Date: 19 Apr 2021 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 18
I just reread this story again! Please please continue this story. I've loved all of your stories and I'm keeping this on alert just in case. My fingers are crossed and I'm sending positive thoughts and energy.
Date: 17 Jan 2021 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
Just re read this <3
Loved it!! Please update soon!
I wonder if Edward will burst in? Or if James takes her how long until Edward finds her?? :)
Date: 07 Aug 2019 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow eine tolle Geschichte. Ich hoffe du findest die Zeit weiter zu schreiben.
Date: 02 Jan 2019 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!
Date: 29 Jul 2018 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
Please post soon! Have Edward kick the crap out of James
Date: 10 Jun 2018 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope you will post again soon.
Date: 17 Apr 2018 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ugh Someone needs to put James down and soon.
Date: 16 Apr 2018 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Sorrry im so late to review, but as you said, Rl has a way on sneeeking up on you. Dad promised her to James. Now I feel somebody should bring daddy dearest back to life so he can be kicked a bit or a bit more. We will have to take Jmes instead and peel his skin off with a cheeseknife. And where is Edward or will it be Emmet for the rescue? Maybe the nurse can hit James with the bedpan while we are waiting. Anyway hope everything is fine in scotland. We are slowly getting warmer weather here in germany. Take care Susanne Nossek
Date: 27 Mar 2018 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Bella, she can't seem to catch a break when it comes to James.
Where's Edward!!! I can't imagine him leaving her on her own when James is such a nasty threat!!!
Happy Writing and I hope RL gets better for you!!!!!!
Date: 21 Mar 2018 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
Where is Edward and his guards? Poor Bella
Date: 05 Mar 2018 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my goodness! This is unbelievable!!! Charlie sold her to anyone he wanted to get away from. Where the hell is Edward? I hope he kicks James’ ass for hurting Bella. I also hope Bella sees that Edward means her no harm. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 24 Feb 2018 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh my gosh!!!!!!! How in the world did James get in her room? Where the hell is Edward?
Date: 22 Feb 2018 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter! Update soon plz.
Date: 19 Feb 2018 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
Where the Hell is Edward and why aren't there guards to protect Bella. Something is very wrong with the entire situation!!!!
Date: 19 Feb 2018 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no! Where’s Edward?! Surely he’s close by. He wouldn’t have left her alone and unprotected. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 18 Feb 2018 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
Where the hell did Edward go?
Date: 18 Feb 2018 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 18
Where the hell did Edward go?
Date: 18 Feb 2018 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
This is really really bad!
Date: 18 Feb 2018 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 18
Poor Bella. Where is Edward?
Date: 18 Feb 2018 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward's disappearance is suspicious.
Did James really expect a response from the injured Bella? Is he really that far removed from reality that he did see her unresponsive body?
Date: 18 Feb 2018 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward's disappearance is suspicious.
Did James really expect a response from the injured Bella? Is he really that far removed from reality that he did see her unresponsive body?
Date: 18 Feb 2018 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG please post again soon, amazing story
Date: 18 Feb 2018 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG where is Edward and when is he going to come in and kill James???????? I hope you are kicking RL in the ass and all is good :)
Date: 04 Feb 2018 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
I’m loving this story! Thanks for sharing.
Date: 23 Jan 2018 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
I can hardly wait to see what Edward does to take out the threat of Laurent, James and Victoria!!!!
Date: 23 Jan 2018 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
Can you blame E for being nervous about how she'd react. She's not exactly Ms Calm and Collected. LOL
Date: 22 Jan 2018 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
He is very worried about her. Laurent does not have long to live.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is starting to rethink he thoughts and feelings about Edward! I wonder what information they’ll learn from “questioning” Laurent?! I reread this story from the beginning, again! I love this story and can’t wait to hear what’s next. I’m so glad you’re back, but understand the need to take care of yourself. Hope all is well and that things are getting better!
Date: 22 Jan 2018 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
I think she can hanldle the lifestyle just fine.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
But who tipped off James?
Date: 22 Jan 2018 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
But who tipped off James?
Date: 22 Jan 2018 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can’t wait for more
Date: 22 Jan 2018 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
Stupid phone ringing!!
Date: 21 Jan 2018 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter! I’m glad there was a moment of tenderness between the two. I can’t wait to see what Laurent has to say. Also, can we get a glimpse into why James wants her so badly? My guess is that Charles sold her to more than one person, but it could just be that she’s been unattainable to James until now. Just curious to see why she’s so important to him.
Date: 21 Jan 2018 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 17
Who told James? Someone from the homeless center? Glad they were ok.
Date: 15 Jan 2018 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
I hope they're both okay!!!! I wouldn't want t be the person who hit the car, deliberate or not!!!!!
