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Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 11:47 PM Title: Epilogue

How do you do it? Each of your stories is amazing. Thank you for continuing to bring us wonderful tales. This one was a really good drama I really enjoyed it. Looking forward to the next.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 4:53 PM Title: Epilogue

Thanks! I loved this story. Perfect ending :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 8:48 PM Title: Epilogue

So glad they got their HEA. Loved this :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you for always reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 4:20 PM Title: Epilogue

Love the perfect ending



Author's Response:

They deserved it!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2017 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 22

After everything Im so loving this



Author's Response:

 They need it, don't they? 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thanks!

Author's Response:

 Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 21

awwwww



Author's Response:

 Thank you! They're cute, aren't they?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks! I'm loving this story ☺

Author's Response:

That's wonderful, thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

OMG I feel relief. And I can believe it :)



Author's Response:

I appreciate it. I did a ton of research, but you never know.

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thank You!!! Love it!

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thank You!!! Love it!



Author's Response:

Good! Thank you too!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

It takes a lot for me to tear up but this made me do it. Omg



Author's Response:

Then I did my job! I cry at everything.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 19

This is so sad.  I hope Edward is alive 



Author's Response:

Always have hope!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

That was gut wrenching!  Good thing we didn't get those two chapters in the same day.  Emmett getting to be with mallie was probably the hardest to read. 



Author's Response:

I agree with you about E & M. 

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

Ugh! So heartbreaking!  I hope Edward can come back!  I don't believe he is dead!



Author's Response:

Hope is always a good thing!

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 19

Hey! So he is really dead? He's not being held hostage somewhere? I though this was a hea



Author's Response:

It is an HEA. Your answers come in the next chapter.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2017 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

I am just hoping edward had to fake his death & emmett can now get out of jail.



Author's Response:

 There's nothing I can say!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2017 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

Crap!  I know there is light by chapter 20 but knowing we have to get there and need tissues is scary!  For now though just freakin run bella!!



Author's Response:

 It is scary. She ran!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

Maybe she can kill him easier. 



Author's Response:

 Yes, yes she can!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

I hope Edward wasn't in the house 



Author's Response:

I appreciate that sentiment.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 18

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! 😰😰😰😰😰



Author's Response:

😭😭😭

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

Is Edward actually dead!? Please tell me he's not dead! I can't handle it if he is actually dead because they were just working things out being a couple again! Please please let him have not been in the house but out looking for Bella and is now in hiding! Please don't kill him! 



Author's Response:

 You know I can’t answer any of that!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2017 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2017 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

Please tell me she actually killed him!? I will be so happy if she did cause he totally deserves it! I still can't believe that he forced her to marry him! She so better run as fast as she can and get Edward and get out!



Author's Response:

We'll have to wait and see!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2017 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

Please tell me she actually killed him!? I will be so happy if she did cause he totally deserves it! I still can't believe that he forced her to marry him! She so better run as fast as she can and get Edward and get out!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2017 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 17

OMG OMG OMG!!



Author's Response:

And then comes 18, and you'll be saying more of that!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

I hope she gets away 



Author's Response:

Yes, let's hope she does.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2017 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 16

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Bella 



Author's Response:

She’s got a long road ahead

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

At least malone is safe!  I expected rose to be dead not a trashy hood rat! 



Author's Response:

She's hanging on by a thread!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

Finally some good face sucking!! What are they going to do about the note that was left??



Author's Response:

LOL Mallie is safe, and they're going to pretend they're keeping away from each other.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 13

I need sue to stay away more than just a few minutes so they can get a few better kisses in. Haha!! 



Author's Response:

That's hilarious!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

I hope she doesn't get taken or the little girl doesn't get hurt. 



Author's Response:

Mallie will be safe.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 11

I did not skip ahead or guess sue.  I love how you used the words cushiony curves. 



Author's Response:

LOL And thank you!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

I hope she called edward!!



Author's Response:

Also not yet. :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

Did they threaten emmet's daughter?



Author's Response:

Not yet

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 8

Is edward going to kiss and make it better?



Author's Response:

He really should!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

Now the kissing can begin!! We've gotten the first one out of the way!



Author's Response:

That sounds like a plan!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 6

Was rose all about the inheritance? 



Author's Response:

Yes, absolutely.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

Some of those then chapters are heartbreaking. :(



Author's Response:

That's true.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

The simple worries of teenagers but seem so earth shattering at their age. 



Author's Response:

They do, and they kind of are.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2017 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

I for some reason have not been getting updates..... The good thing id i have lots to read now to catch up! Yeah me!



Author's Response:

Oh, I've seen something on the STARS FB group about a limited number of emails going out or something. I'm glad you found the updates!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

Omg this is getting so good. 



Author's Response:

Just remember next chapter that you said that!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2017 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2017 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 14

Omg i really thought Tanya lol this is makes my day cant wait till next week



Author's Response:

Lol, she's in Alaska hugging on the little one! Just a cousin in this story, but a good guess. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more πŸ’™ 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

Thanks!

Author's Response:

:) Thanks!

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love this!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2017 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 13

I cann't wait to see all them fall. 



Author's Response:

 They really need to go down!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 12

I will hold you to it lol. I really like the light and happiness of this chapter. 



Author's Response:

Lol. That's what happens when I get ahead of myself. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2017 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2017 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 11

OMG OMG OMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!! I am so ready for next weeK



Author's Response:

Thank you! That's good to hear! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for always reviewing! 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2017 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

Please tell me she called edward or at least angela! 



