Date: 14 Dec 2017 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 19: Control
I am loving this so far but I do wish we could get so love out if Edward.
Date: 30 Jun 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 19: Control
Loved it. Some people just don't understand and should not read adult stories.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2017 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1: Lust at First Sight
Love the story. :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2017 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 19: Control
That is perfect aftercare. Especially since bella loves the way it makes her feel. Now about this chapter....i think edward might be starting to have feelings for her. Watching her sleep is very intimate.
Date: 09 Jun 2017 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 19: Control
Love love love this story
Date: 08 Jun 2017 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 19: Control
Can't wait to see how these characters develop. Good story!
Date: 08 Jun 2017 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 19: Control
love this story so far dont let one or two people that know nothing of the lifestyle or what it entails upsette you
Date: 07 Jun 2017 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 18: Opening Up
I was so excited to get this update. Love reading it.
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2017 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 17: Aftercare
Love it
Date: 12 May 2017 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 17: Aftercare
I am all caught up and dying for more!! I love this! I'm hooked!!! :D
Date: 06 May 2017 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 3: Isabella's Tease
Wow just wow
Date: 04 May 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 17: Aftercare
That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 May 2017 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 17: Aftercare
I thoroughly enjoyed this story.
Date: 04 May 2017 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 16: Isabella's First Scene
I don't think this story is dark at all. HOT and KINKY......YES!!!!!!! Great job on their 1st scene.
Date: 04 May 2017 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 15: Signing the Contract
I live hown thoroughly they have gone over the contract.
Date: 04 May 2017 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 14: Isabella's Preparation
So the rules do mention about him being the only one to give her an orgasm.
Date: 04 May 2017 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 13: Mr Masen's Checklist
Oh no. Is she going to get caught giving herself and orgasm? Well, he has not told her that they belong to him andown of lying he can give them to her.
Date: 04 May 2017 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 12: Previewing the Contract
I knew Edward was going to think she had a kid.
Date: 04 May 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 11: Coming Clean
I hope Bella will continue to talk to Edward and tell him of her mom.
Date: 04 May 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 10: The First Punishment
O do not know that I couldhave taken all of that. I amean a sissy.
Date: 04 May 2017 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 9: A Dark Beginning
My heart breaks for Bella. I can't wait for their kink. Great job writing.
Date: 04 May 2017 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 8: A Harsh Reality
I am assuming that Bella helps pay for her mother's care. Bless her heart.
Date: 04 May 2017 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 7: A Pleasurable Punishment
Who has called Bella? I can't wait to find out more about her past.
Date: 04 May 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Natural Submissive
I have ever a feeling that Edward is not going to like where Bella lives.
Date: 04 May 2017 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Beginning
That is one of the hottest sex scenes I have ever read.
Date: 03 May 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 4: An Interesting Offer
Loving this story!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 May 2017 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 3: Isabella's Tease
That was really HOT!!!!!!!
Date: 03 May 2017 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 2: First Encounter
Has Bella practiced submission before?
Date: 03 May 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lust at First Sight
I love a good Dom/sub story. Can't waitto read more
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2017 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 17: Aftercare
Love Love Love It! Can't wait to read more,your stories are wonderful don't let anyone change you from writing this great story it's great.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2017 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 17: Aftercare
Overall, this story is incredibly well written!!!! Your writing is beautifully well written!!!! I've been able to picture everything in my head as I am reading!!!!!! Your descriptions of Isabella's thoughts and feelings have been amazing to read!!!!! her life since her Dad was murdered has been dramatically painful and very horrific!!!!!
I'll be back to read more once more chapters are posted!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 17: Aftercare
I'm caught up to this story! I love it! I have to go & read everything you have written!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 16: Isabella's First Scene
She is doing so good after being made to wait for any attention all week.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 15: Signing the Contract
I don't know how she isn't going to pounce on him every nite!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 14: Isabella's Preparation
I look forward to her getting to call him by his name. He will ask her too eventually.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2017 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 13: Mr Masen's Checklist
She better not get caught!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 17: Aftercare
So I guess watching the movie is still part of the scene because she is still calling him, Sir. Yes?