Happy writing!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward shocked Bella, again!!!! I'm glad she told him what was on her mind!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm glad the girls made peace with one another!!! There are still more questions then answers for both of them!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm glad things are better and she thanked him!!! I'm sad she didn't give him the portrait she'd drawn of him. I thin he'd of really lied and appreciated it!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hope Bella does say than you to Edward!!!
I really hate for Jasper to be upset!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hope Bella does say than you to Edward!!!
I really hate for Jasper to be upset!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
It seems things are getting better and I hope they continue to do so. I also hope she tells Edward thank you!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
It seems things are getting better and I hope they continue to do so. I also hope she tells Edward thank you!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella's so afraid ad doesn't know which way to turn. She's afraid of Edward what's going to happen next!!!!
Edward seems sincerely trying to help her!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Poor Emmett, he needs a Doctor, stitching up, tetanus shot and some pain meds.
Edward, as ever, is overbearing and Bella's terrified and in shock!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bella's trying to do the right thing and she's got a lot to learn even with her very kind and loving heart!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 6
Bella really loves Rose and is scared for her. She doesn't want her hurt in any way, shape or form!!!!
Edward truly seems concerned for Bella's well being. Maybe he's not a complete arse!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
He's got a heart???? Maybe????
Date: 15 Jan 2018 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
Got to love Alice!!! As least, she doesn't seem mean!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is a first class asshat!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella, she only wants an education!!!! Rose is gutsy and I love her!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2018 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hell of a start!!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Jan 2018 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG! Love Love your story can't wait to read next chapter and more! Please Please post soon ! Thank you for writing a wonderful story
Date: 12 Jan 2018 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ugh. just had to end it there didn't ya. ACK
Date: 11 Jan 2018 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh no, I guess no good dead goes unrewarded
Date: 11 Jan 2018 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh no, I guess no good dead goes unrewarded
Date: 11 Jan 2018 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh no, I guess no good dead goes unrewarded
Date: 11 Jan 2018 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
Holly SHIT just when things where getting better between them.
Date: 11 Jan 2018 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 10 Jan 2018 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
I hope they are both alright
Date: 10 Jan 2018 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
oh MY!!!...thank you for the update...why did they have to get into an accident? where are Edwards guards? Did someone hit them on purpose? thank god they had on seat belts....I can't wait to see what happens next...until you post again
Date: 10 Jan 2018 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Random accident or a directed hit? Who would have known that Edward was taking an unscheduled trip around the city?
Where is his entourage of protection go?
Date: 10 Jan 2018 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
Random accident or a directed hit? Who would have known that Edward was taking an unscheduled trip around the city?
Where is his entourage of protection go?
Date: 10 Jan 2018 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
Omgosh!!!!!!! Are they ok?
Date: 10 Jan 2018 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
A drunk Rose is a funny Rose. Will we be seeing more of her.?Lol. Can't wait for another update.
Date: 09 Jan 2018 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
thank you for the update....Let's see how giving the food away helps Bella to see Edward in a different light...until you post again
Date: 09 Jan 2018 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 15
Drunk Rose is not a good friend to have.
Date: 09 Jan 2018 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
Well at least she heard Rose out.
Date: 08 Jan 2018 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
He is not so bad ;)
Date: 08 Jan 2018 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
Maybe Edward isn't too bad. Rose is an idiot. I don't really like her. I don't think she is really Bella's friend.
Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 08 Jan 2018 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
This little trip might be really good for them!!
Date: 08 Jan 2018 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
Be Careful when you speak your mind Bella, you will be held accountable.
Rose isn't a very big help when it comes to Bella's predicament.
Date: 08 Jan 2018 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more
Date: 08 Jan 2018 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
She should have told Rose to stop drinking it was making her stupid.
Date: 07 Jan 2018 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 14
What does Rosalie's father know about Isabella's situation? Does he know how Bella's father ensnared her in this messed up arrangement with Edward?
One or two, even three acts of kindness do not change Edward's position within the organization. Can Isabella learn to accept his illegal dealings?
Date: 06 Jan 2018 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
Can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Jan 2018 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
So good to have an update from you. Happy New Year. Rose is right but Bella has a hard time believing anyone can be that good to her
Date: 06 Jan 2018 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
I wonder if edward was listening the entire time to that conversation?
Date: 06 Jan 2018 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
You've been missed :( but.... It's a New Year and I look forward to many many long long updates (he he he) Hey it's a New Year and one can hope right???? any and all updates are worth the wait.
READ YOU SOON. : )
Date: 06 Jan 2018 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad Rose and Bella got to talk. Can't wait for more updates on this story.
Date: 06 Jan 2018 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks for the update. I am axious to see how this relationship progresses.
Date: 06 Jan 2018 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
So happy to see this update worth waiting for of course 😁
Date: 07 Dec 2017 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well at least she said thank you. Can understand her confusion and all. I wondered how the Dad knew E