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Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2022 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 37 – Epilogue.

LOVED IT!! Great Story! Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2021 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 37 – Epilogue.

Loved it!  One of the best if not the best crossovers I've read.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2019 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 37 – Epilogue.

What a great story.

Reviewer: T-Tallendil Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2018 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 37 – Epilogue.

Love this 

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2018 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 37 – Epilogue.

Loved this, a seamless joining of 2 books, you have my deepest admiration for a job more than well done xx Alexis

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2018 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 37 – Epilogue.

nice update and epi

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2018 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 37 – Epilogue.

Perfect! Just perfect! Ness in Gryffindor, Jacob and his line stripped permanently from the wolf!

Great story! Thank you for letting us read it! :-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2018 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 36 – The end is nigh!

Well, Dumbledore, Tonks and Moony lived, but Snape died, still sad.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2018 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 37 – Epilogue.

Love Jacob getting permanently dissed.   LOL

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 36 – The end is nigh!

In the words of Ron Weasley, 'Bloody brilliant' xx

Alexis

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2018 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 35 – It could all go wrong.

I like that Dumbledore lived, it makes more sense xx

Alexis

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2018 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 36 – The end is nigh!

nice update.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2018 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 35 – It could all go wrong.

WOW! WOW! WOW! Sorry for shouting but really...WOW!!! Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2018 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 34 – The Battle for Hogwarts.

An exciting chapter. I am resigned to losing even more loved characters. Thank you for writing this amazing story

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2018 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 35 – It could all go wrong.

nice update

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2018 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 35 – It could all go wrong.

Glad the Volturi are taken care of now! :-)

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2018 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 34 – The Battle for Hogwarts.

nice update

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2018 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Vision

An exciting chapter. I am resigned to losing even more loved characters. Thank you for writing this amazing story

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2018 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 34 – The Battle for Hogwarts.

Well, that sucks! I though Sirius had dodged the bullet when he made it past the Department of Mysteries. And poor Fred :-(

Griffin in Men In Black 3 said "But where there is death, there will always be death." It seems to be the case here. I guess Dumbledore, Remus and Tonks  will die too :-(

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2018 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 33 – This means war.

And so it begins . . . .

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2018 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 34 – The Battle for Hogwarts.

Oh wow!  Action packed and so emotional!!  I loved it!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2018 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 34 – The Battle for Hogwarts.

Intense battle and of course, sad as well............

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2018 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 34 – The Battle for Hogwarts.

Still good, getting near the end now, have really enjoyed this xx

Alexis

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2018 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 33 – This means war.

nice update

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2018 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 33 – This means war.

The prophecy begins to come into play. Wonderful and exciting to see these two worlds come together. Thank you

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2018 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 33 – This means war.

Still really enjoying this, so sad we're near the end xx

alexis

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2018 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 33 – This means war.

Gah!  I dislike cliffies as much as Neville dislikes explosions LOL. GREAT CHAPTER!!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2018 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 33 – This means war.

I like the new allies and the changes that it makes to the plans.

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2018 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Secrets always come out.

I'm so glad Charlie and company got there to rescue the kids! :-)

I do so very much hope Tonks and Remus stay alive so they can enjoy their little family! But poor Snape, I have a feeling he'll still be a tragic hero :-(

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2018 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 31- The day they crashed the wedding.

Oh, well, THAT happened, I was hoping they'd be able to somehow avoid it on this go-round (as they avoided Dumbledore's death). But alas, not.

It's nice that Molly know she has more family now. :-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2018 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 30 – A dragon in the bank?

Another horcrux destroyed! :-)

I hope the dragon stays free!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Secrets always come out.

nice update...

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2018 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Secrets always come out.

Truly I have no words for how exciting enthralling and compelling this AU is . Thank you for continuing to write your vision.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2018 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 31- The day they crashed the wedding.

nice update

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2018 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 31- The day they crashed the wedding.

Ooh, a family that's good xx

Alexix

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2018 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 31- The day they crashed the wedding.

I really enjoyed seeing the other side of the events. And knowing Molly and her family will be looked after both financially and emotionally is an added bonus. Edward really is a gentle soul . Another wonderful update. Thank you and enjoy your weekend.

