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Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow, I am glad she might have a friend now. I hope Emmett isn't involved in the BS of Jacob and Paul. 



Author's Response:

Angela is going to be a good friend. It depends on your definition of involved. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2017 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

Wow. I feel so much for Bella nd Edward. I want to hug them. 



Author's Response:

They could probably use it right now! 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2017 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2017 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh wow! Poor Bella. Shame on Charlie. 



Author's Response:

I know! Charlie is awful. 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2017 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

Omg its amazing and it hurts I cant wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2017 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 3

Okay I'm gonna try and trust you on this whole Edward having a kid situation.  I mean it's totally possible that he adopted her or maybe she belonged to Emmett and Rosalie and they both died so he took Mallie in and raised her himself or she could be a foster kid or there is the chance that she is biologically Edward's and I'm kind of hoping she's not really Edward's daughter. Cause that means at some point he moved on from Bella and had another love which would break my heart and has already technically broken Bella's heart. I'm trusting you with my heart don't break it please. I feel bad for Bella though. I mean obviously we know she didn't want to leave Edward but she did, like a reverse New Moon, and now she is being forced back for some reason. I really want to know more about the past and what drove Bella to push Edward away and what Charlie is involved with and why Renee ran from him and what is forcing Bella back now and will Edward forgive her for what happened in the past and most importantly will Bella forgive herself for what she did in the past. Ugh so many unanswered questions that I'm dying to have answered! Seriously hoping though that Mallie really isn't Edward's daughter. Hope that doesn't make me a bad person...



Author's Response:

I love your review, because you're open to whatever comes, even though you're hoping for something in particular. We're really close to finding out part of the mystery, it's coming in the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2017 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 2

Okay I am so intrigued right now! Two chapters in and I'm already begging to know what happened four years ago between Bella and Edward! Maybe Edward and Charlie are mafia or involved with the mafia? Obviously Bella's mom didn't want her at all involved with whatever Charlie had gotten himself involved in which obviously deals with criminals! And we know that Bella is being forced back to Forks when she doesn't want to but it seems like she doesn't really have a choice in the matter. I really wanna know what she did that ruined a bunch of people's lives! Did she get pregnant and then have an abortion maybe? I know it said that she helped the men she had been smart enough to hate since middle school but it also says she trusted the wrong person and that's how she ruined a bunch of people's live in one swoop. Ugh this story is going to torture me with its mystery! I mean I love a good mystery but it's gonna kill me to have to play detective and not know what happened until things unravel chapter by chapter! But hey you have me officially hooked and I am strapped in and ready for the ride. Just promise me it's canon Edward and Bella and no Jacob involved as anything more than an acquaintance or maybe make him the bad guy! I don't care for Jacob much or make him super gay so he doesn't try to get with Bella!



Author's Response:

Lol, I love your enthusiasm in your review. I don't think I can answer any of your speculations, except that you're right about Renée. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

I have a love at relationship with mystery and suspense. I want to know what is going on but I love trying to figure it out to and see if I am right lol.  



Author's Response:

I'm very much the same way! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 2

I was born in Florence OR nice place.  I think Bella will be sick by the time she get there.



Author's Response:

That's really cool. I just researched small towns in Oregon and chose it for its proximity to the ocean. She's working on making herself sick, that's for sure. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2017 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 2

You caught me off guard in a good way!  I did not suspect charlie at all.  So edward ended up despising her & her family because he & his family are the crime family.  This is going to be juicy!!! 



Author's Response:

At least I was able to take you off guard! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 2

Well! You've certainly come up with a dark and different take on our favorite characters. I, for one, welcome it! Can't wait to see what comes next. Can't wait to see you flesh out the details. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Ooh, thank you! I'm enjoying taking them in a different direction. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

Something tells me that I am going to hate Charlie with a passion.  js  Excellent start for this story.  Oh, the intrigue. 



Author's Response:

I think you're right! Thank you! 

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2017 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 2

Thanks!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2017 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have no idea what to think. Is she a hermit & someone is making her come out of her room? Hmmmm? Well no matter where this goes i'm excited for the journey!! 



Author's Response:

Lol, definitely not. More like running from the mob, and she just got caught. 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

OMG, your writing is incredible.  Just saying.  Excellent beginning.



Author's Response:

I love you. 

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2017 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

I should've waited till SUnday to read this so I didn't have to wait so long for an update.  Great start! My brain is spinning trying to figure it all out!

 



Author's Response:

If it makes you feel better, there are not any more answers coming in chapter two. Although Bella will explain a few things, it's minor stuff. Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2017 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a dramatic beginning! You tell the tale without giving any details away...yet! Oh how I love to be kept in the dark. I fervently hope that you can handle giving us more than one story at a time, but also understand the need to write what the muse speaks. 

 



Author's Response:

I'm really big on writing ahead, and I have ten chapters done of this. It's a pet peeve of mine when people don't post regularly, so I'm very careful to do it myself. Thank you for coming along on this new ride with me! 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2017 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Yikes!! Not sure i can start this one until there is more to delve into at one time.... I will go bananas. Looks good though. 



Author's Response:

I understand! Answers will be a little slow coming. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2017 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds like it will be a great read  cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I appreciate you reading! 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

ooooooo I want more that is for sure. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! 

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