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Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2017 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 40

nice update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2017 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 40

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 40

That was just because they are ment to be and it all begins with a hot dog

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 40

i hope he learns her real name soon

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 39

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 38

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 37

:) 

Reviewer: NelkaLife2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 39

I still don`t understand why she doesn`t get a job? she could at least buy food for herself. Thank you for an update 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 39

nice update

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 39

i don't like james

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 39

James is a dink 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 39

James screwed up he is a bad man.  that is ok Edward will feed her better food.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2017 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 38

Someone already got it fast

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 37

Yay! I wish she had given her real name....I don't want him to not trust her. But, maybe he'd understand her fears? 

grear chapter!,

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 37

she lied to him

Reviewer: debslmac Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 37

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 36

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 37

She did not tell him her real name

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 36

so happy he went to find her

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 37

She gave a facke name 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2017 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 36

ohhhh

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2017 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 35

nice updates

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 35

:) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 35

can't wait for more

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 35

He has to find her. 

What country are you from?

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 35

I want more and more lol I am really enjoying this story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 34

:) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 34

wait intil alice finds out it's bella

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 34

ohhhhhhhhhhhhh MORE MORE PLEASE PLEASE 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2017 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 34

It is going to kill Alice when she finds out it is Bella

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 33

:) 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2017 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 33

thank you for update...well done

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2017 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 33

He has to find her will Alice know who he is talking about?

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 32

On chapter 16 did Rosalie had the idea to have Edward meet Bella or is it just me

Author's Response:

That is an interesting point you have found but no that's what I planned

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 32

His eyes are open now when it comes to her.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 32

nice updates

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 32

Awww Edward those are life lessons if she keeps you away from your family why keep her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2017 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 32

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 31

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 30

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 31

It is a good thing he found out before it was to late and the baby was his

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

Tanya is not fooling anyone lol

Reviewer: Chrizzley Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 29

That was a way short chapter 

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 29

Great story! Anxious for him to meet Bella again. Wish these were longer, but I get it :p

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2017 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 29

nice story so far

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 29

thanks for the updates

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 29

Tanya is a piece of work WOW

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 28

Alice will want to go kick her ass

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2017 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 28

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2017 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 27

Is Alice going to say something about Bella

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2017 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 27

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2017 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 26

She is cra cra lol

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 26

Jajaja Edward Edward every woman wants to have your baby man I want longer chapters pzzzzz this is getting good I can't wait for both of them to meet

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2017 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 26

:) 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 25

๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 25

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

Tanya is a nasty person glad she left.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2017 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 25

I love this it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 23

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 24

WOW the Tanya has balls to show up there after what she had done.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2017 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

She is a pushy bitch

Reviewer: Melcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

Finally 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 22

He cant leave her there James is going to be mean to her.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 22

:) 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 22

MORE PLEASE!

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2017 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 21

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2017 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 21

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

I am getting so excited he is going to see Bella

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2017 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 20

โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2017 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 20

Is Bella going to pick up the hotdog he throughs away and he is going to see her do it?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2017 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

:) 

Reviewer: uma1994 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2017 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 19

What a mother? Am hoping Bella does well at the end of this fic, and for her mother to beg in the end.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2017 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 19

I really wish these were longer instead of just a paragraphs. And when are we going to meet Edward?



Author's Response:

You get to meet Edward tomorrow. It's a drabble which is why it's only a paragraph each time but I'm updating each weekday

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2017 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 19

So sad.  Poor Bella 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2017 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 19

Renee is a evil spitful bitch

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 18

Her mum was a horrible person 

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

Will we hear from Edward? And I do wish these chapters were longer 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2017 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 18

I want to kick Renee in the face

Reviewer: bellagirl Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2017 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

You really should state if this story is a drabble. The amount of lines/words you have in 17 chapters could equal 1 regular chapter.

Author's Response:

So you are that stupid that you couldn't work that out for yourself that I have to tell you that my story is a drabble

 

my story is a drabble.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 17

School is a cruel place

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2017 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 17

There are 'Mean Girls' wherever you go.... 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2017 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Bella she thinks she is unlovable :(

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2017 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 16

:) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 15

love it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 15

:) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

She needs more good people around her

Reviewer: Cheryl Signed star [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 14

The path that you are going with story is interesting. The only thing is that it's to slow and I am starting to loose interest in it, too short chapters and a lot of rambling. I would like to see what happens. I might look it up in a few months.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 14

Emmett trust Rose

Reviewer: uma1994 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2017 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 14

A promising fic that leaves you wanting more and wandering wth.

Reviewer: uma1994 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2017 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

Hmmmm, more confused. Why o so little chapters, l hope it gets better and bigger as you go along.

Reviewer: uma1994 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2017 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

Oh dear, who ould be at the door. If Bella has a house, how come she is penniles. I don't understand the concept and why she is this predicament. 

Reviewer: uma1994 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2017 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Aaaah poor Bella. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2017 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 14

:) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2017 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

I wish the chapters were longer. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

She has good people around her she needs to open up to them

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2017 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 13

:) 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2017 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

Sad she doesn't talk to Alice and let her help her where she can.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

She is trying so hard to survive and better herself at the same time.

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