Date: 15 Jun 2017 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was your first? Wow you did awesome. You got the dirty talking Edward down pat and the complete clutz Bella right so I say yep you done good. Your grammar and spelling are very good and it was a great fun read especially the lemonade lemon. Hope you had as great a time writing as I had reading. Can't wait for your next one.