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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2017 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 48

So good.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 34

Kill the  ibitch

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2017 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

Don't blame him. He is suppose to be with Bella. 

Reviewer: dac10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2017 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

I'm enjoying the story, however, your use of question marks at the end of sentences that are not questions is a bit distracting.  Was this a formatting error?

 

 

 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2017 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 48

:) :) 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 45

This is not good....

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 44

They can't even have sex yet bc it's not been 6 weeks! Bummer!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 43

Get the ring on her finger & shut tanya down!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 42

Finally!! Communication is an amzing thing!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 41

Yes and say u love her!! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 40

She is delusional and so very selfish! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 39

Poor bella! Tanya needs to die!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 38

I didn't want this to happen around the labor crap!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 37

Tanya is such a snake!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 36

And also he's officially divorced!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 35

I can see tanya really causing some problems.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 34

I knew tanya wasn't as good as she was written in the heginning. Grrr!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 33

Good thinking bella!  He'll be ready to ravage u when everything is said & done!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 32

Ok now kiss & jump in bed together!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 31

It's good he didn't go immediatly to her.  But i do wonder how long he will actually sleep on the pullout?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 30

That was much more amicable than i expected it to be. That's fanfiction for ya! Haha

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 45

Has Tanya done something? 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 29

I hear the divorce papers being written already.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 28

Now they can start connecting correctly.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 27

The cat is out of the bag now.  Run along tanya back to kate!  She will lick your wounds.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 26

The doctor is going to walk in & interrupt.  Bella is about to go thru crazy sex hormones.  Edward better watch out.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 25

She's getting licked on! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 24

HOOOOLY CRAP! So she isn't going to be killed off! But it's really realistic bc she can't leave edward for another guy he is too yummy. So a girl it will be.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 23

I figured she was in love with him. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 22

He really does not want a baby with her.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 21

I hate this part! Arrrggg!  I inow bella is about to make him see his true feelings.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

This is not going to work! The emotions are going to be too much for the both of them.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

Whose is it? He has a death wish!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 18

I thought this might happen & then bella comes around wanting to be a surrogate.  Like a koo koo bird!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

I'm not sure what bella is thinking at this point?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh my gosh!  This is not good at all! Meaning he needs to grow some balls and speak up. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 15

No she isn't crying over the good news u dip! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 14

If he calls out bella's name during sex. Tanya is going to hit the roof.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 13

Poor tanya she has no clue what's coming.  Not that i care. ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

I'm worried now!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 11

So now what are they going to do?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

How awkward is it going to be when they are done? I'm not complaining or wanting them to stop. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

Holy cow!  Is this a dream?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

I'm so happy i'm finding this story now.  I couldn't have handled this anticipation! I still have 37 chapters to catch up!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 7

Yes yes yes it would!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

Oh wowzers!  How much will bella make edward rise to the occasion?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

Is bella ok?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh edward. I am betting bella give him an earful!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh my goodness!  She is in love with him! I mean i'm not surprised of course she is.  It's edward & he is her sexy bff!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

Bella knows him so well & you can already feel the sparks between them.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2017 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm so not wanting edward to be with tanya.  I'm thinking maybe she dies? 

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 44

Love this story!! So sad to see it end. I was hoping you would continue their journey. It doesn't say complete?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 44

:) loved this 

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 44

gOOD STORY, i LIKED THAT YOU POSTED FAST.  thanks

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 44

You are awesome !!!!! Loves this !!!! Thanks for the adventure

Reviewer: flowerboxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 44

Thanks for the awesome story................

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 44

E & B desrve each other.

Reviewer: virginie Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 44

Merci j'ai adorer

 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 40

Crazy!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 40

Omg I am sooooo glad you said that a/n and looking forward to you giving her a hearty reality check!

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 40

Omg I am sooooo glad you said that a/n and looking forward to you giving her a hearty reality check!

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 39

I think your story is fabulous and I'm loving reading it!! I'm sorry some people just can't find it in themselves to be happy, and so they pick on other writers trying to make themselves feel better. Same thing with the crazy witch hunts over on FanFiction, it was really insane. Keep up the great work, the story is wonderful!!!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 38

What dumbass lawyer took on Tanya's case? She doesn't have a leg to stand on. That would be like me going after custody of a random child.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 38

What dumbass lawyer took on Tanya's case? She doesn't have a leg to stand on. That would be like me going after custody of a random child.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 38

Who would be insane enough to take her case on? 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 38

Honestly, any judge that would let her even go for custody in this situation is a farce. I am thoroughly enjoying and can actually see a person trying this crap though. Enjoyable but please, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, put that biatch in her place. I would sue her for potential harming Bella's child as the news obviously sned Bella into labor... the HOE. See, there is a reason i hate that hoebag. She is evil, and deserves nothing. How she thinks she deserves that baby is completely beyond me. 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 37

