Date: 24 May 2023 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 43: Finale
All these first addition books Bella bought are ashes.
Victoria has been waiting for a chance to get revenge. She didn't succeed in ending Isabella and Edward.
Sequel????
Did I miss it?
Date: 24 May 2023 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 42: The Return
His confession of love soothes her unsettling mind. His admission gives her the confidence in their marriage she's been seeking.
Date: 24 May 2023 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 41: The Search
He didn't realize his feelings and actions needed the reinforcement of heart felt words to let his bride know he loves her.
She has said it and acted upon those feelings giving Edward what he has so desperately needed.
Date: 24 May 2023 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 40: Consequences
Edward is going to loose his mind when he finally lays eyes on his wife.
Date: 24 May 2023 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 39: A Worried Husband
He's figured out she has been taken.
Now the hunt begins.
Does Edward suspect James yet?
Find Victoria and he will find James. Hopefully Bella will be able to fight back, her handgun training might come in handy.
Date: 24 May 2023 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 38: Chicago
Of course James would find his quarry.
Bella's limited understanding of the big city and the varying personalities wandering that environment have put her in danger.
Date: 24 May 2023 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 37: Soldier
Why don't the wives and female relatives get together as some form of entertainment? This would occupy Bella's time better.
Date: 24 May 2023 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 36: Practice
The outward expression of love is not something Edward has experienced in his 30+ years of life.
Bella needs to learn how to load the gun as well.
Date: 24 May 2023 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 35: Edward's Story
James is a half-brother; didn't see that coming.
Yup, James and Victoria need to be dealt with by the family.
Bella's acceptance of this situation will make Edward's handling of it easier.
Date: 24 May 2023 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 34: Pretending
Why did it take the encounter between the redhead and Bella to force Edward to reveal his past?
Date: 24 May 2023 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 33: Closer
She has become his island of refuge.
Will he ever see her as his partner in life?
Date: 24 May 2023 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 32: Woman from the Past
Edward's past dalliance with the redhead in question will be back to interfere in their marriage. That mistrust issue Renée tried to implant on Bella will rear its ugly head.
Date: 24 May 2023 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 31: Chez Paree
Alice is the insider information that Bella's been needing.
Date: 24 May 2023 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 30: Preparations
The immediate infatuation due to their intense attraction created a unique bond. The 'I love yous' are buried just below the surface of their emotions. How long before they release their declarations of enduring love?
Date: 24 May 2023 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 29: Interlude
Bella needs a sense of belonging to Edward's world. There must be some connections he can facilitate that will bring her into the family unit.
Date: 24 May 2023 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 28: Confrontation
Does Edward not trust his young wife?
I have a feeling Renée will make one more attempt to seduce Edward.
Maybe Dr. Dwyer has the sense to hold Renée at arms length until he can truse her.
Date: 24 May 2023 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 27: Father Figures
You go claim what is your Bella!
Send your mother packing.
Date: 24 May 2023 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 26: The Return
Bella knows why her mother intentionally tried to interfere in her marriage.
Not only is Renée jealous of her daughter but also angry that she married a very weather older man.
Thankfully Edward is old fashioned in his approach to marriage.
Date: 24 May 2023 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 25: Letting Go
I'm chuckling at your author's note at the bottom of this chapter. Daddy issues.......lol.
Bella has lacked displays of affection because of her self centered mother. Of course she will seek interactions with her husband hoping he will teach her new and intriguing activities.
Their life is about to change again.
Date: 24 May 2023 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 24: Boat Ride
I am surprised that Renée had not heard of the mofia connection to the Cullen name as she tried to enter high society.
Bella's abrupt introduction to this life style could easily turn her against Edward. Yet her youthful innocence will bond her to Edward even more so than before.
Date: 24 May 2023 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life
He is his own clean up team.
The repercussions of tonight's events should frighten Bella; If not concern Edward.
Date: 24 May 2023 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 22: Discovering the Truth
I'm curious why Edward would go with Caius and Laurant knowing he is outnumbered by their threat.
What does this mean for Edward's family?
Will Bella want to learn how to protect herself from future threats?
Date: 24 May 2023 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 21: Revelations
Bella's going to cause more grief for Edward by attempting to eavesdrop on their conversation.
Date: 24 May 2023 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 20: A Release
Hehehe, she finally gets his full attention.
Who could be disturbing them at such a late hour?
Date: 24 May 2023 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 19: All the Way
That was a more realistic first time.
She got what she wanted.
Date: 24 May 2023 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 18: Deeper Water
Mutual satisfaction is a good place to start.