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2018 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 30 – A dragon in the bank?

nice update

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2018 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 30 – A dragon in the bank?

So very very good. Truly love how you’ve incorporated both worlds but still allow the characters to shine. The tension. The humour. The relationships. Thoroughly brilliant. Thank you.

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2018 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 30 – A dragon in the bank?

Loved it, as usual, this is great xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2018 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 29 – A History of Magic.

Well, that worked out well! :-)

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2018 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 29 – A History of Magic.

When I realised the content that would be covered in this chapter I, like a coward, exited your AU . I dreaded the consequences of the astronomy tower. I guess Harry’s Voldemort connection exerted its influence over him on this night. Allowing Dumbledore to live, and for Draco to receive help if asked for, makes so much sense. And shows a great deal of compassion for the Draco character. But, where was Snape? Keeping his true alliance hidden for now? 😉. Thank you for saving Dumbledore. I had completely forgotten about a Hokey. I wonder at Harry’s retrieval of Bellatrix’s wand. Something up your sleeve? 😉. Thanks for allaying my fears for Dumbledore . Looking forward to my questions being answered over the coming chapters . Thank you for writing this inspired and imaginative book.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2018 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 29 – A History of Magic.

I loved the new astronomy tower scene.  :)

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2018 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 29 – A History of Magic.

Lovely never understood why he had to die.

 I.m enjoying this immensely xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2018 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Jacobs Cross

I'm not feeling sorry for Jacob at all! Let him rot, I say! ;-)

Reviewer: NorthmanCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2018 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Jacobs Cross

let's hope that these stupid wolves listen for once!!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2018 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Jacobs Cross

I wonder if they will be dumb asses and go off to rescue Jacob the moron.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2018 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Jacobs Cross

I would like to think that the pack will hear the words of wisdom spoken by Charlie et al. But, I think humility will come at a high price for that lot. Wonderful chapter. Thank you so much for writing

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Jacobs Cross

Trust him, stupid child, maybe he'll learn something if he lives! xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2018 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Dolores Umbridge.

Glad that went well!

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2018 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Dolores Umbridge.

Forgot the stars...😀

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2018 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Dolores Umbridge.

Thank you for this wonderful update. I, as much as I loath her, have always thought the Pink Peril needed a bit more of an airing in the Potter Universe. She’s not really they type to blend into the background. Would have paid real money to see her reaction to losing the pendant. Lol. Again thank you. My Saturday has started off perfectly.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2018 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Dolores Umbridge.

I like how Umbridge got all huffy.

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2018 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 26 – Fight or Flight

I do hope they rescue those poor kittens that Umbridge, I'm sure, has kidnapped and trapped her plates!

Nice of Newt to give Edward his swooping evil!

I'm sure the vamps will enjoy Isle Esme! :-)

Great chapter! Happy New Year!

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2017 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 26 – Fight or Flight

Thank yo7. So wonderful. You’re really amping up the action and tension. So good to read. I hope you’re not snowed in and can enjoy your New Year right from the start. Best wishes and thanks again

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2017 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 26 – Fight or Flight

It certainly appears there is little time for questions and answers.   I hope Alistair doesn't turn on them.

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2017 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 26 – Fight or Flight

Oh it's getting exciting now, they're just keeping one step ahead xx

Alexis

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Date: 27 Nov 2017 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Vision

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Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2017 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 25 – The Oracle.

Lovely, moving on a pace now, bringing the two worlds together xx love it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2017 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 25 – The Oracle.

Good chapter! Moving things along!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2017 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 25 – The Oracle.

The group is getting so big.......

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2017 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 25 – The Oracle.

You have an amazing imagination. I am in awe. Your update comes as I listen to the early morning rain fall upon the roof. Perfect start to a day. Thank you

Reviewer: sassy973 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 24– Mundungus.

Loved it hope you update soon. 

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2017 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 24– Mundungus.

Brilliant. Nice to read about Aberforth. The image of Mundungus as a buxom blonde...😂 . I wonder why the horcrux affected Edward so badly. Will Bellatrix and fenrir, if the vanishing cabinet is repaired, exit as doll sized figures? Thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter. I hope you are well. Thank you for updating

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2017 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 24– Mundungus.

