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Reviewer: bba628 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2017 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 263

Bella sure did have a lot of changes in her life. Your story was very fast paced good for a drabble. Good Luck with your next story!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 263

i don't think much of bella mom and dad

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2017 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 263

great story

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 263

What the hell???? Is her whole family crazy? 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2017 3:48 AM Title: 391-394

Is Charlie Chief of Police in your story? Is that the reason the young man gasp when Bella told him who she was. 



Author's Response:

No charlie is not in the police. The cop just new of bella and was shocked to see her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 263

Wow!   Charlie was just as bad as Renee!!! Loved this story 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 263

thank you for the update...It wasn't Bella's fault that her Mom was a douch bag..he needed to take that gun to Renee 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 263

Bella has the stupidest family. They should have just killed Charlie. He will come back for more. They are all crazy.

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 263

Poor Bella

Reviewer: faith2905able Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 263

What is the deal with Bella,s parents?  Greedy and selfish, and deceitful.  I would dB is owned them so fast.  

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 263

OMG Charlie needs to go to jail and stay there with Renee.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 263

Wow what the hell just happened why did he try to kill her for the money 

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 263

What the.....

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 263

Hate to see it end.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 11:51 PM Title: 391-394

I cant wait

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 7:48 PM Title: 391-394

Great update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 1:49 PM Title: 391-394

:) :) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 1:39 PM Title: 391-394

Hmm what will happen when when they knock on the door 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 386- 390

Awe so sweet he is so sweet with her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 386- 390

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 386- 390

What a first day of being wife and husband.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV

I wonder what Bella is thinking 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 12:54 PM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV

Glad they are finally married. They have drama all around them. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV

Its snugle time

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV

thank you for the update...Yay they are married and consumated the wedding.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV

What a beautiful night for them 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2017 9:52 AM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV

nice update

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 4:12 PM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV

:) :) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 3:58 PM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV

Awe they are married so sweet but who was the gun man



Author's Response:

Just some random person

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 2:46 PM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV

thank you for the update..until you post again

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 2:44 PM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV

So glad they are finely married

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 6:50 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV

Renee is crazy and Tanya is not far behind her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 358-359

Ok, that was sooo not  Edward. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 353-357

I would have never expected this Bella to get a tattoo. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 349-352

Edward was turned on and horny. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 344-348

Wow, they won 2 thousand dollars. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 9:07 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV

Renee and Tanya are nuts, crazy, off the rails,  OMG WTF put them away for ever lol.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 7:20 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV

:) :) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 6:30 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV

nice updates

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 4:23 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV

Wow Renée is crazy hopefully they lock her up in the nuthouse now will the rest of their day go smoothly 

Reviewer: squkymun Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 12:20 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV

Can’t wait for the new story!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 12:06 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV

Renee and Tanya are wackoo!

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 11:34 AM Title: 360-369 EPOV

Very good

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 358-359

Hehehehehehe Edward is funny but yes what has him going crazy

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 358-359

Very good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2017 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 358-359

He is in a hurry lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2017 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 358-359

:) :) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2017 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 353-357

I loved it so sweet 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 353-357

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 353-357

It was close lol

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 353-357

and all they will do is sleep

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2017 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 349-352

oh my god i wood have hurt pertty bad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2017 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 349-352

She would be in so much pain with that big of a tat.  I am glad he likes it lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2017 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 349-352

:) :) 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2017 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 349-352

I loved it wow she got one too and a big one but hehehehehe Edward needs a cold shower heheheheheheh

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 344-348

Matching tats?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 344-348

:) :) 

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 344-348

I was enjoying this fic at 1st now its just dragging and geting kinda boring

Author's Response:

It only has 52 chapters left to post

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 344-348

Awe Bella is too cute and she called the chips tokens heheheh now who will get a tattoo 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 338-343

She is his lucky charm

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 338-343

Glad they had fun at the casino 

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 338-343

Awe they are too cute 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 338-343

:) :) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 338-343

you write her as almost loike a child

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 338-343

nice update

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 11:01 PM Title: 333-337

can't wait for more and to see what you do

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 8:18 PM Title: 333-337

Awe she is too cute

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 7:57 PM Title: 333-337

thank you for the update

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 6:46 PM Title: 333-337

I have never been to a casino. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 2:40 PM Title: 333-337

She is in a different world

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 2:25 PM Title: 333-337

:) :) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 328-332

nice updates

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 288-294 BPOV

I thought Tanya got arrested after shooting Edward. How was she in the car with Phil and Renee? How did the baby get to be 7 months old? 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 241

bella is suppose to be on bed rest since she just had surgery.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 265-269

Bella hasn't been to school for awhile. Is she still going?



Author's Response:

No

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 240-244

I thought she was only 2 months pregnant.

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 328-332

Loved it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 328-332

Luke is a smart guy

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 328-332

wow he is a good guy

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2017 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 328-332

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

Glad they are having some good times right now. 

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

They are so sweet together

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

Awe so sweet they are too cute together 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

thank you for the updates..............

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

:) :) 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

Poor bella...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

Nice time in the air.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2017 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV

i woder if luke put someting in her milk

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV

nice ch

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV

Wow. Pippa, lol

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV

I loved it go Bella 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV

she means buisness

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2017 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 309-312

nice update

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2017 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 309-312

Was the fire and riot at the prision where Renee and Tanya was sent?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2017 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 301 - 308

Glad she's home

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2017 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 295- 300 EPOV

I hope Renee goes to jail. 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2017 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 309-312

Well damn cranky

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2017 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 309-312

:) :) 

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