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Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 116

nice updates

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 116

great ch

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 116

Glad she is feeling comfortable with everyone now that the truth is out.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 115

Glad that she will accept gifts from him.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 114

Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 112

I'm glad that they are talking. Hopefully Edward can help Bella and  she will let him.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 110

Glad Edward is not going to let this come between them. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 116

:) :) 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 116

Oh whats the difference lol

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 116

Oh whats the difference lol

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 116

Oh whats the difference lol

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 116

Oh whats the difference lol

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2017 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 112

oh good he didn't f it up

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2017 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 112

oh bella

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2017 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 112

thank you for the updates..at least the truth is finally out

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2017 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 112

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 109

:) :) 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 109

Noooo he needs to stop questioning and just go with how he feels

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 108

Good man

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 107

I hope he doesn't freak out

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 106

Shit has hit the fan

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 105

He knows so much about her but her name

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 104

Meet the family begins

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 109

I understand that Edward has lots if questions. All he needs to do is ask them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 108

Glad Edward is not too mad. He has to remember that He was a stranger to her. 

 

Reviewer: Erikay2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 109

Oh hell no

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 109

he  going to f it up

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 107

Alice did tell him that. 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 109

Oh edward if you only knew. More please lol 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 106

nice update

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 106

well at lest he knows now

 

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 106

Oh no, the secret is out.  I sure hope Edward doesn't think she has been trying to deceive him.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 106

Oh no. I did not remember that Rose also knows Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 105

Edward is so sweet.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 103

I have a feeling that Alice will be the last one to meet her.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2017 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 102

Family dinner us coming and she will meet his family, which includes Alice who knows her real name is Bella. When what Edward will think. 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 106

thank you for all of the updates...well done...Well Edward finally now Bella real name..I wonder what Bell/Kate will do now?  Will she come clean about everything?  Will see run?  I hope not, Bella just tell your story and Edward will hnelp you.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 106

I hope Bella will have the presence of mind to say that this solves her problem of how to tell him she gave him a false name. She could  also add if she knew he was Alice's brother she would have known she didn't need to

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 106

:) :) 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 106

Poor Bella...she's gonnna die!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 99

Bless her heart. She wanted McDonald's.  

Reviewer: faith2905able Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 106

Oops,   she should have told him sooner

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 103

nice update

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 103

Shit will hit the fan when he find out who she is and why she has lied to him for so long 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 102

They will be so surprised 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 101

They are going to be shocked

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 101

They are going to be shocked

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 100 EPOV

She love the simple things in life

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2017 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 99

She can have what ever she wants

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2017 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 103

Ohhhh man im ready for the connections to be made lol I hope Edwars forgives her

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2017 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 103

:) :) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2017 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 103

she going have to tell him sometime soon

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 98

great ch

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 98

he will give her anything she wants.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 97

he is so worried

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 96

she scared him not showing up on time ?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 95

She was really into her work

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 94

I  cant wait for the the family dinner

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 98

:) :) 

Reviewer: Alyscia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 98

Aweer

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 98

How sweet 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 97

Lol. He has it really bad. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 96

For her to get there that quickly he has to know that she lives close. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 95

She doesn't want him to see the direction that she is coming from. 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 98

nice updates

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 93

Love can be found anywhere

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 91

Name name name omg lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2017 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 91

Name name name omg lol

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 94

:) :) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 93

She's scared to to believe that Edward would want something with her after what her mom has said to her her whole life. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 91

He's got it bad. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 90

He can't stay away from her. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 89

She's falling in love with Edward and he is falling in love with her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 88

I just hope no one steals her new phone. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 86

Oooo, she gave him a kiss. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 85

Is he going to let her walk home in the dark. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 84

She so sweet to comfort him. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 83

Love how Bella gets so excited 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 81

I wondered if Jacob was going to be in this story. 



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He isn't really in this story just that meantion 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 76

He really has it bad. 

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Date: 27 Jul 2017 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 72

Lol. Too funny. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 69

If Bella accepts  that will be in in n interesting dinner. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 67

Alice is smart

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 66

Love Esme

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 61

Edward has got it bad.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 57

Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 55

Sweet chapter

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 53

Lol. That is too funny. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 50

Edward is wanting her to trust him. Will he be able to let her go at the end of the day. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 49

What kind if mother tells her own child things like that. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 47

Poor Bella.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 46

Ok, why did her abandonment issues flair?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 45

I love the zoo

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 43

Love that he is being kind if forward with her about wanting to do something with her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 40

If they are going to be friends will she tell him her real name??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 39

Omgosh,  I can't believe that he stole her hotdog. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 34

I am taking it that Alice does not know that her friend Bella eats out of trash cans. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 33

I'm wondering if Alice will make the connection. Oh, does Alice know how Bella lives? I can't remember.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 31

Edward and his family. I'm sure they wonder who their real friends really are. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 30

Lol

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