Date: 30 Jan 2018 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Thank you for the update....NO!!! Carlise shouldn't have her...Can't Edward & Esme catch a break...Like Carlise will not harm Bella...Of course he will!!! I just hope she opens a can of whip ass on him when he tries something with her...Where are the men that are loyal to Edward? Why would Jasper act that way with Alice? Edward needs to get to forks and get the disk..better yet get Charlie to bring it, so he can whip Carlise ASS!!!...I really can't wait for the next update...until you post again..WELL DONE!!!
Date: 30 Jan 2018 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Oh shit is right!!! Edward and Jasper have been planning this for a very very long time. I hope they have back plans in place! I hope you don’t keep us in suspense for too long! Love this story so much.
Date: 30 Jan 2018 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Happy Belated birthday to me.
Bet: Will Carlise have sex with Bella or will Bella give Carlise blue balls??
10 say Carlise will take Bella
20 say Bella will give Carlise blue balls
KEEP WRITING โ๏ธ!!!!โค๏ธ๐’๐”ฅ๐‘๐
Date: 27 Jan 2018 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
I got a couple chapters behind and had to play catch-up. So glad the takedown has begun. Uh oh! What is Jasper going to think about Alice?! Alice needs to start explaining quickly. Looking forward to the next chapter.
And I loved the the Eddie Murphy reference in the last chapter. I loved the Eddie Murphy movies in the 80’s. Uh
Date: 21 Jan 2018 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
I'm wondering why he doesn't send Bella back to get the video. Then he would not have to leave town and Carlisle would not miss him. After what Edward told Carlisle about Bella being frigid in bed I'm sure Carlisle would not be watching or looking for Bella . As always can't wait for another update.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
thank you so much for the update...Carlisle will finally get whats coming to him...I want Edward to find the proof his mother has for him under the floor boards...well done!! Can't wait for next upate
Date: 11 Jan 2018 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Love this chapter. Serious been waiting so long for the last one that when I saw this update, not only was my week great from Chicago 15, it became even better !!!!! Still love it. Can’t wait to see where you’ll take this story.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Ok, again I have readd this chapter some where. Have you posted some where else maybe?
If you are part of my book group you are getting a first look at them on my blog page.
Date: 09 Jan 2018 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
thank you for the updates..well done...They really need to play it safe...I can't believe Carlisle doesn't recognize Bella...Atleast I hope he dosen't...I hope Edwards gets the proof quick, it has to be in the floor of their playhouse....That means they will have to go to Forks...until you post again
Date: 29 Nov 2017 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
I can't stand that he found them.
I hope that Bella & Edward's connection has left her "feeling" him out there.
Please, please don't kill Esme or harm her too much. I want to see her get revenge.
I don't want to believe that Edward will become like his father.