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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 156

:) :) 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2017 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 153

Great updates, keep up the great work.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 153

thank you for the update....did her parents do that to her?  Wow Bells's been through alot



Author's Response:

Yes Renee did

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 153

i bet her mom had something to do with it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 153

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 153

Ok, I'm confused. Who did it and why???? Did Bella know ? Surely she knew something because she was getting a shot in her pelvic area. 



Author's Response:

Renee did it for fun. Bella was sleeping when it was done and as it was done slowly she didn't notice if happing 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 152

What was it? Am I  understanding correctly, that someone had put cement in her. Why?

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 153

Wth poor bella

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 153

I'm assuming Renee is responsible for the injections, no doubt hoping them to prove fatal so she can collect on the life insurance policy 

 

Reviewer: Gigi725 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

What in the world? HOW? 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2017 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 149

great updates

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 149

i wonder what's in her

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 149

Love Dr. Cullen for doing that.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 146

So glad Carlsile is trying to ease the tension. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 145

Is it life threating???? Why do it so soon?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 144

So glad that Edward is there with her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 143

I'm glad that Edward's dad was with her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 142

Oh my!!!!! 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 149

thank you for the updates

Reviewer: faith2905able Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 149

Things can happen 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 149

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 145

What is it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 144

She is so lucky to have him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 143

What did he find

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2017 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 142

Omg what could it be

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 145

thank you for the updates...well done...things are moving fast

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 145

nice updates

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2017 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 145

I hope she'll be alright 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 141

I hope he is not going to tell her something bad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 140

She is excited

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 139

So happy she will move in with him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 138

She needs love

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 137

Poor girl she was hoping it was a nightmare

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 136

He wants her there bad

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2017 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 135

sounds like a nice place to live

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 141

OMG

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 141

love it so far i hope bella get her revenge

Reviewer: rocker9113 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 141

Please tell me Bella's parents pay for what they've done.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 141

I hope Carlisle does not have bad news for her. I am assuming that he might tell her that she is malunished.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 139

I'm so glad she accepted.  She is probably so tired of worrying about where her next meal will come from and everything else. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 137

Bless her heart. She thought she was dreaming. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 135

Edward's house sounds HUGE!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 141

:) :) 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 141

:O :O :O :O 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 134

she will be safe from now on

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 133

Bella is safe now

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 132

I still want to punch Renee in the face

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 131

They all love her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 130

Bella is moving on up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 129 EPOV

punch that bitch in the face. Edward is going to take her home with him

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 128

Renee is going down

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 127

Renee is crazy

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 126

Phil knows that they screwed up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 125

I want to kick Renees ass

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 124

shit is going to hit the fan if that is her mother

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 123

He is going to hunt her mother down

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 122

he is in deep love

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 121

now he will find out who lives in the place with the broken window

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 120 BPOV

hot hot

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 119

her first kiss

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 118

she has such a big heart

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 117

Emmett is funny

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 116

She is funny to she is perfect

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 115

He is so sweet

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 114

she knows about him but he knew nothing of her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 113

I dont like her mother at all

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 112

Edward wil not let that happen

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 111

He better be nice

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 134

:) :) 

Reviewer: queenbee311 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 134

Poor Bella, it's a good thing that Edward was with her. Thank you for sharing. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 134

I'm glad Edward was with Bella when she went home this time. If he had not been there Renee might have some way killed Bella just for the insurance money. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 131

I knew Edward would help her with everything. 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 134

good for edward

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 134

Hopefully she wakes soon and lets Edward help her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 114

She pays attention 

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 113

I really don't like her mom

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 130

nice updates

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2017 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 112

Her mom is a bitch

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 130

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 130

Poor Bella.  I know Edward will take care of her now. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 129 EPOV

So glad that Edward got the gun away from Renee. I wonder what Phil thinks of what he just saw. I mean, surely he is thinking what kind of woman does this to her own child. 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 130

i wood have shot her mother

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 127

Renee is a real piece of crap. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 126

Wow, Renee is really the biggest bitch. To wish your own child dead, that is just evil.

Reviewer: faith2905able Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 129 EPOV

Loving mother, piece of work, pile of dung is Renee

Reviewer: kittap2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2017 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 125

I love this story  thanks for sharing 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 125

oh good the good stuff

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 111

He will be gentle with her because he loves her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 110

Good thing he pulled his head out of his ass

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 125

:) :) 

Reviewer: squkymun Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 125

I can't wait for the confrontation 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 125

Ohhhhhh edward save her

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 125

Wow, Mother of the Year!!!!!! So glad Edward was there. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 124

Who has a key to her apartment?  Could it be her mom?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2017 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 123

She already told him she slept on cardboard. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 120 BPOV

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 120 BPOV

He is finally going to see where she lives. Hopefully he will get her some electricity. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 119

Was that the 1st time she's been kissed?



Author's Response:

Yes

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 118

That was sweet but why did she fix him a roll?



Author's Response:

Because she is a kind person, who know what going with out food is like

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2017 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 117

Lol. 

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