[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2017 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hope those people in your head start talking a mile a minute so you can update ASAP. (he he he)
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Date: 08 Sep 2017 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
i hope she don't get mad at him
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[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2017 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hope those people in your head start talking a mile a minute so you can update ASAP. (he he he)
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Date: 08 Sep 2017 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG!! You can't just leave me hanging like that...... So not nice of you but I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Oh but I did lol, Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2017 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
He finally kisses her!!!!!!!!!! Now maybe they will admit that they are attracted to each other.
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[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2017 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Such a strong declaration from Edward at the end. I enjoy seeing his relationship with the boys strengthen. Thank you for the update.
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Date: 07 Sep 2017 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
He had better not give Jake anything except maybe a black eye and a bloody nose!
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Date: 07 Sep 2017 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
They kissed!!!!!
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They did!!
Date: 07 Sep 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor kids and poor Bella she just wants her kids to be happy not an easy thing to do . first kiss OMG
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Date: 07 Sep 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
Dude. Good stuff. More please. ;)
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Date: 07 Sep 2017 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter. I so want to know how it went with Tanya and Sue? Please let Bella start to let Edward in more. Can't wait till the next chapter!
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Date: 06 Sep 2017 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
That is just creepy.
Date: 03 Sep 2017 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
You and your cliff hangers lady!!! Thanks for the update.
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Date: 02 Sep 2017 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
Omgosh!!!!! Well, that is very interesting. Jake, the sperm donor to Bella's boys in engaged to her step sister. Lol. What a small world.
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Date: 01 Sep 2017 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh wow, this will be interesting!
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[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2017 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Umm major cliffhanger this is gonna get good. Can't wait for more. Please put Bella out of her UST and get her laid already ;)
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Date: 01 Sep 2017 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG Jake wants to stay in the Swan family? Why did Charlie push Bella away.
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no he doesnt he hasnt realized who got engaged to.
Date: 01 Sep 2017 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
Was not seeing that at all
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Date: 31 Aug 2017 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh boy that bad pot just boiled over.
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[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2017 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
*hammer drop*
Sue and Leah scoping Bella and the kiddos out and investigating Charlie AND Jacob. Sounds like at least Charlie is regretting what happened to cause the rift.
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He is regretting some things for sure. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2017 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wiat so bellas dad is married to sue, her daughterleah is engaged to jake...where's bellas mom? Weren't they married when they disowned her? Great twist!!
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Bella's mom passed away when she was eight. Charlie was not married when he kicked Bella out. And Yes Charlie is married to Sue and Leah is engaged to Jake.
Date: 31 Aug 2017 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh! Different. Unexpected. Good. Thanks
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Date: 31 Aug 2017 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm loving it!
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Date: 31 Aug 2017 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 11
holy CATS :O :O :O
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[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2017 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh my
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Date: 31 Aug 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
WTF!!! Please don't keep us waiting too long. : ( : /
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Date: 31 Aug 2017 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm pretty pissed at Charlie. He never told Bella he remarried or checked on her?! He's just as guilty as Jake.
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Yes, its horrible that he completly left Bella in the dark on top of kicking her out. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2017 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aww the plot thickens. Lol
Happy writing.
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[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2017 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh snap her dad's wife on my what does this mean and hmmmm Jakes future wife will maybe not anymore what will they say to each other
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It means a can of worms is open lol Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2017 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Nice cliffhanger on this chapter. How will Bella respond to her new step mom and step sister. How will Leah respond to finding out jake is a piece of sh**? Great chapter can't wait till next week.
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Date: 31 Aug 2017 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Didn't see that coming
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Date: 27 Aug 2017 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Sock it to him, Bella! The creep doesn't deserve a pass on something like that !
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Date: 25 Aug 2017 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
I though Edwaed might take her to dinner or something
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Date: 25 Aug 2017 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
I think Jake needs to be hung by his balls and taken for everything he has but I dont want him in there lifes. Edward is showing her how much he trust her judgement
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Date: 24 Aug 2017 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
So good to see her life coming together. Jerkob doesn't seem like the kind to take legal action quietly. I think she has every right to be concerned. A very enjoyable read. Thanks
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Date: 24 Aug 2017 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm sure Bella feelings like she is damned if she does and damned if she doesn't. Jake needs to pay for how he has treated them. But Jake is the one who is losing out on knowing how great his kids are.
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He is definitely losing out
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Date: 24 Aug 2017 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
I feel bad for her having to decide. I know I think he deserves to be dragged through the court system for years, bu that she doesn't want to have the stress of dealing with him.
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Its stressful but I think what is happening is going ot be for the best. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2017 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward needs to invite her over to watch a movie & snuggle time!!
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They do need to snuggle :) Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!!
Date: 24 Aug 2017 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
I truly believe she should stick it to Jake for the back support then have his rights terminated. Happy writing.
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Date: 24 Aug 2017 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yes just let it go like she said it would probably give her more problems if she goes after him for child support she does feel Edward it's hiding something from her
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Date: 24 Aug 2017 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh wow I loved it they boys are thriving Bella has a great job now what will she do about Jake I say go after him he wanted kids he should pay and Bella can put that money away for the boys college fund
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Date: 19 Aug 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
She is going to flip out on him when she finds out how he has helped her
Date: 19 Aug 2017 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder why she was worried looking at her phone. Good chapter. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2017 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward the protection is amazing. Now the family all knows hope they all meet soon. Hot dream for Edward too. Thank you for the update.
Date: 18 Aug 2017 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward should just tell her about the apartment but make sure to let her know that she reminds him of his mother and her work ethic and he considers it to be one of the perks of her job.
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Yes he does
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2017 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it!
