Date: 06 Aug 2017 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Oh dear God, this is, l mean real bad. I hope Charlie find the dvd pretty soon. This Carlisle is evil incarnate and poor Esme is going to bear the brunt of it. Am having nightmare already. Wonderful writing, thank you, come back soon.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Oh no I hope edward kills carlisle or gets free before he is forced to have sex with some girl (which will most likely be rape on both ends cuz I'm sure it will be one of Carlisles victims) or is forced to.get married (though I'm sure edward can null it or get a divorce once he is free) but no way is edward going to give up bella that easily
Date: 06 Aug 2017 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Calisles mistake I thinking he can shape edward now with edward being a teenager and that he can trump his love for his mother....hes gonna regret that because he is going to give edward the tools that edwards gonna be able to use to kill him. I can't wait until carlisle sees his own son point a gun at him and know he caused his own death.....if the guards are smart they wouldn't touch their future bosses mother as they have a death wish
Date: 06 Aug 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Carlisle is crazy to think you can take a mature boy and change him into a Mafia don. He'll fight him all the way even if it takes years until he has enough power to do so. Carlisle's time would have been better spent producing another heir.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Oh my!!!!! I am glad that Edward figured out things really quick and stood up to Carlisle. I hope one day and one day soon that Edward will TAKE his place away from Carlisle and then make him pay very slowly for everything that he has done. And maybe even let Esme have some revenge on Carlisle.
Date: 03 Jul 2017 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Oh no! I don't think Edward is going to be happy about this and we know Esme won't be happy. Poor Bella and Edward. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so worried about them all and how they're going to cope with things.
Date: 02 Jul 2017 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
i was almost afraid to see that you had posted...this is so bad...i do not think i can make myself read the horrible things yet to come for esme and edward...why not let charlie figure things out by finding the metal box and disposing of carlisle.
Date: 25 Jun 2017 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Thank you so much, Clo. It was quite a shock when I saw it but everything is so much better now :). I still can't imagine how you plot this and think of new situations and characters personalities. You always amaze me with your humour, sexy times and your downright scary times. Love reading your stuff.
Date: 23 Jun 2017 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Omgosh!!!! I am so worried for Esme and Edward. I hope Edward can be as stubborn and bullheaded ad his dad. Maybe Edward will take out his father. Or pretend to follow his dad and gather information and then everything over to the cops. Lol. That would be too funny.
Date: 22 Jun 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Not sure my psyche can handle this. I'm already getting a quesey(?) stomach. Could we just get to the kicking the rat bastards ass. Oh pookies I hope the statute of limitations hasn't run out on her evidence. Ugh now the knots are just getting bigger. Mark of a good writer; getting a physical reaction from the reader like snot sobbing when Dobby died in Harry Potter. Strapping myself in for the ride. Here we go........
Date: 21 Jun 2017 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
I am so caught up in this story. Pretty sure there will be some boo hooing on my part at some point. It's already very uncomfortable how horrible Carlisle is but I hope he gets what's coming to him. I hate mean bullies. Even fictional ones. I really love your writing!
Date: 06 Jun 2017 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
If I said I was scared would you call me a wuss? I know this is only a M rating but the way you have written Carlisle is so wicked, l don't think that Esme or Edward have a chance. I can't wait to read the next chapter but i can. Can't I? As I shiver and hide my eyes!!!
Date: 06 Jun 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
How sweet! That was so wonderful! A great way to first say I love you.
I'm so worried about Esme! I'm sure Bobby will see her and recognize her Carlisle is heartless and he's evil I'm so afraid of what he'll do to her! Looking forward to next chapter!
Date: 05 Jun 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Oh no. Carlisle's man is either going to see Edward or Esme while he is moving his daughter or they will be seen on the cameras that he sets up.i love how Edward told Bella of his feelings.