Date: 10 Dec 2022 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm sure, not, that Bella will just hand her baby to Tanya.
Date: 29 Jun 2018 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 26
Then Tanya walks in!
Date: 29 Jun 2018 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
They both may as well be cheaters.
Date: 29 Jun 2018 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 23
Bella's giving them her baby?
Date: 29 Jun 2018 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
Bella's okay with that plan? Are they all stupid?
Date: 29 Jun 2018 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
I can't believe any dr. would come to that conclusion.
Date: 29 Jun 2018 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
He's a model husband and Best Friend, lol.
Date: 29 Jun 2018 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
He has tunnel vision, only thinking of Tanya's feelings, as he should. He's being unfair to Bella.
Date: 12 Jul 2017 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Don't blame him. He is suppose to be with Bella.
Date: 19 Jun 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
I'm enjoying the story, however, your use of question marks at the end of sentences that are not questions is a bit distracting. Was this a formatting error?
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 45
This is not good....
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 44
They can't even have sex yet bc it's not been 6 weeks! Bummer!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 43
Get the ring on her finger & shut tanya down!!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 42
Finally!! Communication is an amzing thing!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 41
Yes and say u love her!!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 40
She is delusional and so very selfish!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 39
Poor bella! Tanya needs to die!!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 38
I didn't want this to happen around the labor crap!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 37
Tanya is such a snake!!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 36
And also he's officially divorced!!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 35
I can see tanya really causing some problems.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 34
I knew tanya wasn't as good as she was written in the heginning. Grrr!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 33
Good thinking bella! He'll be ready to ravage u when everything is said & done!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 32
Ok now kiss & jump in bed together!!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 31
It's good he didn't go immediatly to her. But i do wonder how long he will actually sleep on the pullout?
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 30
That was much more amicable than i expected it to be. That's fanfiction for ya! Haha
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 45
Has Tanya done something?
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 29
I hear the divorce papers being written already.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 28
Now they can start connecting correctly.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 27
The cat is out of the bag now. Run along tanya back to kate! She will lick your wounds.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
The doctor is going to walk in & interrupt. Bella is about to go thru crazy sex hormones. Edward better watch out.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
She's getting licked on!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
HOOOOLY CRAP! So she isn't going to be killed off! But it's really realistic bc she can't leave edward for another guy he is too yummy. So a girl it will be.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
I figured she was in love with him.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
He really does not want a baby with her.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
I hate this part! Arrrggg! I inow bella is about to make him see his true feelings.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
This is not going to work! The emotions are going to be too much for the both of them.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Whose is it? He has a death wish!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
I thought this might happen & then bella comes around wanting to be a surrogate. Like a koo koo bird!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm not sure what bella is thinking at this point?
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh my gosh! This is not good at all! Meaning he needs to grow some balls and speak up.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
No she isn't crying over the good news u dip!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
If he calls out bella's name during sex. Tanya is going to hit the roof.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor tanya she has no clue what's coming. Not that i care. ;)
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
So now what are they going to do?
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
How awkward is it going to be when they are done? I'm not complaining or wanting them to stop.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
Holy cow! Is this a dream?
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm so happy i'm finding this story now. I couldn't have handled this anticipation! I still have 37 chapters to catch up!!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yes yes yes it would!!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh wowzers! How much will bella make edward rise to the occasion?
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh edward. I am betting bella give him an earful!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my goodness! She is in love with him! I mean i'm not surprised of course she is. It's edward & he is her sexy bff!
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella knows him so well & you can already feel the sparks between them.
Date: 10 Jun 2017 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so not wanting edward to be with tanya. I'm thinking maybe she dies?
Date: 02 Jun 2017 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 44
Love this story!! So sad to see it end. I was hoping you would continue their journey. It doesn't say complete?
Date: 01 Jun 2017 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 44
gOOD STORY, i LIKED THAT YOU POSTED FAST. thanks
Date: 31 May 2017 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 44
You are awesome !!!!! Loves this !!!! Thanks for the adventure
Date: 31 May 2017 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 44
Thanks for the awesome story................
Date: 31 May 2017 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 44
E & B desrve each other.
Date: 31 May 2017 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 44
Merci j'ai adorer
Date: 31 May 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 40
Omg I am sooooo glad you said that a/n and looking forward to you giving her a hearty reality check!
Date: 31 May 2017 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 40
Omg I am sooooo glad you said that a/n and looking forward to you giving her a hearty reality check!
Date: 31 May 2017 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 39
I think your story is fabulous and I'm loving reading it!! I'm sorry some people just can't find it in themselves to be happy, and so they pick on other writers trying to make themselves feel better. Same thing with the crazy witch hunts over on FanFiction, it was really insane. Keep up the great work, the story is wonderful!!!
