Date: 29 Apr 2018 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Thank you for the story. Good one
Date: 29 Apr 2018 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Really enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing.
Date: 29 Apr 2018 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Aww man a gas explosion 💥!!!! You know there are other was to burn a house down. Just saying!!!
We loved it!!!
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Date: 29 Apr 2018 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment
My men out in pain thanks to hearing you cut off Carlise manhood. Mason said “All there is left to do is char him”.
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Date: 29 Apr 2018 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment
ouch... Carlisle got what he desrved. I kinda feel sorry for Bobby but I cant reach lol.
Date: 29 Apr 2018 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Carlisle the dickless wonder is gone for good and now they can live in relative peace. It's nice to know that Bella will have her parents close by again and a part of the 'family'.
Date: 29 Apr 2018 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
Now that all the darkness is behind them, Edward and Bella can look forward to a bright future! Very enjoyable read!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2018 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
All the loose ends nicely tidied up for E and B to begin again! Hopefully with no more chain saws!
Date: 29 Apr 2018 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future
All the loose ends nicely tidied up for E and B to begin again! Hopefully with no more chain saws!
Date: 29 Apr 2018 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment
If anyone deserved to lose their dick, it was Carlisle! And Charlie takin' Bobby B's nose was just icin' on the cake! Hell'n Carlisle should be proud at the way Edward turned out...the baddest ass in the whole damn town LMAO!
Date: 29 Apr 2018 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment
I really like the line "Edward's men were left unshaved, other than a few lucky nicks."
Date: 29 Apr 2018 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 22 Blood Payment
Oh my!!!!!! I'm glad Edward cut Carlisle's dick off. Lol. I am a little surprise that Charlie was so vicious. He is going to take to the dark side real easy it seems.
Date: 23 Apr 2018 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Dang, Clo darlin'! I can't believe I just blew through all 21 chapters! Sure am lookin' forward to the next update!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
Very subtle way of takin' Carlisle out for the night leavin' Bella safe...well, there' still that fucker, Bobby B! Hopefully, he's not stupid enough to try to take her before Carlisle gets a taste *shudder!*
Date: 23 Apr 2018 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Not surprised Charlie busted Edward sweet ass LOL! But he's not gonna be happy with what he's about to learn, I'm afraid!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Aw, crap! Some bodyguard Malcolm is...NOT!!! And now Edward has revealed his only ace before he was ready!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 17 Preparing for Battle
Oooh! Just because Edward isn't Carlisle doesn't mean he can't be a hard ass when the occasion arises...as they will all soon learn!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 16 Shakedown, Breakdown, Takedown
Woohoo! It's game on, baby!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
Carlisle will sniff out this change in Edward's demeanor before he can even blink...unless he's distracted by business, preferably business trouble that requires his entire attention for a while!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
These two broken hearts are gonna need time to mend but at least a start has been made!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream
Well, that went well *snickers!*
Date: 23 Apr 2018 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 12 Revelations
The hell Esme's been livin' doesn't bear thinkin' about, especially as nothin' can be done until Carlisle breathes his last breath! Dang, I'm excited for Edward and Bella to see each other again...but I'm wonderin' if Alice doesn't twig first!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11 Cold Black Heart
Heheheheh! Boy, is Edward gonna be surprised! Gonna be damned hard not to give the game away the instant they meet!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 10 Wandering Heart
If Bella has landed up in Chicago, she might be in for the shock of her life!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Saying Goodbye to Your Heart
Here's hopin' Carlisle gets more than he bargained for and doesn't get off any lighter than Johnny did...hell'n that bullet between the eyes was a mercy!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Confessions
Edward and Esme have a hard row to hoe before they have any chance at all of takin' Carlisle down but I know they'll persevere!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
Bloody hell! Esme never got the chance to tell Charlie or Renee about the damn DVD! Hope Bella finds it somehow *sigh!*
Date: 23 Apr 2018 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
Oh, noooo! The only thing standin' between Esme and Edward and complete doom is Charlie, even if he doesn't know it...yet! I suspect he's gonna need to know very soon!
Date: 23 Apr 2018 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sunset Confessions
Ah, hell! You're gonna give me a heart attack, aren't you! Edward's too young to have his whole world turned upside down *whimper!*
Date: 23 Apr 2018 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 4 Friends or Not?
