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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2023 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it 

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2018 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 7

Hiya...loving the story,  but it' killing my eyes!

Can you maybe repost in a format that can increase the font size? Hate reading on my PC, and too small on my tablet.

Thank you! T



Author's Response:

STARS allows for increasing the size of the font. It's right above the drop down for the chapters. I also post on FFN~ https://www.fanfiction.net/~meteoronamoonlessnight

and I have a blog~ https://meteoronamoonlessnight.blogspot.com/

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2017 6:52 AM Title: Futuretake

So sweet!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2017 1:03 AM Title: Futuretake

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: magmom1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:17 AM Title: Epilogue

I could not stop reading. I thiunk that is a first to sit and read 23 chapters. I loved this story and if you do the Emmett pov please include me in your updates.

 



Author's Response:

I'm really glad that you liked it! Emmett’s story is on my profile- it's called Exonerated: A Perdition Outtake Story. 

Reviewer: magmom1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2017 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 11

I didn't expect Sue. But it was a goodo call. Sue knows what is happening and that is a good thing.



Author's Response:

 Thank you! I love Sue as a character. 

Reviewer: magmom1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

It is getting a bit clearer.



Author's Response:

That's good. Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: magmom1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

Not quite sure what's going on yet. Maybe I'll have something in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I was pretty darn vague in this story, wasn't I?

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2017 1:53 AM Title: Epilogue

I really liked it thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2017 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thank you so much! Another homerun. I love your stories :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! I don't know, but I have help! lol

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2017 12:47 AM Title: Epilogue

How do you do it? Each of your stories is amazing. Thank you for continuing to bring us wonderful tales. This one was a really good drama I really enjoyed it. Looking forward to the next.

Author's Response:

Thank you, that means so much!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 5:53 PM Title: Epilogue

Thanks! I loved this story. Perfect ending :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 9:48 PM Title: Epilogue

So glad they got their HEA. Loved this :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you for always reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 5:20 PM Title: Epilogue

Love the perfect ending



Author's Response:

They deserved it!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 22

After everything Im so loving this



Author's Response:

 They need it, don't they? 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 21

Thanks!

Author's Response:

 Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 21

awwwww



Author's Response:

 Thank you! They're cute, aren't they?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 20

Thanks! I'm loving this story ☺

Author's Response:

That's wonderful, thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

OMG I feel relief. And I can believe it :)



Author's Response:

I appreciate it. I did a ton of research, but you never know.

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thank You!!! Love it!

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

Thank You!!! Love it!



Author's Response:

Good! Thank you too!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

It takes a lot for me to tear up but this made me do it. Omg



Author's Response:

Then I did my job! I cry at everything.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 19

This is so sad.  I hope Edward is alive 



Author's Response:

Always have hope!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

That was gut wrenching!  Good thing we didn't get those two chapters in the same day.  Emmett getting to be with mallie was probably the hardest to read. 



Author's Response:

I agree with you about E & M. 

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

Ugh! So heartbreaking!  I hope Edward can come back!  I don't believe he is dead!



Author's Response:

Hope is always a good thing!

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 19

Hey! So he is really dead? He's not being held hostage somewhere? I though this was a hea



Author's Response:

It is an HEA. Your answers come in the next chapter.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2017 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 18

I am just hoping edward had to fake his death & emmett can now get out of jail.



Author's Response:

 There's nothing I can say!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

Crap!  I know there is light by chapter 20 but knowing we have to get there and need tissues is scary!  For now though just freakin run bella!!



Author's Response:

 It is scary. She ran!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 16

Maybe she can kill him easier. 



Author's Response:

 Yes, yes she can!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

I hope Edward wasn't in the house 



Author's Response:

I appreciate that sentiment.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 18

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! 😰😰😰😰😰



Author's Response:

😭😭😭

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

Is Edward actually dead!? Please tell me he's not dead! I can't handle it if he is actually dead because they were just working things out being a couple again! Please please let him have not been in the house but out looking for Bella and is now in hiding! Please don't kill him! 



Author's Response:

 You know I can’t answer any of that!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2017 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 17

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

Please tell me she actually killed him!? I will be so happy if she did cause he totally deserves it! I still can't believe that he forced her to marry him! She so better run as fast as she can and get Edward and get out!



Author's Response:

We'll have to wait and see!

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2017 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 17

Please tell me she actually killed him!? I will be so happy if she did cause he totally deserves it! I still can't believe that he forced her to marry him! She so better run as fast as she can and get Edward and get out!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2017 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 17

OMG OMG OMG!!



Author's Response:

And then comes 18, and you'll be saying more of that!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2017 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

I hope she gets away 



Author's Response:

Yes, let's hope she does.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 16

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2017 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Bella 



Author's Response:

She’s got a long road ahead

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

At least malone is safe!  I expected rose to be dead not a trashy hood rat! 



