Date: 04 Oct 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart
wow, this chapter covers a lot , is like forward edward situation by 10 years i feel. anticipation is killing me . is just wierd to see bella choose this career as she is daughter of chief in small town and she was very innocent and now she had vip escourt wierd. and i am sure carlise knows about bella very well that she is the one edward grow up with it
Date: 27 Sep 2017 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart
WHAT OMG!!!! Bella is a escort!!!! WOW!!!
Betting time: Will they recognize each other???
19 say yes
13 say no
Who is going to start my Bridge day on October 21st???
Date: 26 Sep 2017 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart
Oh this is going to be fabulously good and l just can't wait. I wonder if they will recognise each other? I so feel for Edward, he has no one to confide in and no friend to trust. Am hoping Jasper eventually will be a source of help and an associate in bringing Carlise down.
Date: 06 Sep 2017 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart
Poor Edward! I can't wait for him to kill Carlisle and rescue his mom. Carlisle is beyond evil and deserves to be tortured and killed. Maybe Esme will find a way to get to the DVD and save them both. I wonder how long it will be until Edward sees Bella again. Did Esme leave anything behind that would give Charlie a clue to search for them? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Oh dear God, this is, l mean real bad. I hope Charlie find the dvd pretty soon. This Carlisle is evil incarnate and poor Esme is going to bear the brunt of it. Am having nightmare already. Wonderful writing, thank you, come back soon.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Oh no I hope edward kills carlisle or gets free before he is forced to have sex with some girl (which will most likely be rape on both ends cuz I'm sure it will be one of Carlisles victims) or is forced to.get married (though I'm sure edward can null it or get a divorce once he is free) but no way is edward going to give up bella that easily
Date: 06 Aug 2017 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Calisles mistake I thinking he can shape edward now with edward being a teenager and that he can trump his love for his mother....hes gonna regret that because he is going to give edward the tools that edwards gonna be able to use to kill him. I can't wait until carlisle sees his own son point a gun at him and know he caused his own death.....if the guards are smart they wouldn't touch their future bosses mother as they have a death wish
Date: 06 Aug 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Carlisle is crazy to think you can take a mature boy and change him into a Mafia don. He'll fight him all the way even if it takes years until he has enough power to do so. Carlisle's time would have been better spent producing another heir.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Oh my!!!!! I am glad that Edward figured out things really quick and stood up to Carlisle. I hope one day and one day soon that Edward will TAKE his place away from Carlisle and then make him pay very slowly for everything that he has done. And maybe even let Esme have some revenge on Carlisle.
Date: 03 Jul 2017 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Oh no! I don't think Edward is going to be happy about this and we know Esme won't be happy. Poor Bella and Edward. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so worried about them all and how they're going to cope with things.
Date: 02 Jul 2017 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
i was almost afraid to see that you had posted...this is so bad...i do not think i can make myself read the horrible things yet to come for esme and edward...why not let charlie figure things out by finding the metal box and disposing of carlisle.
Date: 25 Jun 2017 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Thank you so much, Clo. It was quite a shock when I saw it but everything is so much better now :). I still can't imagine how you plot this and think of new situations and characters personalities. You always amaze me with your humour, sexy times and your downright scary times. Love reading your stuff.
Date: 23 Jun 2017 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Omgosh!!!! I am so worried for Esme and Edward. I hope Edward can be as stubborn and bullheaded ad his dad. Maybe Edward will take out his father. Or pretend to follow his dad and gather information and then everything over to the cops. Lol. That would be too funny.