[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved it this is great they are one happy family heheheheheh
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Date: 02 Nov 2017 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love them getting counseling. Smart move. yey for finding a house.
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Date: 02 Nov 2017 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Glad Bella at least heard him out. Not sure I'd forgive him either.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
Surprised Jake actually agreed to pay and walk away. He def is a pedophile. Yuk
Date: 02 Nov 2017 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 17
Lucien is too observitent. Wonder if Jake will even bother to read it. Prob not. Glad B&E are talking again.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
yummy lemony time
Kinda knew she'd have a meltdown when she found out. hmmm now did Lucian leave to talk to Edward....or is Jake involved?!?!?! ACK
Date: 02 Nov 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
aww what a sweet date.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
ah well that explains why Jake agreed. Charlie is def a f'ed up parent but at least he filed the papers. Can't wait till Leah finds out about the other kids too.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
Surprised Jake agreed. Prob just for show with Leah..... who is a complete moron for staying with her.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hope that's the last of Kate
Date: 02 Nov 2017 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
I wouldn't be so quick to forgive Charlie either. Only thing I can think of is he a)thought Jake would step up if he backed out or b) he was embarrassed. Regardless, lame ass father. I get the Lucian/Damon interaction at the end. My full sister and I were in that situation. I was older and understood more of what was going on and refused to be manipulated whereas she did. Sad what people do these days to innocent kids.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
Poor kids. Sucks when parents can't get along. That is one thing my ex and I agree on. I was wondering when Jake's fiancee was going to be coming into that.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aww for everyone getting her into the apt. I think she should go after Jake if for nothing else to show him he can't get away with everything he's done/not done and so he'd be leery to try it on someone else.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
Esme is right....B is gonna be pissed. E is such a softie thought.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is so sweet. Glad Jasper is there along with Irina to help with the Sperm Donor situation.
Date: 29 Oct 2017 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 19
Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 27 Oct 2017 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
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[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2017 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
Well he was honest now but will she ever forgive him
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[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Well damn...she handled that better than expected.
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Date: 26 Oct 2017 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
Why did Charlie never try to find Bella after he sobered up? He could have with all his police connections.
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Date: 23 Oct 2017 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
The kids don't need to know about half siblings at this time. Bella didn't know the whole story, so she can say she didn't know until much later. Why upset the boat now. The boys are finally settled and happy.
Date: 21 Oct 2017 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
Not shocked by that revelation. Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 20 Oct 2017 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
Sh*t always has a way coming back to bite us in thee ass.
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[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yes Jake no longer can be a problem to Bella and the boys but will he pay and what will Charlie have to say for himself
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Date: 19 Oct 2017 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
They’re almost two peas in a pod. Can't wait to hear about Charlie.
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Date: 19 Oct 2017 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm glad that Jake did not cause any problems. Jake has 4 other kids but Bella called him a pedophile. How young were the girls that gave birth to these other 4 kids?
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Date: 18 Oct 2017 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yeah! It is sad it took a bad situation for Bella to realize that she needs Edward and Edward needs them. They are a family already.
Date: 14 Oct 2017 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
I wish Edward had told her that he was intentionally keeping the apartment empty because he didn't want a noisy tenant under him. Maybe then she would she would realize that he wasn't taking any money on the apartment Anyway by his choice and that even the 500 she's giving him is more than he was getting before
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2017 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
So much happened in this chapter. I'm glad forgiveness was given. They make a great family.
Date: 13 Oct 2017 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
Will the dickhead respond to the letter?
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Date: 13 Oct 2017 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
I had a feeling he wanted to see Jake. I'm so glad Edward and Bella made up.
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Date: 13 Oct 2017 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
Awe...
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[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2017 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh, thank God!! I don't know what I thought was gonna happen to Lucian but I'm glad he was found safe. He used good judgement and thought things through. Bella sees that Edward had the best intentions, care and concern for her and the boys. She deserves it.
Really good chapter, thank you! Looking forward to the next one. -RoseE. x
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Date: 13 Oct 2017 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 17
OMG I am so happy
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[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2017 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
Kinda rushed and short but ..... : )
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[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2017 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 17
<# I love them!!!
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Date: 13 Oct 2017 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 17
very sweet...i love hea...
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Date: 13 Oct 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Glad they found him and they are talking again!
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Date: 12 Oct 2017 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
So pleased they sorted all of that out. Good chapter. Thanks
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[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2017 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh thank goodness he is alright and Edward and Bella are on the mend so what is next for them
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Date: 12 Oct 2017 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
I did not expect Lucian to go to co front Jacob. I thought him leaving school had to do with not getting to see Edward. Glad they talked and got everything out in the open. Can't wait for more.
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[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2017 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
She really over-reacted but understandably so. Good cliffhanger. Thank you
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[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2017 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well she finally got some poor dear she was long over due. I think Lucian went to Edwards I hope he did. Thank you for this great story.
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Date: 07 Oct 2017 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh man...she's rightfully pissed...and lucian is making his way to ed, no doubt
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Date: 06 Oct 2017 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
instead of sitting down and confronting Edward like an ADULT!!! she runs like a hurt little girl. SERIOUSLY....Now that her son is missing it's OK to turn to Edward. I call that CHILDISH AND UNGRATEFUL!!!!!!! but maybe she'll OPEN her eyes and APPRECIATE Edward for being there for her and her sons!! Grow up Bella!!!
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[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2017 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love your story can't wait to read more
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Date: 06 Oct 2017 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
She needs to let it go and make up with Edward but first they need to find her baby boy.
