Date: 14 Feb 2018 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 263
this story was weird...
however, i did looove the fact that there was
no nonsense drawn out crap against bella...
ie. tanya's pregnancy was immediately shown to
be not edward's, bella's mom being immediately
villainized by the family, tanya and renee's attempts
curbed at every turn...it was refreshing to read their attempts
not being coddled and put down quickly...i loved that...in some books,
bella is villainized for so long until the truth comes out which is so damn
frustrating... but, this is a strange way to end things...i imagine there
will be a sequel??
Date: 28 Oct 2017 3:48 AM Title: 391-394
Is Charlie Chief of Police in your story? Is that the reason the young man gasp when Bella told him who she was.
No charlie is not in the police. The cop just new of bella and was shocked to see her