Author's Response:

I'm not telling!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

Is he thinking he has to keep malone safe & keep his heart safe too?



Author's Response:

He's on that fence, warring between those things and risking it all for her. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

Goodness, i hope he is willing to help her in anyway possible.



Author's Response:

Not yet, but he'll get there.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

I can't remember the last story that made me this crazy!



Author's Response:

I hope in a good way!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love the name malone!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! It has meaning, but it will be a long time before it's revealed. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 5

He was so cut throat with her.  I actually didn't believe he would be that way with her. 



Author's Response:

Oh, definitely. She did some awful things to him years ago and there have been rumors spread to make all of it worse.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 4

Ok so edward isn't part of thr mob? I didn't not realize that.



Author's Response:

No, Jake is the mob boss in this one. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

How could anyone turn away at this point? I'm guessing he adopted emmett's daughter.



Author's Response:

That's very clever of you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2017 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

OMG Poor Bella, I think she called Jasper or maybe Edward but I have money on Jasper lol. I love how confident she was a a twelve year old. 



Author's Response:

We'llhave to see who it is! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2017 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Bella 



Author's Response:

She's going to get the help she's been needing. 😊

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2017 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2017 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 9

Omg i just want to rip my heart out so much pain. You are doinig so amazing making me feel their pain. 



Author's Response:

We're definitely still in the pain stages, but they'll move past that soon.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2017 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

OMG OMG OMG OMG OM GOMGOMGOMGOMGOGMGOGMOGMGOMGMGOM Thank goodnessss for Edward. What bastards they are I need more I hope this week passes quickly. Amazing Job!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol, thank you! 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2017 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

I am just so confused as I am sure Edward is as well. I can actually picture him standing there stunned silent by her running again.

Great story!



Author's Response:

That's pretty much the exact picture I was trying to paint. Thank you. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 7

Breath in and out. I love the chapter. And I have signed up for emails for the blog. I am so heart broken for these two. Any happy chapters coming up soon lol



Author's Response:

That's great! Happy chapters are in the works, but hopeful chapters are coming. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Hanastasio Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love your story.



Author's Response:

I appreciate it. <3

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 6

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2017 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2017 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2017 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

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Date: 20 Mar 2017 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2017 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow, I am glad she might have a friend now. I hope Emmett isn't involved in the BS of Jacob and Paul. 



Author's Response:

Angela is going to be a good friend. It depends on your definition of involved. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2017 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow. I feel so much for Bella nd Edward. I want to hug them. 



Author's Response:

They could probably use it right now! 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2017 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh wow! Poor Bella. Shame on Charlie. 



Author's Response:

I know! Charlie is awful. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2017 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

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Date: 27 Feb 2017 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2017 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

Omg its amazing and it hurts I cant wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 3

Okay I'm gonna try and trust you on this whole Edward having a kid situation.  I mean it's totally possible that he adopted her or maybe she belonged to Emmett and Rosalie and they both died so he took Mallie in and raised her himself or she could be a foster kid or there is the chance that she is biologically Edward's and I'm kind of hoping she's not really Edward's daughter. Cause that means at some point he moved on from Bella and had another love which would break my heart and has already technically broken Bella's heart. I'm trusting you with my heart don't break it please. I feel bad for Bella though. I mean obviously we know she didn't want to leave Edward but she did, like a reverse New Moon, and now she is being forced back for some reason. I really want to know more about the past and what drove Bella to push Edward away and what Charlie is involved with and why Renee ran from him and what is forcing Bella back now and will Edward forgive her for what happened in the past and most importantly will Bella forgive herself for what she did in the past. Ugh so many unanswered questions that I'm dying to have answered! Seriously hoping though that Mallie really isn't Edward's daughter. Hope that doesn't make me a bad person...



Author's Response:

I love your review, because you're open to whatever comes, even though you're hoping for something in particular. We're really close to finding out part of the mystery, it's coming in the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2017 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

Okay I am so intrigued right now! Two chapters in and I'm already begging to know what happened four years ago between Bella and Edward! Maybe Edward and Charlie are mafia or involved with the mafia? Obviously Bella's mom didn't want her at all involved with whatever Charlie had gotten himself involved in which obviously deals with criminals! And we know that Bella is being forced back to Forks when she doesn't want to but it seems like she doesn't really have a choice in the matter. I really wanna know what she did that ruined a bunch of people's lives! Did she get pregnant and then have an abortion maybe? I know it said that she helped the men she had been smart enough to hate since middle school but it also says she trusted the wrong person and that's how she ruined a bunch of people's live in one swoop. Ugh this story is going to torture me with its mystery! I mean I love a good mystery but it's gonna kill me to have to play detective and not know what happened until things unravel chapter by chapter! But hey you have me officially hooked and I am strapped in and ready for the ride. Just promise me it's canon Edward and Bella and no Jacob involved as anything more than an acquaintance or maybe make him the bad guy! I don't care for Jacob much or make him super gay so he doesn't try to get with Bella!



Author's Response:

Lol, I love your enthusiasm in your review. I don't think I can answer any of your speculations, except that you're right about Renée. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

I have a love at relationship with mystery and suspense. I want to know what is going on but I love trying to figure it out to and see if I am right lol.  



Author's Response:

I'm very much the same way! 

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