Date: 26 Apr 2018 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella does not have blond in her hair so I will pretend that you did not write that. I don't see anything wrong with her hair color.
Date: 26 Apr 2018 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bella does not have blond in her hair so I will pretend that you did not write that. I don't see anything wrong with her hair color.
Date: 22 Mar 2018 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 28
why does Bella think Alice has no money and worries she could be pregnant living on the strees
Date: 17 Mar 2018 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Some people just don't deserve kids
Date: 14 Feb 2018 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 263
this story was weird...
however, i did looove the fact that there was
no nonsense drawn out crap against bella...
ie. tanya's pregnancy was immediately shown to
be not edward's, bella's mom being immediately
villainized by the family, tanya and renee's attempts
curbed at every turn...it was refreshing to read their attempts
not being coddled and put down quickly...i loved that...in some books,
bella is villainized for so long until the truth comes out which is so damn
frustrating... but, this is a strange way to end things...i imagine there
will be a sequel??
Date: 18 Jan 2018 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 263
Looking forward to the continuation of this story
Date: 06 Nov 2017 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 263
Bella sure did have a lot of changes in her life. Your story was very fast paced good for a drabble. Good Luck with your next story!
Date: 31 Oct 2017 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 263
i don't think much of bella mom and dad
Date: 28 Oct 2017 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 263
What the hell???? Is her whole family crazy?
Date: 28 Oct 2017 4:48 AM Title: 391-394
Is Charlie Chief of Police in your story? Is that the reason the young man gasp when Bella told him who she was.
Author's Response:
No charlie is not in the police. The cop just new of bella and was shocked to see her
Date: 27 Oct 2017 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 263
Wow! Charlie was just as bad as Renee!!! Loved this story
Date: 27 Oct 2017 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 263
thank you for the update...It wasn't Bella's fault that her Mom was a douch bag..he needed to take that gun to Renee
Date: 27 Oct 2017 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 263
Bella has the stupidest family. They should have just killed Charlie. He will come back for more. They are all crazy.
Date: 27 Oct 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 263
What is the deal with Bella,s parents? Greedy and selfish, and deceitful. I would dB is owned them so fast.
Date: 27 Oct 2017 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 263
OMG Charlie needs to go to jail and stay there with Renee.
Date: 27 Oct 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 263
Wow what the hell just happened why did he try to kill her for the money
Date: 27 Oct 2017 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 263
Hate to see it end.
Date: 26 Oct 2017 2:39 PM Title: 391-394
Hmm what will happen when when they knock on the door
Date: 25 Oct 2017 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 386- 390
Awe so sweet he is so sweet with her
Date: 25 Oct 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 386- 390
What a first day of being wife and husband.
Date: 25 Oct 2017 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV
I wonder what Bella is thinking
Date: 25 Oct 2017 1:54 PM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV
Glad they are finally married. They have drama all around them.
Date: 24 Oct 2017 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV
:) :)
Date: 24 Oct 2017 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV
Its snugle time
Date: 24 Oct 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV
thank you for the update...Yay they are married and consumated the wedding.
Date: 24 Oct 2017 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 380-385 EPOV
What a beautiful night for them
Date: 24 Oct 2017 10:52 AM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV
nice update
Date: 23 Oct 2017 4:58 PM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV
Awe they are married so sweet but who was the gun man
Author's Response:
Just some random person
Date: 23 Oct 2017 3:46 PM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV
thank you for the update..until you post again
Date: 23 Oct 2017 3:44 PM Title: 370 - 379 BPOV
So glad they are finely married
Date: 21 Oct 2017 7:50 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV
Renee is crazy and Tanya is not far behind her.
Date: 21 Oct 2017 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 358-359
Ok, that was sooo not Edward. Lol.
Date: 21 Oct 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 353-357
I would have never expected this Bella to get a tattoo.
Date: 21 Oct 2017 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 349-352
Edward was turned on and horny.