Date: 31 May 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 38
What dumbass lawyer took on Tanya's case? She doesn't have a leg to stand on. That would be like me going after custody of a random child.
Date: 31 May 2017 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 38
What dumbass lawyer took on Tanya's case? She doesn't have a leg to stand on. That would be like me going after custody of a random child.
Date: 31 May 2017 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 38
Who would be insane enough to take her case on?
Date: 31 May 2017 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 38
Honestly, any judge that would let her even go for custody in this situation is a farce. I am thoroughly enjoying and can actually see a person trying this crap though. Enjoyable but please, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, put that biatch in her place. I would sue her for potential harming Bella's child as the news obviously sned Bella into labor... the HOE. See, there is a reason i hate that hoebag. She is evil, and deserves nothing. How she thinks she deserves that baby is completely beyond me.
Date: 31 May 2017 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 37
HA! So some moron actually thinks they can take a baby away from its biological parents and give it to a man's ex-wife, with no legal reason for it to be acceptable? SHe really is a dumb piece of wokr, isn't she?? Why did he marry her again? Do we get that back story? Like, was this a "Bella has a boyfriend so i need to find someone else to lust after" deal? Or were they perfectly content until she couldn't have a baby? I find that really hard to swallow, personally. Anyway, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. XOXO
Date: 31 May 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 36
<3 I love this story. More chappies pretty please!!
Date: 31 May 2017 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 35
Whew!!! l ALMOST PASSED OUT ON THAT ONE... I have been waiting for these all morning, my dear!!
Date: 31 May 2017 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 34
I doubt Tanya's claim will hold up.
Date: 31 May 2017 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 30
I guess that worked out. Love makes people blindly stupid. Can Bella trust a cheater? I don't consider Bella the cheater. She wasn't the one that's married.
Date: 31 May 2017 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 26
Is she having twins? One for each of them.
Date: 31 May 2017 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
She doesn't want to ruin his life? How is she going to able to sit by while another woman raises her child?
Date: 31 May 2017 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
I would love to be the first in line to castrate him.
Date: 31 May 2017 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
Explain that to Tanya.
Date: 31 May 2017 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hah! I knew it!!!!
Date: 31 May 2017 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
I bet that she's already pregnant.
Date: 31 May 2017 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
He's a scumbag coward.
Date: 31 May 2017 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 15
How f***ed up is Bella? She's willing to have a baby for someone that isn't in a stable marraige. What kind of kife is that for a child to enter?
Date: 31 May 2017 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 34
Tanya is crazy!!
Date: 31 May 2017 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 34
*mike drop*
Ok, Tanya doesn't have a leg to stand on as the baby was conceived naturally and without the help of artificial insemination. Yes, Bella did agree to be a surrogate. However, she is in no way tied to this child as the agreement wasn't completed through the use of her ovum.
Also, what the fuck was going on with James? Nothing was ever mentioned about him at all. In fact, up until he entered the picture Bella was single. Kind of a plot mistake there.
Author's Response:
It was a look into the past. Sorry, I guess I should have mentioned that?
Date: 31 May 2017 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 34
Oh God No. This is a lot of BS from Tanya. I think E and B deserve to have some loving without the drama.
Date: 31 May 2017 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 34
Now this doesn't surprise me. They should have had a contract about the baby. Did they? If so, Bella could be the one fighting for custody. Of course, Tanya is invested in this baby...that's part of the betrayal. This the easiest way for her and Kate to get a child. Between the divorce and DNA, Tanya shouldn't have a chance.
Date: 31 May 2017 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ok so technically Tanya would have had to sign a bunch of paperwork and such to have any claim to the baby. Since at first they discussed surrogacy, to have "his and Tanya's" baby, one would assume the egg was Tanyas, just the fertilized eggs placed in Bella. Since this is not what happened, at least from what I gathered from what I read, she has zero claim on that baby. Especially since they are divorcing and it is Edward's biological child. Anyway..... I'm soooo anxious now.
Date: 31 May 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 34
Great story thank you for posting so quickly ,wonderful story can't wait to read more.
Date: 31 May 2017 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 32
These two need to get their head out of their ass and tell each other that they love each other
Date: 31 May 2017 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 30
Yes I love how fast they said good bye. Now let have some sex with Bella lol
Date: 31 May 2017 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 30
WOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOOO
Date: 31 May 2017 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
Yeah she is a HUGE hypocrite, and i can't believe I was kind of expecting her to be dumb like that... "What are you doing here?" LMFAO XOXO
Date: 31 May 2017 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 29
Lmao I am so glad that its out in the open.