The age difference is causing Edward to overthink the consummation of this marriage.
Date: 24 May 2023 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Honeymoon Part II
Is Laurant Calamon associated with James Kesey?
Maybe Edward should wear out his young bride so she sleeps through his meeting with the unwanted visitor.
Date: 24 May 2023 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 16: The Honeymoon Part I
To what extremes will Bella go to attract her husband's touch?
Date: 24 May 2023 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding
So Carlisle makes an appearance.
Is he already married to Esme?
Will Bella meet Edward's parents soon?
Date: 24 May 2023 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Look at a New Life
Will Renée fall under Edward's family protection as well?
In the rush to ensure Bella's safety, Edward has glossed over his feelings for the young beauty.
Date: 24 May 2023 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 13: An Interruption
That was a very awkward conversation in front of Bella. How should she interpret Edward's intentions?
Renée is angry that her daughter caught a very eligible bachelor.
Does Alice reenter the storyline?
Date: 24 May 2023 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 12: A Shocking Proposal
Will Bella agree to such a quick proposal?
Date: 24 May 2023 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 11: A Close Encounter
I'm presuming James was her attacker.
Will Renée even worry about her daughter?
Date: 24 May 2023 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 11: A Close Encounter
I'm presuming James was her attacker.
Will Renée even worry about her daughter?
Date: 24 May 2023 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 11: A Close Encounter
I'm presuming James was her attacker.
Will Renée even worry about her daughter?
Date: 24 May 2023 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 10: Edward's Return
Was Edward away earning his position within the family?
Bella is so enthralled by Edward that he knows she isn't involved with anyone else.
Date: 24 May 2023 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 9: Searching for Him
So James attempted to get near Isabella and Edward's men frightened him away.
Is Alice related to Edward in the fic?
Date: 24 May 2023 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 8: A Glimpse of His Life
Was Edward talking to Carlisle in the restaurant or some other connection within the family?
Edward seems very perceptive to Renées attempts at hold court in the restaurant.
Date: 24 May 2023 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 7: Memories of a Monster
James is a double edged sword within the Cullen family.
What level of the mob does Edward represent?
At least Edward has expressed his intrest in Bella.
Date: 24 May 2023 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 6: Secret Meeting
I haven't figured out the mob connection yet.
Bella skipping out of the house as her mother nurses a hangover shows a bit of independence.
Bella mentions how she has no support in the big city yet mother constantly leaves her to fend for herself.
Date: 24 May 2023 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 5: Life Imitates Art
Dropping notes like a school boy, how sweet Edward.
Mom is an opportunist that hasn't figured out she is not very smooth in her actions.
Date: 24 May 2023 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 4: Rainy Chicago Days
The tension between mother and daughter will gradually increase if Renée continues to pursue Edward.
Hopefully Edward's intrest is elsewhere and that he is looking for insight into Isabella's situation.
Date: 24 May 2023 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen
Were the 1950's so safe and relaxed that a young woman would easily have lunch and get into the car of a stranger?
I'm wishing for Edward's perspective right now.
I don't think Bella will share with her mother meeting Mr. Cullen on her first day in the big city.
Date: 24 May 2023 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 2: City Lights Books
Curiosity has me wondering how Mr. Cullen found her?
She has immediately displayed a submissive undertone in personality.
Something he is probably drawn toward.
Date: 23 May 2023 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: A New Life
I wish I could remember where I came across the recommendation for this story so I can give proper credit. Alas, I cannot.
I'm always looking for a May to December romance story.
Throughout the years my family has many age gap marriages.
Date: 08 Jun 2020 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 39: A Worried Husband
I want to start off by saying that I am in no way criticizing you as a writer. I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. I just thought about how men back in the day used to spank they're wives to keep them in line. Most women got married at young ages and their husbands were most times older like a father type figure. I was just thinking of how those spankings started what we now know as spousal abuse. Can you see the parallel? Maybe it's just me idk,
Date: 09 Sep 2019 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 43: Finale
Just reread and still love it.
Date: 01 Nov 2018 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 43: Finale
Great story
Date: 05 Apr 2018 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 22: Discovering the Truth
That one had me on the edge of my seat! Toodles...gotta get to the next chapter.
Date: 09 Dec 2017 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 43: Finale
Great story
Date: 06 Oct 2017 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 43: Finale
OMG I love this story and I can not wait for what is next for them. I put off reading the last few chapters because I didnt want it to be over lol so I am so happy there will be more of them.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 42: The Return
Good things come to those who wait and she waited and has grown up so much.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 41: The Search
WOW Bella is a bad ass OMG So glad James is gone now they need to get the red headed Bitch to. What did James mean about there father?
