Date: 26 May 2017 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loving this!! Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 25 May 2017 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hope Jake loses his job.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2017 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow I can't believe Jake lie and left them to die and then has the nerve to go to her at the hospital I hope he gets more than a broken nose
Date: 25 May 2017 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh man, i knew edward would go crazy when he found jake
keep it coming!
Date: 25 May 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
OMG loved that chapter love hearing from Edward he is a man with a plan. I think the crew knows that Edward has strong feelings for Bella. Jacob needs to be hung up by his needle dick and used as a pinyota.
Date: 25 May 2017 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Jake's an ass, he should have told them that Bella and the kids were down there. I hope he gets fired from the police department for his actions.
Date: 25 May 2017 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love this story and I want the next chapter now. Please and thank you
Date: 25 May 2017 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
wow, jake . . . what an ass
Date: 25 May 2017 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love hearing from Edward π»π»π»
Date: 24 May 2017 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
BEAT HIS A*S EDWARD!!!!
Date: 24 May 2017 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow Jake is awful. To know and leave Bella down is horrible. But to leave 6 kids. I don't have words to describe something so vile.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved seeing EPOV. Glad Emmett is sorting out the stupid cops.
OMG Jake flat out lied?!?! Hope he is charged with attempted murder.
Date: 23 May 2017 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
Does it make me a bad person that I hope jake died. It's the perfect karma or maybe he lost his legs. He made fun of deaf people so now he has a disability. More chapters please
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2017 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
I want them to realize how good Bella is at this job even if she is deaf I want her and Edward to continue to work together but also have s personal life together. I would have given this story a 20 if it went that high
Date: 23 May 2017 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh wow, can't believe you've left a cliffy like this, I so need the next chapter like now! Please don't make us wait too long x
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2017 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my freaking goodness how could you leave it there hell no I need the next chapter like 5 minutes ago do not get me wrong I LOVE it but I so need to know what happened next
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2017 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my freaking goodness how could you leave it there hell no I need the next chapter like 5 minutes ago do not get me wrong I LOVE it but I so need to know what happened next
Date: 23 May 2017 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
jake is such an ass . . . can't believe they can't do more about his behavior and abuse of power. thinking he might get in trouble for abandoning the kids. can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 23 May 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
I really like this story. Can't wait to see Edwards point of view!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2017 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
Jacob needs to be bludgeoned to death.
Date: 23 May 2017 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMG Jake is a rat basturd. I am evil and hope he didnt make it out. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 23 May 2017 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
You are mean meanπππ
Date: 23 May 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMG, what the kl;akrjiouf[fjlejeropqtu were you thinking with this awful cliffy?
Date: 23 May 2017 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh no please don't make us wait a week to find out the outcome
Date: 23 May 2017 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 6
I bet the coward Jake never told anyone
Date: 23 May 2017 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
That cliff hanger was just a little cruel.
Date: 22 May 2017 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think Jacob is a chicken shit bastard that got out and just ran. He will be charged with attempted murder. Edward will save Bella and everyone will know that she is his.
Date: 22 May 2017 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 22 May 2017 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wowsers That was intense. Jake is a arse. Should be fired and publically shamed for leaving the kids and all like that.
Date: 22 May 2017 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think jake got out but made it so he was on his own to get back at Bella can't wait for epov hope it's soon x
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2017 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Finally they get Jake!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2017 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
Jake is so disgusting! They could get married in vegas where it all began!
Date: 20 May 2017 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter! Tanya as Alice's mother is a riot! As for Jake, someone should dig a deep chasm and drop him into it ! What a pig! Keep up the great work !
Date: 20 May 2017 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter! Tanya as Alice's mother is a riot! As for Jake, someone should dig a deep chasm and drop him into it ! What a pig! Keep up the great work !
Date: 19 May 2017 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hope Jake gets what's coming to him, as for Charlie I don't think he will be against Edward and Bella being together.
Date: 19 May 2017 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 18 May 2017 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Kick jakes ass...
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2017 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ladies you are always entertaining. I love this story it was upsetting to see Bella's rights violated. Hope Jake gets what's coming to him.
Date: 18 May 2017 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
Jake is a joke and in deep deep shit and he will probley blame Bella for everything? I was worried about Charlie knowing that they are together.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2017 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my goodness he thought Edward had a concealed weapon heheheheheheheh oh yeah he does just not the kind jake thought, now will Jake go after Bella if he gets fired? I loved it thank you
Date: 18 May 2017 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love all the aspects that make this story so unique! You are opening a whole new world of understanding for many hearing readers! The romance is also outrageously hot! Thank you so much!
Date: 18 May 2017 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
jakes and his friends are assess . . . can't wait to they get theirs handed to them. seems jake might not just go away since he seems off his rocker. wondering what the cliffie is in ch 6
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2017 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow Jake is a moron. Doing it front of witnesses. And Jake's cop friends are really stupid too.
