Date: 11 Dec 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 67: Redemption
Now that is a twist of a tale. Nicely done! I'm even willing to bet on some level Seth knew Paul loved him. Unrequited love always shows itself in small ways. Now Edward is shot? Give this sweetheart a break please.
Date: 11 Dec 2017 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 62: Charlie's First Birthday
Okay didn't Edward take Bella to Elizabeth's birthday party in chapter 19 when he got Charlie's benefit paperwork from his dad? So Bella has seen his mom. Also Elizabeth had a shit situation sure. Husband in love with someone else and cheats but fuck Edward was a baby. Also Carlisle was the weak one here. He dumped off his child and expected his wife to love the object of his betrayal. Bringing Edward home meant life changes. He should have made them. Also he should have told Edward at 16 maybe saved him pain and self destruction. A mess all around. However, Bravo Bella. Bravo!!!
Date: 10 Dec 2017 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 32: Coming Clean
I know her parents are grieving and they are older but they could have made an effort too. Also, no need to be rude. I'm glad they said 'I love you.' I loved vet this little family. Again where the heck is Carlisle and where did Elizabeth disappear too?
Date: 10 Dec 2017 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 23: Meeting The Family
God Edward's drinking, fighting and drugs was all because he lacked love and affection in the home. It's amazing how we can damage our children all while not taking the blame. I know Carlisle traveled for work but did he really JUST notice how cold and mean Elizabeth was? Come on!!! I want this Edward to succeed so bad. HEA all the way!
Date: 10 Dec 2017 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 19: Birthday Party
I don't know about all of you but I don't think Edward is hers. Elizabeth based on Edward's flashbacks and her utter lack of maternal energy says he s adopted or...? But Edward is not hers she almost resents or hates him even when he was 4. So drugs is not the reason. If this were a mobster fic which I've been reading like crazy, I would say she is Carlisle's goomah's/mot kid. Just saying ;-)
Date: 10 Dec 2017 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 6: Apartment Hunting
I am loving this redeemable and sweet Edward and this loving Carlisle. Little Charlie is definitely going to help keep Edward in the light. Now with the stress of everything and Edward is recovering he needs a meeting for additional support. I have feeling Bella is going to be amazing. *fingers crossed-* also my final thought if Seth was the responsible son and a college educated fire fighter with a new baby wouldn't he and his wife have had life insurance for their baby at least or for his wife if he died on the job? Curious!
Date: 13 Aug 2017 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 70: A Beautiful Future
HEA all the way. This story has been so successful and it warms my heart that you were able to create all of this. What a wonderful author you are becoming. I wish you so much continued success. I am proud to be part of the Clan. -Ajfflady -Beth
Date: 13 Aug 2017 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 70: A Beautiful Future
This story brought up many memories. My sister died when I was 18 and she was 16. It was hard to read sometimes even though it has been almost 50 years ago. You nefer really forget, it just hearts less over time. Thanks
Date: 07 Aug 2017 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 68: Waking Up
I love this!! I am so happy that Edward will be alright and I am proud of Paul for finally being brave enough to own what he did and turn himself in.
I didn't think twice about the bedpan he probably would have been catheterized during surgery anyway. *cringes* What I thought about was them medicating an addict with pain killers. This is such a fantastic story and I am always excited when I get an update alert!!! ;)
Date: 07 Aug 2017 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 64: A Fresh Start
So I haven't read for a few weeks and by the way love your writing but I can't help my mind from creating what I think are Pauls issues. 1) He drank as a youth because Elizabeth took advantage of him in a sexual way. horrid, nasty woman.
2) Paul was the driver of the vehicle that caused the accident.
or I could be so very very wrong so I'll just keep reading.
Date: 07 Aug 2017 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 67: Redemption
I don't know what to say.... this is gripping, heart-wrenching, edge of the seat reading. I had a feeling that Paul had been the one who killed Seth & Kate, but you have described his agony and love so well I can feel it in every word. Please hurry & write the rest of this story, I can't wait!!
PS: Happy, happy Birthday you very talented writer XX
Date: 06 Aug 2017 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 67: Redemption
OHF*CK!!!! I figured it was Paul that killed Seth once Edward had said, "they still hadn't caught the person." I knew Paul was in love with his best friend!!! AND OMFNG HE JUST SHOT EDWARD!!!! :O
I love this story and I am so friggen excited for the next update!! ;)