Date: 03 Feb 2024 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
Just found this story yesterday and could not stop reading ...
hopefully someday there will be more chapters as I am desperately waiting for it and to get to know who is responsible and if Bella and Edward get a chance together
it has been a couple of years but hope dies last ...
thank you very much for writing and sharing this story with us
greetings,
leinchen
Date: 03 Feb 2024 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
Just found this story yesterday and could not stop reading ...
hopefully someday there will be more chapters as I am desperately waiting for it and to get to know who is responsible and if Bella and Edward get a chance together
it has been a couple of years but hope dies last ...
thank you very much for writing and sharing this story with us
greetings,
leinchen
Date: 10 Apr 2023 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
HOLYSH*T!! I can not tell you how many times I have read this story!! I always think about this story these characters! I reread and then wish there had been more!!! *Sigh*
Date: 13 Jul 2022 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please update.
I ways read this story whenever I'm feeling down . This story gives me the strength to keep on reading whenever I have a readers block
Please please update
Date: 06 Aug 2021 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am utterly speechless with the ending and very desperate for the next chapters. I am dying to know what will happen in the story now. The last chapter is full of emotions and mysteries. Bella and Tanya are half sisters, Edward was the one who helped Sarah for her immediate surgery when bella left the voicemail in his office.
Date: 06 Aug 2021 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of the great story and i loved it. I would appreciate if you update the next chapters. Hopefully in the future.
Date: 05 May 2021 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story
Date: 05 May 2021 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this story
Date: 02 Apr 2021 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely adore this story and can't believe the cliffhanger it has ended on. Would love to see an update but thinking after this long it is unlikely.
I hope you are okay and that whatever has taken you away from updating this and Twitter isn't something awful. Take care x
Date: 10 Mar 2021 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
hope you come back soon
Date: 06 Jan 2021 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Such a great story - can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 02 Nov 2020 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 15
This is my favourite story of all time! I've been reading it and rereading for the last 10 years. Really hoping we'll see a chapter 16 soon? I'm not quite sure what beta required for ch 16 means, so I'll keep hoping we'll find out soon.
You are so talented.
Date: 27 May 2020 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait for an update, I love this story
Date: 25 May 2020 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait for an update, I love this story
Date: 25 May 2020 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait for an update, I love this story
Date: 25 Mar 2020 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
PLEASE UPDATE!!!! I've read this story so many time and cannot wait until it updates!!
Date: 05 Feb 2020 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
Noooo Charlie πππ
Date: 08 Jan 2020 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
Sigh, I love this story so much. It always comes to mind and I'm going to still review in the hopes that it's gets updated, especially after this big cliffy.
Date: 25 Nov 2019 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hey ,please update the story, dying to know whats going to happen next
Date: 25 Nov 2019 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
Hey ,please update the story, dying to know whats going to happen next
Date: 20 Nov 2019 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope that you will update soon and not abandon this story!!! It is so goood!!
Date: 23 Oct 2019 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please please finish this story! I’m dying to know what happens!
Date: 28 May 2019 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
I miss this story
Date: 26 May 2019 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hey when will you upload the rest of the story??
Date: 21 Apr 2019 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
Please, please , please update this story already!
Date: 12 Jan 2019 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
I know that this hasn't been updated in forever but I hope that you'll update soon! Hope everything is well!
Date: 15 Dec 2018 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
Nooo!!! I need more!! I fell in love with this story and couldn’t stop! I know RL happens but I just hope you haven’t abandoned it. I wait patiently (some what ππ) for an update!! I love this Edward, reminds me of my husband.
Date: 11 Dec 2018 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Please please please update. One of my favorite stories!
Date: 01 Aug 2018 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
This story is completely bewitching—I can’t stop re-reading! PLEASE UPDATE!!!
Date: 26 Jul 2018 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
Can you please update soon this story is amazing and what does beta required mean for chapter 16
Date: 11 Jul 2018 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
Please, please, PLEASE UPDATE! I love this so much, and I NEED to know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2018 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Please update soon!!! Literally my number one fav fic that I’ve read over and and over. I just need to know what comes next!!!!!
Date: 14 May 2018 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Plz update soon I am in love with your story and need more!!!
Date: 15 Apr 2018 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
Please can you please wright more to the story
Date: 25 Mar 2018 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Its been a year since your last update.Not fair to us ,please update soon.
