Date: 02 Nov 2022 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
I'm nervous for them in San Francisco!
Who will spot them?
Date: 02 Nov 2022 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Yowza!
Talk about brutal!
Date: 22 Jul 2022 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
I would love maybe a future take of them and Esme's HEA.
Date: 22 Jul 2022 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
I would love maybe a future take of them and Esme's HEA.
Date: 21 Jul 2022 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 12 Revelations
I wouldn't put it past Carlisle to stoop so low and have cameras in Edward's room while he's with Bella since she wouldn't allow Carlisle to watch. Nasty Fucker!
Date: 21 Jul 2022 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
My stomach is doing flip flops worried about what Carlisle has planned for Esme.
Date: 17 Aug 2021 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart
kill Carlile
Date: 17 Aug 2021 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
evil bastard
Date: 17 Aug 2021 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
love it
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Great ending!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment
Great
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Wonderful
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
Amazing
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Awesome
Date: 04 Apr 2021 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Uh-oh!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
Excellent
Date: 04 Apr 2021 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Fantastic
Date: 04 Apr 2021 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
Terrific
Date: 04 Apr 2021 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
Fabulous
Date: 04 Apr 2021 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream
Go Bella!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 12 Revelations
Excellent
Date: 04 Apr 2021 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart
Fantastic
Date: 04 Apr 2021 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 10 Wandering Heart
Poor Bella!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart
I hate Carlisle! Poor Edward!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Poor Edward
Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Great
Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Uh-oh!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Loved it
Date: 04 Apr 2021 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Loved it
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Loved it!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
Great!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Loved it! Carlisle is a prick!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Loved it! Carlisle is a prick!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Loved it! Carlisle is a prick!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:35 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Loved it!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:35 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Loved it!
Date: 04 Apr 2021 5:35 AM Title: Making a Run for It
Loved it!
Date: 06 Aug 2020 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
I was really hoping you'd show Esme noticing something was off
Date: 03 Aug 2020 9:58 PM Title: Making a Run for It
So loving your stories
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Would love a sequel!
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment
As always, u don’t disappoint!
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
So, maybe this isn’t over?
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
I don’t know how u are going to finish this with one more chapter!
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Hope Charlie can help him!
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Things are coming to a head quickly!
Date: 10 Feb 2019 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
Why doesn’t he just have Bella go get the disc?
Date: 10 Feb 2019 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Glad he has a plan, but bet it won’t be easy!
Date: 10 Feb 2019 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
I was going to stop here, but I think I need to read more!
Date: 10 Feb 2019 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
Can’t wait until they take down the mighty Carlisle!
Date: 10 Feb 2019 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream
Well, that wasn’t the reunion I was expecting!
Date: 10 Feb 2019 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 12 Revelations
So close!
Date: 10 Feb 2019 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart
Can’t wait until they are reunited and can deal with Carlisle!
Date: 24 Jan 2019 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
A sequel of this would be most welcomed. Hint, hint.
Date: 23 Jan 2019 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 10 Wandering Heart
What a sad state of affairs! I’m guessing she moved to Chicago.
Date: 23 Jan 2019 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart
Can’t wait until Carlisle gets what is coming to him!
Date: 23 Jan 2019 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Maybe Bella can find the tape before it gets too bad!
Date: 23 Jan 2019 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
So sad for all of them!
Date: 23 Jan 2019 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
I think this is going to get ugly really fast! Poor Edward. He is in for a rude awakening.
Date: 15 Jan 2019 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
So sweet!
Date: 15 Jan 2019 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Why do I think that this trip to San Francisco is going to be a mistake?
Date: 15 Jan 2019 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
That was such an uplifting chapter after the previous one!
Date: 15 Jan 2019 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Few write gore like you!
Date: 15 Jan 2019 9:46 PM Title: Making a Run for It
So excited to start another of your stories! Wonderful beginning!
Date: 14 Dec 2018 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
I’m dreading what will happen when Carlisle catches up with them. And I know he will!
Date: 13 Dec 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Wow. Brutal.
Date: 10 Aug 2018 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Great story
Date: 10 Jul 2018 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
wow
Date: 09 Jul 2018 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
so Carlisle has been torturing some guy in his basement for 15 years? whi already didn'y have a penis
Date: 09 Jul 2018 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
gruesome but I love your stories
Date: 28 Jun 2018 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart
ten times the rate means she charges 20,000.00 a night?
Date: 13 Jun 2018 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
thank you for writting this story finally i read the full story of yours. great job
Date: 14 May 2018 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Great story with a cool twist. Would love a sequel.
Date: 13 May 2018 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
I loved your story. That was some of the most gruesome take downs I have read in a mob story. Thank you for sharing your story.
Date: 11 May 2018 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
So good
Date: 08 May 2018 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
As always you deliver a thrilling and quiet chilling mafia story. The violence that Carlise brought to those around him was frightening. Congratulations on two nominations on fic of the month they are well deserved. I always enjoy your stories. Thank you.
Date: 06 May 2018 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Great story! Thank you
Date: 03 May 2018 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
i hope bella is feeling very very guilty right now.
not only has she gotten malcom in trouble, but she has messed
the whole plan on this. of course, busybody alice would be the cause
of the whole thing. sorry but i do have some issues with alice
and bella here.
Date: 02 May 2018 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
definitely deserves a sequel!!!
Date: 01 May 2018 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
I loved it dark and crazy thank you
Date: 01 May 2018 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
nice update
Date: 30 Apr 2018 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
It was a pleasure to follow your fiction and those characters through their story and love.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 30 Apr 2018 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Thank you for a lovely story...I did want to hear from Esme again..maybe there wil be a sequel
Date: 30 Apr 2018 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment
Yay Carlise is finally going to get what's coming to him...what he deserves!!!well done..until you post again
Date: 30 Apr 2018 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Yay! A perfect ending...I mean...beginning for their future and finally an HEA for them all! *Sighs*
An awesome story with great characters that I’ll really miss. You really shook things up in the “canon” blender and it turned out great. So kudos.
Thanks so much for a great read once again. Looking forward to next time. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 30 Apr 2018 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment
Now that was a rescue MobWard style! I’m sure they’re not done with “Dickless”. And Charlie has gone to the Dark side, which in this case is really the Light side in comparison.
So glad Bella survived her own escape and I’m not sure I knew JB was Jacob...but it was a shocker for me.
I can’t believe I’m about to read the last chapter. I’ve loved this story and will miss it. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 30 Apr 2018 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
I can tell you I love this story specially the ending
Date: 30 Apr 2018 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Loved it!!!!
Date: 30 Apr 2018 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
AAlso what happened to Esme?
Date: 30 Apr 2018 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!! I hope there is a future chapter or maybe a sequel. Thank you for writing and sharing with is.
Date: 30 Apr 2018 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Great ending. TY for writing and sharing
Date: 30 Apr 2018 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Loved this story.
Date: 30 Apr 2018 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Aww man a gas explosion ’!!!! You know there are other was to burn a house down. Just saying!!!
We loved it!!!
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”‘
Date: 30 Apr 2018 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment
My men out in pain thanks to hearing you cut off Carlise manhood. Mason said “All there is left to do is char him”.
KEEP WRITING ✍️ ❤️’”‘
Date: 30 Apr 2018 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment
Glad they are finally taking the arsehole down
Date: 30 Apr 2018 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Thank you for the wonderful story.
Date: 30 Apr 2018 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Thanks...though it got a little gory.
Date: 29 Apr 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Great story. Thank you
Date: 29 Apr 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Great story. Thank you
Date: 29 Apr 2018 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
:) loved this story
Date: 29 Apr 2018 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment
:)