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[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2017 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
So good
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[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2017 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm hoping he was trying to get to Edward on his own.
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Date: 05 Oct 2017 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
She has to forgive Edward. She said she wanted a safe for her kids. Well, so did Edward. Lucian ran away because he knew something is wrong with Bella. I'm wondering if he went to Edward's office.
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She is going to she was all beut there when Lucian went missing. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 05 Oct 2017 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella I hope she sees his heart was in the right place
now where is her son
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Date: 05 Oct 2017 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh my god! I hate when even I don't know what's coming, lol.
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Date: 29 Sep 2017 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love them kids they know that Edward is making their mom happy . Great date and not over ;)
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Date: 29 Sep 2017 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
I almost went there when I visited Seattle in July. It is a real place and from what I hear, it is rather good and fun.
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Yes. If i ever get out that way im going there it sounds so fun from the website and reviews.
Date: 29 Sep 2017 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
What an awesome date!!!!!
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[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2017 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
Really enjoyed their first date. Thank you for fuelling my imagination for The Edward in a dark blue Armani! Lol.
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Date: 28 Sep 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
I looked it up; insane! I don't want their date to be over yet either! Can she really get another meeting withJerkob? Edward will make sure of it.
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Date: 28 Sep 2017 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yes she does
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[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
Awe they are meant to be that is for sure I loved it
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Date: 28 Sep 2017 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter. Yes a “movie “ does sound good. Can’t wait till the next chapter.
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[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2017 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 15
Aww. I love it
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[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2017 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm liking your fiction so far.....so no worries!!
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Date: 28 Sep 2017 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
*groans* Edward needs to tell her about the apartment sooner rather than later. Either way she's gonna be pissed. But let's hope it's not irrationally pissed. His heart was in the right place and he was doing it to help her get ahead. Not because she asked but because he genuinely wanted to help.
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[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love that story update soon
Date: 25 Sep 2017 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward is such a good man and dad. He is their dad in every way that is important.
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Date: 25 Sep 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
They will be better when this is all settled and Jake is out of their lives forever.
Date: 24 Sep 2017 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Lovely. Thank you
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[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2017 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
Aww Edward is the sweetest thing. I can't wait to see how they form a family. I loved the EPOV keep them coming.
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Date: 24 Sep 2017 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
Lovely. Thank you
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Date: 23 Sep 2017 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awe...so be their dad
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Date: 22 Sep 2017 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Edward is the man love him love him love him.
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Date: 21 Sep 2017 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love it, great chapter
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[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2017 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow I hope the go after Jake hard and also get him thrown in jail for all he has done too young girls and how sweet is Edward with the boys
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[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2017 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow I hope the go after Jake hard and also get him thrown in jail for all he has done too young girls and how sweet is Edward with the boys
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Date: 21 Sep 2017 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you for this insight. Really enjoyed it.
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[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2017 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
Of course Edward would be a great dad but first things first....get rid of Jake....take him to the cleaners then kick his ass.
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Date: 21 Sep 2017 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
Jake needs to be castrated like the dog he is.
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Date: 21 Sep 2017 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
Someone please tell Leah that her piece of sh** man has 6 kids not two. I like the chapter can't wait till next week.
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Date: 21 Sep 2017 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love reading Edward's POV. Love what he told Damon.
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Date: 15 Sep 2017 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Can I kick Jacob in the nuts please
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Date: 15 Sep 2017 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
I have a feeling Edward made that meeting happen.
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[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2017 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
Edward paid him didn't he? I'm not sure how I feel about him paying him off but I still think Jake is up to no good and Charlie is no better.
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[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2017 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wonderful. Thank you
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Date: 14 Sep 2017 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love your work!!!
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Date: 14 Sep 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm impressed with Jake's answer to Damon. I have a feeling that Leah made Jake meet Damon.
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This is one of three times Jake did soemthing half way impressive. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2017 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
:O :O :O what a SOB
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Date: 14 Sep 2017 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
Jake is a piece of shit. I cant wait for Bella and Edwards first date.
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[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2017 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oooooohhhhhhh! Please don't let people get fooled by that jackass!!! Leah needs a swift kick in the ass too!!!!
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[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2017 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh wow yeah they do deserve each other. I love how Edward is with all of them I am looking forward to more
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Date: 14 Sep 2017 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
Did Edward bribe him?
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[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2017 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love the chapter. I love your characters and seeing how they interact /react. You really have a great handle on who they are as people.
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
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Date: 14 Sep 2017 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love Edward threatening Jacob. At least the asshole was somewhat nice to Damon, though it was forced and fake. Leah is a complete fool!
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She is an idiot, but she will learn the hard way. And I love Edwards threat to lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
Leah is delusional if she doesn't see Jake for what he is. A big pile of ๐’ฉ that isn't worth the boys time. Great chapter. Glad to see Edward and Bella are moving is good direction with their relationship.
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Date: 14 Sep 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
I can see it now. The new girl will come crying to Bella when Jake knocks her up and then leaves her because he hasn't changed at all.
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Date: 10 Sep 2017 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh course you do! Great story so far. Keep up the great work !
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Date: 09 Sep 2017 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 12
Lots of parents follow the Charlie Swan method of child development and support. :( Good chapter. Thanks
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Date: 09 Sep 2017 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
An interesting turn. Didn't see that coming
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2017 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh wow the poor boys but damn Bella is awesome and hot damn Edward made a move what will Bella do or say to that
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all will be revealed in time muaaaaaaahhahaha.....Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!