I loved Dumbledore's idea of where to put the vanishing cabinet.  LOL   Happy that Jasper destroyed another horcrux found by Edward.   Now how are they going to get that necklace from the pink bitch?  hmmm.....

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2017 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 24– Mundungus.

Now they don't have to annoy the Grey Lady to find the diadem! But they have to get the locket from toad face!

Lots of Harry Potter this weekend on Freeform!

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2017 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 24– Mundungus.

Good Stuff, winding it up now,

Horcrux's getting sorted out left and right.

this has been a pleasure to read xx

Alexis

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 23 - If Vampires could faint.

Oh. Wonderful. So exciting. And, in particular, relieved by Esme's quick action in regards to the escape. Beautifully written, well executed and tight plot. Believable characters (leaving out the vamps/shapeshifting /magic stuff of course😀).Thanks for a wonderful update.

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 23 - If Vampires could faint.

I'm so glad Esme and Nessie got away! I hope Aberforth helps the gang!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2017 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 23 - If Vampires could faint.

Well they should be able to prove it soon enough.  I sure am glad that Esme overheard the death eaters so her and Renesme could get away.

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2017 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 23 - If Vampires could faint.

God I love this story.  This feels so hard waiting for the next chapter...I just want it all now now  now.  It makes me so happy when a new chapter shows up.  I am one of thosepeople that when I get a new book I read it streight through.  I was one of the people who went to the bookstors and waited in line at midnight for the next Harry Potter book to come out. If I could transform I would be a dragon or a tiger myself.  Thanks for all your hard work.

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2017 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Things to do in Volterra when you're dead.

Well they don't call them the witch twins for nothing, good spin loving this story xx

Alexis

Reviewer: galwidanatitud Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Things to do in Volterra when you're dead.

Well, this is a definite twist.

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Things to do in Volterra when you're dead.

Fantastic chapter! The Witch Twins are actually witches - and good ones!

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Things to do in Volterra when you're dead.

Oh. Oh! OH!!! What a chapter! What a surprise! Oh My! Thrilling! This chapter could have been 50,000 words long and still it couldn't be long enough to satisfy every ounce of wonder and curiosity. I am flabbergasted. You've made my week. Thank you.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Things to do in Volterra when you're dead.

Well that chapter was a shock... a great one, but a shock!!!

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Date: 07 Oct 2017 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Sempra

I hope Dumbledore really has learned his lesson and takes a vamp or two with him when hunting horcruxes in the future!

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2017 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Sempra

Another enthralling chapter. Changes that enhance the original and changed major plot points make this a fresh imaginative approach. You use a delicate touch that is as sharp as a scalpel. Thank you

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Sempra

Nice touch, being saved by Bella and Edward and maybe more deaths might be prevented in the future xx

Alexis

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Surprising Allies.

Another remarkable and surprising chapter. There is so much info contained here. We seem to be moving further from the original HP (even though I do love HP this is not a bad thing) and it is exciting to see where you'll take us. Leah and Seth's quick arrival and easy acceptance also surprised. Loved every word. Thank you

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Surprising Allies.

I like that Leah and Seth are comfortable allies as well now.

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2017 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Surprising Allies.

I was wondering about the ring - I'm glad they're going to sort that mess out! I'm glad Seth and Leah are settling in well :-)

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 19 -Feeling Lucky.

Love how you slide it all together,

everything coming to a head xx

Alexis

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Date: 29 Sep 2017 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Surprising Allies.

Starting to diverge a bit now,

still enjoying it though xx

Alexis

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 19 -Feeling Lucky.

Another wonderful chapter. We've covered quite alot of territory in this update but there is a lot of info too. Cormac is showing himself as a wa***r supremeo. Those scenes in the movie, where Ron is trying out for goalkeeper, always crack me up. It reads to me that Carlisle is still searching for the 'right' cure for Dumbledore's hand. You know Rose will, one day, have to bring the wizarding world into the space age. That should keep her occupied. So many problems so much time... ;D
Looking forward to seeing what Dumbledore has to say on Emmett's solution to the vanishing cabinet and the deatheater incursion. Another thoroughly enjoyable and brilliant chapter. Thank you for updating.