Author's Response:

She's hanging on by a thread!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

Finally some good face sucking!! What are they going to do about the note that was left??



Author's Response:

LOL Mallie is safe, and they're going to pretend they're keeping away from each other.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 13

I need sue to stay away more than just a few minutes so they can get a few better kisses in. Haha!! 



Author's Response:

That's hilarious!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

I hope she doesn't get taken or the little girl doesn't get hurt. 



Author's Response:

Mallie will be safe.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 11

I did not skip ahead or guess sue.  I love how you used the words cushiony curves. 



Author's Response:

LOL And thank you!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 10

I hope she called edward!!



Author's Response:

Also not yet. :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

Did they threaten emmet's daughter?



Author's Response:

Not yet

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 8

Is edward going to kiss and make it better?



Author's Response:

He really should!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

Now the kissing can begin!! We've gotten the first one out of the way!



Author's Response:

That sounds like a plan!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 6

Was rose all about the inheritance? 



Author's Response:

Yes, absolutely.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

Some of those then chapters are heartbreaking. :(



Author's Response:

That's true.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

The simple worries of teenagers but seem so earth shattering at their age. 



Author's Response:

They do, and they kind of are.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2017 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

I for some reason have not been getting updates..... The good thing id i have lots to read now to catch up! Yeah me!



Author's Response:

Oh, I've seen something on the STARS FB group about a limited number of emails going out or something. I'm glad you found the updates!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2017 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

Omg this is getting so good. 



Author's Response:

Just remember next chapter that you said that!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 15

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 14

Omg i really thought Tanya lol this is makes my day cant wait till next week



Author's Response:

Lol, she's in Alaska hugging on the little one! Just a cousin in this story, but a good guess. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2017 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it can't wait for more πŸ’™ 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2017 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

Thanks!

Author's Response:

:) Thanks!

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love this!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2017 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 13

I cann't wait to see all them fall. 



Author's Response:

 They really need to go down!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2017 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 12

I will hold you to it lol. I really like the light and happiness of this chapter. 



Author's Response:

Lol. That's what happens when I get ahead of myself. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2017 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 12

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2017 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2017 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 11

OMG OMG OMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!! I am so ready for next weeK



Author's Response:

Thank you! That's good to hear! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2017 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for always reviewing! 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2017 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 10

Please tell me she called edward or at least angela! 



Author's Response:

I'm not telling!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

Is he thinking he has to keep malone safe & keep his heart safe too?



Author's Response:

He's on that fence, warring between those things and risking it all for her. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

Goodness, i hope he is willing to help her in anyway possible.



Author's Response:

Not yet, but he'll get there.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

I can't remember the last story that made me this crazy!



Author's Response:

I hope in a good way!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love the name malone!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! It has meaning, but it will be a long time before it's revealed. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 5

He was so cut throat with her.  I actually didn't believe he would be that way with her. 



Author's Response:

Oh, definitely. She did some awful things to him years ago and there have been rumors spread to make all of it worse.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ok so edward isn't part of thr mob? I didn't not realize that.



Author's Response:

No, Jake is the mob boss in this one. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2017 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

How could anyone turn away at this point? I'm guessing he adopted emmett's daughter.



Author's Response:

That's very clever of you!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2017 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

OMG Poor Bella, I think she called Jasper or maybe Edward but I have money on Jasper lol. I love how confident she was a a twelve year old. 



Author's Response:

We'llhave to see who it is! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 10

Poor Bella 



Author's Response:

She's going to get the help she's been needing. 😊

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2017 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 10

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 9

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2017 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 9

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 9

Omg i just want to rip my heart out so much pain. You are doinig so amazing making me feel their pain. 



Author's Response:

We're definitely still in the pain stages, but they'll move past that soon.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2017 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

OMG OMG OMG OMG OM GOMGOMGOMGOMGOGMGOGMOGMGOMGMGOM Thank goodnessss for Edward. What bastards they are I need more I hope this week passes quickly. Amazing Job!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Lol, thank you! 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2017 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

I am just so confused as I am sure Edward is as well. I can actually picture him standing there stunned silent by her running again.

Great story!



Author's Response:

That's pretty much the exact picture I was trying to paint. Thank you. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 7

Breath in and out. I love the chapter. And I have signed up for emails for the blog. I am so heart broken for these two. Any happy chapters coming up soon lol



Author's Response:

That's great! Happy chapters are in the works, but hopeful chapters are coming. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Hanastasio Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love your story.



Author's Response:

I appreciate it. <3

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2017 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 6

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2017 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2017 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

:) 

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