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2017 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 5
Jake's an ass glad he is getting his just desserts
Date: 15 May 2017 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh these two are just getting started i bet
and i bet they think they are hiding it well, ha! not!
keep it coming ladies, and happy mother's day to you too!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2017 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is so great you two. What a plot and their relationship is progressing. I am so happy that Edward treats her with respect and admiration. He is really showing her how desired she is despite her disability.
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2017 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is so great you two. What a plot and their relationship is progressing. I am so happy that Edward treats her with respect and admiration. He is really showing her how desired she is despite her disability.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2017 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
Holy smoke that was hot smoking hot I loved it
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2017 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am so loving this story I am hoping Charlie and the guys will be happy for them especially Bella I know they can be professional as well looking forward to the next chspter
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2017 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
Yumminess. Glad they are going to take time to get to know each other better.
Date: 13 May 2017 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
good. wonder what the history is with jake. can't wait till he gets his ass kicked . . . assuming that will happen
Date: 13 May 2017 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
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[Report This]Date: 13 May 2017 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
Man oh man! The heat that is between these two is so glorious! Thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing this!!!!!
Date: 13 May 2017 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 13 May 2017 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
WOW they are so hot they will not be able to keep this under cover for long. I think after they all freak out they will be happy for them.
Date: 12 May 2017 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wonderfully realistic and so sexy! Thank you!
Date: 12 May 2017 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
i really want that
Date: 11 May 2017 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
Damn! So hot! So sexy! And he is pretty sweet, too!
Good to know the source of his nickname...very good!
Date: 11 May 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Jake wants her and she wont have him so he is a dick to her??? Edward and Bella are going to need a fire extingture to keep there fire under control. Wow they are hot.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2017 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ladies I am loving this. Bigs is right.
Date: 11 May 2017 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
oh my, unf!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
Lmao loved the reason for his nickname.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2017 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
Now which Cullen is it. I love Tanya.
Date: 11 May 2017 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 10 May 2017 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
i think the new Captain is Edward.
Date: 10 May 2017 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love this story!!!! Ya'l are doing a great job!!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2017 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow Jake is one ignorant arsehole. Can't wait till he gets put into his place. ooooh yummy lemony times
Date: 10 May 2017 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow! Edward is extremely focused when he wants something! Here's hoping that Emmett will get some dirt on Jake.
As for Edward waiting to see if they fall in love, I think he's already there! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2017 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
Jake is going to get his face beat if edward catches him. With all this heat the jealousy and protectiveness is going to be off the charts.
Date: 10 May 2017 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
You have me diying right nowππππ please please post soon
Date: 10 May 2017 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oooh love it. Emmett, kick Jakes ass. I hope Emmett holds a higher position than Jake. Mean, I know..hehehe...
Date: 09 May 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hey I needed that, the semester is over!!! "Bigs", yes!!
Date: 09 May 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella needs a voice recording dash cam for when Jake harasses her and lies about it!
Date: 09 May 2017 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hi :-)
I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed reading this story so far :-)
And I can't wait until the next chapter is released!
Really looking forward to it!
Greetings from Germany,
leinchen
Date: 09 May 2017 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Jake sounds like a right plonker lol and can't wait to see what happens if emmett gets involved look forward to next update x
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2017 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love this story so far! Hum Emmett or Edward Cpt? lol
Date: 04 May 2017 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can't even describe how much I'm loving this!! Hot stripper (possibly fireman?!) Edward and super sweet Bella. I really enjoy a well written disabled Bella but there are very few out there and I know she'll be wonderful in your capable hands. I am so excited for the next chapter <3
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2017 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am so excited for Edward and Bella to meet up and I hope they get along great cause they would make a great couple. Hopefully her dad will approve of thrmn
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2017 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
As always two chapters in and I am in love with another story of yours. You guys are to amazing I can't wait to read more about this Bella and Edward.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2017 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
its been too long since there has been a firemanward, so excited
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2017 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
Is edward BIGS? & she is bitsy? Even if edward isn't bigs he is friends with her dad and she is the daughter he is learning to sign for. This is going to be so cute! Funny she thought he didn't want to quit his job stripping! Haha ha
Date: 03 May 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
So they might meet up again. Good start.
Thanks
Date: 03 May 2017 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
If the new captain is bigs, maybe its Emmet but I also think Edward is a firefighter
Date: 03 May 2017 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think it will be Edward. Edward knows who she is??
Date: 03 May 2017 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more π’
Date: 03 May 2017 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
I thought it was going to be Edward especially how he said his birth name and that his brother and cousin. But who knows. Can't wait.
Date: 03 May 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is going to be a great story looking forward to Edward learning to sign and how Bella will react to him being at the station.β€οΈβ€οΈππ»ππ»β€οΈβ€οΈ
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2017 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh I loved it but why did Edward say the name I was born with is his name different now hmmmmm I want more please