and Edward can do.
Date: 20 Feb 2017 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well well well it seems Carmen knew all along I can't wait to read how she knows everything update soon
Date: 20 Feb 2017 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
What in the world is going on with Edward?
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
Glad Emmett is going to help Bella
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh! I like that! Not entirely of this world! Now that's a turn of events that I didn't see coming, but am very intrigued by! Can't wait to hear more. Thanks!
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
So.excited how I have ever not been getting update notices from the site. I saw on FB where you updated today. When I went to read the chapter I was confused. Looked back and realized that I had missed several chapters. I will be getting caught soon.
Date: 19 Feb 2017 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good chapter ! I really like this story so far !
Date: 15 Feb 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yea Cullens are arseholes.....now why do I get the feeling that Carlisle and Jacob will be teaming up for something?
Date: 15 Feb 2017 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
ooh so B makes the connection first. Jake really needs to die....burning bed would be too good for him
Date: 13 Feb 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
He will keep his distance throughout Bella's divorce proceedings. But she will become more tempting as the case progresses.
Date: 13 Feb 2017 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
They have opposite powers, it seems. That should make them complimentary and perfect for each other. I'm eager to see where this story goes. Thanks!
Date: 13 Feb 2017 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow they both have had to face hard time but what will happen next how will they learn about their true nature
Date: 10 Feb 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love this story ! Can't wait to see where it goes ! Keep up the great work !
Date: 07 Feb 2017 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
Keep on writing
Date: 07 Feb 2017 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting storyline
Date: 07 Feb 2017 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
Omg so awesome
Date: 06 Feb 2017 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow so she new before him will she be able to help him with his power and together will they stop Jacob
Date: 06 Feb 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
Nous vous remercions de ce chapitre.
Baisers
Date: 06 Feb 2017 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
How did Bella recognize Edward's gift so quickly? Did either one of her parents have a gift?
Is Alice gifted as well?
What form of evil does Jacob manifest?
Date: 05 Feb 2017 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Fire and Ice! I like that. I like THIS! Thanks...
Date: 24 Jan 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
Sounds like Carmen would be a great one to go after the 'rents. Wonder if any of thier trust fund money is even left. Politics is a nasty expensive business.
Date: 23 Jan 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can Edward manipulate any other aspects of the weather?
How quickly will Carmen's actions against Alice and Edward's parents become public knowledge. Will it affect his ability to practice law or hurt Alice's business?
Date: 23 Jan 2017 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
My Oh my I hope the both go after their parents and blow the roof off there fake happy family and show everyone who they really are now what is next hmmmmm
Date: 22 Jan 2017 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
I never watched Frozen, so your reference means nothing to me. Can I understand this story without knowing that story? I get that he can freeze things when he gets upset. Is that part of it? This is me leaving you some love, dear. I do love all that you give us...
Date: 22 Jan 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Just so long as you don't call him "Mr. FREEZE"! Like this a lot so far
Date: 18 Jan 2017 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
The question should be, who's covering up the trail of evidence that Detective Black leaves in his wake? Somehow get the feeling that Representative Cullen is embroiled in this ugly mess.
What is this thing that becomes stronger when Bella and Edward are near each other? Do they possess gifts that were meant to be used together? Creating soulmates?
Date: 17 Jan 2017 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
Not sure whether I like Alice yet or not. Glad E got Em to come and believe her.
Date: 17 Jan 2017 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
YES!!!!LET'S MAKE BLACK PAY!!
Date: 16 Jan 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow she went through hell now what will happen when Jacob finds out she pressed charges against him
Date: 16 Jan 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
So she has magic within her also? They will make a powerful couple, if so! Is this Monday's chapter you have given us on Sunday? I'm now confused...oh well, it doesn't really matter. I know you give us what you can, when you can.
Date: 16 Jan 2017 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 3
OMG ! I can't wait to read more ! I am so hooked with just 3 chapters !love your story .
Date: 16 Jan 2017 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
I hope Jacob gets all that he deserves
Date: 10 Jan 2017 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
oooh E is getting his magic mojo on. Can't wait to see where you to it
Date: 10 Jan 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella a vraiment besoin d'aide.
Baisers
Date: 10 Jan 2017 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella has no family living or no family that will aid her?
Does Mr. Black pay for his crimes against his wife?
How is it that Carmen always seems to be at the right place at the right time when Edward needs her? Can she sense Edward's gift?
Date: 10 Jan 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice set up to Edward's path of recovery.
He won't need his parents once he discovers all he said capable of doing. At least Alice is a true friend and lived one.
Date: 10 Jan 2017 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love it so far!
Date: 09 Jan 2017 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my poor Bella she has been living through hell will they be able to save her from her husband
Date: 09 Jan 2017 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
The touch of magic in the chapter was very well done. My heart breaks for Bella.
Date: 09 Jan 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
I feel so bad for Bella. I hope Edward and Carmen can keep her safe. I hope Jake getshirts what he deserves. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 08 Jan 2017 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
and so the spark ignites and their dance begins. i can't wait to see what else besides suddenly appearing keys you do with this magic thing. and I bet she warms him up, in more ways than one. a unique story, this seems to be. thanks!
Date: 08 Jan 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! Talk about sparks!!
Date: 03 Jan 2017 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks very promising. .... pleas update soon
Date: 03 Jan 2017 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Looks very promising. .... pleas update soon
Date: 03 Jan 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing start. Can't wait to read more and find out why he had a breakdown.
Date: 02 Jan 2017 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow. WHat a start. Hope he washed his hands from his "parents" when they come a callin' as I know they will for something
Date: 02 Jan 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Poor guy! Let him catch a break. Hope to hear from you soon. Thanks!
Date: 02 Jan 2017 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 02 Jan 2017 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
love it....love fire and ice picture
Date: 02 Jan 2017 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the start of it
Date: 02 Jan 2017 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looking forward to more
Date: 02 Jan 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excited for more! ;)
Date: 01 Jan 2017 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting. I can't wait to see what is next! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 01 Jan 2017 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
My Oh my he went from the top to the bottom quickly but will Bella be the the key for him I can't wait to read more
Date: 01 Jan 2017 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
He's a lawyer. Sue them all for discrimination!
Date: 01 Jan 2017 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Technically Edward could have rebuilt his rep by sueing the crap out of his firm for firing him over mental health reasons as it is just as illegal as firing him for medical reasons.
Author's Response:
That will be coming, but he didn't want to deal with it. He was a mess. LOL! Thank you for reading and reviewing! :-)
Date: 01 Jan 2017 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ah! A new story for the new year! You never cease to amaze me. I love reading your stories, though sometimes a character here and there annoys or irritates me. No matter, it's all good! This one appeals greatly, based on the anticipated magic element! Thanks!!