Date: 29 Apr 2017 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 16: Isabella's First Scene
great scene! I sometimes fantasize about being treated like this, but I'm too old for any man to want this way anymore. That's one of the reasons I like to read about it...
Date: 29 Apr 2017 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 15: Signing the Contract
This is a fine chapter on discussing their contract. Edward's allowed use of his first name during their discussion, so that they feel more like equals, is something I like a lot. He seems open to her limits and she seems eager to play. Very nice, indeed!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 14: Isabella's Preparation
You work hard to give your readers a good story. I appreciate it.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 13: Mr Masen's Checklist
oh oh. isn't masturbating without permission a no no? I'm with her on suffocation. I can't stand the thought as I'm extremely claustorphobic. Typical list that I've heard of. She seems willing to try most things.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 12: Previewing the Contract
I do like the lemons. BDSM sex is highly arousing to read about...
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 11: Coming Clean
He has no questions for her about who this person is? I wonder why.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 10: The First Punishment
This is one of the things I wonder about with BDSM. She's supposed to just give up her job and apartment? What happens if he gets done with her? Where will she go and what will she do? Submissive in the bedroom is one thing. Giving up her whole life is something else. I hope it works for her...
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 9: A Dark Beginning
I wouldn't go anywhere in a van with a stranger! How does she know Mr. Masen sent him? It could be anyone!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 8: A Harsh Reality
How did Renee get like this?
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 7: A Pleasurable Punishment
Thanks for the chapter.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 6: A Natural Submissive
He is going to pay her for keeping his house as much as she made stripping? Hmmm....
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Beginning
Nice lemon. Pretty vanilla. Thanks!
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 4: An Interesting Offer
I'm not in the lifestyle but some things about it interest me. Some don't. You're getting good advice on how to write it. I'm reading it here now...
Date: 26 Apr 2017 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 15: Signing the Contract
Thanks! I am loving this story ☺
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2017 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 15: Signing the Contract
Hi!! I was wondering if you will be letting us know what Edward does for a living. Will Bella ever tell Edward of her past. Will they discuss what to do for her mother, as I am almost sure Bella is paying part of her care, hense why the shaddy job. As for the house care I was sure you mentioned that Edward had staff what of them and their jobs and what of the security guards that picked her up. I am guessing it has to do with his job. Thank you for the story so far it is good, just needs a few more details.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2017 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 14: Isabella's Preparation
:)
Date: 25 Apr 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 17: Aftercare
Last two chapters were so well done❤️❤️
Date: 26 Mar 2017 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 13: Mr Masen's Checklist
Very interesting story. I am curious to see where you are head with this story.
Date: 25 Mar 2017 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 13: Mr Masen's Checklist
Thanks!
Date: 10 Mar 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 13: Mr Masen's Checklist
I'm enjoying this story. Bella needs to be open and honest with Edward.
Date: 07 Mar 2017 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 13: Mr Masen's Checklist
great update
looking forward to reading more
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2017 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Lust at First Sight
Interesting start!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2017 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 12: Previewing the Contract
Really enjoyed can't wait for the next update! Aside from a few spelling errors here and there this story is well written!
Author's Response:
You should definitely email me! I would love for you to preread. I have a few girls who do it already for my fanfiction.net page. I responded to your review on another story with me email address so let me know own if you are interested! I'm not sure with how busy you are but I'm sure we could make something work!:)
Date: 28 Feb 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 11: Coming Clean
im so enjoying this story i love ’ the notes you leave for your readers. i also like that your adding so much depth to Edward and Bella. looking forward to reading “ the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! That means a lot! This story is also on fanfiction and one of my reviewers is a sub, so she is actually helping me out with this story now! so i'm pretty excited about it. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: Coming Clean
Love your story can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I hope to have the next chapter up soon! :)
Date: 27 Feb 2017 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 11: Coming Clean
I am really liking this story; can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading! I'm so glad you came across my story :)