Date: 25 Feb 2017 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
Realization is finally hitting poor Bella. I hope she finds her balls and walks away from Jacob even if it means starting a new job at the bottom to work her way UP and prove she is worth more than being Jacob's doormat trophy bride. Hmmm!!! Maybe being a ranchers bride is what will bring her the happiness she so deserves. READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 18 Feb 2017 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love this and the slow burn, but am also a hypocrite and impatient waiting a whole week! πReally like the storyline and the characters are shaping up nicely, wonderfully horrid Blacks! Do you have the story written already or is it a "work in progress"?
Hey nell67, glad you are enjoying it! I am writing as I go but with a ten chapter buffer between writing and publishing so that I can edit and have some slack for those times when I am not feeling creative! I hope that puts your mind at east that this is not going to stop suddenly!
Date: 06 Feb 2017 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
This chapter left me rethihinking whether or not to continue.....I mean Seriously!!!!! Bella said nothing to them while they belittled her and Rose...that's NOT! our Rose. Our Rose would never have allowed anyone make Bella feel like an insignificant nothing. Sad and disappointing chapter.
I get what you are saying but Bella and Jacob have been together for over ten years. Can you imagine how many scenes like there has been? For Rose to be Bella's only remaining friend she will have had to learn to temper her responses to Jacob and his family so that Bella is not forced to choose between Jacob or Rose. This is part of the reason why Rose is so passive aggressive toward the Black family, she can't lash out as she might like.
I hope that helps explain where I am coming from. LL X