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Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

hmmm now E or Em is the new captain.  Interesting.  Like that he is learning ASL for her. Jake sounds like a douche

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

ooh and interesting start.  Edward is Jasper's brother?  or no?  Lets see where you ladies go. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

:) 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

i think the new  caption is edward i can't wait to read it 10 out 10

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2017 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am so excited for the next chapter I hope edward finds out she was not the btide

Reviewer: 1SadAngel-Luvs-VampWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2017 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loving it! 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2017 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, talk about starting with a bang, I'm hooked. Looks like it is going to be wonderful.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Stripper edward where did you go?

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2017 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ladies, ladies, ladies you never disappoint. A Bella with a disability and a moonlighting stripper/fireman Edward oh my goodness this has the makings of an epic story. I'm signed up.

Reviewer: Lela Noah Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start! Can't wait for more! 

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow this story is fantastic so far and can't wait for next update xx

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG this is going to be great.  I just love you guys.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

good start

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm looking forward to this journey.

Reviewer: armywife1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2017 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh I think Bella just met the new captain. And what a might strong one. Can't wait till the next chapter. Congrats on it being your 49th story. I'm glad to hear you're going to be publishing your own story sometime.  I think you should publish all of your 49 stories.  

Reviewer: Mist13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2017 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

Reviewer: Petralouise Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2017 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love when writers write take on the challenge of one of the characters being deaf, and showing the hearing world just because I'm deaf I can't do something. I'm studying to be a interpreter I'm so glad that you have Bella singing I feel you are able to have cocular that's great but signing is a bueteful language and is just as helpful. Great great job.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2017 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)  looking forward to more 

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2017 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Omg I'm in love! I feel like this story is going to be so amazing even if it's only around 10 chapters or so! I just took a whole semester of ASL or American Sign Language and I think it is so amazing that you guys are doing a story with Bella being deaf! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good start to a story I'm sure I'll enjoy.

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