Date: 13 Aug 2017 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 70: A Beautiful Future
HEA all the way. This story has been so successful and it warms my heart that you were able to create all of this. What a wonderful author you are becoming. I wish you so much continued success. I am proud to be part of the Clan. -Ajfflady -Beth
Date: 13 Aug 2017 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 70: A Beautiful Future
This story brought up many memories. My sister died when I was 18 and she was 16. It was hard to read sometimes even though it has been almost 50 years ago. You nefer really forget, it just hearts less over time. Thanks
Date: 07 Aug 2017 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 68: Waking Up
I love this!! I am so happy that Edward will be alright and I am proud of Paul for finally being brave enough to own what he did and turn himself in.
I didn't think twice about the bedpan he probably would have been catheterized during surgery anyway. *cringes* What I thought about was them medicating an addict with pain killers. This is such a fantastic story and I am always excited when I get an update alert!!! ;)
Date: 07 Aug 2017 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 64: A Fresh Start
So I haven't read for a few weeks and by the way love your writing but I can't help my mind from creating what I think are Pauls issues. 1) He drank as a youth because Elizabeth took advantage of him in a sexual way. horrid, nasty woman.
2) Paul was the driver of the vehicle that caused the accident.
or I could be so very very wrong so I'll just keep reading.
Date: 07 Aug 2017 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 67: Redemption
I don't know what to say.... this is gripping, heart-wrenching, edge of the seat reading. I had a feeling that Paul had been the one who killed Seth & Kate, but you have described his agony and love so well I can feel it in every word. Please hurry & write the rest of this story, I can't wait!!
PS: Happy, happy Birthday you very talented writer XX
Date: 06 Aug 2017 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 67: Redemption
OHF*CK!!!! I figured it was Paul that killed Seth once Edward had said, "they still hadn't caught the person." I knew Paul was in love with his best friend!!! AND OMFNG HE JUST SHOT EDWARD!!!! :O
I love this story and I am so friggen excited for the next update!! ;)
Date: 27 Jul 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 61: Acceptance
Great, great chapter. I don't usually cry at fiction but this one had me choked up. I don't know whether to hug you or I don't know just something like walk away and get a hold of my self. I believe that Elizabeth is going to be quite the bitch at this party. She is cold and demeaning at the best of times toward Edward so I think it will come to a head. Lookout fellow celebrants, you're in for an outright war.
Date: 23 Jul 2017 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 58: Thanksgiving
This is the absolutely best Thanksgiving dinner ever!!! ;) I love this chapter so much!! Honestly, I had to wipe away tears while they were all saying what they are thankful for! I am excited for more of their story! :D
Date: 18 Jul 2017 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 55: You'll Be in My Heart
Cried all the way through this chapter.
You have captured the sad reality that a lot of people live with; drugs, drink, abandonment, giving up a child, in a beautiful story. Its a story of hope & love and I wish that all the troubled people living this kind of nightmare right now could read it.