Date: 04 Jun 2017 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 03 Jun 2017 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think Brad should have Emmett and Rose take Bella and leave.
Date: 03 Jun 2017 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG my heart just breaks for all of them. Esme is getting hot all over ;)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2017 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh my heart is breaking for Carlisle but I think his heart knows Bella is still alive
Date: 03 Jun 2017 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
Did Elizabeth died ?
Date: 03 Jun 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
My heart breaks for Carlisle and Edward. I can't wait for Aro to get what is coming to him.
Date: 03 Jun 2017 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
I feel so bad for Lizzy Bella and Edward.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2017 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it! Love me some yummy Carlisle. So sad about how heart broken he was.
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2017 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
And oh I can NOT wait for that day!! I wonder how you will do it. I will never forget the pig manure story!! This chapter I could hardly read, it was so heartbreaking and that bastard Aro - he needs to be shot and pissed on!! He causes severe revulsion in your stories and it's all I can do when I read his name. Well done, busy lady! One day at a time.
Date: 03 Jun 2017 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
I really hope that Aro and Caius get what's come no to them soon.
Date: 03 Jun 2017 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was so sad but Esme and Edward are getting closer to Carlisle now.
Date: 03 Jun 2017 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loving this story so far and the lastest chapter made me tear up too.
Date: 02 Jun 2017 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 7
I was so excited to see this update. I love that Emmett and Rosalie have been introduced and that Brad has been able to figure out exactly who Bree is. Can't wait to read more!
Date: 01 Jun 2017 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved this story and please up date soon...ππππ’—π’—π’—
Date: 01 Jun 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hmm Does Brad know something we don't? Please update soon!
Date: 29 May 2017 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
Is he going to tell Emmett??? And will Emmett look around into Carlisle Cullen????? Hmmmmm KEEP WRITING!!! HAPPY MEMORIAL DAY!!!π’–π’π‘
Date: 28 May 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
Brad is a good man and wants what is best for Bella and now that he knows who she is. I hope he is able to make things right but that will be when she is able to get into the safty depost box.
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2017 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh I love it so far I can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2017 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh I love it so far I can't wait for more
Date: 28 May 2017 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more π’
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2017 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it!
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Date: 28 May 2017 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 7
Brad thinks something is going to happen soon?
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2017 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
I absolutely love this story, and I can't wait for Isabella to be reunited with her father. I figure there is a long road ahead but I am waiting patiently for Edward to grow up and find her lol. Or, for Emmett and Rosalie to do the right thing and take her home, but I guess that will be waiting with bated breath to happen! Amazing story, can't wait for the next update! And, REALLY can't wait for Ark and Caius to get what's coming to them!!!
Date: 28 May 2017 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 7
Things are looking up for Lizzy Bell.
Date: 28 May 2017 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
Louise and Brad are in mortal danger.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2017 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love this story can't wait to read more
Date: 19 May 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Carlisle and Esme. How sad for Lizzy Bell and Edward. I can see Carlisle and Esme getting together. Someone needs to do something about Aro and James.
Date: 16 May 2017 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
lol for E's language. Can't wait for Aro to pay and Caius too.
Date: 16 May 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor B At least he left her with nice people and not pedophiles or something
Date: 16 May 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
ugh hope Aro pays dearly for this betrayal. Poor Lizzy
Date: 16 May 2017 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Glad Carlisle is respecting his vows. Love his and lizzy's interaction. Aro and Caius need to die.
Date: 16 May 2017 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Date: 15 May 2017 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 6
We are so sorry that we have not review it has been very busy since swift water started and with my kids graduating and floods it's crazy. OK Carlisle has to remember the look on Arm's face and know he had something to do with this.
We are going to catch up to you tonight and feel free if I don't review that day pm me on Facebook.
KEEP WRITING!!!!π‘π’π’–π’HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY!!!!
Date: 13 May 2017 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is so cute.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm curious to see if Aro's plan worked.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
She sure talks well for being 12 months old, and to be able to name people in the picture, wow.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
Does anyone else have the same birthmark in the family?
Date: 12 May 2017 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love Edwards colorful language. Lol. I feel sorry for Carlisle and Esme. I am glad that Carlisle suspects Aro a little. Maybe he will follow his instinct on this.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2017 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
great story,thanks for sharing.
Date: 12 May 2017 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
So much pain for both of them. I hope Carlisle is on to his brother. Aro and his cronies need to die a painful death
Date: 12 May 2017 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
Poor little Bella OMG so sad
Date: 12 May 2017 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
OH Shit this is freaking me out
Date: 11 May 2017 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Little Edward seems like a darling child. Loving the story.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2017 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW, such a change of storylines. Very interesting!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2017 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Izzy Bell. I hope Carlisle starts kicking ass and taking names!
Date: 02 Apr 2017 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
Sorry we're watching Fifty Shades of Grey on USA channel so that is why this is late.
We wonder if Izzy will tell them who she really is????
KEEP WRITING!!!!!π’–π’π‘π°
Date: 01 Apr 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
Bella is Carlisle and Elizabeth ' so daughter?
Date: 01 Apr 2017 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait for more
Date: 01 Apr 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, he did not even say goodbye. I hope this couple is nice to Lizzy Bell.