Edward and Bella have been joined at the hip since they were mere months old so it was inevitable deep and lastin' feelin's would arise...along with something else, I'm thinkin' LOL! But I'm very anxious about the art show *nail bite!*
Date: 23 Apr 2018 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future
Art will be a wonderful outlet for Esme/Marie but only if she doesn't let herself get pushed into goin' public with it! *shudder!*
Date: 23 Apr 2018 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath
Here's hopin' it takes years and years before Carlisle gets wind of where Esme and Edward live...that way, he'll be out of men to send after them *snickers!*
Date: 23 Apr 2018 7:06 PM Title: Making a Run for It
So much for waitin' for you to hit the complete button LOL! I love the idea of Esme escapin' her life in the mafia and takin' Edward...um, Tony with her! Glad she picked Forks!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2018 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Phew! So glad it was JB that caught her. And look at Charlie being all badass with Jasper. Love that guy who’s willing to go to the “dark side” to keep his family safe.
Awesome chapter, my sweetie. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 18 Apr 2018 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
I’m taking a guess that jb is Jacob lol. But can he really be trusted I’m looking forward to the next update
Date: 17 Apr 2018 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 17 Apr 2018 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
short but good. Glad Charlie is on E's side. Carlisle ain't gonna know what hit him.
Date: 16 Apr 2018 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Ooo that will be a relief for edward that she is almost free.
Date: 16 Apr 2018 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Bella is Very stupid...edward told her about his father and his plans yet she risks that instead of having alice come to her. Grr cant wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2018 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Thank you so much for the update...Yay Charlie is on Edward side and will help him with his daughter...Thank God JB caught Ana or she really could have gotten hurt pretty bad....I can't wait for Carlisle to come out of the crapper...lol..thought he was going to have a good time..sike!!! I sure hope Esme is still safe...until you post again
Date: 16 Apr 2018 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Go Charlie!!! I can’t wait to see what happens to Carlisle! So glad it was someone loyal to Edward that caught Bella and not one of Carlisle’s clunkier. I am so excited and looking forward to the next chapter!!
Date: 16 Apr 2018 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
nice update
Date: 16 Apr 2018 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Well I am glad JB caught her and that her daddy has joined them. So Carlilsle had a potty problem. LOL LOL
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2018 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
:)
Date: 15 Apr 2018 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
OUFFFFF ! She seems to be out of any hurt now.She will be in Edward's arms in no time, now.
Something fun when Bella heard Carlisle grunting and moaning in the toilet. LOL !
If Edward kills his "father" his ass on the toilet, it could be even funnier. So full of shit.
Date: 15 Apr 2018 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
YES! I can't wait and I would love to see Charlie and Edward working together to kick Carlisle's ass before letting Bella send the mother fucker to hell.
Date: 15 Apr 2018 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Love that Charlie is joining Edward.
Date: 15 Apr 2018 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Glad Bella got caught by someone friendly
Date: 15 Apr 2018 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Thank goodness he was there to catch her fall. I can't wait until Edward gets rid of Carlisle. I hope he gets the same treatment be bestowed on Esme .
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2018 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Charlie is onboard, she escaped and Carlisle has 'issues'. Will they catch him with his pants down and having gastro intestinal problems? Hope so!
Date: 15 Apr 2018 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
I knew Charlie would be on Edward's side. I laughed when Charlie knocked Jasper on his butt. Bella was lucky that JB was there to catch her. Who is JB? As always you leave me wanting more and more.
Date: 15 Apr 2018 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Good chapter.
Date: 15 Apr 2018 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose
Can't wait to see what is going to happen next... love this story!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2018 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
Love it can't wait to read more
Date: 10 Apr 2018 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
I'm so glad that Edward brought into his trust. Charlie can handle himself and would do anything for Bella.
Date: 28 Mar 2018 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
I knew Charlie would go with him. Go JP for derailing Carlisle's plans!!!
Date: 28 Mar 2018 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Well at least Malcolm got him there in one piece. Thinking Charlie is going to want in on the action to take out Carlisle.
Date: 26 Mar 2018 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
I just started reading this and I am in total love with it. Please post soon
Date: 25 Mar 2018 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
Great :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2018 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
i'm glad charlie is going with edward...definitely cannot wait to read next chapter...
Date: 24 Mar 2018 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
If Charlie came with Edward without his gun, I'm sure Edward is able to provide him one that is untraceable. Great chapter. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2018 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
Bad oysers is the least of Carlisles problems!