Date: 20 Mar 2018 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please please please update this story! I need to know what happens!
Date: 01 Feb 2018 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Gosh I love this story. Please update soon!
Date: 05 Nov 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow! You are an amazing writer! Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope everything is okay with you!
Date: 05 Nov 2017 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
Fantastic chapter. TY for writing it.
Date: 09 Oct 2017 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
you are going to continue this, right?
Date: 29 Sep 2017 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
I keep hoping today is the day you update, I can't wait. I love this story!
Date: 21 Sep 2017 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please please update I am addicted to this story it's amazing!!!!π
Date: 20 Sep 2017 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please update guys...that is an awful cliff hanger you guys finished on!
Date: 09 Sep 2017 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG please update soon or let us know when the next is coming. I thought this story was dead but just noticed the new chapters.. Please continue. I love it
Date: 10 Aug 2017 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh my god. Please update soon. Dont leave me hanging. Love you xx
Date: 10 Aug 2017 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
Amazing amazing amazing. Love the whole story. I am patiently awaiting your next update. π
Date: 03 Aug 2017 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
I was so excited to get the email notice from fanfiction.net that this story had updated after such a long time! After reading from the beginning again, I have finally caught up with all of the chapters. Such a cliffhanger! I really do hope you continue to update. I've always loved this story - i've thought about it often. Even if it means another long hiatus, I will always be excited to get an update! I wish I had the skills of a beta - I would gladly help you continue! And honestly, I would continue reading the story regardless. Don't give up, you've created a great storyline with wonderful characters!
Date: 03 Aug 2017 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
This story has consumed me day and night for the last few days. I love all the characters, I have a huge fascination with a bad boy Edward, and you're Edward especially appeals to me. He's beautifully flawed and fiercely loyal. I like Bella''s relationship with Jake and the Grey Wolves and in was concerned for Bella being in the Middle of the 2 gangs and how it would impact her. Edward and Bella''s relationship is so intense, i was totally capitvated and theri lemons are seriously hot!!! I love how you've tackled the issue of Mental Health and how you've shown that despite having a seemingly perfect life, underneath a person may be suffering, but we can portray a brave face. I cannot wait for the next chapter xxx
Date: 31 Jul 2017 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
This story is absolutly AMAZING! I could not stop reading it. This chapter was so incredibly climactic; I am dying to know what will happen. I really hope that you choose to update soon! Thank you so much for writing
Date: 29 Jun 2017 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
poor bella so young..i think her mom was bipolar??????
Date: 26 Jun 2017 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Haha love it when she tells him off and he doesn't bad down
Breaks my heart when she hurts herself and doesn't even
Know it :(
Date: 11 Jun 2017 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for keep writing i really love this story. Cant wait for the next chapter
Date: 09 Jun 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
THANK GOD FOR THIS NEXT CHAPTER !! please get a beta soon bc i NEEED ch. 16 !!!!
amazing amazing amazing work.
obviously i hope thats e @ the door !! + an EPOV would be really cool.
Date: 31 May 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
Amazing as always! I'm so happy that this story has been continued.
It is one of my all time faves!
Anxiously looking forward to Chapter 16!
Date: 25 May 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh. My. God. Oh my fucking God. Please, please, just please update. I need the next chapter so badly I can't fucking breathe. Oh my God. I first this story years ago, years! But then only 14 chapters had been updated and although I knew wasn't going to get complete satisfaction from this book because it wasn't finished, and I didn't belive you were going to update again, I still re-read this book over and over and over again, every few months. Imagine my surprise when I come onto the story again to see a chapter 15. And my God, you didn't dissapoint. My heart is pounding, I need the next chapter so bad. Thanks so much for updating again! Like I can literally jump in joy... except not er cos Charlie just died... but talk about a cliffhanger!
I live for this story, please keep updating!
Date: 16 May 2017 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
when will be an update? its unfair to readers .i hope you wont stop updating again.
Date: 29 Apr 2017 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
when will you update? its been too long since chapter 15 :(
Date: 28 Apr 2017 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for another great chapter.
Date: 27 Apr 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
When will you be updating? Please let it be soon!!
Date: 27 Apr 2017 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please say your updating soon! I already miss this story again!
