Date: 31 May 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 39
I think your story is fabulous and I'm loving reading it!! I'm sorry some people just can't find it in themselves to be happy, and so they pick on other writers trying to make themselves feel better. Same thing with the crazy witch hunts over on FanFiction, it was really insane. Keep up the great work, the story is wonderful!!!
Date: 31 May 2017 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 38
Honestly, any judge that would let her even go for custody in this situation is a farce. I am thoroughly enjoying and can actually see a person trying this crap though. Enjoyable but please, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, put that biatch in her place. I would sue her for potential harming Bella's child as the news obviously sned Bella into labor... the HOE. See, there is a reason i hate that hoebag. She is evil, and deserves nothing. How she thinks she deserves that baby is completely beyond me.
Date: 31 May 2017 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 37
HA! So some moron actually thinks they can take a baby away from its biological parents and give it to a man's ex-wife, with no legal reason for it to be acceptable? SHe really is a dumb piece of wokr, isn't she?? Why did he marry her again? Do we get that back story? Like, was this a "Bella has a boyfriend so i need to find someone else to lust after" deal? Or were they perfectly content until she couldn't have a baby? I find that really hard to swallow, personally. Anyway, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. XOXO
Date: 31 May 2017 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 34
Ok, Tanya doesn't have a leg to stand on as the baby was conceived naturally and without the help of artificial insemination. Yes, Bella did agree to be a surrogate. However, she is in no way tied to this child as the agreement wasn't completed through the use of her ovum.
Also, what the fuck was going on with James? Nothing was ever mentioned about him at all. In fact, up until he entered the picture Bella was single. Kind of a plot mistake there.
It was a look into the past. Sorry, I guess I should have mentioned that?
Date: 31 May 2017 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 34
Now this doesn't surprise me. They should have had a contract about the baby. Did they? If so, Bella could be the one fighting for custody. Of course, Tanya is invested in this baby...that's part of the betrayal. This the easiest way for her and Kate to get a child. Between the divorce and DNA, Tanya shouldn't have a chance.
Date: 31 May 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok so technically Tanya would have had to sign a bunch of paperwork and such to have any claim to the baby. Since at first they discussed surrogacy, to have "his and Tanya's" baby, one would assume the egg was Tanyas, just the fertilized eggs placed in Bella. Since this is not what happened, at least from what I gathered from what I read, she has zero claim on that baby. Especially since they are divorcing and it is Edward's biological child. Anyway..... I'm soooo anxious now.
Date: 30 May 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
OOOOH !!! YEAH YEAH!!!! Go Kate!!!! Muuuuhahahahaha can you have Edward walk in on that or something PLEASE???????? I know you won't.... but it would ROCK!!! BOoooo on the Tanya and Edward mix lol. Luv ya!! Oh and yes you know it is just plain horrible of Edward to want to gift Tanya with his and Bella's baby (probably to save their marriage or whatever). It isnt a piece of jewelry or a puppy.... GAH!