Date: 21 Oct 2017 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 344-348
Wow, they won 2 thousand dollars.
Date: 20 Oct 2017 10:07 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV
Renee and Tanya are nuts, crazy, off the rails, OMG WTF put them away for ever lol.
Date: 20 Oct 2017 7:30 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV
nice updates
Date: 20 Oct 2017 5:23 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV
Wow Renée is crazy hopefully they lock her up in the nuthouse now will the rest of their day go smoothly
Date: 20 Oct 2017 1:20 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV
Can’t wait for the new story!
Date: 20 Oct 2017 1:06 PM Title: 360-369 EPOV
Renee and Tanya are wackoo!
Date: 20 Oct 2017 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 358-359
Hehehehehehe Edward is funny but yes what has him going crazy
Date: 19 Oct 2017 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 358-359
He is in a hurry lol
Date: 19 Oct 2017 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 353-357
I loved it so sweet
Date: 18 Oct 2017 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 353-357
It was close lol
Date: 18 Oct 2017 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 353-357
and all they will do is sleep
Date: 17 Oct 2017 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 349-352
oh my god i wood have hurt pertty bad
Date: 17 Oct 2017 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 349-352
She would be in so much pain with that big of a tat. I am glad he likes it lol
Date: 17 Oct 2017 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 349-352
I loved it wow she got one too and a big one but hehehehehe Edward needs a cold shower heheheheheheh
Date: 16 Oct 2017 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 344-348
Matching tats?
Date: 16 Oct 2017 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 344-348
I was enjoying this fic at 1st now its just dragging and geting kinda boring
Author's Response:
It only has 52 chapters left to post
Date: 16 Oct 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 344-348
Awe Bella is too cute and she called the chips tokens heheheh now who will get a tattoo
Date: 13 Oct 2017 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 338-343
She is his lucky charm
Date: 13 Oct 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 338-343
Glad they had fun at the casino
Date: 13 Oct 2017 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 338-343
Awe they are too cute
Date: 13 Oct 2017 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 338-343
you write her as almost loike a child
Date: 13 Oct 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 338-343
nice update
Date: 13 Oct 2017 12:01 AM Title: 333-337
can't wait for more and to see what you do
Date: 12 Oct 2017 9:18 PM Title: 333-337
Awe she is too cute
Date: 12 Oct 2017 8:57 PM Title: 333-337
thank you for the update
Date: 12 Oct 2017 7:46 PM Title: 333-337
I have never been to a casino.
Date: 12 Oct 2017 3:40 PM Title: 333-337
She is in a different world
Date: 12 Oct 2017 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 328-332
nice updates
Date: 11 Oct 2017 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 288-294 BPOV
I thought Tanya got arrested after shooting Edward. How was she in the car with Phil and Renee? How did the baby get to be 7 months old?
Date: 11 Oct 2017 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 241
bella is suppose to be on bed rest since she just had surgery.
Date: 11 Oct 2017 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 265-269
Bella hasn't been to school for awhile. Is she still going?
Author's Response:
No
Date: 11 Oct 2017 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 240-244
I thought she was only 2 months pregnant.
Date: 11 Oct 2017 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 328-332
Luke is a smart guy
Date: 11 Oct 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 328-332
wow he is a good guy
Date: 10 Oct 2017 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV
Glad they are having some good times right now.
Date: 10 Oct 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV
They are so sweet together
Date: 10 Oct 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV
Awe so sweet they are too cute together
Date: 10 Oct 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV
thank you for the updates..............
Date: 10 Oct 2017 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV
Poor bella...
Date: 10 Oct 2017 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV
Nice time in the air.
Date: 10 Oct 2017 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 320-327 EPOV
i woder if luke put someting in her milk
Date: 10 Oct 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV
nice ch
Date: 09 Oct 2017 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV
Wow. Pippa, lol
Date: 09 Oct 2017 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 313-318 BPOV
I loved it go Bella