Date: 07 Jun 2017 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 29: Interlude
Loved the chapter. Love this story immensely
Date: 07 Jun 2017 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 29: Interlude
He is trying to protect her because he loves her but is makes her feel like she is not as improtant to him as he is to her. I think it is good that Renee is staying away she is a hurtful bitch.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 29: Interlude
You are doing great.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 29: Interlude
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Date: 07 Jun 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 29: Interlude
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Date: 07 Jun 2017 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 29: Interlude
I LOVE THIS! ;)
Date: 07 Jun 2017 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 28: Confrontation
Do not trust her bella.
Date: 07 Jun 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 27: Father Figures
She is asking for a spanking!!
Date: 07 Jun 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 26: The Return
Renee is such a retched person!
Date: 06 Jun 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 25: Letting Go
Yes. Def take that review as a positive. Haha!
Date: 06 Jun 2017 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 24: Boat Ride
Now it's time for some sweet mafia lovin!
Date: 06 Jun 2017 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life
Who is in the dog house more?
Date: 06 Jun 2017 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 28: Confrontation
Great update
Date: 06 Jun 2017 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 28: Confrontation
Good for Bella! I'm glad she talked to that nasty POS mother of hers and I am glad that she didn't get into any trouble...yet! lol I am excited for more!! ;)
Date: 06 Jun 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 27: Father Figures
Omg! For some reason I think that Bella just made a huge mistake!!
Date: 06 Jun 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 26: The Return
Her mother is a POS!! >:(
Date: 06 Jun 2017 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 28: Confrontation
I am proud of Bella she is right her relationship with her mom will never be the same.
Date: 06 Jun 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 27: Father Figures
Nothing wrong with a little daddy play. I want Bella to punch her bitch of a mother in the mouth but she is going to get in trouble for leaving with out protection.
Date: 06 Jun 2017 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 26: The Return
WOW that woman is a piece of work how dare she I dont think Edward likes her very much. She is evil evil I say lol
Date: 06 Jun 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 25: Letting Go
daddy issues or not that is hot lol
Date: 06 Jun 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 24: Boat Ride
He may chop people up and through them into the sea but he is just a softy at heart lol
Date: 06 Jun 2017 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 24: Boat Ride
So, Bella knows the truth. I am excited to read more of this story! ;)
Date: 06 Jun 2017 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 28: Confrontation
:)
Date: 06 Jun 2017 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 27: Father Figures
:)
Date: 06 Jun 2017 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 28: Confrontation
I'm so sorry for your family's loss. I hate saying those words the sound so trite... What I do hope for you and your family is that you all our able to cry together when you need to... To laugh loud and hard when remembering and looking back over the past... To recognize that it's ok to be angry and to feel this huge pain that seems to come in rushing waves when just moments before you feel almost normal... Don't think that you have to be the strong one and hold everything together for everyone else you don't if anything you just never know who's going to step up and take some of the burden and pain just by siting with you cuddled up with one another crying with and for you. .. These are the things that I wish people had said to me and my family when we abruptly found out two weeks ago that my father had died and I prepare to head back home for his service this Thursday. There is no time stamp for how long you mourn so don't think you should just get back to how life was so cry when you feel it sneak up on you no mater how long it's been and those around you are telling you it's been long enough...
And on aside note I love that Bella went and told her mother to keep her hands off Edward great jobβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Date: 06 Jun 2017 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 25: Letting Go
Heck yea take that as a complement ... The stories I love most are the ones of Edward being older and with a young Bella ..
Date: 03 Jun 2017 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life
both of them deserve each other...
he flirted around with a dumb, naive teen who is looking
to get out of her mom's reach and she pushed herself on edward
knowing he was interested in her.
sorry but bella isn't much of a heroin here.in fact, she is an annoying
idiotic teenage girl living in a fairy land looking for HEA with her
prince charming. she pretended to be wiser than she was and encouraged
and pressed her sexuality on this guy too eager to lose her virginity.
hope she redeems herself somehow but as it stands, her ignorant actions prob
will cause a nightmare for both of them.also, although you can say
that edward was trying to help her, anytime bella needed comforting in this fic,
he seemed cold and is never available right away...he does eventually hug her
in comfort but much later on and she had to get over the "shock" on her own...
in all of the situations...so, just seems he is distant, detached emotionally...of course,
you can always say he was trying to protect her but he could have at least provided
some immediate warmth or comfort...
Date: 31 May 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life
I love this fiction! Completely addicted to it! Thank you so very much for all the time and effort you put into it! It shows!
Date: 30 May 2017 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life
Omg! Love your story can't wait to read more
Date: 30 May 2017 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life
Oh boy
Date: 30 May 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life
OMG!
Date: 29 May 2017 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life
:)
Date: 29 May 2017 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life
She is handling thing better than he thought she would she is made for him now how much will he tell her?
Date: 29 May 2017 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 23: Glimpse at an Old Life
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 29 May 2017 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 22: Discovering the Truth
What a way to learn the truth or the start of it
Date: 28 May 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 22: Discovering the Truth
WOW
Date: 28 May 2017 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 22: Discovering the Truth
Omfng!!!! ;)
Date: 28 May 2017 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 22: Discovering the Truth
some honeymoon. ;)
Date: 28 May 2017 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 22: Discovering the Truth
:)
Date: 28 May 2017 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 22: Discovering the Truth
I love the outtakes WOW. Bella is in trouble but she did save his life.
Date: 28 May 2017 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: A New Life
I don't know if u know this but ur blog isn't listed
Date: 28 May 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 22: Discovering the Truth
Wow great chapter! !!!
Date: 28 May 2017 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 22: Discovering the Truth
I wasn't expecting her to get to help. Thank goodness she did show up!