HA! So some moron actually thinks they can take a baby away from its biological parents and give it to a man's ex-wife, with no legal reason for it to be acceptable? SHe really is a dumb piece of wokr, isn't she?? Why did he marry her again? Do we get that back story? Like, was this a "Bella has a boyfriend so i need to find someone else to lust after" deal? Or were they perfectly content until she couldn't have a baby? I find that really hard to swallow, personally. Anyway, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. XOXO

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 36

<3 I love this story. More chappies pretty please!! 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 35

Whew!!! l ALMOST PASSED OUT ON THAT ONE... I have been waiting for these all morning, my dear!! 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 34

I doubt Tanya's claim will hold up.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 30

I guess that worked out. Love makes people blindly stupid. Can Bella trust a cheater? I don't consider Bella the cheater. She wasn't the one that's married.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 26

Is she having twins? One for each of them.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 24

Go T!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 23

She doesn't want to ruin his life? How is she going to able to sit by while another woman raises her child?

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 21

I would love to be the first in line to castrate him.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 19

Explain that to Tanya.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 18

Hah! I knew it!!!!

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 17

I bet that she's already pregnant.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 16

He's a scumbag coward.

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 15

How f***ed up is Bella? She's willing to have a baby for someone that isn't in a stable marraige. What kind of kife is that for a child to enter?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 34

Tanya is crazy!! 

Reviewer: bellagirl Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 34

*mike drop*

Ok, Tanya doesn't have a leg to stand on as the baby was conceived naturally and without the help of artificial insemination. Yes, Bella did agree to be a surrogate. However, she is in no way tied to this child as the agreement wasn't completed through the use of her ovum.

Also, what the fuck was going on with James? Nothing was ever mentioned about him at all. In fact, up until he entered the picture Bella was single. Kind of a plot mistake there.

Author's Response:

It was a look into the past. Sorry, I guess I should have mentioned that? 

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh God No. This is a lot of BS from Tanya. I think E and B deserve to have some loving without the drama.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 34

Now this doesn't surprise me.  They should have had a contract about the baby.  Did they?  If so, Bella could be the one fighting for custody.  Of course, Tanya is invested in this baby...that's part of the betrayal.  This the easiest way for her and Kate to get a child.  Between the divorce and DNA, Tanya shouldn't have a chance.

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Ok so technically Tanya would have had to sign a bunch of paperwork and such to have any claim to the baby. Since at first they discussed surrogacy, to have "his and Tanya's" baby, one would assume the egg was Tanyas, just the fertilized eggs placed in Bella. Since this is not what happened, at least from what I gathered from what I read, she has zero claim on that baby. Especially since they are divorcing and it is Edward's biological child. Anyway..... I'm soooo anxious now. 

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 34

Great story thank you for posting so quickly ,wonderful story can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 32

These two need to get their head out of their ass and tell each other that they love each other

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 30

Yes I love how fast they said good bye. Now let have some sex with Bella lol

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2017 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 30

WOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOO

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 29

Yeah she is a HUGE hypocrite, and i can't believe I was kind of expecting her to be dumb like that... "What are you doing here?" LMFAO XOXO 

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 29

Lmao I am so glad that its out in the open.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 27

:) :) 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 27

Ding Dong, the witch is dead... which old witch, the wicked witch... Ding Dong the Wicked Witch is deaaaaaaaad!!!!! SNICKER!!

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 27

Keep walking, Tanya.  But Bella, no matter how much you love Edward you need to think long and hard about his behaviors throughout this.

Reviewer: Melcat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 27

Okay okay, I'm glad she knows, but come on, they wouldn't just let her barge in the room. Tanya's not the patient. Can't wait for more Edward Bella alone time 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 26

OMG OMG !! HAVE TANYA WALK IN!!!!! PLEASE!! I know you already have it written but please? pretty with cherries on top? lol

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 26

Oh yes yes yes more action from these two.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 25

Love Love it! 

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 24

Yikes. Didn't see that coming 

Reviewer: LunaEclipse Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 24

OOOOH !!! YEAH YEAH!!!! Go Kate!!!! Muuuuhahahahaha can you have Edward walk in on that or something PLEASE???????? I know you won't.... but it would ROCK!!! BOoooo on the Tanya and Edward mix lol. Luv ya!! Oh and yes you know it is just plain horrible of Edward to want to gift Tanya with his and Bella's baby (probably to save their marriage or whatever). It isnt a piece of jewelry or a puppy.... GAH!

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