Date: 06 Jun 2017 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 28: Confrontation
I'm so sorry for your family's loss. I hate saying those words the sound so trite... What I do hope for you and your family is that you all our able to cry together when you need to... To laugh loud and hard when remembering and looking back over the past... To recognize that it's ok to be angry and to feel this huge pain that seems to come in rushing waves when just moments before you feel almost normal... Don't think that you have to be the strong one and hold everything together for everyone else you don't if anything you just never know who's going to step up and take some of the burden and pain just by siting with you cuddled up with one another crying with and for you. .. These are the things that I wish people had said to me and my family when we abruptly found out two weeks ago that my father had died and I prepare to head back home for his service this Thursday. There is no time stamp for how long you mourn so don't think you should just get back to how life was so cry when you feel it sneak up on you no mater how long it's been and those around you are telling you it's been long enough...
And on aside note I love that Bella went and told her mother to keep her hands off Edward great jobβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Date: 03 Jun 2017 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life
both of them deserve each other...
he flirted around with a dumb, naive teen who is looking
to get out of her mom's reach and she pushed herself on edward
knowing he was interested in her.
sorry but bella isn't much of a heroin here.in fact, she is an annoying
idiotic teenage girl living in a fairy land looking for HEA with her
prince charming. she pretended to be wiser than she was and encouraged
and pressed her sexuality on this guy too eager to lose her virginity.
hope she redeems herself somehow but as it stands, her ignorant actions prob
will cause a nightmare for both of them.also, although you can say
that edward was trying to help her, anytime bella needed comforting in this fic,
he seemed cold and is never available right away...he does eventually hug her
in comfort but much later on and she had to get over the "shock" on her own...
in all of the situations...so, just seems he is distant, detached emotionally...of course,
you can always say he was trying to protect her but he could have at least provided
some immediate warmth or comfort...
Date: 06 May 2017 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding
That engagement was short and sweet. I just thought of something, I know Edward said that James was dangerous but I thought he worked for Edward and his father. If he did why would he come after Bella?