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2017 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 19 -Feeling Lucky.

I'm glad they disabled the Vanishing Cabinet - that'll throw a wrench in their plans! :-)

 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2017 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 19 -Feeling Lucky.

I like the changes concerning Dumbledores hand, the vanishing cabinet and Rose's new brooms esp.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2017 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 18 – First strike.

This was a surprising chapter. May I say 'WOW!!!'? So exciting. Bias yes, but I love to see the wolves whipped. Can't imagine Paul in 'anger management '. Is Sam beginning to realise their lack of knowledge and how dangerous that is? Won't the volturi add the wizards and dragon together with the disappearance of the Cullens and come up with 'let's join forces with Voltie' ? I can't imagine any long term alliance with the vamps would suit Voltie. Only he can be immortal and therefore unique.Regardless, of how this is going to play out, this chapter deserves another ABSOLUTELY BLOOM'N BRILLIANT. Thank you

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2017 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 18 – First strike.

I love that Charlie's animagus form is a dragon! :-)

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Date: 16 Sep 2017 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 18 – First strike.

ugh...  I hate the wolf shapeshifters in every story, esp Jacob.  ugh....

I loved the banter between Charlie, Remus and Moody.

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18 – First strike.

Thank you, this just gets better and better, really loving it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2017 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 13– summer sun and an update from Charlie.

I'm glad it was Paul! That's hilarous! :-) I'm glad they sorted out the dogs and freed the imprints and that Charlie's going to not let the Alice thing go! :-) And good for Leah! ;-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2017 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 12– Revelations.

Should'a let the squid have her ;-)

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Date: 14 Sep 2017 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 11- Visions and prophecy

I'm so glad Sirius didn't die! I hope he stays alive! :-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2017 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 - A Vision

Thank you for the explanation! :-)

 

BTW, in case you were wondering, Alexis (Theadosia57) recommended this story. I probably wouldn't have thought about reading it were it not for her. I'm glad she recommended it! :-)

Reviewer: Kochabilka Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2017 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A Vision

If Bella was a witch and over the age of 17, why didn't she "stupefy" and "obliviate" the Port Angeles rapists and "incendio" James? Just saying . . .



Author's Response:

Good questions, my thinking is this. At that time her relationship with Edward was very new and hot and cold, in my AU while she knew what he was he didn't know her secret. With her magical abilities I would think she had an inkling that he would follow her, so the need to 'obliviated' the no_Maj/juggle would be rapists would inadvertently reveal her secret to Edward. I'm sure she would've kicked add had he not turned up. As for James, at that time she had an on going argument about being changed and I feel that in keeping to her character would have potentially used James to force that issue, again had Edward and the Cullens not arrived she would've no doubt kicked ass here too. Immature ? Yes but a lot of her 17 year old actions where.

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Date: 09 Sep 2017 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 17– A vampire calls.

I rather like Slughorn's resemblance to a niffler. Lol. And the caterwaul charm...what a scream! ;D I wonder, if the brothers gain access to the room of requirement will they smell the evil emanating from the diadem? Too soon? Hopefully they'll find or sniff out the vanishing cabinet. So excited as I really can't figure out, except in very broad brushstrokes, what you have planned. Thank you

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2017 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 17– A vampire calls.

I like the differences the vampires are makin g to the original story.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 16 – Trains, visions and cocky teenagers.

Simply wonderful. Your use of humour, in parts, lightened the tone and released some of the stress. Portable swamps. Only the Weasleys! Lol. I'm guessing that Dumbledore will not experience the ongoing contamination from the Riddle Ring. So very good. Thank you

Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2017 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 17– A vampire calls.

Loving it, you have them fitting in so well, I'm looking forward to more xx

Alexis

 

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2017 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 17– A vampire calls.

Wonderful. Just love the way you play and weave your plot through the original. Always enhancing never detracting. Gotta go back and read again. Thank you so very much for this much appreciated and unexpected update.

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