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Alia
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[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2017 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
I thought he was going to be livid! Now is he going to buy her a bed?
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Date: 17 Aug 2017 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
She will be mad but I'm sure Edward can make it up to her. He can always say it was for the kids. That gets Bella Everytime.
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That is her soft spot for sure. Thank you for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2017 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope she doesn't give him a hard time about his generosity. I don't or I should say I can't see how she hasn't an inkling that he has feelings for her.......and if truth be told she is obviously having the exact same feelings for him.
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[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow Edward is in deep with her I don't think he even knows how deep his feelings are
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Date: 17 Aug 2017 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
I have a feeling Bella is going to be furious when all of his lies come out.
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Date: 16 Aug 2017 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
Such a nice edward...
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2017 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG ! Love your story can't wait to read more.
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward knows he has to have her pay something. Jake is going to be sorry for his shit them poor kids.
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[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2017 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh I love Edward. And I'm so happy Bella not being difficult
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[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2017 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
Thank goodness she's a good mom & puts her pride aside for her kids.
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Yes, swallowing pride is the hardest thing but kids always come first. Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2017 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
He is a happy man he sees his future
Date: 12 Aug 2017 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 8
So good. Thank you
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Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
Another good chapter. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good one. Oh and the last review was supposed to read 'touching'. 'Touchy' is just a bit creepy. :P
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2017 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Very touchy. Thanks
Date: 12 Aug 2017 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
Why do I feel like Edward is goin to be in mayor trouble with Bella I am glad she has all of her friends and the Cullen's to support her with everything Jacob is doing
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Date: 12 Aug 2017 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 12 Aug 2017 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 12 Aug 2017 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
A good start. Thank you
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2017 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
What is Edward hoping for with his generosity and benevolence. I liked how he had Bella's back during the conflict with Jake. Did he just move her into his penthouse??? I hope Bella won't be clueless to long. Great story.
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Next Chapter lol Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2017 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
Nooooooooooo!!!!! Don't stop!!! Ok! Ok! I'll be a good girl and wait. ( well..that's not exactly true.. I'm really not a good girl ) So I'm not very good at waiting! (he he he)
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Date: 12 Aug 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loving This
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Date: 12 Aug 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
I absolutely adore this story and can not wait to read more
Date: 12 Aug 2017 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
He's to good
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Date: 12 Aug 2017 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was nice of them, It has happened before. Kind people
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[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2017 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow he put them up is one of his buildings and damn now he knows about Jake and what a jerk he is. Jake is about to get his comings
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Date: 12 Aug 2017 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
I am guessing that Edward owns this apartment. Jacob is such a jerk. I hate that he did that in front of the kids and at their 1st ballgame. But I am worried that if they get it where he has to pay child support then Jacob could get visitation. I know he doesn't want the kids at all but he could do that just to get back at Bella for "ruining his life. Then I would be worried about the kids when they were at Jacob's.
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Jacob will never get any visitation with the kids. No custody battles at all in this story. Edward owns the whole building, so yes technically that he does own that apartment lol Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 11 Aug 2017 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is good man. But jake is going to find out he is also the devil himself when it comes to the treatment of Bella and her sons. Love it. Can't wait till the next chapter .
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Yes Edward is going to show his colors to hom soon enough lol Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 11 Aug 2017 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
Fuck Jake! Edward is waay too generous with his money. Can I have him?
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Haha you and me both. Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 10 Aug 2017 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am loving this story.
Date: 04 Aug 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow skanks like Kate give us women bad names. Arsehole at diner needs to pay.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2017 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
I forgot her kids will be in school soon. The job will work out then.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2017 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow! I'm excited to see where this is headed.
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Date: 03 Aug 2017 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
I just love this story! So glad that Bella got out of that diner. Can't wait for the next update
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[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2017 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow this is just what she needed for her and her kids
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Date: 03 Aug 2017 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
Can't wait to see how they work together
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Date: 03 Aug 2017 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
I guess $720.00 a week would make anyone speechless, especially if they had been waiting on tables before! Go Bella!
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[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2017 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awww!!!! More please!!! I just can't get enough of this story.
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[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2017 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love it! Loved seeing things from Edward's pov.
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[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2017 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
This chapter is amazing. Edward already has feelings and I feel once Bella is secure she will start to focus on herself more and realize her feelings.
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Yes once she feels like she can wake up and not cry from her surroundings she can explore other things. Thank You for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2017 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
<3 This story soooooo Much!!!!!!
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Date: 03 Aug 2017 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love Edward. For hitting the guy. For hiring Bella. And for also his dreams. Lol
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Date: 03 Aug 2017 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love this chapterr!
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Date: 30 Jul 2017 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
Awesome read so far. can't wait for more.
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[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2017 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
I was hoping he would hire her!! Now hopefully they have datcare in the building?
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[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2017 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Sounds like Bella needs to sue Paul for assault, sexual harassment and more. Glad she got Irina around the harpies.
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Her and Irina are best friends lol Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2017 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Looking forward to reading what comes next!
Loving your story.
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Date: 28 Jul 2017 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 6
Perfect love it so excited OMG. Did they find out what happened to her? Paul is going to pay for that.
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You will have to read next thursday to see if they find out lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
Date: 28 Jul 2017 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
love it
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[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2017 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
I had to wait all day to read this update(work gets in the way of fic time grrrrrrr) .....so worth it. I love where you are taking the characters. Now Edward can see Bella everyday and she can start to improve life for her sons. Hope jake issue is taken care of soon... He is an ass. Bella used blunt force on Paul that's our girl. Love this story!!!!!
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Yes they can start to get to know eachother and Jake will get what is coming to him soon. I dont like work getting in the way of fic time either lol. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!