Date: 28 May 2017 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 22: Discovering the Truth
:O
Date: 28 May 2017 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: A New Life
What is your blog site? You said it would be on your profile but I can't see it! Also, love the recent update, can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!
Date: 27 May 2017 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 21: Revelations
Oh no bella this could turn out really really bad!
Date: 27 May 2017 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 20: A Release
I think the honeymoon is about to be over.
Date: 27 May 2017 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 19: All the Way
He will loosen her up in no time! I have a feeling he is going to be addicted to her.
Date: 27 May 2017 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 18: Deeper Water
I'm going to guess most of us will want this chapter in EPOV.
Date: 27 May 2017 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Honeymoon Part II
Whoo hoo!
Date: 26 May 2017 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 6: Secret Meeting
I am very intrigued by this story. I have also found that i really like Renee so far, i hope she doesn't turn into a nasty, hateful thing. I detest those Renee's (a personal choice of course).
Date: 26 May 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 4: Rainy Chicago Days
Going to dinner with her mother... just YUCK! lol
Date: 26 May 2017 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 16: The Honeymoon Part I
I think edward is going to get a bit nutty when men approach her at the pool.
Date: 26 May 2017 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 21: Revelations
These last updates were great... I love that even though Bella was timed she still went after what she wanted and what she wanted was Edward ... And she was successful in her questππππ
Date: 25 May 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 21: Revelations
That dude was a creeper. Bella is going to be in trouble for putting herself in danger
Date: 25 May 2017 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 20: A Release
Bella was having fun and a knock on the door wtf
Date: 25 May 2017 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 19: All the Way
Now they are married in every way.
Date: 25 May 2017 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 18: Deeper Water
Give Bella an A for a job well done lol
Date: 25 May 2017 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Honeymoon Part II
that guy has to try to mess with them Bella has plans
Date: 25 May 2017 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Honeymoon Part I
He cant help himself he wants her but does not want to push
Date: 25 May 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 18: Deeper Water
:)
Date: 25 May 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Honeymoon Part II
:)
Date: 25 May 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Honeymoon Part I
:)
Date: 22 May 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding
I hope the wall comes down when they are alone.
Date: 22 May 2017 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 12: A Shocking Proposal
Loving this story.
Date: 18 May 2017 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding
Love the story
Date: 13 May 2017 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding
She gets away from her mom and Edward takes her away to be safe?
Date: 13 May 2017 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 14: A Look at a New Life
You should pimp your stuff because it is wonderful thanks so much. Edward just bought the place??
Date: 13 May 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 13: An Interruption
Renee is a piece of work she is only concerned for Bella when she feels like it .
Date: 13 May 2017 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 12: A Shocking Proposal
Bella is a smart girl and he knows it.
Date: 13 May 2017 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 11: A Close Encounter
Poor girl is freaked out . Edward is the reason she was attacted because she is his week spot
Date: 10 May 2017 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding
:)
Date: 07 May 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding
So will edward actually let bella enjoy her honeymoon? I'm really glad they got married quickly!
Date: 07 May 2017 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding
Liked this chapter love this story!
Date: 06 May 2017 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding
I hope Bella pulls out all the stops that drives dear ole Edward bat crazy
Date: 06 May 2017 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding
:)
Date: 06 May 2017 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Wedding
That engagement was short and sweet. I just thought of something, I know Edward said that James was dangerous but I thought he worked for Edward and his father. If he did why would he come after Bella?
Date: 06 May 2017 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Look at a New Life
Renee really needs to take lessons on how to be a good mother.
Date: 06 May 2017 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 13: An Interruption
Renee just feels threatened by Bella. She is also probably upset that Bella has landed a husband before she has. Lol.
Date: 06 May 2017 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 12: A Shocking Proposal
Wow, in sure Bella is shocked. That was sudden but I understand Edward's reason for it.
Date: 06 May 2017 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 11: A Close Encounter
OMGosh!!! I knew the guy from months earlier had to know Edward. I am so glad that Edward got to her in time. What will her mother think when she does not return?
Date: 06 May 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 10: Edward's Return
I don't blame Bella for being upset. I would be to. I think she let him off to easy. I understand he can't tell her things but she should have made him gravel some more but I understand that she is still young. I am really enjoying reading this story.
Date: 06 May 2017 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 9: Searching for Him
Is Alice connected to Edward? I am assuming that the man that followed Bella to the taxi is some how connected to Edward or the Mafia since he recognized the white hair guy across the street and left Bella alone.
Date: 06 May 2017 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 8: A Glimpse of His Life
Who was Edward meeting with? Was it James or was it Carlisle?
Date: 06 May 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 7: Memories of a Monster
At times Bella seems very naive and young and then at times she seems very determined if what she wants like in this chapter.
Date: 05 May 2017 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 6: Secret Meeting
I guess I missed that this was a mafia story. I just thought it was about a older Edward and a young Bella. Can't wait to see where you are taking it.
Date: 05 May 2017 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 5: Life Imitates Art
So technically Renee and Edward are not going out. Lol. Renee is to funny.
Date: 05 May 2017 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 4: Rainy Chicago Days
Poor Bella. Does Edward realize that he has asked Bella's mother out on a date.
Date: 05 May 2017 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen
Very interesting. I wonder if she will tell her mom too.
Date: 05 May 2017 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 2: City Lights Books
Is Edward following her or was this a coincidence.
Date: 05 May 2017 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: A New Life
Can't wait to read this story too. I kind of like Bella with an older Edward. Will him be dominated with her?
Date: 04 May 2017 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Look at a New Life
I wish he could give her a little secret way of showing her that he really does have feelings for her. It makes me sad how insecure she feels. I will be glad when she is away from her mother. She is horrible!!
Date: 04 May 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 13: An Interruption
Oh i don't think edward will be denying u anything!!