Date: 19 Aug 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
I can't wait for Bella and Alice to talk! I'm positive that they're gonna be close friends just like Bella and Emmett and Rose. Edward needs to stop and listen to what Emmett is telling him. If Edward would step up and just talk to Bella, he just might get to spend time with her. In the meantime, everyone else will get to know her. LOL. As always, I'll be anxiously awaiting the next chapter! I love this story and I really love Mobward!!
Date: 19 Aug 2017 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
I review because that is just what I do, for all the stories I'm reading. I'm glad that your review count is up, but sorry, that matters little to me. It's how the story makes me feel that matters to me and yours have always evoked strong feelings, one way or another. That is why I like them and why I review.
So Edward doesn't like her getting to know all his family before him, does he? I think that our miss Swan will do whatever the hell she wants to do and if he is going to go after her, he might well learn to put up with that. These two are both strong-willed people and their union will be oh so interesting to watch. It has been so far. Thanks!
Date: 14 Aug 2017 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh that was one hell of a move! Kissing him, I mean, not returning the jewelry. Maybe now that she knows a bit more about him, she will be more inclined to let him in, a bit...we shall see! Love the story, love the chapter!
Date: 05 Aug 2017 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Rose is awesome!! Such a great idea making her jointhem. So it looks like the cullen boys like down to earth women.
I wanted them to be surrounded by real people instead of yes people. Does that make sense?
Date: 29 Jul 2017 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Thank You this made my Saturday morning. The chapters always seem to short because you always leave ME!!!!wanting MORE!!! I like Bella's attitude she's not angry maybe a bit confused which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Edward needs to find his balls and just tell her how he feels. Poor Emmett (he he he) Update well... When you can I'll be waiting IMPATIENTLY!!!! but with a smile. :)
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So glad you enjoyed it x
Date: 29 Jul 2017 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
So what will Emmett tell Bella?! I can't wait for that conversation. Love this story. Edward is way off the mark with Bella, just as Emmett thought. It who is the guy bringing pastries and coffee?
Emmett and Bella will become good friends x
Date: 29 Jul 2017 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
I knew exactly which tiffany key he gave her. I love the key series. Granted i would only ever be able to afford the cheapest one. That was very creepy what happened in the apartment! Who was it? Surely it wasn't edward with contacts in?
No definitely not Edward
Date: 22 Jul 2017 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Have to say that so far this is one of the most unpleasant Edwards I've ever read, hopefully Bella will keep him on a short leash until his manners improve!
Good that's exactly what I wanted. He will get better x
Date: 14 Jul 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well well well. We have a spunky miss Bella in the story, don't we. I must tell you I am reading several different mafia stories, all fom the contest, and have to make notes to keep them straight from each other. I'm glad Edward didn't go all caveman on Bella and will try to win her over the old fashioned way. I always enjoy reading you and am sure I will begin to have more of an understanding of this story with succeeding chapters. Thanks!
I didn't want to do the normal mobward , I wanted it about the man not what he did for a living. So it's how his life has affected him and his relationships with other people. Does that make sense?
Date: 08 Jul 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh, snap! Love how she handled him. I was hoping he would buy the apartment that she showed him just so she could have her commission. Now, THAT would impress a girl for sure, wouldn't it? Thanks for the chapter!
I haven't decided yet wether he buys it or someone else does. What do you think ?
Date: 02 Jul 2017 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love how he dealt with the overly indignant Mr. Denali. Not only did he show them that he knew how to deal with this situation, he held himself as head of the family and put both of them in their places also. Well done! Good riddance to Tanya. I wonder if she will go quietly or will she raise a stink about this...thanks for the chapter. See ya next time!
Thank you sweetie for the review, glad you enjoyed it x
Date: 02 Jul 2017 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for this update it always makes me smile to read another chapter! I was really wanting to see what happens when he gets to the condo.... Bummer. I guess i have to wait for the next update. :) i will say this chapter gave me tons of chuckles. Edward watching tanya over & over, the description of her dad, the old guys arguing, my favorite was emmett calling and saying he lost her again.
There is loads to cover yet and you know my stories, they never get it together quickly c
Date: 24 Jun 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
I was really hoping he would come to the penthouse again. I want him to ask her what she wants or what it will take to be with him & she can tell him to buy her the penthouse. I love the craziness of the two of these characters!!
You should know by now too easy for me , it will be a while yet before they actually talk x
Date: 17 Jun 2017 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh dear is Edward a devious one. Almost as devious as Tanya, as she had the drop on him for years before he noticed it. She will be so mad to have lost all her antiques AND all her money. I guess she deserves it after what she did to Edward. Thanks for the chapter!
Glad you liked it , just wanted to show no love lost in the marriage
Date: 12 Jun 2017 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow, what a departure from the other stories. Just wondering if you're finishing The Body? Sorry, I had to ask. I love this story and how strong Edward and Bella both are.
i think the switch is so well done. You must have thought about this story a lot because it is just perfect. I LOVE what they did to Jacob Black and the picture of that girl strung out on meth was so accurately depicted. Drugs make a very sick and selfish world.
i think you are doing an amazing job and can't wait to read more.
Oh, I loved Deprivation so much. Great sexy story. I am about 1/3 done with your other one.
I will do an epilogue and some outtakes for the body, I just needed a little break from it. Thank you so much for your kind words I'm really enjoying writing these stories so it's great to know you enjoy them xx
Date: 10 Jun 2017 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
I just re-read the whole story up to here. With so many mob stories coming out of the contest, it is difficult to remember who is writing what. I am following 3 or 4 of you from that contest, as I am a regular reader of each. Now I made some notes on each story so I can remember what is what. I do remember Jacob getting 2 inches of his penis cut off. That was particularly grisly. I like that Bella is a successful business woman and on her own. She knows now who is following her and I eagerly await how this will progress! I'm off to make more notes now and glad to have another of your stories to read! Thanks.
i know what you mean about monwars. One of my fears about writing a story was it's been done so many times how do you make it new ? I hope this is a little bit different from the norm. There won't be too many grisly moments it will be more about Edward and Bella. Hope you enjoy it. Thank you for your continued support I really appreciate it x
Date: 05 Jun 2017 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ok 1st things 1st get all your valuables away from crazy ass wife hey I hope they can get enough dirty laundry on her to get rid of her 2nd Edward Bella does not seem like a girl that would fall to your charms its goin to take a lot of work to wing her heart
Edward has no idea at the moment what he is going to be up against x