Date: 18 Aug 2017 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
Their lives seem to be coming together. Loved how Jimmy tried to intimadate Edward about taking care of Bella. I really hope Rose doesn't show up begging for a second chance. I think Bella should get the pleasure of taking Vicky out after finding out she helped bombed the Swan Dive.
Date: 16 Aug 2017 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
This was a LONG chapter. Filler, you say? I didn't find that to be true. We learned about the sabotage of Jimmy's place. We learned about Jimmy settling into Carlisle and Esme's place to rehabilitate. We had nice, tender moments between Bella and her Uncle Jimmy. Edward was officially named head of the family, ceremony to come. We went house shopping with Edward and Bella and were with them when they found their dream home. This is a lot of progress in the story in certain areas. I enjoyed reading all these details and will check out all the pictures on your blog. Thanks, this was great!
Date: 16 Aug 2017 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
Personally, I hate this Rosalie. She was nothing but a monster doing what she did to Emmett. I am betting she wanted Edward to herself; and since he didn't seem to want a wife she figured that Emmett by default would become leader if something happened to Edward. Since that didn't happen she went against them. She made her bed and needs to get herself out.
Date: 13 Aug 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am glad Jimmy is going to be ok. I really like Jake. He tells them both how it is and that's the best way for these two. Whoever is behind all of this needs to be scared! The boss is not going to take an attack on his family lightly! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 09 Aug 2017 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
I didn't think anything too awfully bad would happen to Jimmy, but what did was bad enough. I think Jimmy needs to be on the Cullen payroll once he's fully recovered. I thought it was a nice touch having Bella react the way she did and be mad at Edward, it was much like how real life would go with the same circumstances. Looking forward to Edward getting his revenge.
Date: 02 Aug 2017 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
Please tell me that this new investment, Giovanna Moretti, isn't involved with Royce King and Uncle Stephen. Let Bella's Uncle Jimmy be safe. Maybe he can become an item with Giovanna Moretti? Will Edward have the diner rebuilt?
How close were the women to the explosion?
Jacob's discomfort at being referenced as a male stripper was cute. His healthy fear of his boss not withstanding.
Your Lauren is very snarky. Love it.
Date: 02 Aug 2017 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
Is the lady that edward helped really a friend of Jimmy's? I hope Jimmy is ok. If Jimmy had protection and his place still got blown up what's to say they can't do that to somewhere the Cullens will be. Scary. Do they have a mole ?
Date: 02 Aug 2017 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 14
All was going so well! The scene at the club was hot, the girls were happy and out shopping for her wedding gown, Tyler and Mike as a gay couple was hilarious, but then Jimmy's place got blown up. I hope he's ok, but how can he be? Who would do this??
Date: 02 Aug 2017 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 14
The thought of Mike and Tyler watching if it was me having sex totally grosses me out. I could never do anything at all in a place where everything is recored and seen by others. --shivers --
With the diner being blown up, I wonder if the whole 'attack the women' plan was a distraction by the bad guys, hmmmm
Date: 26 Jul 2017 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great visuals chosen to accompany this chapter.
Maybe Emmett will find a cute little submissive and want to explore his options.
Will Paul Lahoute be entering the storyline as an aid in protecting Seth's family? Maybe Paul can work preemptively, taking out Royce King from the picture. Is Rosalie dead?
Date: 24 Jul 2017 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Anthony is very much on Carlisle's team. He fits in well with his cousins.
Maybe Emmett can stay in New York for a while and check out not only additional property but also the legitimacy of Anthony's insider information on his father's dealings. What if Anthony introduced Emmett to a girl suited to this family lifestyle?
Can Anthony get his mother to stay with him for a while?
Is Alice healthy? You mentioned she was also worn down and pulling double shifts.
Date: 19 Jul 2017 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Not sure how much I trust Anthony at the moment. Time will tell if he's on the up and up or playing Edward for a fool for his father. Poor Bella, being that sick is a bitch, but she's got Edward taking care of her now. Hopefully, Edward won't be too awfully preoccupied by caring for Bella that he gets taken advantage of or misses something he should've seen coming, ya know? I'd like to read Rosalie's POV, covering her infidelities and what she thinks of Emmett divorcing her. Thanks for another great chapter.