Date: 24 Jun 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
I was really hoping he would come to the penthouse again. I want him to ask her what she wants or what it will take to be with him & she can tell him to buy her the penthouse. I love the craziness of the two of these characters!!
You should know by now too easy for me , it will be a while yet before they actually talk x
Date: 17 Jun 2017 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh dear is Edward a devious one. Almost as devious as Tanya, as she had the drop on him for years before he noticed it. She will be so mad to have lost all her antiques AND all her money. I guess she deserves it after what she did to Edward. Thanks for the chapter!
Glad you liked it , just wanted to show no love lost in the marriage
Date: 12 Jun 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, what a departure from the other stories. Just wondering if you're finishing The Body? Sorry, I had to ask. I love this story and how strong Edward and Bella both are.
i think the switch is so well done. You must have thought about this story a lot because it is just perfect. I LOVE what they did to Jacob Black and the picture of that girl strung out on meth was so accurately depicted. Drugs make a very sick and selfish world.
i think you are doing an amazing job and can't wait to read more.
Oh, I loved Deprivation so much. Great sexy story. I am about 1/3 done with your other one.
I will do an epilogue and some outtakes for the body, I just needed a little break from it. Thank you so much for your kind words I'm really enjoying writing these stories so it's great to know you enjoy them xx
Date: 10 Jun 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
I just re-read the whole story up to here. With so many mob stories coming out of the contest, it is difficult to remember who is writing what. I am following 3 or 4 of you from that contest, as I am a regular reader of each. Now I made some notes on each story so I can remember what is what. I do remember Jacob getting 2 inches of his penis cut off. That was particularly grisly. I like that Bella is a successful business woman and on her own. She knows now who is following her and I eagerly await how this will progress! I'm off to make more notes now and glad to have another of your stories to read! Thanks.
i know what you mean about monwars. One of my fears about writing a story was it's been done so many times how do you make it new ? I hope this is a little bit different from the norm. There won't be too many grisly moments it will be more about Edward and Bella. Hope you enjoy it. Thank you for your continued support I really appreciate it x
Date: 05 Jun 2017 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ok 1st things 1st get all your valuables away from crazy ass wife hey I hope they can get enough dirty laundry on her to get rid of her 2nd Edward Bella does not seem like a girl that would fall to your charms its goin to take a lot of work to wing her heart
Edward has no idea at the moment what he is going to be up against x
Date: 27 May 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oops. James is dead and can't testify. I like Edward's idea of using Jasper and consigliere instead of Emmett. Will that happen? I'll keep reading and see. Edward sure is a hot head! Thanks, I'm looking forward to more of this story.
This is going to be very different. Hope you enjoy it x
Date: 19 Apr 2017 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely love this story. Not good at reviews. I don't give advice or complain or ask for anything to be changed. Trust the author and don't read if you do not like the story. Again, thanks for making my day. I love anything mafia inspired. Pamela
Date: 17 Apr 2017 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
I read this in the contest. I'm glad you entered, even though I see you didn't win anything. I liked the story ok. I"m not sure how this could be rated "T", though, what with all the violence with James and the screwdrivers. I do hope you continue it someday and will keep it on alert in case you do.