Date: 24 Mar 2018 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
Glad Charlie is going along and participating
Date: 24 Mar 2018 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2018 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
NOOOOOOO! I have to wait for updates now!!! I am SO glad I found this story. I really want to jump into the story so I can smack Carlisle around lol!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2018 7:14 PM Title: Making a Run for It
I’m loving reading a story with Edward and Bella as babies, not instateens. Excellent!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2018 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
Well Charlie is going with him! Let’s get him once and for all.
It was brilliant to give the DVD to Alice. At least he goes down no matter what. But hopefully they all get to live to see it happen.
Plus I loved the laxative in his oysters. LOL! That’ll teach him to even think about messin with TonyWard’s woman!
Love this story and you, my sweet girl! Thanks for the update...I’ve been missing them! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2018 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
Thank you for that lovely update...Charlie & Edward are on a mission so save Bella and take Carlisle down!!!!...I can't wait...them making Carlisle sick to funny..thought he was going to get some nuckie...until you post again
Date: 23 Mar 2018 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
I didn’t expect to see Charlie in the mix of things. This should be very very interesting and exciting! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2018 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
nice update
Date: 23 Mar 2018 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
I really like the relationship between Charlie and Edward. Am not sure if Charlie will be help or hinderance. His view of Edward is about change to either that of respect or disgust due to what he had to do to rid of his evil father. Am at the edge of my seat, and can't wait for more. What is Alice part in all this and why did Jasper have to seek permission from her? Thank you for the wonderful update.-:)
Date: 23 Mar 2018 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
I knew Charlie was going to come with him. Can't wait for it all to go down.
Date: 23 Mar 2018 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
Nice! I like Carlisle spending the night on the toilet
Date: 23 Mar 2018 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
We have missed you!!!!
Well Carlise will be in even more trouble now that daddy Swan is coming to Chicago and he took his baby girl. Lol
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[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2018 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
:)
Date: 23 Mar 2018 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker
Loved how you got Carlisle out of the way for the night!
Date: 17 Mar 2018 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Nice
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2018 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
You can't stop here!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2018 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Melting Ice Cream
Was Alice working with Carlisle?
I think I'd like to see Bobby die a worse death than Carlisle at this point. He's nothing but a sniveling coward.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2018 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 15 Finding Their Way Back to Each Other
Wasn't he concerned that his car was bugged.
I thought their reunion would've been more dramtic.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2018 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 14 Ripping off the Bandaid
Why doesn't she ask him about his sex life? I don't care that he was forced.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2018 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 13 It Must be a Dream
Go Bella!!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2018 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Explosive Changes
I hope that Carlisle gets his one day.
Date: 09 Mar 2018 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Uh oh! This should be interesting! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2018 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 6 - West Coast Surprise
A very different Carlisle.
Date: 08 Mar 2018 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 08 Mar 2018 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
nice update
Date: 06 Mar 2018 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
CCharlie has caught Edward. Now he can help take Carlisle. What in the world is Charlie going to think?
Date: 05 Mar 2018 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Now Edward is in for a lot of explanations to do to Charlie...
Date: 05 Mar 2018 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Love the new chapter. Hope you’re well! Can’t wait to read the next chapter as Alabama :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2018 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Thank you for the upate...thank god Edward found the disc...Now Edward has some back up to save bella...I can't wait for the next update...Please ,I hope Carlisle hasn't harmed Bella at all and the Esme got out...until you post again
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2018 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
I’ve been reading on the blog. Sorry no reviews but I’m loving it. And I hope Edward gets it taken care of in time so Bella can be rescued!
I’m so glad Charlie “recognized” him as Tony”!
What an exciting chapter and heart-pounding story this is! Love you, my Sweetie! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}
- FangirlinGranma Dee
Date: 05 Mar 2018 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
I hope Charlie can help. I also hope Bella gets to beat the sh$t out of Carlisle
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2018 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
:)
Date: 05 Mar 2018 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
OMG It's about time ...
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2018 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
At least he got the disk. Now will Charlie be a help????
Date: 05 Mar 2018 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Aw man so Malcom is not the mole to Edward.
Ok now Charlie needs to go with Edward and shot Carlise up.
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Date: 05 Mar 2018 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Guys hurry say what you want but needy little Alice drew Bella out She deserves the pain Bella will feel
Date: 05 Mar 2018 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
That woudl be so shocking.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2018 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future
Omg I can’t wait till next chapter. What will Charlie say. Will he help Edward. Will he get back to bella in time. What happened to the pilot