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Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 169

thank you for the updates..well done

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 169

i feel for her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 169

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2017 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 169

Poor. Bella. I guess she feels like she was never wanted and no one will ever want her. 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 165

poor bella

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 165

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 165

What is wrong? Edward's dad would not be calling unless something was wrong.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 164

Why does she not want to be alone at the hospital? Did I miss something?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 163

Renee is evil. I am assuming that Renee did this stuff when Bella was younger since Rnee has been gone for a while and married Phil. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 160

They are finally letting their feelings be known to each other. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 159

That is pitiful for her to feel like that. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 158

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 160

nice updates

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 160

He will be fast

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 159

So sad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 158

That is so scarry

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 157

Dad is very worried about her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 156

Good will she know how did that to her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 155

He will take good care of her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 154

Love love love

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 153

Who did that to her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 152

What in the world

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 151

Seahawks better win lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 150

Who is calling

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 149

She will say yes lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 148

What's with the name

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 147

I think they are both happy that she is moving in

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 146

He is very sweet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 145

That was fast

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 160

oh so cute

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 160

Thank you for the updated....I still want to know what was injected into Bella & who was behind it....until you post again



Author's Response:

Surgical cerment that is use to fix bones in the body. It non toxic and basically harmless when used the correct way. Renee injected it in to Bella every night for her fun as she thought it would kill Bella eventually 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 160

Glad I found this here...I was reading on fictionpad!

Author's Response:

Sorry ficton pad wasn't being nice to me at all wouldn't let me put up the next chapter 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2017 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 160

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 155

He will take good care of her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 154

Glad he has his dad

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 156

i hope her mom get's what's comming to her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 156

:) :) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 153

Great updates, keep up the great work.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 153

thank you for the update....did her parents do that to her?  Wow Bells's been through alot



Author's Response:

Yes Renee did

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 153

i bet her mom had something to do with it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 153

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 153

Ok, I'm confused. Who did it and why???? Did Bella know ? Surely she knew something because she was getting a shot in her pelvic area. 



Author's Response:

Renee did it for fun. Bella was sleeping when it was done and as it was done slowly she didn't notice if happing 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 152

What was it? Am I  understanding correctly, that someone had put cement in her. Why?

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 153

Wth poor bella

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 153

I'm assuming Renee is responsible for the injections, no doubt hoping them to prove fatal so she can collect on the life insurance policy 

 

Reviewer: Gigi725 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

What in the world? HOW? 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 149

great updates

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 149

i wonder what's in her

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 149

Love Dr. Cullen for doing that.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 146

So glad Carlsile is trying to ease the tension. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 145

Is it life threating???? Why do it so soon?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 144

So glad that Edward is there with her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 143

I'm glad that Edward's dad was with her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 142

Oh my!!!!! 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 149

thank you for the updates

Reviewer: faith2905able Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 149

Things can happen 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 149

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 145

What is it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 144

She is so lucky to have him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 143

What did he find

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 142

Omg what could it be

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 145

thank you for the updates...well done...things are moving fast

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 145

nice updates

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 145

I hope she'll be alright 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 141

I hope he is not going to tell her something bad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 140

She is excited

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 139

So happy she will move in with him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 138

She needs love

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 137

Poor girl she was hoping it was a nightmare

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 136

He wants her there bad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 135

sounds like a nice place to live

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 141

OMG

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 141

love it so far i hope bella get her revenge

Reviewer: rocker9113 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 141

Please tell me Bella's parents pay for what they've done.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 141

I hope Carlisle does not have bad news for her. I am assuming that he might tell her that she is malunished.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 139

I'm so glad she accepted.  She is probably so tired of worrying about where her next meal will come from and everything else. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 137

Bless her heart. She thought she was dreaming. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 135

Edward's house sounds HUGE!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 141

:) :) 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 141

:O :O :O :O 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 134

she will be safe from now on

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 133

Bella is safe now

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 132

I still want to punch Renee in the face

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 131

They all love her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 130

Bella is moving on up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 129 EPOV

punch that bitch in the face. Edward is going to take her home with him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 128

Renee is going down

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 127

Renee is crazy

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 126

Phil knows that they screwed up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 125

I want to kick Renees ass

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 124

shit is going to hit the fan if that is her mother

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 123

He is going to hunt her mother down

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 122

he is in deep love

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 121

now he will find out who lives in the place with the broken window

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 120 BPOV

hot hot

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 119

her first kiss

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 118

she has such a big heart

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 117

Emmett is funny

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 116

She is funny to she is perfect

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 115

He is so sweet

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