Date: 26 Apr 2017 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
Pls pls ..i need ch16... love this so much..
Date: 26 Apr 2017 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
Please update soon! I need to know what happens!
Date: 25 Apr 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait for the next chapter this story is so amazing
Date: 23 Apr 2017 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
please update soon pitty me please . cant wait anymore.
Date: 20 Apr 2017 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Love your story but your keeping me in suspense!!
Date: 20 Apr 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hope it was edward not Seth she needs edward more then what the wolves can give her mentally
Date: 18 Apr 2017 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Had me in tears. Honestly I am so distraught. Please update asap cause this is so sad I need more. Beautifully written!
Date: 10 Apr 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad your story is back loved it can't wait to read more .
Date: 10 Apr 2017 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 15
Cant wait for more. I love this story
Date: 09 Apr 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow ! You can really tell a story. This should be a movie!! So glad you are back. Any idea when the next chapter will be posted? : )
Date: 05 Apr 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've just reread the whole story. You've created such a fabulous storyline, with great dialogue and passion, I'm so grateful to have the opportunity to read this. thank you for sharing xxxxx
Date: 05 Apr 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I've just reread the whole story. You've created such a fabulous storyline, with great dialogue and passion, I'm so grateful to have the opportunity to read this. thank you for sharing xxxxx
Date: 04 Apr 2017 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
OmG cliffhanger of doom and despair. I hope you are writing away the next chapter! I'm going to be thinking about this one, which, with the number of WIPs I read, that's a huge compliment to your writing. Update when you can. Brett I've read in a very long while!
Annie B
Date: 04 Apr 2017 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 15
This was such an amazing chapter! I was so excited for an update. I can't wait for chapter 16! You are my favorite author, thank you so much for sharing your story.
Date: 03 Apr 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
i would have loved alternating Edward POV's. i would be interested in
what and how he feels about everything...he is such an important and
interesting character who made the biggest impact in this fic...
he is so patient with bella who is still very irritatingly immature both in age and
in behavior, i really don't know how he does it. yes, he calls her "soulmate"
and seems so much more mature and worldly...opposites attract?
i want to know everything about him since he is such an essential
part to this story. this is such a gripping story, hope to read more soon.
Date: 02 Apr 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love, love this story you are a very gifted writer. I hope you continue with this story soon please. Thank you for reposting the story. Thank you for writing this story :-)
Date: 02 Apr 2017 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh WoW! This story is better than I remember. Now who is after the chief? Is Seth and the other wolves on their way because they still care? and Is Edward coming to help her, because she is definietly hitting rock bottom...
Date: 31 Mar 2017 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for updating I love this story. You are very descriptive! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 31 Mar 2017 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
This is literally one of the best stories I've ever read on fanfiction twcs etc but his chapter really fucked my whole life up like you really got me thanks. But can't wait til you update I don't wanna be an asshole and be like update soon but update soon π€—
Date: 30 Mar 2017 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just just brilliant. Love this story. Thank you
Date: 30 Mar 2017 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Omg, seeing the fanfiction.net update email for this brightened my whole week. So happy to get back into this, the chapter took me on a fricken rollercoaster ride of emotions and I'm so excited to see what you have in store for the next one!
Date: 30 Mar 2017 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 15
That was so unexpected, the actual update and Charlie's death! Sheesh. On tenterhooks for the next chapter, hope it doesn't take years again!
Date: 30 Mar 2017 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 15
Just found this story and read streight through. Can't wait for the rest.
Date: 30 Mar 2017 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
You knocked the breath right out of me with this chapter. I will be haunting this site for chapter 16.
You are an extraordinary writer. You so fully develope your characters, I love their dialogues. Your storytelling is so suspenseful, emotional,loving, sensual...at times I don't even realize I am holding my breath. I am an avid reader and find all of these characteristics in a story rare.
I am so thoroughly enjoying this journey you are taking me on.
Thank you.
Susan
Date: 30 Mar 2017 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
tanya's beat down . . . amusing. can't wait to see how e reacts
glad b has rach
Date: 30 Mar 2017 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow! I love this story and so glad to have n update!!
Date: 29 Mar 2017 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
Well, if that cliffie doesnt just clench your cheeks!
I cannot WAIT till you update this. seriously.
Date: 29 Mar 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Just love love love this story. Thank you