Date: 06 Oct 2017 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 40: Consequences
December 2016 was a great time go glad you joined FF. My heart is breaking for Bella she is just a silly young girl. I cant wait for Edward to get to her. Love the puke lol
Date: 05 Oct 2017 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 39: A Worried Husband
OMG he is a mess. Bella is in big trouble once he gets her back safe and healed but he will not be hard on her she has learned her leason
Date: 05 Oct 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 38: Chicago
She did it now OMG Edward is going to lose his shit.
Date: 01 Oct 2017 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 43: Finale
I really enjoyed Chicago, looking forward to the sequel and new adventures. ❤️
Date: 25 Sep 2017 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 43: Finale
What a scary situation. I can't wait to find out how these two take on New York. Loved the story.
Date: 25 Sep 2017 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 39: A Worried Husband
Edward really is so good to Bella. I wish she realized how much he loves her and stop the tricks.
Date: 25 Sep 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 38: Chicago
If only Bella could listen and trust someone besides herself. She has been asking for trouble.
Date: 22 Sep 2017 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 43: Finale
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading the sequel
Date: 22 Sep 2017 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 43: Finale
I loved this story so glad there's a sequel
Date: 18 Sep 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 37: Soldier
Bella you wonder why he treats you like a child. You act like Lucy and you are trying to turn Emmett into Ethel.
Date: 18 Sep 2017 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 35: Edward's Story
Edward needs to know that Bella still loves him no matter what. James is evil. Edward needs some peace.
Date: 18 Sep 2017 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 37: Soldier
Love your story! Can't wait to read more of it.
Date: 11 Sep 2017 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 37: Soldier
Bella is going to be in so much trouble lol
Date: 10 Sep 2017 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 36: Practice
Bella is a fast learner Edward has to be proud of her.
Date: 10 Sep 2017 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 35: Edward's Story
James needs to die NOW and Victoria can go with him.
Date: 10 Sep 2017 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 34: Pretending
I think Victoria is evil and wants to cause shit.
Date: 09 Sep 2017 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 35: Edward's Story
:)
Date: 09 Sep 2017 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 37: Soldier
Oh boy! She is going to cause some serious trouble! ;)
Date: 09 Sep 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 37: Soldier
No no no bella!! James & victoria are out there.
Date: 09 Sep 2017 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 36: Practice
I was hoping he would ravish her!! I think he's afraid of corrupting her which is hilarious!!
Date: 09 Sep 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 35: Edward's Story
What a twist!!
Date: 09 Sep 2017 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 33: Closer
They need to talk more so she knows what is going on and still feels safe
Date: 09 Sep 2017 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 32: Woman from the Past
Bella is making peace with her hubby. Who is the women
Date: 01 Sep 2017 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 34: Pretending
Bella needs to trust Edward and enjoy life. She doesn't need to know everything.
Date: 22 Aug 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 34: Pretending
OMG! I'M DYING FOR MORE!!! ;)
Date: 22 Aug 2017 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 33: Closer
I love this!! ;)
Date: 22 Aug 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 32: Woman from the Past
Fantastic!! I am dying to read the next chapter!! ;)
Date: 21 Aug 2017 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 34: Pretending
I'm betting victoria is about to die.
Date: 21 Aug 2017 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 32: Woman from the Past
:)
Date: 13 Aug 2017 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: A New Life
Hey...i noticed you updated on F2F but not here. If I may ask, is going to be
An on going occurrence?
Date: 06 Jul 2017 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 31: Chez Paree
I love this story. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 13 Jun 2017 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 31: Chez Paree
I love this story! ;)
Date: 13 Jun 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 30: Preparations
Loved it can't wait for more ’
Date: 13 Jun 2017 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 31: Chez Paree
Edward must have had someone following and listening to Bella.
Date: 13 Jun 2017 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 30: Preparations
I reviewed over in fanfiction. Loving this story.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 31: Chez Paree
A chapter in epov of this night would be great
Date: 12 Jun 2017 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 31: Chez Paree
Yes i would LOVE an EPOV. I BET HE DIDN't like all the men looking at her.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 30: Preparations
He really does have strong feelings for her.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 30: Preparations
:)
Date: 12 Jun 2017 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 31: Chez Paree
Edward did not like Bella getting wasted and Alice telling her about her husband.
Date: 12 Jun 2017 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 30: Preparations
She so in love with him.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 29: Interlude
I do wonder what he was thinking right before he walked in & interrupted her.