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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2017 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 170

Would they really fly commercial? They would have their own private airplane.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 230 THE END

Still no way this can be the END



Author's Response:

It is the end sorry but I hope you enjoyed it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 229

So sad she has to live them dreams

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 228

Having them apart didnt work out very well

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 227

They dont want to be apart

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2017 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 226

A busy day

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 229

Poor Bella that is so scary

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 228

OMG what is going on

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 227

Where is she taking her now Edward wants some Bella time



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To spend the night before the wedding day apart

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 226

That was fast

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 230 THE END

:) loved this story 



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Thank you for reading and reviewing it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 225

Just relax boys lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 224

What a way to end a day WOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 223

Esme is on a mission and getting things done

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 222

That was some hot shoting WOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 221

Poor Emmett is going to have a hot mouth lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2017 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 220

Emmett is in deep shit lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 225

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2017 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 219

Why did they kill the guy in the star garage?



Author's Response:

He wanted to marry the other bosses daughter and the other boss didn't want that to happen

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 219

I hope you feel better soon 



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Thanks you

Reviewer: squkymun Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 219

Hope all okay and I love your stories!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I hope to soon get better

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 219

thank you for giving us this. I hope you are just visiting. I was in the hospital a year ago and it was no fun.  It seemed that just as I got to sleep the staff would come in and check to ask me if I was resting OK.  I told them if they would quit bothering me I could get some rest.



Author's Response:

You are welcome. No I was admitted for 8 hours

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 218

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 218

They mean to make a statement

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 217

He wants to get it done lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 216

Emmett is alway happy to eat lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2017 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 215

She is his dirty girl wow she was so shy not now more lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 216

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 214

LOL she made that guy ashamed to be a man lol Edward is going to kick his ass anyway.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 213

fun times ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2017 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 214

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 212

I think Paul is in deep shit I almost feel sorry for Whitney lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 211

OH now she is in trouble

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 210

Wow Bella is an evil little thing ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 212

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 209

Bella has more family now and ones that love her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 208

Edward is not happy

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 207

Why did James treat wemon so bad if his dad is good to wemon

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 206

Bella will show them who is week.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2017 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 205

That is the way to break in an office lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 209

:) :) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 207

:) :) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 204

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 204

They are breaking in the new office ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 203

Gary is lucky to be alive

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 202

The guy behind the desk take his job to heart.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 201

Down to buisness

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 200

Emmett is going down lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 199

She is so child like the abuse she had screwed her up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 198

good to be home with all the ones that love her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2017 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 202

:) :) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 200

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2017 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 197

She needs some mental help with all that she has been through

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 196

how sweet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 195

So happy they landed safe

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2017 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 197

:):) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 194

shit just wont let them be

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 194

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 193

That bitch is dead she doesnt know it yet



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Yep

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2017 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 192

fun times

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 193

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 191

life is good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 190

She needs to know how shitty of a father she had

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 189

fun day

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 188

Bella is a bad ass love it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 187

now what lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 186

Edward only has eyes for her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 185

What does he want with Rachel

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 184

Now they can have a little fun

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2017 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 183

They will find her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 182

Wow another twist

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 181

So did she follow them

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 180

She is crazy and wants to die OMG

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 179

he will give her what ever she wants

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 190

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 178

Alice is to funny she wants a baby

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 177

They have addopted Dantray lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 187

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 176

Rose is going to have a baby?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 175

Em and Rose are having fun of there own lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 174

the fun begins ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 173

Jasper better be a good boy lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 172

That was quick but they can see what a great guy he is

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 171

Dantray is a good guy and they will help him

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 185

:) :) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 182

:) :) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 180

:) :) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 176

:) :) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 174

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 170

money talks

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 169

Nice

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 168

nice big bathroom wow

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 167

Not her first time on a plane nooo

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 166

They are so cute in love

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 165

Dantray is a good guy and knows how to handle people without troughing himself at them

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 164

I still think Esme should of came along

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 163

What did they do to the worms?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 162

dont leave Esme out

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 161

NOOOOO she had an egg in side her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 160

Poor Bella has been through hell

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