Date: 01 Apr 2017 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor kid. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2017 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
I want to say how could Caius. The hate I feel towards him is not even close to being total. That poor child and such an older couple! I certainly pray that they are good to her especially when they have animals which they seem to take great pride in. Clo, I love your writing, I can feel the emotions and the characters are so real to me. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Date: 26 Mar 2017 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
GAH! I love this story!!! Can't wait for another update! :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2017 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
How so very scary for Carlisle! Not sure if them finding Ben was part of Aro's evil plan or not, but at least Carlisle knows there's something seriously wrong now.
I'm so afraid for LizzyBell, but she's smart and I know she will figure things out. Also she's very perceptive of peeps. She didn't like Caius and is scared of her Uncle Aro. I'm glad she has "Eddie" with her. Got a feeling that little lamb will be a big key to the story later on.
Love you, my sweet girl! Write on, when you get the chance. I'm longing for more. {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for Aro and Cassius to get what they deserve!
Date: 18 Mar 2017 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
I was wondering how u were going to get Esme and. Arliske together! Good plan!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2017 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
I always adore your work. So unfortunate that the spouses were killed but it sets up for a relationship between esme and Carlisle. Anxiously waiting to see how Lizzy gets back to her dada.
Date: 13 Mar 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great update,can't wait for the next one.
Date: 13 Mar 2017 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Reads like it is going to be very good
Date: 13 Mar 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 4
We are your support crew!!! Sorry it's late but we have been dealing with a brush fire near houses pic are on my Facebook page!!!
OK so hypothetical if Carlisle doesn't die and he married Esme could Edward take over as boss??? Cause that is what we are betting on happening!!!
KEEP WRITING!!!!π’–π’π‘π
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2017 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
Omg ! Love your story can't wait to read more!
Date: 12 Mar 2017 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
OMGosh, Carlisle is going to lose his cool. How is he ever going to find Lizzy Bell? Does he have cameras set up around his house? I hope so. Can't wait for more of this story and your new story.
Date: 07 Mar 2017 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Please update.....π…π…π…
Date: 28 Feb 2017 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
So glad u started another story so quickly. I was going through Bound withdrawal!
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Not to sound insensitive but the door just opened up for Esme and Carlisle.....and Edward now has a role model in Carlisle.... Can't wait Please update ASAP. READ YOU SOON : )
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2017 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like how you used Stephanie Meyer's characters and twisted them into your own. Lizzy Bell huh? It's different that's for sure. Great start but let's face it there was never any doubt that this like all your other creations would be anything less than perfection. Is there a set update schedule????
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2017 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
Not to sound insensitive but the door just opened up for Esme and Carlisle.....and Edward now has a role model in Carlisle.... Can't wait Please update ASAP. READ YOU SOON : )
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Another enticing story to look forward to. I'm glad it's a mafia story you do them to perfection. It's gonna take a little getting used to the characters and there chosen partners but we'll adapt in time (he he he) READ YOU SOON : )
Date: 19 Feb 2017 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
No Carlise it's a trap don't go!!! Send your men in first.
Also we voted today for Bound and have everyday!!!!
KEEP WRITING!!!!β€π‘π’π”₯
Date: 19 Feb 2017 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella is going to be ripped from her family and told they are dead her little heart is going to break.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
Is edward going to be the one to take over bc lizzy bell is missing?
Date: 18 Feb 2017 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
loving the story but I do miss your pictures; can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
I know it's coming but dreading what's going to happen to poor Lizzy Bell..can't wait till she's grown up already.
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2017 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't think of myself as violent, but I want to smack the snot outta Aro! I can't believe they're doing this to Lizzy Bell. Well, on the positive side, Edward will have no problem with a role model once Carlisle is a little less grief stricken. Got a feeling he will marry the newly widowed Esme and become his father. Question is will Edward then become the new DomWard when he turns 25? Or will it go to the eldest Aro twin son?
And poor LizzyBreeBell! Bet she never forgets how to put a gun together or who she truly is. At least I hope she doesn't.
Oh, how I'm loving this story, my sweet girl! Write on when you can. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 18 Feb 2017 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh No!! Please tell me their plan is not going to work!!!!! This is so sad!!
Date: 18 Feb 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
OMGosh!!!! I hope they don't hurt Lizzy. Carlisle needs to tell Elizabeth that Lizzy can not leave the house for now.
Date: 17 Feb 2017 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
So sorry it's late but we had a death in the crew and it has been a crazy week but it's catch up Day and your support crew is here.
Ok so could Carlise have someone impersonate him??? Just something to think about!!!
KEEP WRITING!!!!π’π‘β€π”₯
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2017 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love the name lizzy bell! So super cute! And to make it even better edward & her know each other as babies. I'm hooked!
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2017 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
What is aro going to do??
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2017 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well, I already hate Aro with a passion. And of course adore Lizzy Bella, DadaCarlisle, MamaElizabeth, and little Edward. Got a feeling he will fall quickly for Lizzy Bell on those play dates.
I'm concerned for the plotting going on, but hopefully Lizzy Bell will somehow come out unscathed and one day rule the family.
Loving this story, and adoring you. {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 14 Feb 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Afraid of what Aro intends to do. Anxious for what is to come. Loving everything. A big kiss from Brazil.
Date: 13 Feb 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it..more please
Date: 13 Feb 2017 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
There is nothing better than being a daddys girl I was and my little girl is to but she loves me just as much but she knows how to work her dad lol. Aro needs his balls cut off.
Date: 13 Feb 2017 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more